A Comparison of Seven Story Paradigms: ®Dramatica® Syd Field

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A Comparison of
Seven Story Paradigms:
Dramatica
Syd Field
Michael Hauge
Robert McKee
Linda Seger
John Truby
Christopher Vogler
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How and Why Dramatica is Different from Other Story Paradigms
How and Why Dramatica is Different from
Other Story Paradigms
by Chris Huntley
I spent nearly sixteen years avoiding reading anything of substance by (Hollywood) story theorists
such as Syd Field, John Truby, Christopher Vogler, Robert McKee and others. As co-creator of
the Dramatica theory of story, I didn't want to influence my development of Dramatica so I
avoided direct interaction with competing theories.
In 2006 I decided to lift my self-imposed ban. I figured my understanding of Dramatica was
mature enough that I didn’t have to worry about "contaminating" it by exposure to the competing
theories. It was past time that I figured out how other story theories are similar and dissimilar to
Dramatica, why they are different (assuming they are), and what those similarities and differences
mean.
Originally written as a series of articles, I’ve reworked my findings into this single paper. I’ve
divided the results into four major topics of comparison: Story Throughlines; Hero, Protagonist,
and Main Character; Character Growth and Resolve; and Plot Structure. I’ve also included an
overview of the source materials, some initial observations, and a summary at the end. I’ve tried
to be as objective as I can and I’m always interested in feedback and notices of errors and
omissions. Contact information is provided at the end.
RESOURCE MATERIALS
There are dozens of “how to” books on story structure, especially in the screenwriting field. I
chose to compare the Dramatica theory of story with the story paradigms of six popular writing
gurus: Syd Field, Michael Hauge, Robert McKee, Linda Seger, John Truby, and Christopher
Vogler. Each has written books and lectured widely on the subject of story and story structure.
The following describes my research for each author’s work with a few personal comments
added.
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SYD FIELD: I watched Syd Field's video, "Screenwriting Workshop." It's well made for a
talking head instructional video though the opening music is cheesy. Syd comes across as
warm and authoritative. He gives good writing advice.
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MICHAEL HAUGE: I watched the DVD, "The Hero's 2 Journeys," by Michael Hauge (Writing
Screenplays That Sell) and Christopher Vogler (The Writer's Journey). The production values
of this DVD were fair. Having these two story guys working together was very interesting.
Their story paradigms appear to be very different but are surprisingly compatible. Both
Hauge and Vogler are good speakers and communicators.
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ROBERT McKEE: I read Robert McKee’s book, “Story.” It’s a good book with lots of great
story examples. His “Chinatown” example of writing from the inside out is brilliant (pp 154176) and shows his writing technique to its best advantage. There is no question that McKee
loves story, knows film and theatre intimately, writes well, understands screenwriting as a
specialized form, and has a lifetime of experience to back up his writing advice. In many
ways, “Story” is inspirational. I recommend reading this book, especially if you are a
screenwriter.
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LINDA SEGER: I read her seminal book, “Making A Good Script Great,” (Seger, 1984) and
read sections of two of her other popular books, “Creating Unforgettable Characters” (Seger,
1990), and “Advanced Screenwriting: Raising your Script to the Academy Award Level”
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How and Why Dramatica is Different from Five Other Story Paradigms
(Seger, 2003). Linda Seger’s greatest strengths are in her methods of getting to the heart of
an author’s intent and her understanding of storytelling techniques—what a writer wants to
say and how to express it effectively. She uses real world examples and has lots to say
about writing, most specifically about writing screenplays. She is also one of the few wellknown women in a predominantly male industry.
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JOHN TRUBY: For John Truby, I read through my business partner’s class notes of Truby’s
basic story structure and advanced screenwriting workshops. These were compiled into fiftyone typed pages. Truby’s workshops go far beyond story structure but the notes were more
than sufficient for me to get the gist of Truby’s story paradigm. Truby has some great
descriptions of storytelling conventions in various genres.
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CHRISTOPHER VOGLER: I read Christopher Vogler's book, "The Writer's Journey" (2nd
Edition). Chris Vogler has an engaging writing style and strong command of the English
language. He goes out of his way to give credit where due and provides appropriate caveats
for exceptions and rules. It seems honest, direct, and sincere. And, it goes into greater
depth than the "The Hero's 2 Journeys" DVD. The greatest area of expansion over the DVD
is discussion of his character archetypes.
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DRAMATICA: I used, “Dramatica: A New Theory of Story,” Special Tenth Anniversary
Edition, by Melanie Anne Phillips and Chris Huntley (Write Brothers, 2004) as my source for
most of the Dramatica material. As co-author of the book and co-creator of the Dramatica
theory of story, I was familiar with the material already.
INITIAL OBSERVATIONS
Though the six non-Dramatica story paradigms I studied are different in their specifics, I was
surprised to find that most more or less fit into one of two broad categories. The first category I
call the post-Aristotelian story paradigm. This category finds its roots in the work of Lajos Egri
(The Art of Dramatic Writing!) who significantly expanded the function of Character in story
beyond Aristotle’s Poetics. Its adherents include Syd Field, Michael Hauge, and Robert McKee.
The second category I call The Hero’s Journey story paradigm and finds its roots in adaptations
of Joseph Campbell’s work (Hero with a Thousand Faces). Its devotees include John Truby and
Christopher Vogler. Linda Seger falls mostly into the first category, but acknowledges and
incorporates the concepts of the hero’s journey as one of several “myth” forms a story may use.
By contrast, Dramatica does not fall neatly into either category. It appears to be a much broader
story paradigm—one that encompasses elements from both categories and then some.
Another generalization is that each of the non-Dramatica story paradigms assumes your story
has a Main Character (or Hero) who Changes and is also the Protagonist in a story with a happy
ending (Success/Good). With Seger the exception, lip service was given to the idea of steadfast
main characters. These structural elements seemed somewhat rigid and overly specific. I
assumed that there was more to their understanding of story, so I dug further.
While reading “The Writer’s Journey,” I was surprised that many of Vogler's observations about
character and the hero's journey "felt" right. Specifically, Vogler discussed the "meaning" of
certain archetypes or events in the story and how they correlate to "meaning" in the real world.
So much of it sounded good and useful, but I also saw all the conditions where those
observations didn't hold up—places where too many assumptions are made, such as the nature
of a Hero. Vogler bends over backwards to illustrate exceptions to the Hero definition. So many
that they seem to void any sense of "rules" to go by. But that's not what really bothered me.
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What bugged me was that there seemed to be some "Truth" to his observations about character
and plot. These truths didn't contradict Dramatica so much as suggest deficiencies in the
Dramatica theory. It wasn't until I was talking this over with someone that I had an "aha" moment
of clarity. I related how Vogler talked about what elements in a story meant. That's when it
clicked.
An early axiom determined in the development of the Dramatica theory was this: If you look for
meaning in your story, you cannot predict how to put your story together. If you want to predict
how to put your story together, you cannot know what your choices will mean. In other words,
you can try to find meaning in a work OR you can predict how to put it together—but not at the
same time from within the same context. Why? The short answer is that we use one as the
given in order to evaluate the other. When looking for meaning, we assume a particular story
structure. When looking for structure, we assume a particular meaning (author's intent). It's tied
to the same reason we can see light as particles and waves, just not at the same time within a
single context. One aspect defines the basis for the other. Story structure provides the basis for
seeing meaning in the story. Meaning provides the basis for understanding and manipulating
structure in a story.
In other words, meaning is tied to the audience's experience of the story while structure is tied to
the author's perspective of the story. The audience perspective allows a synthesis of the
underlying story elements to discover its "meaning." The author's perspective assumes a given
meaning (author's intent) and allows manipulation of the arrangement of the story's structure and
dynamics. Using the appropriate context is important.
For example, Robert McKee approaches story from the audience’s perspective whereas
Dramatica approaches it from the author’s perspective. McKee speaks of author and audience
but always with an eye on the story’s meaning—a view only available to someone looking at story
from the inside. This view is great for understanding audience reception but limited when trying to
fix story structure problems. In this regard McKee is in the same boat as Syd Field, Christopher
Vogler, Michael Hauge, Lajos Egri and probably most all other story mages.
One major difference between Dramatica and more traditional story theories seems to be this:
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Dramatica works with story from the objective author's view that allows writers to clearly
manipulate elements of a story's structure. From this author's perspective, it is difficult to
find the meaning of specific author's choices.
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Many other story theories work with story from the subjective audience's view that allows
writers to see the meaning of flow and elements of the story. From this audience's
perspective, it is difficult to predict which story elements are essential and how they
should go together.
In retrospect this seems obvious. I've known that many story gurus developed their ideas from
examining lots and lots of stories. I know Dramatica WASN'T created that way—we developed
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the theory by identifying the underlying story rules and elements existing in all stories . All it took
was recognizing the difference in perspective (audience vs. author) and the difference in intent
(meaning vs. prediction) to understand how Dramatica is fundamentally unlike the other story
paradigms.
So the question was how this difference in perspective manifested itself in understanding the
nature of Story.
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The Dramatica theory posits that stories are models of human psychology, specifically
metaphors for the mechanisms of a mind attempting to resolve an inequity.
STORY THROUGHLINES
A key concept in Dramatica is that all complete stories have four separate but interrelated
storylines that are present from the beginning to the end of the story called Throughlines. This
differs from Syd Field, Michael Hauge, Robert McKee, Linda Seger, John Truby, and Christopher
Vogler who, each in his or her own way, describe at most two essential storylines.
In simplified terms:
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Syd Field describes a dramatic structure he calls The Paradigm, which is a plot structure
with a Main Character woven in.
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Hauge describes two throughlines as the Outer Journey (plot) and the Inner Journey
(journey to fulfillment for the Hero).
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McKee describes two throughlines blended together—collectively called The Quest and
the Central Plot.
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Seger describes an "A Story" or “story spine” as the major thread of a story coupled with
Main Character development.
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Truby describes two throughlines blended together in his “22 Building Blocks” of story
(which is an expansion of his 7 Major Steps in Classic Structure). These two
throughlines are similar to Vogler’s hero’s inner and outer journeys.
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Vogler describes two throughlines as the Hero’s Journey and the Hero’s Inner Journey.
The two throughlines found in each of the other story paradigms correlate to two of Dramatica’s
four throughlines:
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The Overall Story Throughline (the objective, “big picture” thread) closely resembles
Vogler’s Hero’s Journey, Hauge’s Outer Journey, much of Field’s plot structure, McKee’s
Central Plot, Seger’s story spine or ‘A Story,’ and the Desire part of Truby’s 22 Building
Blocks.
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The Main Character Throughline (the character through whose eyes the audience
experiences the story) closely resembles Vogler’s Hero’s Inner Journey, Hauge’s Inner
Journey, Field’s main character development, McKee’s The Quest, Seger’s main
character development, and the Need part of Truby’s 22 Building Blocks.
The two Dramatica throughlines not clearly defined, not deemed essential, or just plain absent in
the other story paradigms are:
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The Impact Character Throughline—The character whose alternative perspective forces
the Main Character to address his personal issues.
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The Main Character vs. Impact Character (MC/IC) Throughline—The relationship
between the main and impact characters that counters the objectivity of the Overall Story
throughline by adding a passionate, subjective perspective.
It is inaccurate to say these two throughlines are altogether absent from the other story
paradigms. Here’s what each seems to offer:
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Field doesn’t adequately describe anything identifiable as either the Impact Character
throughline or the MC/IC relationship throughline.
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Hauge has bits of the Impact Character blended into his Nemesis and Reflection
characters. One function of the Reflection character is to reveal the Hero’s inner conflict.
A function of the Nemesis character is to embody the Hero’s inner conflict. His Romance
character implies a relationship throughline—and by extension an Impact Character—but
only appears in stories with romantic relationships.
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Seger’s “B Story” subplot is similar to (but not the same as) Dramatica’s Main Character
vs. Impact Character (MC/IC) Throughline. Where Dramatica’s MC/IC throughline
describes an essential emotional component of the story specific to the relationship
between the Main Character and the Impact Character, Ms. Seger’s relationship subplots
include any important relationship explored in the story (e.g. according to Seger, Tootsie
has five subplots [“Making a Good Script Great, p. 38]). Seger’s catalyst character
loosely resembles Dramatica’s Impact Character (IC) Throughline. The idea of the
Seger’s catalyst character is sound, but Seger’s description of its development is limited
and overly generalized.
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McKee’s “Quest” is really a blend of what Dramatica calls the Overall Story throughline
and the Main Character throughline. McKee calls the Overall Story the protagonist’s
Quest for his conscious desire, and the Main Character throughline as the protagonist’s
Quest for his unconscious desire. He sees relationship throughlines (e.g. romances) as
non-essential subplots separate from the Quest/Central Plot. So, like the other
paradigms, McKee sees two threads of a single Central Plot, not four. BUT—McKee is
aware that there are at least three areas in which a character finds conflict. He calls them
Inner Conflicts, Personal Conflicts, and Extra-personal Conflicts.
Implied in McKee’s three levels of conflict are the makings of three of the four
throughlines. I say “implied” because the throughlines are neither deemed essential nor
explicit. They are presented as a set of writer’s tools available to create conflict for his
characters. The Inner Conflicts are those associated with Dramatica’s Main Character
throughline. The Extra-personal Conflicts are those associate with Dramatica’s Overall
Story throughline. The Personal Conflicts are a strange blend of Dramatica’s Impact
Character throughline and Main Character vs. Impact Character relationship throughline.
McKee lumps friends, family, and lovers in the Personal Conflicts level and describes
them by their relationship to the Innermost Self. He obviously recognizes the importance
of the MC/IC Relationship throughline but can’t seem to separate it from the Main
Character (I) perspective. His writer’s instincts are on target, he just doesn’t describe how
they all fit together objectively. That’s the disadvantage of analyzing and creating stories
from the audience’s perspective.
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Truby identifies an Impact-like character in his Opponent. However, his Opponent
character is intimately tied to functions of an antagonist in the Overall Story throughline
that limits its flexibility. Truby understands the importance of the special relationship
between the Hero and the Opponent, but does not describe or imply the need for a
special throughline for this relationship for the duration of the story.
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Vogler’s character Archetypes may embody aspects of the Impact Character, but their
functions in the story may or may not correspond to the functions of the Impact
Character. Vogler describes many relationships between the Hero and the other
characters in the story, but none is specific enough to constitute a MC/IC throughline.
Stories without an Impact Character throughline and Main Character vs. Impact Character
relationship throughline feel incomplete for a number of reasons:
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It is the Impact Character that forces the Main Character to address his personal issues.
The Impact Character represents an alternative way to resolve the Main Character’s
problems and as long as it is around the Main Character cannot ignore it. So, to get the
Main Character to deal with his personal problems, the Impact Character needs to be
present (in some form or another) for the entire story. No Impact Character
throughline—no realistic Main Character growth.
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The Main Character vs. Impact Character (MC/IC) relationship throughline provides the
“passionate” perspective in the story. Whether the relationship is romantic, professional,
familial, or otherwise, the conflicts in the relationship provide an emotional connection for
the audience. Without the MC/IC throughline, the story lacks heart.
As a theory of Story, Dramatica offers an explanation for why a story has four throughlines and
not one, two, three, five, seven, or any other number. Here’s the nutshell version:
Dramatica defines a story (grand argument story) as an analogy to a human mind trying to
resolve an inequity. In other words, stories are fictional representations of problem solving.
There are four perspectives available to everyone while trying to identify and resolve troubles.
In our own lives:
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We can experience firsthand what it is like to have a personal problem
(the “I,” Main Character perspective).
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We can experience firsthand what it is like for someone to have an
alternative viewpoint on a problem (the “you,” Impact Character
perspective).
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We can experience firsthand what it is like to have a troubled relationship
(the “we,” MC/IC perspective).
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BUT, we CANNOT experience firsthand what it is like to stand outside
ourselves and objectively see how we’re connected to a problem (the
“they,” Overall Story perspective).
On the other hand, in other people’s lives:
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We CAN experience firsthand what it is like to stand outside of them and
objectively see how they’re connected to a problem (the “they,” Overall
Story perspective).
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We can experience firsthand what it is like to have a troubled relationship
with them (the “we,” MC/IC perspective).
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We can experience firsthand what it is like to have an alternative
viewpoint on a problem (the “you,” Impact Character perspective).
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BUT, we CANNOT experience firsthand what it is like to be in that
person’s troubled shoes (the “I,” Main Character perspective).
Stories have four throughlines because that’s the number of unique perspectives we can
experience firsthand in real life. Within the context of our own lives we can see three directly and
one indirectly. Within the context of other people’s lives we can see a different set of perspectives
directly and a different one indirectly. In real life, we never get the whole picture.
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Here’s an amazing thing about grand argument stories: Complete stories provide an author and
audience all four perspectives within the single context of the story. They give us something we
cannot get in real life. And THAT’s one of the reasons why audiences can watch or listen to a
story over and over. Even after the storytelling has gone stale, stories give the audience an
experience it cannot have in real life. Stories without all four throughlines lose this special quality
and diminish their effectiveness in moving an audience.
HERO, PROTAGONIST, AND MAIN CHARACTER
This brings me to another way in which Dramatica is different from other story paradigms.
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Syd Field calls the principle character in a story the Main Character. The Main Character
is driven by a Dramatic Need (goal) and a strong point of view.
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Robert McKee calls the principle character in a story the Protagonist. “The
PROTAGONIST has the will and capacity to pursue the object of his conscious and/or
unconscious desire to the end of the line, to the human limit established by setting and
genre.”
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Linda Seger calls the principle character in a story the Main Character: “The main
character is the protagonist. This is who the story is about. This is the person who we’re
expected to follow, to root for, to empathize with, to care about. Almost always it’s a
positive figure. It’s the hero of the story…” [Making a Good Script Great, p 161].
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John Truby calls his principle character the Hero. The Hero has an internal journey to
satisfy an inner Need and an external journey to achieve his Desire.
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Both Vogler and Hauge call the principle character in a story the Hero. The Hero goes on
two parallel journeys: The Outer Journey (plot) and the Inner Journey (a journey of
fulfillment).
Dramatica separates the concept of the character that leads the efforts to achieve the Story Goal
(protagonist), from that of the character through whose eyes the audience experiences the story
on a personal level (Main Character).
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The Protagonist is one of many Objective Characters in the Overall Story throughline.
The objective characters are defined by their function in the Overall Story throughline. For
example, an archetypal protagonist represents the motivation to pursue and consider the
goal and problems. Other objective characters in the Overall Story throughline include
archetypes such as the antagonist, the sidekick, the skeptic, and others.
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The Main Character is a Subjective Character and gives the audience a personal view
inside the story. It is through the Main Character’s perspective that the audience gets the
first person (I), “This is what it’s like to have personal problems” experience. The other
principle Subjective Character is the Impact Character who consciously or unconsciously
challenges the Main Character’s world view by offering an alternative way of seeing or
doing things.
One advantage to separating the Main Character from the Protagonist is to be able to work with
the Main Character and Overall Story throughlines separately. Here’s a simple example:
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Let’s say the Overall Story Goal is to find the Holy Grail. Bob is the protagonist leading the efforts
to find it. Fred is the antagonist and wants the Holy Grail to remain hidden at all costs. We also
have Sally, Bob’s assistant and sidekick, and Angela, Fred’s skeptical sister.
So, who is the Main Character?
Anybody we want.
Following storytelling convention, we would make protagonist Bob the Main Character. A “hero” is
typically both the Main Character and Protagonist, among other things. Perhaps we want to get
the personal view from “the other side” and make skeptical sister Angela the Main Character. We
might want to go the Sherlock Holmes route and make the sidekick, Sally, the Main Character—a
la Watson in the Sherlock Holmes books. Or we might want to pick the antagonist as the Main
Character. By separating their “objective” functions from their “subjective” functions, Dramatica
lets you go beyond the confines of storytelling conventions. And that is the simplest advantage of
separating the two.
Though connected, each Dramatica throughline has unique story elements and dynamics.
CHARACTER GROWTH AND RESOLVE
Character change is a major element of most story paradigms.
Syd Field says there are four major qualities that make a good character:
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Dramatica Need—What does the Main Character want to gain, get or achieve?
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Strong Point of View—The way the Main Character views the world
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Attitude—The Main Character’s manner or opinion
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CHANGE—Does your Main Character change during the course of the story?
Robert McKee sees change as an essential part of a protagonist [Main Character]: “Character
Arc—The finest writing not only reveals true character, but arcs or changes that inner nature, for
better or worse, over the course of the telling.” [Story, p 104]
Christopher Vogler sees change as an essential part of the hero’s journey: “CHANGE—Heroes
don’t just visit death and come home. They return changed, transformed. No one can go through
an experience at the edge of death without being changed in some way.” [The Writer’s Journey, p
160]
Michael Hauge describes the hero [Main Character] change as an inner journey of fulfillment, a
character arc from fear to courage. This is a journey from the hero’s identity—the character’s
protective mask; his sense of self—to the hero’s essence; the truth of the character after all of a
character’s identity is removed.
Linda Seger describes character development in terms of a Character Spine and a
Transformational Arc.
John Truby describes how the hero must undergo a change (self-revelation) during the Battle
step in the Classic Structure. According to Truby, self-revelation strips away the hero’s façade
and is the most heroic thing a hero does.
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Dramatica treats character change a bit differently. For one thing, Dramatica makes a distinction
between a Main Character’s personal growth and his resolve. Here’s the distinction between
growth and resolve:
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Character Growth: In order for a character to change or remain steadfast, a character
needs to be able to distinguish between the source of conflict and its symptomatic
effects. The character is “blinded” from seeing both by either being too close or too far
from the problem. The character growth brings the character to the point where all
options are visible to the character. Character growth is akin to a “character arc.”
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Character Resolve: Once a character has grown, it can stay the course (remain
steadfast) or radically alter its perspective (change). Character Resolve is not a value
judgment, nor is it a description of what could or should have happened. Identifying a
character’s resolve is simply determining whether the character’s perspective is
fundamentally the same or different.
Syd Field’s paradigm only allows for Change Main Characters and does not do much to describe
different types of growth necessary to change the character, only that growth must occur for the
character to change. He suggests there is an event in the main character’s life that emotionally
parallels and impacts the story. He calls this, “The Circle of Being.” This traumatic event happens
to the main character when he is twelve to eighteen years old. Change, then, is the emotional
resolution of the emotional scar. His paradigm does not leave much room for steadfast main
characters.
Robert McKee’s paradigm equally emphasizes main character growth (i.e. Character Arc) and a
main character resolve. Though McKee’s descriptions of the forces that drive a character’s
growth seem more sophisticated than Field’s, he ends up in the same place: a Change Main
Character. There is either no room for steadfast main characters in his paradigm or they exist
outside its boundaries. Either way, I could not find references to steadfast main characters in
Robert McKee’s “Story.”
Both Christopher Vogler and Michael Hauge describe the main character’s growth as the Hero’s
Inner Journey. Like the others, they inexorably tie the main character’s resolve (Change) to the
journey (growth). In their DVD, “The Hero’s 2 Journeys,” Vogler acknowledges that some heroes
remain steadfast but does not describe how this might fit or alter the hero’s journey.
Not surprisingly, John Truby’s paradigm follows Joseph Campbell’s “Hero’s Journey” and sees
change as a component of a “good hero.” Accordingly, Truby says true character change
involves the challenging and changing of the hero’s basic beliefs, which lead to new moral
actions. Character’s growth is made part of the story structure, but leaves no room for deviation
from an ultimate, self-revelatory change. Steadfast heroes are not an option.
Seger’s character spine “is determined by the relationship of motivation and action to the goal”
[Making a Good Script Great, p110]. This may describe character growth depending on other
factors. My interpretation of Seger’s intent is that the character spine is part character growth and
partially a description of the efforts of a protagonist trying to achieve the Story Goal. Seger’s
transformational arc describes when a character “comes to the story with certain attitudes,
actions, and emotions, and leaves the story having made changes on each of these levels.
These changes create the beats which make up the transformational arc” [Making a Good Script
Great, p 147]. This probably describes more of the character growth, but definitely describes a
change character. I was happy to see that Seger acknowledged steadfast main characters.
Many great stories involve characters that remain steadfast against all efforts to change them.
Moreover, the fact that they “stay the course” is an essential component of each story’s message.
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Imagine Job in the Old Testament of the Bible telling God he’s had too much and is throwing in
the towel, or Dr. Richard Kimble in "The Fugitive" giving up his search for the one-armed man and
heading off to Bermuda. Both might work as stories but their meaning would be changed
considerably. To tell the stories successfully, each would be constructed differently from the
originals so that the character growth naturally led to the new character resolve.
How is a main character’s growth affected by the character’s resolve?
The answer is simple and significant:
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Change Main Character Growth: A change main character comes to the story with preexisting “baggage” in the form of justifications (inner walls) that blind the character to his
personal problem. Whether you call the baggage the character’s problem (Dramatica),
wound (Hauge), inner problem (Vogler), unconscious desire (McKee), Circle of Being
(Field), motivation (Seger), or Need (Truby), the main character comes to the story “fully
loaded” and ripe for change. Each act describes the tearing down of the justifications that
hide the main character’s personal problem from his direct awareness. Once the
character has grown enough to see beyond the justifications and recognize the true
nature of his personal problems can he then fundamentally alter his worldview (change).
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Steadfast Main Character Growth: A steadfast main character generally starts off at the
beginning of the story with everything in balance. An external force disrupts this balance
and the main character responds by committing to a method of restoring balance. Each
act describes the main character’s efforts to reinforce his commitment as external forces
grow and change. Once the character has reached the edge of his breaking point—when
the limit of his efforts to reinforce his motivations match that of the maximum external
pressure to alter course—he makes one last commitment and forms a justification that
blinds him from his initial choice of action. In this way he remains steadfast in his resolve.
By allowing for Main Characters who change and Main Characters who remain steadfast,
Dramatica opens up the story world to the other half not adequately explained by other
paradigms. These include steadfast main characters such as Romeo in “Romeo and Juliet,” Jim
Starke in “Rebel Without A Cause,” Jake Barnes in “The Sun Also Rises,” Clarice Starling in
“Silence of the Lambs,” and Jake Gittes in “Chinatown.”
By separating character growth from character resolve, Dramatica lets you determine both where
your character goes and how he gets there. This gives authors flexibility in forming their stories. It
also better represents the choices we have in real life and therefore brings greater verisimilitude
to an audience’s story experience.
Unlike the other non-Dramatica paradigms, Seger allows for character growth and character
resolve. Her film examples are excellent and varied. However, their value in story construction is
limited because her descriptions of how to implement them are too generalized. This is further
complicated by Seger’s interlocking of the functions of the protagonist with the perspective of the
main character.
PLOT STRUCTURE
Plot structure is the temporal backbone of a story. Stories need plot structure to hold them
together. Story paradigms need plot structure to explain how to create plots for stories and how
to recognize and fix plot problems. A simple plot structure supports a simple plot. A complex plot
structure supports complex plots. An ideal plot structure supports both simple and complex plot
structures.
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Comparing different plot structure paradigms is both easier and more difficult than I expected.
There are a lot of similarities between the various plotting systems, as well as areas of difference.
I chose not to do an exhaustive comparison. Instead, I chose to focus on the one area each story
paradigm manages to integrate (one way or another)—Act Structure.
Here’s my plan of attack:
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Begin with a word about author and audience.
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Give a general overview of my findings about Plot.
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Show each system with some brief descriptions.
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Share some initial observations and comparisons.
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Evaluate Dramatica’s comparative strengths and weaknesses.
A WORD ABOUT AUTHOR AND AUDIENCE
Human minds are natural problem-solvers and pattern matchers. When something is missing, we
natur lly fill in the bl nks. (See what I mean? You filled in the blanks with letters, didn’t you? But,
you didn’t fill in the spaces between the words.) We feel compelled to complete patterns when
we notice they’re incomplete. If we cannot adequately fill in the missing pieces, we hide the
incomplete pattern from our considerations. Literally, out of sight, out of mind. Hiding things from
us blinds us to them. These blind spots, however, can show up in our work and create difficulties
for us in our writing. That’s where external story paradigms can help our writing. They remind us
of how stories work—how they are put together.
Every writer wears several hats. Two important hats are that of author and audience. These are
very different roles and every writer plays both of them over the development life of a story. The
author is the story’s “creator.” He has god-like knowledge and power to shape the story. The
audience is the story’s interpreter. It experiences the story as it is delivered even though the
story is colored by the audience’s biases and interpretive abilities.
The tools, skills, and motivations of an author are different than those of an audience. As “god” in
the story universe, an author creates and arranges the various story elements including
characters, theme, genre, and plot. How the story is put together communicates the author’s
intent. Rarely a passive receiver, the audience decodes the bits of story in an effort to uncover
the author’s intent. The audience also searches for meaning in the patterns found in and created
by the story.
Sometimes a complete and sensible plot from the author’s perspective is incomplete and
confusing from the audience’s perspective. When the audience finds holes in the story, it fills
them from its own experience. When the holes are too big to fill or the story pieces don’t fit
together, the bond between author and audience is broken. That’s when the writer, as author,
needs help fixing the story problems.
Which brings us to the plot paradigms under consideration.
OVERVIEW
The seven plot paradigms explored are Syd Field’s Paradigm, Robert McKee’s Central Plot and
The Quest, John Truby’s Twenty-Two Building Blocks, Christopher Vogler’s Hero’s Journey,
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Michael Hauge’s Six Stage Plot Structure, Linda Seger’s Story Spine, & and Dramatica’s Act
Structure.
I’d like to acknowledge that the plot paradigm examples I use here are simplifications of the
originals. The illustrations I use are designed to emphasize the similarities, not the differences.
I’ve chosen to give each paradigm the maximum comprehensiveness while remaining true to the
creator’s intent and maintaining simplicity.
After building illustrations for each of the plot paradigms I was surprised to see how structurally
similar they are to each other. While each is unique, it is quite easy to make broad comparisons
and point out Dramatica’s obvious differences.
Most of the paradigms conform to the four-act structure—four more-or-less equal segments.
Some systems define “acts” differently, but the pattern appears in most, even if the segments are
subdivided or labeled differently (e.g. Act I; Act II-Part 1; Act II-Part 2; Act III). The exceptions to
the four-act structure are McKee, Seger, and Truby. McKee and Seger use the more traditional
three-act structure, while Truby a heavily modified three-act form.
Looking at the various plot paradigms, it’s easy to see how most of the paradigms only explore
two throughlines: an inner journey and an outer journey.
So, without further ado, let’s look at the plot paradigms.
PLOT PARADIGM ILLUSTRATIONS
Example 1: The Syd Field Paradigm.
Field’s Paradigm is a four-act structure masquerading as a three-act structure. It starts with a
setup and inciting incident, has regular turning points in the plot called “plot points” and “pinches”
in the middles, and ends with a climax and resolution. Though not apparent in the illustration, the
Paradigm describes both the external journey involving the attempt to achieve the story goal and
the internal journey of the Main Character.
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Example 2: Robert McKee’s Central Plot and The Quest
McKee uses two different graphic examples to illustrate plot. The first is a simple linear timeline
called the Central Plot.
McKee’s Central Plot is a modified three-act structure. It begins with an inciting incident,
proceeds with progressive complications, and ends with a crisis, climax, and resolution. What is
not shown is McKee’s system of using beats to build scenes, scenes to build sequences, and
sequences to build acts. His third act is slightly shorter than the last act in the four-act structure
examples. The McKee second act picks up the extra time and is slightly longer than the
combined middle acts of a four-act structure.
The second graphic McKee uses is called The Quest.
The Quest describes the flow of conflict in a story. The + and - represent the positive and
negative tug-of-war of conflict in the backstory before the inciting incident. The “spine” represents
the “through-line” / timeline in the story. The conscious and unconscious desires describe the
drive behind the external and internal journeys. The inner, personal, and extra-personal conflicts
represent the types of pressure put to bear on the protagonist/main character as the story
progresses. The conscious and unconscious objects of desire represent the journeys’ goals.
Example 3: The Linda Seger Paradigm.
Seger’s Story Spine (or “A Story”) is a straightforward three-act structure. It has a setup, which
starts with an image, establishes the story catalyst (inciting incident), and raises the central
question (goal). It has two major turning points in the plot that separate Act One from Act Two
and Act Two from Act Three, and ends with a climax and resolution. Seger’s story spine allows
for subplots that can accommodate a relationship “B Story” and more.
Example 4: John Truby’s Twenty-Two Building Blocks
A combination of Joseph Campbell’s mythic structure and original work, Truby’s Twenty-Two
Building Blocks plot structure loosely conforms to a three-act structure. Truby is a proponent of
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the idea that Plot is what Character does, and Character is defined by actions. As such, his
plotline is a combination of a Hero’s actions motivated by his internal Need and an external
Desire (goal). The actions of various Opponents and Allies counterpoint the Hero’s efforts. The
plot has an inciting incident, ends with a new equilibrium, and has several revelations and
reversals along the way.
Example 5: Christopher Vogler’s Hero’s Journey
Christopher Vogler’s description of the Hero’s Journey plot is usually presented as a circle. I
have taken the liberty of converting his timeline to a horizontal plot line—an alternate form he
uses to describe the progression of the Character Arc (The Writer’s Journey, 2nd Edition, p 213).
I’ve also combined his Hero’s Journey timeline with his Character Arc timeline to get the full effect
of his plot paradigm.
Like Syd Field’s Paradigm, Vogler’s Hero’s Journey is a four-act structure camouflaged as a
three-act structure. That’s where the similarity ends. Based on Joseph Campbell’s work on
mythic story structure, Vogler has relabeled the plot points to describe the external journey of the
Hero, and the internal journey of the main character (The Character Arc). Vogler’s setup and
inciting event take the form of Ordinary World and Call to Adventure. Like Field and other
paradigms to come, major events function as turning points for the acts, such as Crossing the
Threshold into the Special World, Ordeal, and The Road Back to the Ordinary World. Crisis and
climax show up as Resurrection and Final Attempt. Return with the Elixir and Mastery
approximate the story’s resolution.
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Example 6: Michael Hauge’s Six Stage Plot Structure
Despite its name, Hauge’s Six Stage Plot Structure has its roots in a four-act structure as you can
tell by the illustration. It starts with a setup followed by an inciting incident called Turning Point
#1: Opportunity. It has regular turning points in the plot to indicate act breaks (Turning Points #2,
#3, & #4), and ends with a climax (Turning Point #5) and resolution (Aftermath). As shown,
Hauge’s paradigm describes the Outer Journey as the attempt to achieve the story goal. The
Inner Journey describes how the Hero (Main Character) goes from living fully within his Identity (a
mask that hides his inner trauma and desires) to a life free of the Identity and fulfilling his Destiny.
Example 7: Dramatica’s “Act Structure”
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Dramatica clearly uses a four-act structure. It starts with a setup of plot points and story
dynamics and an inciting incident. It has regular turning points in the plot to indicate act breaks
driven by the Story Driver, and ends with a crisis, climax, and resolution of plot points and story
dynamics. It also explores four throughlines; two more than the other story paradigms. The
Overall Story throughline is the rough equivalent of the outer journey found in other paradigms.
The Main Character throughline is the counterpart to the inner journey. Dramatica counterpoints
the Main Character throughline with the Impact Character throughline. Exploring the relationship
between the Main and Impact Characters is done in the MC/IC Relationship throughline.
INITIAL COMPARISONS
Wow. My initial reaction after comparing these six plot paradigms was that Dramatica looked dry
and complicated while the others seemed easier to digest. Vogler’s Hero’s Journey seems the
“friendliest” and most approachable of the bunch. As you might imagine, this was a little offputting for me. I didn’t expect the comparisons to show such a stark difference between
Dramatica and everything else.
This got me thinking. Why do the other paradigms seem so much more “writable” than the
Dramatica act structure? Why does Dramatica “feel” so different from the others? Is less plot
structure better? I found some interesting answers to these questions.
Why do other paradigms seem so much more “writable” than the Dramatica act structure?
There are three obvious reasons why the other systems suggest easier writing approaches than
Dramatica. The first is that they are much simpler and therefore easier to follow. Even McKee’s
somewhat confusing illustration of The Quest (Story, p 197) seems less enigmatic than the
Dramatica Act Structure illustration.
The second reason other systems seem more “writable” is that the labels used to describe their
various plot points are more story-like than Dramatica’s labels. Syd Field uses straightforward
terms like setup, confrontation, and resolution. Hauge uses simple phrases like Change of Plans,
Point of No Return, and Major Setback. Vogler’s Hero’s Journey speaks in mythic language
using words such as ordeal, reward, and resurrection. By comparison, Dramatica’s Signposts,
Journeys, and Story Driver sound less writer friendly.
The third reason Dramatica seems more difficult to write from is its complexity. Dramatica has
four throughlines to worry about instead of one or two. It has sixteen Signposts—four for each
throughline. The nature of each Signpost is determined by a “storyform.” Just knowing how
Dramatica’s structure is put together is not enough. In fact, it’s unlikely a writer could create a
story just by looking at Dramatica’s act structure as shown in the illustration. More information
seems necessary even to begin writing.
Why does Dramatica “feel” so different from the others paradigms?
Dramatica’s plot structure feels like a bunch of puzzle pieces placed in a grid. It looks more like a
timetable than a description of a story’s timeline. It seems purely functional. On the other hand,
Vogler’s Hero’s Journey reads like a ready-made story outline and practically oozes Meaning:
The Hero is in the Ordinary World and has Limited Awareness; There is a Call to Adventure
which gives the Hero Increased Awareness; The Hero’s Refusal of the call comes from his
Reluctance to Change; The Hero’s Meeting with the Mentor signals the Overcoming of his
reluctance; and so on. The same can be said (to lesser degrees) of Field’s Paradigm, McKee’s
Central Plot, Seger’s Story Spine, Truby’s Twenty-Two Building Blocks, and Hauge’s Six Stage
Plot Structure.
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Is less plot structure better?
Not when you’re trying to solve plot problems. Sure, it may be easier to use less elements of plot
structure than more. It might take less time to determine if a story meets ten criteria versus
twenty-five or one hundred. Easier, however, is not necessarily better.
Plot structure problems generally come in two areas: the plot pieces don’t fit together properly or
there are plot “holes”—pieces missing from the plot. When it comes to identifying and fixing plot
problems, “less” usually is not better. In fact, persistent plot problems are often more closely tied
to plot elements an author has NOT considered than plot elements the author has reworked.
Having more tools with which to evaluate and construct a story is more valuable in those
instances. In this regard, each plot paradigm has varying degrees of depth and breadth, but
Dramatica surpasses them all.
DRAMATICA’S COMPARATIVE STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
From the comparisons so far, Dramatica’s plot paradigm seems to have the following
weaknesses:
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It is complicated.
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It uses non-intuitive terminology.
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It feels dry and functional instead of warm and digestible.
“Guilty” on all three counts. HOWEVER, those are mere misdemeanors and easily
overshadowed by Dramatica’s real benefits.
Dramatica’s approach to story is from the author’s perspective. That means it looks at plot in
terms of how the story is really put together, not how it seems to be as seen from the audience
perspective. The other paradigms developers analyzed existing stories and found common plot
patterns. With Dramatica we discovered a pattern maker. That’s why it is so complex.
Dramatica is flexible enough to create most any story pattern there is. It’s “dry and functional”
because that’s what plot looks like from a “god’s eye” point of view. It uses non-intuitive
terminology, partly because Melanie and I weren’t more creative in our labeling but more so
because we went for accuracy over accessibility.
The Dramatica act structure’s single greatest strength is its comprehensiveness. It covers
everything necessary to make your plot work well. It has over one hundred unique story points
(not including recurring plot points or character interactions) with at least forty-four specifically
plot-related. Dramatica’s plot explores four separate but interconnected throughlines instead of
the one or two described in the other story paradigms.
Just as important, Dramatica ties each plot point to the storyform. Storyforms describe the story’s
underlying structure and dynamics and the interconnections between Character, Theme, Genre,
and Plot—in essence, the author’s intent. The storyform serves to keep the plot coherent with
everything else in the story. It also indicates the general nature of each plot point. This is a
tremendous advantage because it gives an author an idea of how to explore his subject matter as
it progresses act to act.
The non-Dramatica plot paradigms evaluated in this article only explore one or two of the four
throughlines necessary for a complete act structure. Writers recognize the patterns found in
those plot structures and use them. Unfortunately, they also sense the “missing pieces.” Hours of
writer’s block may be associated with writers struggling to figure out the structural gaps left by the
other plot paradigms.
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Dramatica’s unique author’s perspective on story gives it another advantage over the other plot
paradigms. Dramatica makes a distinction between Plot, the order in which events happen, and
Storyweaving, the order plot events are presented to an audience. (This partially explains the
table-like format of the Dramatica Act Structure illustration.)
Storyweaving often masks problems in the plot. Separating plot from Storyweaving lets an author
know what is really happening in the story as well as what seems to be happening. The other
paradigms don’t make this distinction and suffer for it. In The Hero’s Journey, for example,
Vogler says the plot structure should not be followed too precisely. “The order of the stages
given here is only one of many possible variations. The stages can be deleted, added to, and
drastically shuffled without losing any of their power” (The Hero’s Journey, 2nd Edition, p 26).
With that much latitude how can a writer possibly determine what should or should not be in the
plot? A writer pretty much has to figure that out on his own if he wishes to stray from the paths
specified by a particular plot paradigm. On the other hand, Dramatica shows the writer how
everything fits together and lets the writer determine how he wants to assemble the plot timeline.
The examined plot paradigms have varying degrees of complexity. Some seem simple and
straightforward whereas Dramatica is the most complex of the bunch. Some are more readily
understandable than others. Dramatica’s terminology is less descriptive than others (and has a
whole lot more of it too!). Most of the plot paradigm illustrations look like story timelines.
Dramatica’s plot structure looks like a complicated timeline with four different throughlines going
on at the same time. If ease of understanding and learning were the criteria for determining
which plot paradigm is the best, then Syd Field would be the big winner and Dramatica the big
loser. However, I think it best if these paradigms are evaluated based on their capabilities to help
writers build strong plot structures and fix plot problems.
NOTE: In “Advanced Screenwriting,” Linda Seger identifies what she calls storytelling structures.
By storytelling structures she means the way in which a story is laid out for an audience. The
idea incorporates several concepts found in Dramatica’s Storytelling, Storyweaving, and Story
Reception. I mention it here because the one thing Seger’s storytelling structure does not contain
is story structure. It describes how the storytelling is constructed, not how the story is
constructed. This is an extremely useful distinction to make when you have problems with your
plot. Is it a structural problem or a storytelling problem? The answer to that question tells you
where you have to do your work. Seger (like McKee, and Truby, etc.) has a lot to say about
storytelling structures. Dramatica has a lot to say about story structure.
The qualities that make non-Dramatica plot paradigms simple to understand make them difficult
to use for writing. Dramatica is more comprehensive than the other paradigms. It is better suited
to building stronger plots since it approaches story from the author’s perspective. By separating
plot and Storyweaving, Dramatica makes identifying plot problems easier. The Dramatica
storyform connects the plot to character, theme, and genre better than any other system. Plus,
the storyform indicates the nature of plot events without limiting subject matter. For these
reasons I think Dramatica’s Act Structure plot paradigm is the most capable system examined.
Summary And Conclusions
Exploring the story paradigms of Syd Field, Michel Hauge, Robert McKee, Linda Seger, John
Truby, and Christopher Vogler has been educational and eye opening. I’ve only scratched the
surface but I feel I’ve learned a lot. When looking at them in broad terms, the non-Dramatica
paradigms are more similar than not even though their specifics differ. Dramatica shares some
common ground with them but is different in approach and perspective.
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Dramatica looks at story from an objective author’s standpoint. It gives authors an objective view
into the inner workings of stories but is less effective at forecasting a story’s meaning for an
audience. The other paradigms look at story from the audience’s standpoint. They give authors
insight into how audiences might interpret a story but are less effective at predicting how to
manipulate the story to create specific story results.
Dramatica sees stories as grand arguments made up of four essential throughlines. The Overall
Story Throughline describes the “Big Picture” perspective and shows the objective, “They”
worldview. The Main Character Throughline describes the personal, “You are there,” perspective
and reveals the first person, “I,” worldview. The Impact Character Throughline describes the
influential, alternative, “You,” perspective to that of the Main Character. The Main Character vs.
Impact Character Throughline describes the passionate, “We,” perspective of the key relationship
in the story. By contrast, the other paradigms see stories made up of one or two essential
throughlines that correspond to Dramatica’s Overall Story and Main Character throughlines.
Dramatica separates the function of the protagonist as prime driver of the effort to achieve the
story goal from the subjective, personal perspective of the Main Character. The separation
allows for alternative combinations that allow the Main Character to be someone other than the
protagonist in the story. The other paradigms combine functions of the protagonist and Main
Character in to a single character called the Protagonist, the Main Character, or the Hero.
Dramatica allows for Main Characters to change or remain steadfast and describes how the
characters grow into or out of their resolve. The other paradigms only describe how the Main
Character’s growth leads to change. Vogler acknowledges the existence of steadfast Main
Characters but does not adequately describe how they fit into “The Hero’s Inner Journey.” Seger
alone identifies the viability of steadfast characters though is vague on specifics.
Dramatica uses a four-act plot structure with the nature of each act tied to a “storyform.” The
graphic of Dramatica’s plot structure is complicated and uses academic sounding terminology.
The other paradigms are split between using a four-act structure and the more traditional, postAristotelian three-act structure. Their plot terminology generally is more descriptive and writerfriendly.
As tools to understand and develop stories, each of these paradigms has its own relative
strengths and weaknesses. Dramatica seems to cover more story territory and provide a clearer
insight into a story’s inner workings; it also appears complex and filled with specialized
vocabulary. The non-Dramatica paradigms range in complexity and depth. They use more
conversational terminology and feel more accessible. I believe that no single story paradigm
holds all the answers. Each paradigm has its story development treasures to offer. I’ve dug up a
few and explored them to a limited degree. I look forward to continuing my search by delving
deeper into these story paradigms and investigating others.
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REFERENCES
Field, S. (Writer). (1999). Syd Field’s Screenwriting Workshop [VHS]. Calabasas, CA: Final Draft
Inc.
Hauge, M., & Vogler, C. (Writers), & Mefford, J. (Director). (2003). The Hero’s 2 Journeys: Insider
Secrets for Uniting the Outer Journey of Plot Structure with the Inner Journey of Character
Arc [DVD]. New York: ScreenStyle.com.
Huntley, C. N., & Phillips, M. A. (2004). Dramatica: A New Theory Of Story, Special 10th
Anniversary Edition. Glendale, CA: Write Brothers, Inc.
McKee, R. (1997). Story: Substance, Structure, Style and The Principles of Screenwriting. New
York: HarperCollins.
Seger. L. (1984). Making a Good Script Great. New York: Dodd, Mead & Company.
Seger, L. (1990). Creating Unforgettable Characters. New York: Henry Holt and Company.
Seger, L. (2003). Advanced Screenwriting: Raising your Script to the Academy Award Level.
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Workshop]. Santa Monica, CA: Truby’s Writers Studio.
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