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Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10
weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a
short time.
You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your
memory.
Write a letter to the organizers of the course. In the letter
Give some background information about yourself
Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course.
Enquire about the methods used on the course
Enquire about course fees and dates
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Aboozar Bassirizadeh. I am 31 years old and originally from Birjand
,Iran . I graduated from university in mechanical engineering about four years ago in
2006 . Soon after the completion of my studies, I started to work in the position of Field
Logistic Manager in an international humanitarian organization called MSF which is
mainly a medical one in the position of Field Logistic Manager.
Since as a result of throwing myself into work due to financial issues, I have not
been able to concentrate on learning since as I have to deal with many daily tasks and
arrangements. I think I have lost some part of my memory which needs to be improved.
As soon as I saw the advertisement in newspaper, I knew that I was going to take part in;
how ever, I would appreciate you for some information.
I was wondering if I could have information on methodology for of the course.
Also, because I am working full time, date of starting the term is a crucial thing for me as
well as tuition.
Thank you in advance for your cooperation and looking forward to hearing from
you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Aboozar Bassirizadeh
AFARINESH IELTS House - www.IELTS-House.com – TEL: 021 88640490
Comment [PC1]: Since is recommended to be
followed by a complete sentence.
The birthrate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next
fifty years .By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most
developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true?
What can be done now to deal with this situation?
Countries which experience technology and industry are more likely to have
falling rate of population throughout the next half century This forecast has created a
debate whether it is going to be true or not and if so, what steps ought to be taken toward
it .That is why, the idea of decreasing number of people has worried authorities in
different ways.
As soon as technology comes in to a country, positive and negative effects also
enter sooner or later. Two most important direct impacts of technology are lowering
mortality rate and increasing standards of living. Many infants as well as mothers would
die in the past due to poor hygiene and health care as well as mothers but it is totally
different now. Consequently, human beings live longer. At the same time, technology
makes the lives of people more difficult. They are more engaged with the work, both
parents have to work to be able to do errands so they prefer to have less children resulting
in falling rate of population in the years ahead down the road. It to this account,
technology has direct influences on population either positively and or negatively.
When there are symptoms of falling rate of population or even it is estimated to
be falling, countries start to think about it by various strategies. Some countries like Japan
are considering some privileges for parents who have more children like Japan .They will
receive higher salary or will use social benefits easier than others. Some other countries
like Japan are attracting immigrants like Canada who accepts many on annual basis.
Brain drainage can be the result of accepting immigrants since those developed countries
have better educational systems. Since people live longer,and governments should
anticipate facilities for elderly consequently, too. Because of these reasons, decreasing
the population has been an important topic for governments to take care of.
In general, technology has its own pros and cons for countries specially developed
ones. It causes people to live longer, mortality rate comes down, people live longer .In
fact, it is a multidimensional topic. So, governments should plan for future as well as
attracting couplesencouraging couples to have more children by providing them with
advantages of having more children.
Estimated bandscore : 6
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Comment [PC2]: It has been severally used.
Alternative : decline in population
Comment [PC3]: Better alternative : detoriate
Comment [PC4]: You are overusing word
"since"
Comment [PC5]: repeated