a PDF of the Fall Quarterly
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a PDF of the Fall Quarterly
FALL IS A SEASON OF CHANGE When I was a kid back to school time filled me with dread. Walking into the local big box store everything would suddenly have switched from the implication of outdoor adventures to the countdown to summer’s end. Then I got into the classroom on the first day—with a backpack full of fresh pencils—and that dread turned to excitement. I loved little more than cracking a book and beginning the adventure of learning something new. I loved meeting my classmates and starting that adventure with them. This book you hold in your hands contains a new season of learning opportunities for you. Teaching artists, presenting lecturers, fellow students, and Loft staff have filled these pages with opportunities for you to stretch your mind and engage in big conversations with literature at the center. How great is that? This fall marks not only another season of Loft programs but the completion of my first year on the job as Executive Director of the Loft. I am every bit as honored and thrilled to be here as I was on the first day. It has been an incredible twelve months of listening, learning, dreaming big, and planning for the future. I work with the smartest people I’ve ever met who are committed to serving writers and readers in innovative, joyful, challenging, and genuine ways. As we look to the future we have big ideas and want to include you in making them a reality. Please keep your eyes peeled over the next few months for changes in the stories that we as an organization tell and the ways we tell them. I promise that we will continue to offer the programs, classes, and opportunities you love. I also promise that we are throwing the doors open even wider to engage you and your fellow readers and writers in new ways. It’s an exciting time to be here and I’m thrilled to be here with you. Britt Udesen Executive Director TABLE OF CONTENTS 4 Class & Registration Info 8 Loft Events 12 Online Classes 18 Adult In-Person Classes 41 Youth Classes 44 Writers’ Block: Reading Like a Writer 46 Ask Esther: Avoiding Flat Endings and Conquering Narrative Time OUR MISSION The Loft advances the artistic development of writers, fosters a thriving literary community, and inspires a passion for literature. The Loft Literary Center Suite 200, Open Book 1011 Washington Avenue South Minneapolis, MN 55415 Loft Website | www.loft.org Loft Offices | 612-215-2575 (T–F) Loft Fax | 612-215-2576 Loft Education Line | 612-379-8999 CLASS INFO What to Bring | Unless otherwise noted in the description, all you need is pen and paper. Some teaching artists will also collect a small copy fee on the first day of class. Bring a sweater as some classrooms may be chilly. Make sure your laptop is fully charged. Bring a bag lunch to day long classes. Class Size | Most classes range up to 17 participants; 1- and 2-day classes typically cap at 35. Some classes may exceed these limits. Acceptance | The Loft reserves the right to refuse a registration for any reason. Location | Most Loft classes take place in Open Book at 1011 Washington Avenue South, Minneapolis, MN 55415 Parking | Limited free parking is available in Open Book lot on the east side of the building. There are also parking meters and pay-parking lots and ramps nearby. Handicapped parking is available in marked spots. Take the Bus, Train, or Bike | For routes, connections, and schedules, call 612373-3333 or visit www.metrotransit.org. Bike racks are located at the rear of the building. Basics | “Basics” classes are designed to provide a safe environment to explore creative writing. Classes will generally cover more than one genre to let students sample, and most students will have never taken a creative writing class before. 4 | CLASS & REGISTRATION INFO Beginning | “Beginning” classes are for writers with little or no experience in writing classes, but who know they want to expand their knowledge of craft, usually in a specific genre. Intermediate | Writers with some experience in genre specific instruction who seek to deepen their understanding and hone their craft should consider “Intermediate” classes. Students in these classes are familiar with craft terms such as plot, point of view, rhythm, and alliteration. These classes may introduce the workshop model, though class time will not exclusively focus on student work. Advanced | Writers with significant experience who seek assistance and feedback with revision should consider “Advanced” classes. Classes will often feature a workshop component where student work will be shared and critiqued. Advanced level students should already be comfortable with the workshop model and have a working draft before signing up. Open to All Levels | “Open to All Levels” classes can be useful to a writer at any level. They are often focused on topics other than craft. Workshopping | Intermediate and advanced level classes may include workshop components. A workshop means that student work is shared and critiqued in class. Discussion is moderated and contextualized by the teaching artist. A successful workshop requires participants to articulate why a piece/section/line of writing does or does not work. 5 Need to Cancel? A nonrefundable fee of 15% is included in each registration. Partial refunds will be granted for cancellations received before the second class meeting of a multi-week class; or before the first meeting of a single- or doublesession class; or start of the second week of an online class. We cannot refund for missed classes. In the rare instance that a teaching artist determines he or she cannot meet the needs of a student, the student’s full tuition will be reimbursed. Class Cancellation | Classes that do not meet minimum enrollment may be cancelled a minimum of 3 business days prior to the first class meeting with full refunds to all students. Register early. Weather Cancellations | Cancellations are extremely rare. The Loft follows the lead of the U of M, Twin Cities campus; if classes are cancelled there, consider them cancelled at the Loft. If concerned, call 612-379-8999 or check www.loft.org. An announcement on the Loft home page will confirm cancellations by 3:30 p.m. weekdays, 8:30 a.m. Saturdays, and 10 a.m. Sundays. PAYMENTS AND SCHOLARSHIPS Payment Methods | No installment payments. Space cannot be held before receiving full payment. A $20 fee is assessed for bad checks. If an agency, business, or other organization is paying student fees, payment is due at the time of registration. (Purchase orders or intent to pay notification cannot be accepted. We do accept Visa, MasterCard, Discover, and American Express.) Scholarships | The Loft has established a scholarship pool for Loft classes, both youth and adult. For more information or to apply, please visit www.loft.org/scholarship. | CLASS & REGISTRATION INFO CANCELLATIONS REGISTRATION INFO Online | Visit www.loft.org/classes. Select your classes, check out teaching artist profiles, and register. In Person | Stop in at Open Book during regular Loft office hours, 9 a.m.– 5 p.m., Tuesday through Friday. Loft administrative offices are closed on Mondays. This is a great option if you’re looking for advice about what class to take (appointments also available). By Phone | Dial 612-379-8999. Loft education staff will be available to help you with your registration during regular office hours, 9 a.m.–5 p.m., Tuesday through Friday. By Fax | Dial 612-215-2576. Download, print, and fill out the registration form from www.loft.org and send it “Attention: Education.” This option is only available when fees are paid by credit card. By Mail | Download and print the registration form at www.loft.org and send with your check, money order, or credit card information to: 6 | CLASS & REGISTRATION INFO The Loft Literary Center, Attn: Education Open Book, Suite 200, 1011 Washington Avenue South Minneapolis, MN 55415 Please note: It is best to register early to help our teaching artists prepare and ensure the class does not get cancelled. For this reason, all multiweek classes now offer early bird discounts (see class listings for details). We evaluate registration numbers between 7 and 3 days before a class start to decide whether to run it. Classes that do not meet a minimum enrollment may be cancelled a minimum of 3 business days prior to the first class meeting with full refunds for all registrants. QUESTIONS? CALL 612-379-8999 DURING OFFICE HOURS OR EMAIL [email protected] PROGRAM WHO’S ALREADY PARTICIPATING loft.org/residency | EDUCATION PROFILE RESIDENCY 7 The Loft's Teaching Artist EVENTS EVENTS EVENTS LOFT EVENTS & Deadlines EVENTS EVENTS EV EVENTS EVENTS EV EVENTS EVENTS EV 9/8 | Thursday | 6 p.m. | Lonely Arts: Creative Urban Growler | $15.00 ($13.50 members) CR IN G WR H CT AFT C O NNE Nonfiction & Memoir The Loft, Hazel & Wren, and Joey McGarvey have teamed up to help writers find their critique partner match. Join us September 8 for the Creative Nonfiction edition. All nonfiction writers (memoirists, essayists, biographers, historical, sports, pop culture) welcome. Paid admission includes a EVENTS beverage and light snacks. Register at loft.org. EVENTS EVENTS IT E R S T H R O U G EV 9/16 | Friday | 7 p.m. | Nodin Press Book Launch with Emilie Buchwald The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 9/22 & 23 | Thursday & Friday | 7 p.m. | As Curated By: Latinx Writers The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 9/24 | Saturday | 8 p.m. | Equilibrium/Immigrants Past and Present: Bolin Jue and Allyson Jeffredo with Palabristas 8 |EVENTS The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) EVENTS EVENTS EVENTS 9/30 | Friday | 7 p.m. | As Curated By: House of Fire The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) EV V V V Minnesota History Center, St. Paul | $150 ($125 Loft or MNHS members) Learn how to research, write, and preserve your family legacy. Share the expertise of nationally renowned authors, genealogists and editors including Patricia Hampl, Diane Wilson, Shannon Gibney, Eric Dregni, and Cheri Register! Please register with the Minnesota History Center. 10/19 | Wednesday | 7 p.m. | Holy Cow Press Publication Launch The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 10/23 | Sunday | 2 p.m. | Second Story Reading Series The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 10/26 | Wednesday | 7 p.m. | Benjamin Percy Publication Reading The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) Benjamin Percy will read from his recently released Thrill Me: Essays on Fiction. Register at loft.org. 10/28 | Friday | 7 p.m. | Building Communities, Changing Discourse: Transracial Adoptees The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 11/1 | Tuesday | 7 p.m. | Tinderbox Editions Reading The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 11/9 | Wednesday | 6 p.m. | Fall 2016 Student & Teaching Artist Reading The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 11/10 | Thursday | 7 p.m. | Writers in Conversation: Patrick Rosal and Elissa Altman The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) | $15 ($13.50 members) See next page for details. Register at loft.org. 11/12 | Saturday | 7 p.m. | McKnight Reading: Patrick Rosal The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 11/17 | Thursday | 7 p.m. | Nodin Press Book Launch with Margaret Hasse The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) 11/19 | Saturday | 8 p.m. | Equilibrium: Chaun Webster The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) |EVENTS V 10/15 | Saturday | 9 a.m–4:30 p.m. | Writing Your Family Legacy Conference 9 V Writers in Conversation: Patrick Rosal & Elissa Altman Thursday, November 10 | 7 p.m. The Loft at Open Book (Performance Hall) Advanced tickets required, space is limited. Purchase at loft.org: $15 ($13.50 members) The Loft presents Patrick Rosal and Elissa Altman as they discuss elements of craft in writing. Patrick will read from his latest work, a book of poems entitled Brooklyn Antediluvian, and Elissa will read from her forthcoming memoir Treyf: My Life as an Unorthodox Outlaw before settling in to elaborate on matters of craft, inspiration, history, and politics, and how they converge in the mind of a writer intent on telling her or his story. 10 |EVENTS Patrick Rosal is the author of four full-length poetry collections, which have been honored with the Association of Asian American Studies Book Award, Global Filipino Literary Award, and the Asian American Writers Workshop Members’ Choice Award. Elissa Altman is the critically-acclaimed, awardwinning author of Poor Man’s Feast: A Love Story of Comfort, Desire, and the Art of Simple Cooking, the James Beard Award-winning blog of the same name, the Washington Post column “Feeding My Mother”, and a finalist for the Frank McCourt Memoir Prize. GET YOUR DUCKS IN A ROW THE LOFT’S PITCH CONFERENCE RETURNS APRIL 7–8, 2017 Featuring a Keynote Workshop with Lisa Lucas, Executive Director of the National Book Foundation Visiting Agent Lineup & Registration Details Coming Soon. Registration opens November 2016 (Loft Members get First Access) ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE | ONLINE CLASSES ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE NE NE ONLINE 12 NE ONLINE ONLINE ONLINE Loft online classes allow you to join a vibrant community of writers under the guidance of an experienced teaching artist no matter what your location or schedule may be. Contact the education department at 612-3798999 or visit loft.org and watch videos detailing the Loft online classroom experience. NE ONLINE CLASSES 13 new class! Getting Past the Blank Page | Megan Frazer Blakemore Beginning | 9/21–11/2 | 6 weeks | Reg $234.00 Mem $210.60 Are you eager to write but have trouble sitting down at the computer or notebook? This is the class to take you from wanting to write to actually writing. In a low-stress environment, we will build up our writing stamina and make writing a daily habit. CREATIVE NONFICTION From Image to Essay and Memoir | Robert Root Open to All Levels | 9/21–11/16 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 In this class, we will start journaling about imagery that resonates with us. In examining family photographs, commercial images, or art, we’ll discover associations and memories that can push our work forward. We’ll examine successful models, write our own journal entries, and workshop the emerging possibilities for essays and memoirs. new class! Memoir in Progress | Angela Foster Intermediate | 10/5–11/30 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 Have you started a memoir but struggle with next steps? You’ll leave this class with a more organized draft and the tools to work towards completion. Students will share weekly writing assignments and receive feedback from their peers and instructor. Instructor will comment on up to 25 pages of work. FICTION new class! 10 Week Novella | Margaret Chapman Intermediate | 9/21–12/7 | 10 weeks | Reg $390.00 Mem $351.00 No class the week of Thanksgiving. Write a novella in ten weeks! We’ll go from start to finish on a 20,000 word project while exploring the exciting and revitalized form of the novella, including the history of the form, its recent popularity, the process of writing a longer work, and publishing opportunities for novella-ists. | ONLINE CLASSES BASICS FICTION (Continued) new class! Micromanaging Your Short Stories | Jack Smith Open to All Levels | 9/21–11/16 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 This class helps students create a short story with compelling characters, a tightly woven plot, thematic levels, a rich, vivid prose style, scenes that sizzle, and a voice that keeps the reader’s interest. Students receive feedback, stage by stage, as they write and revise their stories. new class! Fiction as Social Commentary: Using Real Life to Tell Stories | Saadia Faruqi Intermediate | 9/21–11/16 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 Fiction can not only entertain but also inform and educate. Some of the most accomplished authors, past and present, use their fiction as social commentary. This critique-intensive class will teach writers to use real world facts and events to create great stories. Crafting a Compelling Mystery | Stanley Trollip Open to All Levels | 10/19–11/30 | 6 weeks | Reg $234.00 Mem $210.60 In this class, we’ll apply the traditional three-act structure to the development of a mystery plot. We’ll look at the hook, the playing out of the story, including red herrings and twists, and the resolution. We’ll also work on the creation of characters, and the issues of pacing and tension. MULTIGENRE Your Book Starts Here: How to Plan, Write, and Develop a Book Mary Carroll Moore 14 | ONLINE CLASSES Open to All Levels | 9/21–12/14 | 12 weeks | Reg $525.00 Mem $472.50 Get to know your book—what it’s about, how to structure it, how to plan to finish it! Learn a step-by-step plan, including flexible timelines, chapter grids, storyboarding, and more. For writers with a book concept or work-inprogress—nonfiction, memoir, or novel—or for any writer who needs help with structuring their material. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Intermediate | 9/21–12/14 | 12 weeks | Reg $525.00 Mem $472.50 You’ve drafted most (or some) of your manuscript, you’ve assembled your storyboard. How do you merge it all into a clear narrative arc that will speak to a reader—and get your book published? Great next steps to hone characters, conflict, and container via weekly lessons, writing exercises, and supportive feedback. Your Book Starts Here, Part 3 | Mary Carroll Moore Advanced | 9/28–12/21 | 12 weeks | Reg $525.00 Mem $472.50 Prerequisite: “Your Book Starts Here: Part 2” or permission from teaching artist. Your memoir, fiction, or nonfiction book is completely drafted; you’re ready for serious revision. Small work groups focus on weekly feedback to learn revision skills, develop voice and theme, build conflict and characters, hone pacing, and polish your manuscript toward publication. new class! Small Worlds, Big Ideas: Miniature Motifs in Fiction Marie Becker Open to All Levels | 10/5–11/30 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 Throughout history, people have been fascinated with miniatures. We’ll read selections across genres using miniature objects as plot or thematic elements, and tackle prompts inspired by visual images of real-world and fantastic miniatures. Open to all genres; readings include children’s literature, YA, horror, mystery, and historical fiction. Write On! Six Weeks of Exercises, Prompts, and Practice to Get You Writing | Margaret LaFleur Open to All Levels | 10/5–11/16 | 6 weeks | Reg $234.00 Mem $210.60 In this class, designed for writers of both fiction and nonfiction, students will use writing prompts and exercises to get into the practice of writing. Six weeks will yield at least six new starts and newfound confidence to face the blank page. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | ONLINE CLASSES Your Book Starts Here, Part 2 | Mary Carroll Moore 15 MULTIGENRE (CONTINUED) POETRY new class! Prose for Poets: Reading for Craft & Inspiration Amie Whittmore Open to All Levels | 9/21–11/2 | 6 weeks | Reg $234.00 Mem $210.60 In this class, we will read essays by renowned poets, dealing with different elements of craft each week. These essays will vary in scope, from analysis of technique to lyrical exploration of a poet’s experiences. Students will discuss essays, generate poems, and receive feedback on their work. An Introduction to Poetry | Sarah Sadie Beginning | 10/19–12/21 | 8 weeks | Reg $312.00 Mem $280.80 No class week of Thanksgiving During this class you will be introduced to, and experiment with, the basic elements of poetic craft and form. Weekly readings, writing, chats, and discussions will deepen your appreciation of the work of other poets and open up possibilities for your own work through the practice of basic poetic techniques and devices. new class! Please Add To This List II: Experiments with the Sonnet and Beyond | Jennifer Fossenbell Open to All Levels | 11/9–12/7 | 4 weeks | Reg $156.00 Mem $140.40 In this class, we’ll continue to explore Bernadette Mayer’s poetry “experiments,” venturing farther (forward and back) into the realms of experimental poetry and innovations of traditional forms, particularly the sonnet. Play with visual form, meaning, and sound—you have permission! Part II can be taken with Part I or alone. 16 | ONLINE CLASSES PUBLISHING & CAREER Creative Copywriting: Sell Your Writing or Anything Else Mary Ringstadt Beginning | 9/21–11/2 | 6 weeks | Reg $234.00 Mem $210.60 Advertising copywriting is creative writing with a commercial twist. This class teaches you the tricks of the trade for crafting fresh angles for any purpose, whether you’re selling your own writing, frosted breakfast cereal, or memberships in your nonprofit organization. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income 17 Online Poetry Workshop | Carolyn Williams-Noren 9/21–10/19 | 4 weeks | Reg $156.00 Mem $140.40 Receive feedback from fellow poets. Does this sound scary? Thrilling? Both? This class will form a supportive group of young writers who read and discuss each other’s work, giving constructive, appreciative, specific, kind feedback. Recommended for writers who have at least a couple of poems ready for feedback. Write Now for the Common Application: Get Your College Essay Done Online | Kate St. Vincent Vogl 10/5–10/26 | 3 weeks | Reg $117.00 Mem $105.30 This class explores what makes for a good essay and what makes a bad one when applying to colleges. Draft an essay for the Common Application and find out how to make it stronger. Learn from an Ivy League graduate how best to present yourself in the college admission process. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | ONLINE CLASSES YOUTH (AGES 13–17) IN-PERSON ADULT CLASSES The Loft in-person lineup is full of new offerings including classes covering political writing, issues around writing and racial and social justice, advanced topics such as Master Mondays, and preparing to pitch your work for agents. We can’t wait to see you here. 18 | IN-PERSON CLASSES BASICS new class! Creative Writing Sampler | Linda Back McKay Open to All Levels | Mondays | 9/19–10/24 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. How will you know which genre to write in if you don’t try them all? In this class, we’ll use prompts and exercises to “try on” a variety of genres to see what sticks. Participants will experiment and receive feedback with many forms, including memoir, contemporary poetry, prose poems, and fiction. Beginning | Wednesdays | 9/21–10/26 | 10 a.m.–noon | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. If you have always wanted to write, but are reluctant to start, this is the class for you. You will study the many forms of writing, including journaling, letter writing, poetry, memoir, and fiction, as you discover your unique writing voice, style, and purpose. Great Grammar: Know It When You Need It | Amy Simso Dean Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Grammar is fun. And it’s easier than you think. It creates clarity, adds nuance and makes sentences sing. Forget about confusing terminology. We’ll learn how to spot and banish common mistakes in punctuation, sentence structure and more. Jump in and discover how truly exciting a comma can be. new class! Six Secrets for Better Writing | Kate St. Vincent Vogl Beginning | Mondays | 10/31–12/12 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 21. Jumpstart your fiction or nonfiction! Learn how modern masters revise and energize their writing. This class teaches ways to create an effective desire line as well as a distinctive voice. Discover essentials for developing scenes, powerful imagery, and evocative settings. Learn the secrets of writing secrets. Private half-hour consult included. First Steps into Writing | Patricia Hoolihan Beginning | Thursdays | 11/3–12/15 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 24. This is a class for those who are new to creative writing, feel rusty, or are just plain shy about claiming the identity of ‘writer’. The class will invite and encourage you to explore your stories, the memorable images that live inside of you and your voice. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Personal Writing—the Perfect Place to Start | Peter Blau 19 BASICS (Continued) CHILDREN’S & YOUNG ADULT LIT Master Mondays: Young Adult Fiction | Shannon Gibney Advanced | Mondays | 9/19–12/12 | 6–9 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $630.00 Mem $567.00 Low $441.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 21. The Master Monday Series is an intensive writing opportunity for advanced students with workshop experience. In this class, we will read and discuss some of the most vital young adult literature being created today, examine strategies for producing and revising our own work, complete short writing activities, and workshop each other’s manuscripts. Both local and national writers and editors will talk to us, and if participants are interested, the last two class sessions will be devoted strictly to one-on-one workshops and manuscript critiques with the teaching artist. Picture Book Workshop | Molly Beth Griffin Intermediate | Thursdays | 9/22–11/10 | 6–8 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. This workshop-only class is for writers who are eager to have their picture book manuscripts critiqued in a large-group setting. As we discuss student work, we’ll learn about the craft of picture book writing, and practice the valuable skill of peer critique. Nuts and Bolts of Writing for Children | Dara Dokas Beginning | Saturday | 10/1 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. 20 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Are you new to children’s writing? Or do you have a manuscript or two but aren’t sure what to do next? Then this class is for you! Learn about categories of children’s books, how to find an editor or agent, networking, and much more in this info-packed class. Beginning Picture Book Writing | Dara Dokas Beginning | Saturday | 10/1 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Are you interested in writing picture books for children? Then this class is for you! We will examine published picture books, discuss picture book writing techniques, and do some writing exercises to get the ideas flowing. You will come away from class with at least one solid picture book idea. 21 Research & Writing: Children’s Nonfiction for Education—Part 1 Lisa M. Bolt Simons Intermediate | Saturday | 10/22 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. | Bring a work sample for children and a laptop or tablet. Want your foot in the publishing door? Write for education. In this class, you’ll learn how to apply for assignments, what to expect from a contract, the pros and cons of the genre, and more. Research & Writing: Children’s Nonfiction for Education—Part 2 Lisa M. Bolt Simons Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/22 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. | Bring your laptop or tablet and projector adapters if needed. If you’ve already taken Part One of this class or you’re newly employed as a work-for-hire author, come to this session. We’ll do research, write a lot, and critique each other’s work. Bring your laptop/tablet. CREATIVE NONFICTION Master Mondays: Creative Nonfiction | Sarah Chandler Advanced | Mondays | 9/19–12/12 | 6–9 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $630.00 Mem $567.00 Low $441.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 21. The Master Monday Series is an intensive writing opportunity for advanced students with workshop experience. In this class, we will turn our lens (sometimes a wide angle, sometimes a zoom) on a diverse range of nonfiction subgenres. We will experiment with writing as pensive essayists, jet-lagged travel writers, scientists, skeptics, cultural critics, fearless investigative journalists, humorists, and the many guises we might assume in tackling this tricky, exhilarating, maddening beast of a genre. In addition to exploring contemporary masters of the craft, we will read and give feedback on each other’s work. Expect to complete a polished revision of one essay (or book chapter, for those interested in writing a longer work) that will receive detailed feedback in a one-on-one session. Towards the end of the class, we will also address issues of publication specific to nonfiction. | IN-PERSON CLASSES CHILDREN’S & YOUNG ADULT LIT (Cont.) CREATIVE NONFICTION (Continued) new class! Advanced Memoir Workshop | Angela Foster Advanced | Tuesdays | 9/20–11/15 | 5–7 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8. This class is for writers who are ready to take the next steps with their memoir in progress. You will receive feedback from your teaching artist and peers in a supportive community. Be prepared to share 50 to 75 pages, and to commit to reading the work of your classmates. The teaching artist will comment on an additional 40 pages. new class! Telling Details: The Power of Description in Memoir and Creative Nonfiction | Margaret Todd Maitland Intermediate | Tuesdays | 9/20–10/25 | 7:30–9:30 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. In any significant memory, the details may be hazy. To transform that memory into a vivid scene, you must capture the details that will awaken the reader’s imagination. Focusing on observation and description from daily life—clothing, tools, photographs, nature—you will discover how the smallest detail conveys essential meaning and emotion. new class! 18 Techniques to Develop a Personal Writing Practice Brenda Hudson Open to All Levels | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/9 | 10 a.m.–noon | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. 22 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Journaling might give rise to thoughts of “Dear Diary” moments from childhood, but with the right techniques, a journaling practice allows you to tap into your creativity, uncover hidden thoughts and emotions, and delve deep into your memories, hopes, and dreams too. This class will introduce you to 18 different techniques to help you do just that. new class! Writing Compelling Narrative Nonfiction Rachael Hanel Open to All Levels | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/9 | 6–8 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. Publishers and editors are always seeking well-crafted narrative nonfiction. This class will address the research and writing process behind narrative nonfiction, and students will leave ready to craft compelling stories while remaining true to the facts. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. Your memoir, personal narrative, or essay is finished. But is it done? Through a combination of workshop, lecture, and in-class exercises, students in this class will learn techniques for heightening emotion, intensifying drama, and crystallizing character and voice. Memoir: Let’s Get Started | Nancy Raeburn Beginning | Thursdays | 9/22–11/10 | 10 a.m.–noon | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. THIS CLASS MEETS AT THE ST. PAUL JCC. Here’s a chance to move beyond that scary blank page and finally get started on the memoir you’ve been wanting to write. With inspiration from weekly exercises, readings by accomplished writers, and help from class members and the teaching artist, you will make significant progress on a first draft. Introduction to Memoir | Angela Foster Beginning | Thursdays | 9/22–11/10 | 10 a.m.–noon | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we’ll study the elements of memoir—setting, character development, dialogue, tense, scene, summary and reflection. By the end of this class, you’ll have these seven elements incorporated into your work in progress and an arsenal of tools to refine and deepen your writing. Introduction to the Personal Essay | Jim Walsh Open to All Levels | Thursdays | 9/22–10/27 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. An enlightening class that, via a variety of thought-provoking prompts, writings, and discussions, focuses on getting and staying in touch with the writer’s voice and producing essays, personal and otherwise, that last. Beginning Memoir: Finding the Story | Angela Foster Beginning | Saturday | 10/1 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Do you have a memory that shimmers in your mind? Is it difficult to get started? Through the use of writing prompts, we’ll get those memories on paper. We’ll discuss memoir basics and the details that bring them to life. You’ll create at least three works-in-progress and ideas for more. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Advanced | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/9 | 6–8 p.m. | 8 sessions 23 Punch and Polish: The Art of Revising Creative Nonfiction Dennis Cass CREATIVE NONFICTION (Continued) new class! Finding the Meaning in Your Memoir | Glenda Reed Intermediate | Saturday | 10/8 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. Your know what happened, but what is your memoir about? And how do you get the perspective to answer this question? Through lectures, discussions and a series of in-class writing exercises, students will be guided toward a deeper understanding of the personal meaning of their own story. It’s Tense: The Impact of Using Past or Present in Creative Nonfiction | Kate Hopper Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Through class discussion and short writing exercises, we will explore the benefits, challenges and drawbacks of using past versus present tense as we craft our lives on the page. Participants will leave the class with a clear sense of how tense affects voice, reflection, and structure. new class! Writing Braided Narratives | Victoria Blanco Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/22 | 10 a.m.–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. This class is for writers interested in weaving together diverse writing forms to create compelling, surprising narrative nonfiction. Through mini lectures, in-class discussion, writing exercises, and feedback from instructor and peers, students will develop a first draft of an essay or chapter of narrative nonfiction. Family Stories into Memoir | Patricia Hoolihan Open to All Levels | Wednesdays | 11/2–12/14 | 1–3 p.m. | 6 sessions 24 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 23. What great story doesn’t draw on the family as its source? It’s all there: heartbreak, longing, conflict, secrets, and love in all its disguises. This class will help students generate lots of material, polish their own family stories, and choose up to 10 pages for class discussion or teaching artist review. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 24. This class is for anyone writing creative nonfiction who wants more focused attention on the writing process. Structured as a writing group, students will look at examples of successful creative nonfiction, work through writing prompts, and workshop their own writing. new class! Substance, Curation, and the Role of Intimacy in the Crafting of Memoir | Elissa Altman Open to All Levels | Friday | 11/11 | 10 a.m.–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $175.00 Mem $155.00 | Small copy fee. | Bring a bag lunch. The teaching artist will provide feedback on student work. For details see the class description at loft.org. What makes great memoir versus simply a recollection of experience? In this class, we’ll explore the concept of curation and the role of intimacy in the writing of memoir. We’ll also attempt to separate wheat from chaff within the telling of a story and show how to find the kernel—the heart of the story—that teems with life at its most basic level. Come to Elissa’s craft talk too (page 10). new class! Memoir: On Self & Society | Marc Nieson Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/19 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. This class focuses on localizing what in your individual tale has a communal and cultural context, then explores the varied narrative means and structures to best convey that tale. Expect model readings, varied written exercises designed to help tap and start shaping your life stories, and some communal critiques. CREATIVE PROCESS The Creative Fire of Intuitive Writing Roxanne Sadovsky Open to All Levels | Thursdays | 9/22–12/15 | 10 a.m.–noon | 12 sessions Reg $420.00 Mem $378.00 Low $294.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 24. Popularized by the surrealist movement in 1920s Paris, intuitive writing can take you on a wild ride where you’ll spin your deepest intuition into golden words of poetry, prose, or song. This class will explore intuitive writing through in-class writing exercises, group sharing, light workshopping, intuitive writing “marathons,” and discussion of how the subconscious lends itself to the creative fire. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Intermediate | Thursdays | 11/3–12/15 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions 25 new class! Now Write! The Creative Nonfiction Workshop Rachael Hanel CREATIVE PROCESS (Continued) new class! Banned Books Week: The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison Trudy Fortun Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/1 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. | Bring your already read copy of The Bluest Eye and your writing journal, laptop, or work-in-progress. Join fellow creatures of controversy for a unique combination of book club discussion infused with opportunities to reflect and write about banworthy themes. Our launch pad will be Nobel Prize-winning author Toni Morrison’s debut novel The Bluest Eye and the cultural narrative about race and beauty. new class! Spark The Process: Rediscovering Your Light When You Feel Lost in the Dark | Kate St. Vincent Vogl Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/1 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. Learn key techniques to alight new material within you. We’ll identify our sources of inspiration, then shape the big picture of our narratives and interconnecting storylines. Writing prompts will deepen connections with characters. Exercises help build trust in our processes. Leave with an armful of new ideas for your writing! Silencing the Inner Critic | Rebecca Kanner Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/29 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. 26 | IN-PERSON CLASSES What is keeping you from the wild uninhibited prose that is the first step in your journey to good writing? Who is your inner critic, and why does he demand perfection? In this class, we’ll answer these questions and find ways to exorcize these voices from our heads and not allow our self critique to become harmful. Writing Tasteful Sex Scenes | Joshua Cook Intermediate | Tuesdays | 9/20–10/25 | 5–7 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we will discover the joys and tribulations of writing sex. With a focus on literary fiction, we’ll look at some steamy scenes from short stories and novels, discuss the dos and don’ts, write some of our own sex scenes, and glean pivotal craft elements—point-of-view, character, momentum—common to the successful ones. new class! Missing Girls: A Craft Based Book Club Erin Kate Ryan Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–12/6 | 6–8 p.m. | 10 sessions Reg $350.00 Mem $315.00 Low $245.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8 or 22. In the past several years, dozens of bestsellers have centered on a missing girl. Let’s investigate why! Over 10 weeks, this book-based class will explore novels, short stories, and films that employ the missing girl structure, and then we’ll discuss what works and what feels tired. Expect high-level conversation, writing prompts that challenge convention, and the cozy environment of the Loft’s Book Club Room, with access to the Open Book patio. Food and drink welcome. Limited to 10 book lovers. Intermediate Fiction Workshop | Robert Voedisch Intermediate | Tuesdays | 9/20–12/6 | 7:30–9:30 p.m. | 10 sessions Reg $350.00 Mem $315.00 Low $245.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8 or 22. This class is for students familiar with the basics of fiction who are ready to polish their stories with richer themes, characters, and impact. Most of our time will be spent discussing your work, helping you to make your stories the best they can be. Fiction Workshop | Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/30 | 6–8 p.m. | 10 sessions Reg $350.00 Mem $315.00 Low $245.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 23. The format for this workshop is descriptive review—we’ll read up to 20 pages of each other’s work with a view towards identifying what is at stake and describing what we believe to be true about the characters. Writers may choose to submit their own workshop questions for readers to consider. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES new class! 27 FICTION FICTION (Continued) Beneath the Surface: Exploring Subtext Allison Wyss Advanced | Thursdays | 9/22–10/27 | 10 a.m.–noon | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. Reach a more nuanced understanding of subtext through in-depth discussion of Charles Baxter’s The Art of Subtext and practical writing exercises. Students should already have a basic grasp of elements such as plot, setting, character, etc., and be ready to explore this more advanced aspect of fiction writing. It’s A Mystery: The Basics of the Crime Novel | David Housewright Intermediate | Thursdays | 9/22–12/15 | 6–8 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $420.00 Mem $378.00 Low $294.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 24. For beginning and intermediate writers, this class explores the process of crime fiction with emphasis on its component parts—the ‘McGuffin,’ plot, structure, POV, character development, dialogue, settings, research, and authenticity. And we put what we learn into action with in-class exercises and at-home writing assignments. How’d They Do That: A Craft Based Book Club for Writers Allison Wyss Open to All Levels | Thursdays | 9/22, 10/20, 11/17 | 6–9 p.m. | 3 sessions Reg $157.50 Mem $141.75 Low $110.25 | Small copy fee. 28 | IN-PERSON CLASSES In this book club for writers, we’ll read The Sympathizer by Viet Thanh Nguyen, My Brilliant Friend by Elena Ferrante, and Mr. Fox by Helen Oyeyemi. Together, we’ll discover the techniques at play in the writing and analyze the structure of these novels to learn how to write our own. Participants are invited to make use of the book club room in the weeks between official meeting dates—to read, discuss, write, or just connect with your fellow readers and classmates. Fiction Basics: Five Parts of Story | Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/1 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. This session is for writers who need help with structuring and building momentum in their stories. We’ll examine the five parts of traditional story: exposition, rising action, crisis, falling action, and conclusion. Come prepared for exercises on each of the five parts of traditional story form. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Master Mondays: Fiction Peter Geye Advanced | Mondays | 10/3–12/19 6–9 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $630.00 Mem $567.00 Low $441.00 Small copy fee. The Master Monday Series is an intensive writing opportunity for advanced students with workshop experience. Master Monday classes are a chance for serious and advanced fiction writers to take their craft and careers to the next level. Each student will workshop more than one submission (the actual number will vary according to the class size) and will be expected to be an active participant in all class discussions. Students should also expect significant feedback from the teaching artist, both in class and during individual meetings outside of class. Our focus on student work will include improvement of the work itself, naturally, but we’ll also focus on finding a place in the wider world for it. We’ll also be visited by some of those writers, as well as distinguished regional editors and publishers. This class should be viewed as an opportunity to improve your craft and develop relationships with other aspiring writers. Community Postings Looking for or recruiting for a book club or writing group? Seeking places to submit work? Or maybe you’re just ready to share some exciting news with the Loft community? The Loft’s community postings are free. Connect with your fellow writers today. Due to the touring schedule of Peter Geye, this class starts October 3, and will need to run consecutively for 12 weeks, including a meeting on Monday, November 21 (Thanksgiving week). loft.org/postings FICTION (Continued) Fiction Basics: Point of View | Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/8 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Point of View (POV) is not simply a question of 1st person (I) or 3rd person (she): you’ll need to consider reliability, objectivity, distance, and audience. We’ll review different types of POVs and exercises will let you experiment to learn which one is the best POV for your story. Fiction Basics: Characters & Characterization | Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. We’ll create characters based on people you know, your passion, your interest, your curiosity, and your imagination. We’ll look at direct and indirect methods of characterization. Exercises will help you get to know your characters better and will identify significant details to make your characters come alive on the page. new class! Novel Revision Workshop | Margi Preus Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Bring the latest draft of your novel or novel-in-progress for a hands-on, pen-on-paper workshop designed to bump your novel up to the next level. free info session! The Novel Writing Project Information Session 1 & 2 | Peter Geye Tuesday | 10/18 | 6–7 p.m. or Saturday | 10/29 | 2–4 p.m. | Free 30 | IN-PERSON CLASSES The year-long project will include class time, visiting lectures, a peer community cohort, as well as significant one-on-one work with the teaching artist. Starting in January, Peter Geye will lead a year-long Novel Writing Project. Everything you need to know about the novel, from first thought to publication, taught by award-winning author Peter Geye. How many times have you thought: I’m finally going to start writing my novel tomorrow, only to find that when tomorrow comes, you’re overwhelmed by the mere prospect of finding the first word, never mind the last? If you’re like most practicing or aspiring novelists, the answer to this simple question is haunting. Of course you know that in order to finish, you Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/22 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. The well-rendered setting can create harmony or conflict, characterize, symbolize, play to or against readers’ expectations, as well as make the familiar unfamiliar or the unfamiliar familiar. We’ll review how to present compelling settings and practice these strategies with writing exercises. Fiction Basics: Scene, Summary, Flashback, and Narrative Time Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/29 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Does an event demand a moment-by-moment scene? Should it be summarized? How can we transition between scene and summary and move our characters backward and forward in time? We’ll experiment with methods to weave together scene and summary, integrate flashbacks, and move through time. Writing Great Dialogue | Rebecca Kanner Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/29 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Great dialogue is riveting. It holds a reader tight and won’t let go. We’ll study different types and uses of dialogue, and the best ways to create characters with their own voices. Then we’ll do a series of writing exercises to generate the sort of dialogue that keeps readers turning the pages. new class! Rewrite Your Life: Transform Your Facts into Powerful Fiction | Jessica Lourey Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/12 & 11/19 | 9 a.m.–1 p.m. | 2 sessions Reg $140.00 Mem $126.00 Low $98.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, creative writing professor, sociologist, and popular fiction author Jessica Lourey guides writers at any level through the redemptive process of writing and selling a novel which recycles and transforms their most precious resource—their own emotions and experiences. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Fiction Basics: Setting | Brian Malloy 31 must begin. But where? And how? This year-long project will answer both those questions, and a hundred others. Whether you’ve already written a completed draft or have only the first inkling of the book you know is in you, this year-long project and mentorship experience will help you find or finish it. Curious about what this endeavor will entail? Nervous about committing to a whole year? Questions about whether or not you’re far enough along? Come to an info session to answer all of your questions. Information sessions are free, but we ask you to register online at loft.org. new class! Impossible to Look Away: Thrill Me | Roseanne Pereira Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/12 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Please obtain a copy of Ben Percy’s Thrill Me: Essays on Fiction (available October 18th from Graywolf Press). No copy fee for students. In this class, we’ll explore lessons from Benjamin Percy’s new craft book Thrill Me: Essays on Fiction. Through discussion and writing exercises, you will gain a more nuanced understanding of suspense and the factors that contribute to making it work in your writing. You’ll leave with specific strategies for how to make your own work more gripping, making it impossible for your readers to look away from the page. Fiction Basics: Revision Lab | Brian Malloy Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/12 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Bring your printed manuscript, and yellow, pink, and green highlighters for this hands-on revision lab. You’ll practice revision methods focused on scene/summary, arrangement of events, abstract/concrete language, sensory imagery, and significant details. If you don’t bring your manuscript, you won’t have much to do at this hands-on session! new class! Scene + Structure = Story: A Plotting Technique for Advanced Novelists | Tamara Hogan Advanced | Saturday | 11/12 | 2–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. In genre fiction, every scene must reveal character, advance plot, supply information, and escalate conflict. In this class, we’ll study the scene as the building block of story. Then, using a story-boarding technique, we’ll explore ways to structure and sequence scenes into a plot which tells our most satisfying story. 32 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Descriptive Language in Fiction | Aurelia Wills Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/19 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Descriptive language is a writer’s most powerful tool for creating what John Gardner called the best fiction—a vivid and continuous dream. Readings and exercises will focus on the importance of specificity, how to deftly work with adverbs and adjectives, the use of all five senses, and how to communicate emotion. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–11/15 | 1–3 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8. This class will help you start and sustain new work. Through discussion of established writers, you will learn new tactics. Then through writing prompts and free-writes, you will create, shape, and share new work with the class. By the end of class, you will walk away with multiple new starts and ideas to continue your writing journey. new class! Writing About Illness: An Intro to Narrative Medicine EmmaLee Pallai Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–10/25 | 5–7 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, students will learn about illness narratives in prose and poetry. Through in-class writing exercises, we will explore our own relationship with illness whether we work with it, have been touched by it, or live with it. Each participant will have one of their works discussed and workshopped by the group. new class! The Structures of Story | Erin Kate Ryan Intermediate | Wednesdays | 9/21–12/14 | 1–3 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $420.00 Mem $378.00 Low $294.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 23. What makes master storytellers Edward P. Jones, Karen Russell, Italo Calvino, Alison Bechtel, and Junot Diaz so great? With writing prompts and opportunities for workshop, this class for storytellers of all stripes will introduce a wide variety of structures for making your stories sing. new class! The Art of Loneliness: Finding Connection and Creativity | Brenda Hudson Open to All Levels | Wednesdays | 9/21–10/26 | 6–8 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. | This class takes place in the Loft’s Book Club Room and is limited to 10 students. | Please obtain The Lonely City. In her book The Lonely City, Olivia Laing insists that loneliness is not failure, but “evidence of aliveness,” an experience with meaning. In this half book club, half writing class, we’ll explore these experiences and ideas as well as examine our own lives through creative writing prompts. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Jump Start Your Writing | Karlyn Coleman 33 MULTIGENRE MULTIGENRE (Continued) new class! Notebooks to Manuscript: Reigniting Your Earlier Work | Morgan Grayce Willow Intermediate | Thursdays | 9/22–11/10 | 10 a.m.–noon | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. Rediscover and reignite work you may have long since abandoned. This class is for writers who have abandoned accumulated writing. Through in-class and athome exercises, students will identify core passages and work with them. After feedback, students will clarify a project and devise a plan for completing it. new class! Afternoon Character Intensive: Bring Your Characters to Life on the Page | Mary Carroll Moore Open to All Levels | Thursday | 10/20 | 12:30–5:30 p.m. | 1 session Reg $87.50 Mem $78.75 Low $61.25 | Small copy fee. Characters are the heartbeat of story, but how do you, as a writer, work with them? This class will let you audition the most compelling cast for your fiction or memoir, then free them from any conscious or unconscious paralysis via innovative exercises. We’ll explore key character-building skills such as longing and desire, external and internal motivation, physical appearance, community, values, secrets, backstory, gestures, and more. new class! Your Book Starts Here: Learn to Storyboard Your Book! | Mary Carroll Moore Open to All Levels | Friday | 10/21 | 10 a.m.–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. 34 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Learn to storyboard, with a simple template that many professional writers use to build a strong structure for a novel, memoir, or nonfiction book. Via the storyboard, you’ll immediately find which holes need filling, organize your research, and strengthen weak plots and character arcs. You’ll also get to know what your book is really about, and what to include and what to leave out (you may have more than one book here!). new class! Politics Through Story | Janet Anderson Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/22 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we’ll examine and mimic fiction and nonfiction works like Jill Leovy’s Ghettoside, Eula Biss’ On Immunity, and Paula Fox’s Desperate Characters. These works succeed in developing political arguments, not through stated opinion, but through empathetic characters, exciting plots, and sensitive metaphors, i.e. effective storytelling. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income 35 Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/29 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. While there’s place and time for manners, you can’t get there ‘til all hell breaks loose both on and off the page. Give your perfectionist the day off: liberate your savage heckler, bountiful bard, sacred keener, purest joy by creating space on the page to say it like it is! new class! To Be a Citizen: Writing Subversive Through Political Verse and Lyric Essay | Heidi Czerwiec Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/29 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we will spend time discussing Claudia Rankine’s poetry/lyric essay hybrid book Citizen and some additional texts to discover strategies for blending the personal and political in our writing. We’ll also have dedicated writing time to generate our own work. new class! Bilingual Writing | Victoria Blanco Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/12 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. More writers today are mixing English with another language, whether it be their native or an acquired tongue. We will incorporate a second language—even if it is just a few words—into a new work of fiction, poetry, or nonfiction. new class! Queering Story: A Primer on Breaking the Rules Erin Kate Ryan Intermediate | Saturday | 11/19 | 10 a.m.–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. Let’s celebrate work that queers convention, subverts expectation, and builds narrative around the lived experiences! We will look at the works of queer writers such as James Baldwin, Kathy Acker, Lidia Yuknavitch, and Sapphire, plus writers who queer expectations for story: Ntozake Shange, Teju Cole, Jorge Luis Borges, Haruki Murakami. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES new class! Real Writing for the (not so) Minnesota Nice Roxanne Sadovsky NEW MEDIA Writing for the Web | Amy Simso Dean Beginning | Saturday | 10/15 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Dominate this brave new world of micro-blogging, blogging, and web sites. Explore how online writing is different from writing print materials. Learn online writing techniques, including dos and don’ts. Discover how to increase the chances your word will be found and read. Short exercises and numerous examples. PLAY- & SCREENWRITING Adapt to Script | Cristina Pippa Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–11/15 | 7:30–9:30 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8. Adaptation is the highest form of flattery. Novels, short fiction, and true stories make excellent films and televisions series. In this class for writers of all levels, we will utilize story structure, map out key scenes, and guide you in writing the first draft of your screenplay adaptation. new class! Advanced Screenwriting | Alan Miller Advanced | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/30 | 6–8 p.m. | 10 sessions Reg $350.00 Mem $315.00 Low $245.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 23. Please obtain The Screenwriter’s Bible by Dave Trottier and bring 5–7 scripted pages to the first class. 36 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Building on your knowledge of fundamentals and formatting, we’ll move your concept and/or initial scripting efforts toward a successful draft, utilizing both character driven and plot driven concepts, and at the same time avoiding the screenwriting taboos which get so many scripts rejected. Expect weekly writing assignments, critiques from peers and your teaching artist, and at least one opportunity for a one-on-one conference to discuss your screenplay. Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. This class will provide you with a basic understanding of the challenges and rewards of screenwriting. Interactive exercises and discussions will stimulate ideas and clarify your approach to writing a screenplay. We’ll examine what makes a good screenplay idea and how to create compelling characters, plus further resources for screenwriting. new class! The Craft of Screenwriting: The Seen Story Marc Nieson Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/19 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. This class focuses on what makes any image, scene, or screenplay work, both structurally and emotionally. We’ll look at scripted models on the page and screen, practice introducing our characters and informing their dialogue with stakes, and building our story’s overall tension and torque. In short, how to effectively fashion narratives that will flicker and linger within the mind’s eye. POETRY new class! The Noise and Whip of the Whirlwind: Poetry and Place | Mike Rollin Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–10/25 | 1–3 p.m. | 6 sessions Reg $210.00 Mem $189.00 Low $147.00 | Small copy fee. Landscape, history, myth, language, wonder, and bewilderment: writing poetry about place allows us to explore them all. In this class, we will read authors from around the world, investigate the many dimensions of place, and create several new drafts about the places that thrill and haunt us. new class! Writing Gurlesque Poetry | Tara McDaniel Open to All Levels | Tuesdays | 9/20–11/15 | 7:30–9:30 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 8. Advisory: Gurlesque poetry contains explicit language and graphic sexuality. Campy, hyberbolic, and grotesque, Gurlesque poetics emerged in the U.S. among Gen X female poets. We’ll look at American poetry written by women since 1960 and how the Gurlesque differs from the poetry of the previous generation. Then we’ll look at specific craft techniques such as scrambled syntax, fragmentation, repetition, shifting personas, and hybrid form and apply it to our own writing. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Beginning | Saturday | 10/8 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session 37 Screenwriting Crash Course | Miriam Queensen POETRY (Continued) new class! Grounding and Charging Your Poetry Patricia Kirkpatrick Intermediate | Wednesdays | 9/21–11/9 | 6–8 p.m. | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we will explore the elements that ground and charge poetry, including language, voice, and form, while giving special attention to the contributions of music (sound) and imagery. new class! In Brief: Writing the Short Poem | Katie Vagnino Open to All Levels | Thursdays | 9/22–11/10 | 10 a.m.–noon | 8 sessions Reg $280.00 Mem $252.00 Low $196.00 | Small copy fee. In this class, we’ll focus on the art of the short poem, exploring how to compress big ideas into minimal lines for maximum impact. Studying forms such as haikus, tankas, and triolets, students will workshop pieces to develop an understanding of how to maintain complexity while dealing with length constraints. The Voice of the Heart | Thomas R. Smith Open to All Levels | Thursdays | 9/22–12/15 | 6–8 p.m. | 12 sessions Reg $420.00 Mem $378.00 Low $294.00 | Small copy fee. | No class November 24. Poetry directly communicates from the poet’s heart to the heart of the reader. How does the ‘voice of the heart’ speak without sentimentality or cliché? Touching on the most powerful areas of human feeling and experience, this class helps poets bring more emotional honesty and openness to their work. new class! Playing with the Vessels of Poetry Michael Kiesow Moore Intermediate | Saturdays | 10/1 & 10/8 | 9 a.m.–noon | 2 sessions 38 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. Our aim is to remove the fear of poetry and have fun with poetic form. We’ll dive into forms like Haiku, Sonnet, Cinquain, Bricolage, and Ghazal. Poetic form is like a container that holds the poem. We’ll look at these containers, and if some don’t work, we’ll break them! Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Beginning | Saturday | 10/1 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. In this class, we will cover the poetic tradition of the elegy and how contemporary versus older writers have memorialized people in verse. Participants will learn how to shape their feelings about and memories of loved ones into unique poems using specific poetic tools. new class! Poetry Revision Bootcamp | Heidi Czerwiec Open to All Levels | Saturdays | 10/15 & 10/22 | 9 a.m.–noon | 2 sessions Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. This class is for students who already have poems that they want to further refine, revise, or reimagine. This class will focus on intensive critique and feedback on student poems, and on discussions of various strategies from surface to deep revision techniques. Unlocking the Very Brief Poem, East and West | Thomas R. Smith Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 1–5 p.m. | 1 session Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. The very brief poem is ideal for those who want to capture essences, or the immediate flavor of some moment of living. Inspired by a broad range of international poets from Basho to Jane Hirshfield, participants will try their hand at both Eastern and Western forms including renga and cinquains. new class! Writing with Risk | Claire Wahmanholm Intermediate | Saturday | 10/22 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. In this class, we’ll approach risk as a tool that all good poets possess. We’ll read craft essays that discuss the importance of risk, and talk about how to experiment with content, voice, and form in ways that surprise us and carry our poetry in new directions. new class! The Poetics of Pop | Timothy Otte Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/19 | 10 a.m.–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $105.00 Mem $94.50 Low $73.50 | Small copy fee. Poets can learn more from pop song lyrics than rhyme and how to spot a cliché. Using pop song lyrics as a guide, we’ll write poems and explore elements of craft you may not have expected to find in the lyrics of Taylor Swift or Kendrick Lamar. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | IN-PERSON CLASSES Creating Poetic Memorials | Janna Knittel 39 new class! PUBLISHING AND CAREER new class! Quest for Quality Queries | Sarah Ahiers Open to All Levels | Saturdays | 10/1 & 10/8 | 1–5 p.m. | 2 sessions Reg $140.00 Mem $126.00 Low $98.00 | Small copy fee. Make query writing easier! In our first session, we will use the 4 Cs method to build an effective hook, setup, body, and conclusion. We will discuss dos and don’ts, greetings, and bios. In the second session, students will return for query critiques, helpful query sites, tips and tricks, and querying strategies. new class! Branding Your Author-Self | Aurora Whittet Beginning | Saturday | 10/8 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. Branding your author-self is as important as the books you write. Social media platforms give readers access to authors and strong branding is key to creating those long-lasting relationships. Learn how to create your brand identity and how to apply it to social media. Crafting the Nonfiction Book Proposal | Kate Hopper Open to All Levels | Saturday | 10/15 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 | Small copy fee. To sell your nonfiction book, you’ll need a proposal that’s both concise and catchy. In this class, we’ll follow a step-by-step process that will help you distill your book’s ‘hook,’ understand the components of a strong proposal, and begin to create an ‘about the author’ section and marketing plan. Everything You Want to Know About Submitting Your Work But Don’t Know to Ask | Casey Patrick Open to All Levels | Saturday | 11/12 | 9 a.m.–1 p.m. | 1 session 40 | IN-PERSON CLASSES Reg $70.00 Mem $63.00 Low $49.00 | Small copy fee. Wondering where to begin or what that rejection letter’s really saying? Gain an inside look at the submissions process and develop strategies for sending your work out to journals. Plus, the chance to have all your submission questions answered by a teaching artist with experience as both writer and editor! Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income YOUTH YOUTH YOUTH 41 YOUTH YOUTH YOUTH YOUTH YOUTH YO new class! YOUTH YOUTH YOUTH YO AGES 6-8 YOUTH YOUTH YO YOUTH | YOUTH CLASSES YOUTH YOUTH CLASSES From Ruff Drafts to Dog Tales | Isabel Harding Saturday | 10/15 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 They say dogs are a person’s best friend, but they can also be great characters in a story. Using other dog stories for inspiration, along with different writingYOUTH games, we’ll work on developingYOUTH a story for you to share with theYOUTH world—featuring your dog as the hero! new class! Haunted House, Hidden Pages: A Loft/MCBA Combo Class | Holly Day YOUTH YOUTH Saturday | 10/29 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session | Reg $55.50 Mem $49.95 Low $38.85 YO As a class, we’ll first read some classic, age-appropriate ghost stories, and talk about why the idea of a haunted house is so thrilling to so many of us. Character development and basic story form will be discussed, and finally, we’ll write our own ghost stories to put in our own Haunted House Hidden Page Book made in MCBA’s studios. This is no ordinary book... it holds aYOUTH YOUTH YOUTH secret hiding place just waiting to surprise your readers! Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org YOUTH YOUTH YO AGES 9-11 Story Building and Story Busting: It’s in the Bag! Kate St. Vincent Vogl Saturday | 10/8 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 Love to know what makes a story work? We’ll break stories apart and put them back together. Find out how writers pull ideas out of a bag (or out of real life) and fit stories together. We’ll write in class—to build on what you have and discover something totally new! Tasty Soup!: Getting a Story Ready to Publish | Isabel Harding Saturday | 10/22 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 Using Stone Soup magazine as a model, we’ll learn all about writing stories and getting them ready for print. Sometimes, knowing where to send your work can inspire you to develop a story—and with the right mixture of ingredients, you can really get that soup boiling! new class! Frankenstein and Monsters!: A Loft/MCBA Combo Class | Karlyn Coleman Saturday | 10/29 | 9 a.m.–noon | 1 session | Reg $55.50 Mem $49.95 Low $38.85 Starting in MCBA’s studios, we will create our own Portrait Pop-Out Book featuring Frankenstein. With two blank pages to fill, the class will move to the Loft to read classic spooky tales, write our own, and share what we have created. Much writing will be done. AGES 12-14 Making Comics: A Loft/MCBA Combo Class | Tom Spence 42 | YOUTH CLASSES Saturday | 10/8 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $55.50 Mem $49.95 Low $38.85 In this class, you will learn all about the building blocks of comics: panels, text, pacing, and so on, as well as how to conceptualize your characters and story. These combined efforts of form and content will result in a unique comic story of your own making. At MCBA, students will then bind their original comic story into a handmade comic book. Pricing: reg=regular | mem=member | low=low-income Saturday | 10/15 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 Character development is essential to skillful storytelling. From the Harry Potter series to superhero comics, memorable characters are what resonate with readers. Create your own and learn to render them realistically, mixing and matching them to populate your stories’ worlds. new class! Heading into the Deep | Jane St. Anthony Saturday | 10/22 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 What underpins the writing we love to read? Depth. We will explore emotion, the bedrock of our favorite books. Using emotion, we’ll bring our stories to life. And we’ll open our hearts to music, art, and poetry for inspiration. AGES 13-17 new class! Banned Books Week Discussion: Beyond Magenta: Transgender Teens Speak Out | Trudy Fortun Saturday | 10/1 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 Explore LGBTQQIAAP themes as we discuss the true stories of six transgender teens in Beyond Magenta and excerpts from David Levithan’s Two Boys Kissing and Alison Bechdel’s graphic novel Fun Home. There will be time for optional writing activities to release your inner censor! The Secret Lives of Characters | Aurelia Wills Saturday | 11/12 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 A great character must have a life outside the boundaries of our story or novel. Through writing exercises, discussions, and readings we will explore how to imagine and depict our character’s history, habits, memories, and secrets. Please come with a character you’d like to imagine more fully in mind. Fiction Intensive | Isabel Harding Saturday | 11/19 | 1–4 p.m. | 1 session | Reg $52.50 Mem $47.25 Low $36.75 In this class for intermediate-to-advanced fiction writers, students will delve deeper into the major elements of crafting short stories, including character development, setting, and conflict. Using prompts, exercises, and readings, they will be guided through in-class writing exercises by their teaching artist, who began writing literary fiction as a teenager. Classes that start in September, October, and November listed here. More classes listed at loft.org | YOUTH CLASSES Elements of Fiction: Building Character | Su Hwang 43 new class! READING LIKE A WRITER: A LITTLE LIFE AND ANCHORING A READER IN TIME A VISIT TO H WRITERSBLOCK.LOFT.ORG anya Yanagihara’s A Little Life follows a group of college friends throughout their lives, examining the powerful and painful love that can exist in deep friendship. The book covers a long period of time and takes on multiple perspectives. What’s interesting to me about the way Yanagihara handles time is that she allows a very free-form drift through the past as characters reflect on their lives. The story itself marches forward, sometimes leaping ahead months or years, but the gaps are always filled in through a character’s reflection on the past. The sequence of these scenes is more associative than chronological—just like real memory tends to be. Yet when we’re in the past, the scenes are every bit as vivid as when we’re in the real time of the story. Sometimes, it’s easy to forget we’re in a memory. Maybe that’s okay. These memories are vivid to the characters and so should be vivid for the reader. But when it really matters that we’re in the real-time, forward-moving part of the story, Yanagihara makes sure we know it. One way she does this is by planting a memorable detail. My favorite occurs about 600 pages into the 700-page book. It’s limes. “I’m going,” [Willem] tells Jude, but then he doesn’t move. A dragonfly, as shiny as a scarab, hums above them. “I’m going,” he repeats, but he still doesn’t move, and it is only the third time he says it that he’s finally able to stand up from the lounge chair, drunk on hot air, and shove his feet back into his loafers. 44 | WRITERS’ BLOCK BLOG “Limes,” says Jude, looking up at him and shielding his eyes against the sun. Nearly twenty pages later, the limes appear again. At the grocery store [Willem] fills a paper bag with limes, and then a second one with lemons, buys some extra seltzer water, and drives to the train station, where he waits, leaning his head on the seat and closing his eyes until he hears Malcolm calling his name and sits up. Between the two mentions of limes—perhaps the only limes that appear in the whole book—are nineteen pages of other memories. That’s a long time to leave a scene before returning to it. Willem filters through these memories associatively. They are mostly about catching up the reader on what has been skipped to get to this day in his life, though there are also glimpses of the far past. Willem remembers recent vacations and the college-day conversations in which they were first dreamed up. He remembers Jude’s surgeries and details of their current lives. But even though there’s no light shone on them, limes are memorable. They have a bright color and a distinct shape and texture. They even have a flavor. When the word “limes” appears in any story, the reader immediately sees and feels and tastes them. They pop. The glory, then, of these limes is that they don’t make me stop and take notice when I first read them. But when they’re pinged a second time, I do. The second mention reminds me of the first—even though that mention was a whole nineteen pages ago— and tells me immediately that we’ve returned to that day, to that trip to the store. Yanagihara also uses tense to indicate when we’re inside and outside of memory. The first scene with the limes is in present tense (“‘Limes,’ says Jude”) as is the second mention (“he fills a paper bag with limes”). The memories, as makes sense, are related in past tense (“Now they drifted through the lake,” “He had dinner,” “It was the middle of June”). So getting the sudden present tense also tells me I’m back in the real time of the story. But reading that “fills” doesn’t take my brain instantly to the specific time that I was last in present tense, because there are many instances of present tense throughout the book. It tells me I’m in the real time of the story, but it doesn’t remind me of the exact day. One paragraph before the limes, Yanagihara pulls us into real time more specifically. “That had been almost two months ago, and since then, he has spent most of his time at Lantern House.” So we know we’re getting back to the forward moving portion of the story. We even have a place. But it’s not a precise reference to the day in question. Willem has spent other days at Lantern House. It doesn’t remind of what he’s doing on this particular day. The limes, with their vividness, pull us to a specific day in the story. The limes are named one more time, when Willem makes a phone call to Jude. “‘I got the limes,’ he tells him.” One mention might have been enough, but since it’s natural enough for Willem to say this, I think it’s wise of Yanagihara to make sure the reader doesn’t miss them. The limes aren’t crucial to the plot. I don’t need to remember them because one falls out of the bag and leads to something else. Everything that happens in the book could happen without mention of these limes. But they’re the kind of detail that gives life to the quotidian. Shopping, planning a party—it’s boring, but can be vivid when we get tastes and textures and colors. More important, these tastes and textures and colors can help the reader navigate through time and memory. This is a very small thing, especially in a 700-page book. But the length and complexity of the book make small things like this, vivid navigational markers, all the more important. Allison Wyss is published in numerous journals and is a Loft teaching artist. | WRITERS’ BLOCK BLOG The limes do a marvelous job of grounding the reader. It’s important that they’re the kind of thing that can be mentioned casually. The people in the book are often cooking and drinking and having parties. Food is frequently named. So it’s not strange for one person to ask another to pick them up; there’s not a spotlight on them or a “ding-dingding, gentle reader, pay attention to this!” 45 I like the feeling of being adrift in memories when I read a book. But I also need to know when I’m no longer there, when my feet are on firm ground, and the action is happening in the present of the story. ? ASK ESTHER ADVICE FOR THE EVERYDAY WRITER Every issue will feature Esther Porter answering questions from writers. Have a question for Esther? Send it our way at [email protected]. 47 There are countless ways for the second half of a novel to fall short of the first. Cheers to you for being a critical reader. Understanding how stories fail will help you avoid these choices in your own writing. Reading as much as possible can give you an internal sense of what you don’t want to do, and articulating that internal sense is key to improving your writing practice. So, why did this novel fail to live up to your expectations in the second half? The simple answer could be that the novel was unfinished—the second half may have required more editorial attention, more tightening. It’s also possible that the novel could have used some restructuring. Were there vital pieces of information that could have been delivered earlier on, within the rising action? Or did the resolution simply need to be condensed? Is it possible that the book needed to end closer to the 75% mark? It’s difficult to know when to end a story. That’s why so many stories end with death. What better way to convey finality? If you find yourself continuing the story after what seems like a resolution, consider moving on to a different project for a while. You can return later with fresh eyes and less attachment to the narrative. Remember that you also don’t have to use everything you write. Sometimes the writing that feels important is simply a means to developing plot and character. Though not for every writer, creating an outline ahead of time can help you plan the level of required suspense at every stage of the book. Listening to critics of your own work is also useful… sometimes. Recruit readers you trust who will let you know where your story falls short. What feels vital to the writer can feel extraneous to the reader. The challenge is determining whose opinion is more correct. And as the writer, that’s for you to decide. When writing a story with a timeline that jumps around, what are some tactics to keep the reader grounded in the story? Setting ourselves free of chronological time in our writing can actually help us see how it affects our worldview. Storytelling often reflects the experience of time passing, and Time (with a capital T) is how we account for change—how we keep track of cause and effect. >>> CONTINUED ON NEXT PAGE | ASK ESTHER I recently read a novel that had suspenseful rising action in the first half of the book, but it fell flat in the second half. What are some tips to avoid this in my own writing? Grounding the reader doesn’t always require chronology. Clear transitions are what’s important, and they can be as simple as an extra line of blank space. Depending on the point of view and narrative distance in your novel, different parameters will apply. Regardless, your reader should see the significance of each transition. How your characters are pulled from one memory to another can reveal the intricacies of their inner lives. When the present moment moves us to remember, we re-experience the past with a new color wheel of understanding, and we can return with a stronger ability to transform experience into wisdom. We can ground the reader by strengthening the theme or pattern that drives the novel from one jump to the next. When it is something other than chronological time, the key is to clearly yet gracefully indicate which pattern the reader should follow. You can also return to a specific time period—a baseline from which all other jumps through your story originate. But again, not necessary. Life doesn’t provide us with perfect storylines, because the concept of a storyline is human-made. It’s only in the looking back that we see the necessary elements of a story, and they’re often out of chronological order. The joy of storytelling is in the nuances of perspective (distance, proximity, angle, time). The joy of living is to experience the wild frontier of the Mind (with a capital M) and its effort to navigate the world—to interpret the present moment using immediate physical experience and the time-traveling gymnastics of memory. “Life is not what one lived, but what one remembers and how one remembers it in order to recount it.” —Gabriel Garcia Marquez Esther Porter earned her English degree at the University of Minnesota and has published eight children’s books, including Peeking Under the City from Capstone Press. She spent several years working for Coffee House Press, and was a founding editor at Revolver, an arts and culture magazine based in Minneapolis. Esther now offers editorial services through the Loft’s Manuscript Critique and Coaching Program. 48 | ASK ESTHER Learn more at loft.org/edit. 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