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Kaplan University Writing Center
Kaplan University Writing Center The Sentence A sentence is a group of words that expresses a complete thought. This resource covers the essential sentence grammar and sentence types that writers use to communicate effectively. Table of Contents Sentence Basics Sentence Structure Word order Subjects and predicates Sentence Types Simple Sentences Independent clauses Compound Conjunctions (FANBOYS) Semicolons Complex Dependent Clauses Compound-Complex Sentence Combining Relative Clauses (that, which, who…) Absolute Phrases Appositive Phrases Sentence Basics A sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with an exclamation point, question mark, or period. The punctuation along with any question or command words indicate the kind of sentence it is. Table 1. Four Kinds of Sentences Kind Function Examples Declarative Makes a statement The United States is located in North America. Interrogative Asks a question What time is it? “What” is a question word. Exclamatory Expresses strong emotion I hope you have a wonderful day! Imperative Gives direction or an order Tell them to open the door. “Tell” is a command word. Sentence Structure Writing effective sentences begins by using accurate word order. The importance of word order can be seen in this example: sky blue the is. To be logical, the words must be reordered to the sky is blue. In English word order, the subject (sky) comes before the verb (is). Additionally, the word the (an article) comes before a word like sky (a noun) but never before a word like is (a verb). Refer to the Word Order1 tutorial in the KU Writing Center for more details and examples of word order in English. © Clipart.com 1 Word Order in Sentences with podcast: http://bit.ly/XMavui Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 1 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Subjects and Predicates Sentences have two parts: a subject and a predicate. The subject is usually the topic of the sentence, and the predicate typically comments on what the subject is doing or describes the subject’s state of being. Try to divide the following sentences into their subjects and predicates: 1) Diana left. 2) The local library is closed on Sundays. 3) The television in the kitchen doesn’t have cable. Table 2. Division of Subject and Predicate Subject Predicate 1) Diana 2) The local library 3) The television in the kitchen left. is closed on Sundays. doesn’t have cable. Subjects can be nouns, pronouns, noun phrases, gerunds, or infinitives2. © Clipart.com Table 3. Types of Sentence Subjects Noun Pronoun Noun Phrase Infinitive3 Gerund Mary introduced her boyfriend. They won the game. The giant steel workboat left port at noon. To wait seemed like a waste of time. Winning felt great! To test if you have identified the subject, replace it with a pronoun (I, you, he, she, it, we, they): Table 4. Pronoun Substitution to Identify the Subject Subject Pronoun She It It It Predicate introduced her boyfriend. left port at noon. seemed like a waste of time. felt great! Once you have determined the subject, the remainder of the sentence is the predicate. Please note that imperatives have an unstated/unwritten subject. Examples: 1) Smile! 2) Please take out the garbage. In these sentences, the subject is understood as “you” (the audience/reader): 3) (You) smile! 4) (You) please take out the garbage. Back to Table of Contents 2 Gerunds and infinitives are explained in the KUWC Verbs resource: http://bit.ly/1cNsnc5 Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 2 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Subjects can be one word (Shawn) or a phrase with different kinds of words (the fiddler playing an Irish folk song for his son). What they always contain, however, is a pronoun4 (she, it, understood you) or a noun (violin, cats, peace). A noun is a person, place, thing, or idea. Read through the following: ©clipart.com 1) Ball broke window. 2) Friend sofa is blue. 3) Neighborhood house have lawn. Rewrite the sentences so they make sense: 1) 2) 3) Table 5. Possible Revisions to Make the Sentences Grammatical 1) The ball broke a window. A ball broke the window. His ball broke my window. 2) My friend’s sofa is purple. A friend’s sofa is purple. 3) Our neighborhood’s houses have lawns. The revisions show that to be grammatical, nouns can be made plural to show there is more than one, usually by adding –s; possessive to show ownership, usually by adding -‘s; and more specific by adding determiners such as “the,” “a/an,” “my,” “his,” “that,” and “our” that determine which noun you are talking about (his house vs. my house). Refer to the KUWC Articles5 resource for more details about using determiners. Writing errors involving nouns usually occur when the noun is missing the plural -s, possessive -‘s, a determiner, or is incorrectly capitalized. Refer to the Nouns6, Plurals7, Possessives8, and Capitalization9 tutorials to help you identify these issues, as well as for ways to edit and avoid noun errors. Predicates can also be one word (played) or a phrase (had been planning his vacation). What they always contain, however, is a verb. A previous activity split sentences into subjects and predicates. In the following sentences, the predicate verb is in bold: Table 6. Predicates Must Have a Conjugated Verb Subject Predicate 1) Diana 2) The local library 3) The television in the kitchen 4 Pronouns: http://bit.ly/1rvdnZC Articles: http://bit.ly/1lZ6N9c 6 Nouns: http://bit.ly/1mJhvxA 7 Plurals: http://bit.ly/1tMRl13 8 Possessives: http://bit.ly/1p5W3m4 9 Capitalization: http://bit.ly/1undUuu left. is open on Sundays. doesn’t have cable. Back to Table of Contents 5 Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 3 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Read through the following sentences: 1) Ruby walk her dog yesterday. 2) My son play video games right now. 3) His family go to the beach tomorrow. 4) I not want to go to the party, but I make an appearance. 5) Maggie stay home, or she go out with friends. ©Clipart.com Now, rewrite the sentences so they make sense: 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) Table 7. Possible Revisions to Make the Sentences Grammatical 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) Ruby walked her dog yesterday. My son is playing video games right now. His family will go to the beach tomorrow. I do not want to go to the party, but I should make an appearance. Maggie could stay home, or she could go out with friends. The revisions show that to be grammatical, verbs can express a past action by adding –ed; an action in progress by adding a form of “to be” (is, am, are, was, were, had been…) before the verb and -ing to the end of it; a future action by adding “will” before it; obligation by adding “should” or possibility by adding “could” before it; and a particular meaning by having a preposition attached (“go out”). This is called a “phrasal verb.” For more details and examples of verb forms, tenses, helping verbs such as “is” and “should,” and phrasal verbs, please refer to the KUWC resource on Verbs10. Sentence Types There are four basic types of sentences: simple, compound, complex, and compound complex. Writers use simple sentences to state single points. The other sentence types allow writers to show relationships between two or more ideas, presenting them as equal with a compound sentence or emphasizing one point over another with a complex sentence. Varying sentence types also helps you develop cohesive paragraphs and a sophisticated writing style. Back to Table of Contents 10 Verbs: http://bit.ly/1cNsnc5 Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 4 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Simple Sentences A “simple” sentence has one subject and one predicate and is the core of every other sentence type; however, we call a “simple sentence” an “independent clause” when it is part of another sentence type. Independent Clauses Every sentence, to be complete, must have at least one independent clause. A clause is independent when it has a subject and predicate that together expresses a complete thought. Examples: The candidate gave a speech. The *object, “a speech,” completes the thought. Alternative health care is popular. The *subject complement, “popular,” completes the thought. Children should not watch violence on television. The object, “violence,” completes the thought. Bears hibernate. The subject and verb alone express a complete thought in this simple sentence. *Refer to Transitive and Intransitive Verbs on the KUWC Verbs resource to learn which verb types require an object or complement to complete the thought. A simple sentence is made of one “independent clause”: Subject + predicate. Table 8. Subject + Predicate = A Simple Sentence ©Clipart.com Subject Mary Laura and Brett Gus Predicate told a story to her friends. came home for the holidays. works and studies in New York. Compound Sentences A compound sentence builds on the simple sentence to express two or more complete ideas. It is made with at least two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction. Table 9. Subject + Predicate, + Conjunction (conj.) + Subject + Predicate = A Compound Sentence Subject Mary Laura and Brett Gus Predicate told a story to her friends, came home for the holidays, works and studies in New York, Conj. and so but Subject the conclusion our household his family Predicate was hilarious. was very busy. lives in New Jersey. Additional independent clauses can be added to a compound sentence with additional conjunctions. Table 9a. Three Independent Clauses Joined with Conjunctions Peter did not study, so he received a low grade on the exam, yet he still may pass the class. Back to Table of Contents Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 5 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Coordinating Conjunctions. There are seven coordinating conjunctions: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so. To remember them, use the acronym, FANBOYS, made from the first letter of each conjunction. A coordinating conjunction that joins clauses together must have a comma before it. Table 10. Examples of a Comma + Coordinating Conjunction Joining Independent Clauses I love Florida , Marcus was very late , Tim does not like playing football , Cessie studied hard , You can pick me up at the airport , Mary loved the wedding dress , George got up early , for it is always warm there. and he missed seeing Amanda. nor does he like watching it. but she did not get a good grade on the exam. or I can take a taxi. yet she did not buy it. so he had plenty of time in the morning. *Position the comma directly after the last word of the first clause, and then click the space key before writing the conjunction: Independent clause, and independent clause. Semicolons. Another way to connect independent clauses is with a semicolon11 (;). Table 11. Independent Clauses Joined with a Semicolon I saw Ottmar Libert in concert ; the music was fantastic. The bus ran late today ; the new driver was unfamiliar with the route. *Position the semicolon directly after the last word of the first clause; the next clause follows and does not begin with a capital letter since the semicolon combines the clauses into one compound sentence. Commonly, the clause following the semicolon will begin with a conjunctive adverb to show the relationship between the joined clauses. A comma goes after the conjunctive adverb. Table 11a. Independent Clauses joined with a Semicolon and Conjunctive Adverb I wrote my friend a letter ; however, I still need to buy a stamp to send it. Anna did not take piano lessons ; instead, she surprised us by taking violin. Table 12. Common Conjunctive Adverbs Common Conjunctive Adverbs accordingly additionally also besides consequently finally furthermore elsewhere equally hence in addition in comparison in contrast indeed instead likewise meanwhile moreover namely nevertheless now otherwise rather similarly still subsequently then thereafter therefore thus Back to Table of Contents 11 Jump to Sentence Combining Semicolons: http://bit.ly/1bkgzIP Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 6 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Complex Sentences The Complex Sentence has one independent (main) clause and one dependent (subordinate) clause. A dependent clause has a subject and verb, but it does NOT express a complete idea. Compare the difference: 1. I like to study math. (Subject + predicate = complete idea) 2. Because I am good with numbers. (Subordinate conjunction + subject + predicate = incomplete idea.) 1. I like to study math because I am good with numbers. 2. Because I am good with numbers, I like to study math. Complex Sentences have two basic structures as the above two examples show. 1. Independent clause + dependent clause. When an independent clause begins the sentence, a comma typically does not come before the subordinate clause; however, the subordinator, “although,” is an exception. Table 13. Complex Sentences with an Independent Clause before the Dependent Clause Independent Subject Predicate Dependent Subordinator Subject Predicate Jill received a good grade because she studied hard. Ryan played basketball when he was in high school. until they fall asleep. masks were not required. Puppies play nonstop Mimi wore a mask to swim practice, although 2. Dependent clause + independent clause. When the dependent clause begins the sentence, a comma comes before the independent clause. Table 14. Complex Sentences with a Dependent Clause before the Independent Clause Dependent Subordinator Subject Predicate, Independent Subject Predicate Because Jill studied hard, she received a good grade. Unless it rains, the concert will begin at dusk. Wherever he goes, his puppy follows. Even if the hardcover edition costs more, I will still to buy the book. Back to Table of Contents Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 7 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com ©Clipart.com Dependent clauses depend on independent clauses to complete their ideas. Examples: Kaplan University Writing Center A subordinate conjunction (subordinator) connects the independent and dependent clauses in complex sentences. To determine if a clause is dependent, identify the subject and verb. Does a subordinate conjunction come before them? If so, the clause is dependent and must be attached to an independent clause to complete the thought and avoid a fragment12. Table 15. Common Subordinate Conjunctions Before a Dependent (Subordinate) Clause Common Subordinate Conjunctions Subordinate Conjunctions Function Examples of Complex Sentences after, as, before, once, until, while, when, whenever To indicate time As Mary cooked, Mario cleaned his car. where, wherever To indicate place John went to school where he worked. as if, even if, if, than, unless, whether To indicate condition I will go to the beach unless it rains. although, even though, rather than, though, whereas To indicate contrast Although it rained, they enjoyed their walk. as, because, in order that, provided that, since, so that, that, why To indicate cause and effect He was late because his car broke down. Subordinate Clause or Prepositional Phrase? Sometimes, the same words used as “subordinators” are “prepositions.” The difference is that a subordinator is the first word of a clause that has a subject and verb. Prepositional phrases provide details about a subject or verb and are typically made of a preposition plus a noun phrase or “object” of the preposition. Examples “Before” as a subordinator: I ate dinner before I went to bed. (I = subject, went = verb) “Before” as a preposition: Part A needs to be installed before part B. (“part B” = noun phrase) For more information and examples of prepositions and prepositional phrases, please refer to the KUWC resource on prepositions13. Compound-Complex Sentences The Compound-Complex Sentence combines two or more independent clauses and one or more dependent clauses to form one sentence. Back to Table of Contents 12 13 Fragments: http://bit.ly/18oFKu3 Prepositions: http://bit.ly/1xPkXBf Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 8 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center The following examples illustrate compound-complex sentences. The independent clauses forming the compound structures are in bold, and the dependent clauses forming the complex structures are in italics. The connecting words (conjunctions and subordinators) are in regular font. 1) Jordan went to the Writing Center, and a tutor helped her revise her thesis statement before her paper was due. 2) Although Amanda is majoring in engineering, she likes history very much, so she reads history books in her free time. 3) Lawrence forgot to lock the door when he left the house, but he left early enough that he could return home and lock it without being late for work. 4) Cessie took longer than expected to finish her proposal, and this upset her because she did not have time to consult with a tutor about her conclusion before it was due. © Clipart.com Sentence Combining The four sentence types illustrate ways multiple clauses can form a single sentence. In fact, combining sentences is an approach to editing. The objective is to make your meanings clear, your wording concise, and your sentences cohesive (where one idea clearly connects to the next). Use the following template as a guide for combining sentences. Each line represents one independent clause (a simple sentence). Table 16. Sentence Combining Template A) _________________________________; _________________________________. B) ______________________, coordinating conjunction_______________________. (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) C) ________________________; conjunctive adverb, ________________________ (also, anyway, besides, certainly, finally, furthermore, however, incidentally, indeed, instead, likewise, meanwhile, moreover, namely, nevertheless, next, now, otherwise, similarly, still, then, therefore, thus, undoubtedly) D) Subordinating conjunction _____________________, _____________________. OR _____________________ subordinating conjunction _____________________. (after, although, as, as if, because, before, even though, if, in order that, once, since, so that, than, that, though, unless, until, when, where, while) Table 17. Sample Sentences Using the Sentence Combining Template A) Marta played an Irish folk song during the recital; her performance was flawless! B) The audience gave Marta a standing ovation, so she played an encore song on her violin. C) I didn’t recognize the tune she played; however, I enjoyed it very much. D) Because her encore performance was superb, I wish it had been longer. Or I wish her encore performance had been longer because it was superb. Back to Table of Contents Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 9 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Relative Clauses (That, Which, Who, Whom, and Whose) Another way to combine sentences is with relative clauses (also called adjective clauses), which are a type of dependent clause that has a subject and verb but cannot stand alone as a simple sentence. A relative clause begins with a relative pronoun such as “that,” “which,” or “who” and is embedded in the middle of another clause to identify or provide more information about a noun—a person or thing. Table 18. Relative Pronouns and Relative Clauses Relative Pronouns Examples of Combining Sentences with Relative Clauses That Two sentences: A stray cat has been sleeping on our porch. It has fluffy gray fur. Combined: A stray cat that has fluffy gray fur has been sleeping on our porch. Two sentences: My neighbor’s house is for sale. It has a swimming pool in the back yard. Combined: My neighbor’s house, which has a swimming pool in the back yard, is for sale. Two sentences: At the park, a boy ran back and forth in front of us. He was flying a kite. Combined: At the park, a boy who was flying a kite ran back and forth in front of us. Two sentences: My Aunt Sally turns 90 this year. Our whole family adores her. Combined: My Aunt Sally, whom our whole family adores, turns 90 this year. Two sentences: I bought a book for my husband. His birthday is tomorrow. Combined: I bought a book for my husband whose birthday is tomorrow. Which Who Whom Whose Absolute Phrases Absolute Phrases Another sentence-combining strategy is to turn one sentence into an absolute phrase and attach it to another. An absolute phrase has a subject but only a partial verb; it is missing the auxiliary “be” verb (is, are, was, were), so it cannot stand alone as a simple sentence. Most absolute phrases begin with a possessive pronoun (my, your, his, her, its, our, their); however, sometimes this possessive pronoun is only implied. The following sentences, written by published authors, illustrate the use of absolute phrases. In the third one, the personal pronoun is implied. Table 19. Examples of Absolute Phrases in Published Literature The boy watched, his eyes bulging in the dark. (Edmund Ware, “An Underground Episode”) Noiselessly Lenny appeared in the open doorway and stood there looking in, his big shoulders nearly filling the opening. (John Steinbeck, Of Mice and Men) The good dogs came stiffly out of their little house, [their] hackles up and deep growls in their throats. (John Steinbeck, The Red Pony) His hands raw, he reached a flat place at the top. (Richard Connell, “The Most Dangerous Game”) Back to Table of Contents Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. Rios • September 2014 • Page 10 © 2014 Kaplan University Writing Center, All Rights Reserved. Photography © Clipart.com Kaplan University Writing Center Sentence Combing Activity: Absolute Phrases Now, you try it. How can you combine the following sentences by using an absolute phrase? Try it yourself before you look at the possible answers. 1. Ann’s face was very red. She could not hear what they were saying. 2. He was wearing a straw hat. He stood outside the closed door of the farmhouse a long time. Possible Answers for Sentence Combining Activity: Absolute Phrases 1. Her face very red, Ann could not hear what they were saying. 2. He stood outside the closed door of the farmhouse a long time, his straw hat on his head. © Clipart.com Appositive Phrases You can also combine sentences by turning one into an appositive phrase, which is formed with an appositive noun plus any modifiers (words that describe). An appositive noun is one that renames another noun. The following sentences, written by published authors, illustrate the use of appositive phrases. Table 20. Examples of Appositive Phrases in Published Literature Poppa, a good quiet man, spent the last hours before our parting moving aimlessly about the yard, keeping to himself and avoiding me. (Gordon Parks, “My Mother’s Dream for Me”) There was a sizable number of well-read inmates, especially the popular debaters. (Malcolm X, The Autobiography of Malcolm X) One of eleven brothers and sisters, Harriet was a moody, willful child. (Langston Hughes, “Road to Freedom”) Sentence Combing Activity: Appositive Phrases Now, you try it. How can you combine the following sentences by using an appositive phrase? Try it yourself before you look at the possible answers. 1. The old woman had difficulty climbing out of the high-sided bathtub. The old woman was a cook with white hair and thin bones. 2. He was halfway to his horse. He heard the sound of Indian war whoops in the distance. Possible Answers for Sentence Combining Activity: Appositive Phrases 1. The cook, an old woman with white hair and thin bones, had difficulty climbing out of the high-sided bathtub. 2. Halfway to his horse he heard the sound, Indian war whoops in the distance. © Clipart.com Back to Table of Contents Kaplan University Writing Center Resource Library • Sentences V2_C. 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