K. F. Man - English Department
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K. F. Man - English Department
Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 Teaching English through Language Arts at Secondary Level Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media (ENG0231E) Assessment detail: Participants should produce a portfolio containing selected and significant pieces of work produced at various stages during the module. Portfolio content should include work related to each of the three key areas (poems, songs, media and/ or electronic texts) It must include a sample/ samples of the following: i. their personal response to selected pieces; ii. their own individual creative writing of poems/ song lyrics; iii. one pedagogically appropriate classroom LA activity deriving from (a) selected text(s) of each of the three key areas; iv. a statement of rationale justifying the inclusion of the selected pieces; and a discussion of their relevance to the implementation of a language arts curriculum. (about 750 words). Poem: What the Pig Mama Says Song: Happy Birthday Film: High School Musical: Senior Year; Funny Games The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 3. 3.1 Individual Work Selected poem: What the Pig Mama Says Poet: Arthur Leung Target group: S4/S5 No. of lessons: 5-6 Objectives: 1. Students will be able to identify characters, places, ideas and emotions addressed in the poem. 2. Students will be able to understand the theme of the poem. 3. Students will be able to feel and be aware of things happening around them in their daily life. 4. Students will be able to enhance their ability to appreciate and respond to the poem. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Stages Pre-reading Stage 1. Students brainstorm their thoughts of pigs and what the pig mama says (Appendix 1) after watching the following video clips at intervals: 麥兜 -仲有最靚既豬腩肉(Mumug- the best belly pork) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1HemBe-vo38 Meet your Meat (7 :40-11:30) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VIjanhKqVC4&feature=related 2. Students share their ideas with their classmates in groups of four. 3. Teacher has a brief introduction of the poet. (Appendix 2) 4. Teacher distributes the poem to the students. (Appendix 3) While-reading Stage 1st reading: - Teacher reads out the poem. 2nd reading: - Students fill in a paraphrase chart. (Appendix 4) - Teacher holds a class discussion analyzing the paraphrasing and the meaning of the poem. 3rd reading: - Students are divided into groups of four to fill in worksheets of character analysis and share their ideas with other classmates. (Appendix 5) - Teacher holds a class discussion analyzing the characters, connotations and the theme of the poem. (Appendix 6) th 4 reading: - Students figure out the poetic devices namely repetition, personification and onomatopoeia in the poem. (Appendix 7) Post-reading Stage 1. Each student chooses one living thing and write a poem of free verse ‗What the _______ says‘. (Appendix 8) (Appendix 9) 2. Each student writes a letter to the editor of SCMP in 300 words on behalf of the pig mama to voice the respect of the inferior animals. (Appendix 10) 3, Extended task: Students hold a class debate on the motion that human beings have the right to kill the animals. (Appendix 11) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 1 My thoughts of the pig: What the pig mama says! The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man My thoughts of the pigs: What the pig mama says! The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 2 Source 1 Profile of Mr. Arthur Leung Arthur Leung was first trained as a concert pianist. He received degrees from the University of Cambridge and the University of Hong Kong, and completed a postgraduate programme in creative writing (with distinction). His poems have been published in print in Hong Kong U Writing Anthology, Existere (Canada), Crannog Literary Magazine (Ireland), Taj Mahal Review(India), Paper Wasp (Australia), Southern Ocean Review (New Zealand), Cha (online literary journal) and are forthcoming in Smartish Pace (USA) and Pulsar Poetry Magazine (UK). He was a Finalist for the 2007 Erskine J. Poetry Prize (USA) and short-listed for the 2007 Margaret Reid Prize for Traditional Verse (USA). Contact: [email protected]. Source 2 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man News » 20 August 2008 Edwin Morgan International Poetry Competition Winners 2008... Kate Miller has won the inaugural Edwin Morgan International Poetry Competition for her poem 'After The prize of £ 5,000 is one of the largest for a literary award in Scotland. At a ceremony held at the Edinburgh Inter four other winners were presented with cheques and copies of Edwin Morgan's A Book of Lives (Carcanet) by Pro The second prize of £ 1,000 went to Welsh poet and short story writer Wayne Price for his poem 'Vacanti's Mouse', Ar receiving £ 500 for 'What the Pig Mama Says', and runner-up prizes of £ 50 went to Vicki Husband for 'gobby', and Ed The competition, which has the support of Scotland's national poet Edwin Morgan, was launched by Scottish poe O'Rourke and Richard Price picked Miller's poem from over 1,000 entries. Source 3 英詩揚化身豬媽媽 港人威 (A news article in Chinese) (星 島 )2008 年 9 月 5 日 星 期 五 05:30m (綜 合 報 道 ) (星 島 日 報 康文署 記者:胡幗欣 報 道 )香 港 出 了 一 位 天 才 詩 人 。 憑 着 描 寫「 豬 媽 媽 失 去 子 女 」的 悲 鳴 , 畢 業 於 香 港 大 學 經 理 梁 世 聰 擊 敗 一 千 名 參 賽 者,剛 贏 得 由 英 國 的 詩 社 Vital Synz 主 辦 的「 2008Edwin Morgan 國 際 詩 詞 創 作 比 賽 」季 軍 ,是 唯 一 得 獎 的 香 港 人 ,揚 威 國 際 詩 壇。 梁 世 聰 說 ,早 前 本 港 豬 肉 價 格 高 企 , 因此有以豬為題材的靈感,藉此帶出人類尊重次等生命的信息。民政事務局 表示祝賀,並指證明香 港人才濟濟。 Source 4 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man HAB congratulates Hong Kong poet on competition success ********************************************************************* The Home Affairs Bureau has congratulated Hong Kong poet Arthur Leung on his third prize in the Edwin Morgan International Poetry Competition 2008 among competitors from around the world. The award not only represents success for a Hong Kong Chinese poet writing in English in international literary circles, but also showcases to the world the cluster of top talent in the cosmopolitan world city of Hong Kong. The first Edwin Morgan International Poetry Competition in 2008 is named in honour of Scotland's first national poet. It was presented by the Glasgow Poetry Society Vital Synz in association with the University of Strathclyde and the Edinburgh International Book Festival. Mr Leung, born and raised in Hong Kong, received degrees from the Universities of Hong Kong and Cambridge. He is a regular performer of his poetry and has poems published in anthologies such as Hong Kong U Writing and Fifty-fifty (Hong Kong) as well as in numerous other magazines and journals. He has taken part in a number of international poetry competitions and made his way through to be among the finalists. Ends/Thursday, September 4, 2008Issued at HKT 15:31 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 3 What the Pig Mama Says Arthur Leung The pupoh stopped to cheer. Leklek was took away. He was mine biggest boy. A good heart. Saved the best for Yenyen and Hokhok. His- self eating leftovers. I cried I cried. Not knew the bastang took him where. Gokgou told me was hell. We ate much as we liked. The white fence put us safe safe. Always we talked, cheered. The pupoh liked to play with Hokhok. Mine little boy talked to them sweet. He knew how make make community. But Hokhok too was took away by same same bastang they took Leklek before. Mine only girl Yenyen too sad to see her little brother went. She kept quiet everydays think think. I begged the bastang not took mine boy. They not understood. Heardonlysomethinglike―pok is good ‖. The pupoh talked little little. Yenyen stopped to eat. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Shesaid,―No Hokhok play wis me !‖Isorrysorryforher. The bastang came to take Yenyen. I saw her away. I not cried. Maybe it better for Yenyen. She will stop to think. No more think. No more think think. Maybe I say too much. Who is listening to my story? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 4 Change the pig language to human language and write down your feelings and thoughts. Lines My paraphrase The pupoh stopped to cheer. Leklek was took away. He was mine biggest boy. A good heart. Saved the best for Yenyen and Hokhok. His- self eating leftovers. I cried I cried. Not knew the bastang took him where. Gokgou told me was hell. My response The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Lines My paraphrase We ate much as we liked. The white fence put us safe safe. Always we talked, cheered. The pupoh liked to play with Hokhok. Mine little boy talked to them sweet. He knew how make make community. My response The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Lines My paraphrase But Hokhok too was took away by same same bastang they took Leklek before. Mine only girl Yenyen too sad to see her little brother went. She kept quiet everydays think think. I begged the bastang not took mine boy. They not understood. Heardonlysomethinglike―pok is good ‖. My response The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Lines My paraphrase The pupoh talked little little. Yenyen stopped to eat. Shesaid,―No Hokhok play wis me !‖Isorrysorry for her. The bastang came to take Yenyen. I saw her away. I not cried. Maybe it better for Yenyen. She will stop to think. No more think. No more think think. Maybe I say too much. Who is listening to my story? My response The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 5 Try to analyse the following characters. The Pig Mama Speech & Action: Her feeling: My feeling: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The pupoh Speech & action: Their feeling: My feeling: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Leklek Speech & Action: His feeling: My feeling: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Hokhok Speech & Action: His feeling: My feeling: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Yenyen Speech & Action: Her feeling: My feeling: The bastang The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 6 Lines Connotations Maybe it better for Yenyen. She will stop to think. No more think. No more think think. ….. Maybe I say too much. Who is listening to my story? (Lines that impress you) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 7 Use different colours and symbols to highlight the poetic devices in the poem: Repetition, personification and onomatopoeia . What the Pig Mama Says Arthur Leung The pupoh stopped to cheer. Leklek was took away. He was mine biggest boy. A good heart. Saved the best for Yenyen and Hokhok. His- self eating leftovers. I cried I cried. Not knew the bastang took him where. Gokgou told me was hell. We ate much as we liked. The white fence put us safe safe. Always we talked, cheered. The pupoh liked to play with Hokhok. Mine little boy talked to them sweet. He knew how make make community. But Hokhok too was took away by same same bastang they took Leklek before. Mine only girl Yenyen too sad to see her little brother went. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man She kept quiet everydays think think. I begged the bastang not took mine boy. They not understood. Heardonlysomethinglike―pok is good ‖. The pupoh talked little little. Yenyen stopped to eat. Shesaid,―No Hokhok play wis me !‖Isorrysorryforher. The bastang came to take Yenyen. I saw her away. I not cried. Maybe it better for Yenyen. She will stop to think. No more think. No more think think. Maybe I say too much. Who is listening to my story? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Suggested Answers The pupoh stopped to cheer. Leklek was took away. He was mine biggest boy. Funny names A good heart. Saved the best for Yenyen and Hokhok. His- self eating leftovers. Sounds made by a pig I cried I cried. Not knew the bastang took him where. Gokgou told me was hell. Feeling: heartbroken We ate much as we liked. The white fence put us safe safe. A sense of security Always we talked, cheered. The pupoh liked to play with Hokhok. Pay much effort Mine little boy talked to them sweet. The same killer He knew how make make community. But Hokhok too was took away by same same bastang they took Leklek before. Mine only girl Yenyen too sad to see her little brother went. Filippino slang She kept quiet everydays think think. I begged the bastang not took mine boy. They not understood. Too sad to speak Heardonlysomethinglike―pok is good ‖. The pupoh talked little little. Yenyen stopped to eat. She said,―No Hokhok play wis me !‖Isorry sorry for her. Attitude: sympathetic The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The bastang came to take Yenyen. I saw her away. I not cried. Maybe it better for Yenyen. She will stop to think. No more think. Filippino slang No more think think. Maybe I say too much. Who is listening to my story? Feeling: sorrowful The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 8 Name: ______________ ( Class No.: ___________ Free Verse: ) Class: ________ Marks: _____/16 What the ____________ says The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 9 Rubric - Poetry Writing Accomplished Competent Developing Beginning 4 3 2 1 Poem has a wonderful choice Creativity Poem has a good of words which choice of words. Tried to be Good use of imaginative. create the Lacks imagination. appropriate mood. imagination. Great use of imagination. Content and Ideas Ideas are clear but Ideas are clear and Ideas are clear but original. general and more development No clear ideas. of ideas is needed. predictable. Student shows a good Student clearly Student shows a understanding of shows an basic the meaning and understanding of understanding of structure of the the structure of the the structure of the model poems, model poems read model poems read adapting own and has the ability and has attempted style. to use it. to use it. Student has not Skills shown an understanding of the structure of the poems read as models. Total Comments: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 10 Rubric - A Letter to Editor Skill Components Evidence of Mastery Composing Clear, purposeful, and addresses the intended audience appropriately in an organised manner. Style Appropriate vocabulary, tone and style to take into account the nature of the relationship with, and the knowledge and interests of, the recipients. Content Highlights central ideas. outstanding 4 outstanding 4 outstanding Conventions Follows letter conventions, and uses formats, and spacing that contribute to the letter's readability and impact. Mechanics Writes with accurate spelling, grammar and punctuation. 4 4 outstanding 4 outstanding 3 strong 3 strong 3 strong 3 strong 3 strong 2 adequate 2 adequate 2 adequate 2 adequate 2 adequate 1 minimal 1 minimal 1 minimal 1 minimal 1 minimal Comments: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 11 Motion: Human beings have the right to kill animals. Opposition Side Government Side The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 3.2. Group Work Group members: Choy, Wan Yin, Wendy; Chung, Ka Kei; Ho, Lai-Ping; Leung, Woon-Ching; Man, Kam-Fan Selected poem: Victoria Park Poet: Woo See-Kow Source: Fifty-fifty : new Hong Kong writing edited by Xu Xi. Hong Kong : Haven Books, c2008 Target group: S4/S5 No. of lessons: 5-6 Objectives: 1. Students will be able to understand the theme of the poem. 2. Students will be able to recognize the mood conveyed in the poem. 3. Students will be able to use descriptive language to describe a person and an event. 4. Students will be able to appreciate the poem. 5. Students will be able to enhance their presentation skills. 6. Students will be able to write a poem (free verse). Stages Pre-reading Stage 1. Teacher asks students if they have visited Victoria Park and let them share their experiences. 2. Teacher shows students a powerpoint of activities/functions in Victoria Park. 3. Teacher asks them to guess what the theme of the targeted poem: Victoria Park is. While-reading Stage 1st reading: - Teacher reads aloud the poem. (Appendix 1) 2nd reading: - Students are assigned to fill in a set of worksheets to find adjectives, adjective phrases, verbs, verbal phrases, nouns and noun phrases to The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man describe the girl, the poet, the poet‘s incident in childhood and the commemorative programme. (Appendix 2) 3rd reading: - Students read the poem and watch one of the following: BBC News - June 4, 1989, Tiananmen Square http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJBnHMpHGRYMassacre 毋忘六四 - 血染的風采(Don‘tforgetJuneFourth- blood stained glamour) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gHusFlwVIjU&feature=related 支聯會悼念六四 18 周年國殤晚會︰晚會播放『血染的風采』 (Commemorative function of June Fourth Incident in Hong Kong in 2007) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dE5dLbh_ThY&feature=related 4th reading: Students are divided into groups to draw pictures of different stanzas and write down notes for a 3-min presentation. (Appendix 3) Post-reading Stage 1. Groups present and introduce their drawings to the class. 2. Teacher leads students to analyze the theme of the poem. 3. Each student is given a worksheet with a photo/picture of Hong Kong landmark (in total 4 photos). (Appendix 4) 4. They share their stories, ideas and feelings of the landmarks in a group of four. 5. Each student writes a poem of free verse on the assigned photo with the help of the mind map. (Appendix 5) (Appendix 6) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 1 Victoria Park Woo See-Kow Thousands upon thousands of candlelights dotted Victoria Park She handed me a leaflet in neat short phrases heralded the injustices the cruelties the things I must not forget Her fiery eyes firm matter-of-fact voice sheltered the blazing compassion shielded a tender heart Fighting her battle preaching her cause by the park‘s swimming pool where I once almost drowned as a boy Red eyes and white-prune fingertips staying in the water for too long drenched with too much chlorine I was there candle burning in my hand for a reason The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man We were on the same side But watching her quietly from a crowd all I could think of was to tell her how beautiful she looked in the soft candlelight and she was gorgeous even when she was mad The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 2 Worksheet 1 Write down the descriptive language to describe the girl, the poet, the poet’s incident in childhood and the commemorative programme. The girl Adjectives & Adjective phrases Nouns & Noun phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases The poet Adjectives & adjective phrases Nouns & Noun phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The poet’s incident in childhood Adjectives & Adjective phrases Nouns & Noun phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases The commemorative programme Adjectives & Adjective phrases Nouns & Noun phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Worksheet 1 Suggested Answers Write down the descriptive language to describe the girl, the poet, the poet’s accident in childhood and the commemorative programme. The girl Adjectives & - Shielded on the same side phrases - beautiful gorgeous mad Nouns & - her fiery eyes Noun - firm matter-of-fact voice - the blazing compassion - a tender heart Adjective phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases - handed me a leaflet Fighting her battle preaching her cause The poet Adjectives & - on the same side - the things I must not forget the park‘s swimming pool where I once almost drowned as a boy candle burning in my hand for a reason Adjective phrases Nouns & Noun phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases - must not forget watching her quietly from a crowd - think of tell The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The poet’s incident in childhood Adjectives & Adjective phrases Nouns & - Noun Red eyes and white-prune fingertips staying in the water for too long drenched with too much chlorine phrases Verbs & Verbal phrases The commemorative programme Adjectives & Adjective phrases Nouns & Noun - phrases - Thousands upon thousands of candlelights A leaflet in neat short phrases heralded the injustices the cruelties the things Red eyes and white-prune fingertips staying in the water for too long drenched with too much chlorine a crowd soft candlelight Verbs & Verbal phrases The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 3 Worksheet 2 Draw picture(s) of Stanza _______ and mark down some notes for a 3-min group presentation. (If you need more paper, tell the teacher). Choose one or more group representatives to present your drawing. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 4 The Peak The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The Wishing Tree The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man TST Clock Tower The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 5 Title Others Mood(s) Topic Others Words & Phrases Person(s)/ Object(s) Others Imagery The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Poetry Writing ) Name: ________________ ( Class No.:______ Appendix 6 Class: _________ Mark: ________/16 Performance Accomplished Competent Developing Beginning 4 3 2 1 Criteria Marks Poem has a Creativity wonderful choice of Poem has a words which good choice of create the words. Good appropriate use of mood. Great imagination. Tried to be Lacks imaginative. imagination. use of imagination. Ideas are clear Content and Ideas Ideas are clear Ideas are clear but more but general and original. development No clear ideas. and of ideas is predictable. Skills needed. Student shows Student clearly Student a good shows an shows a basic Student has understanding understanding understanding not shown an of the meaning of the structure of the structure understanding and structure of the model of the model of the structure of the model poems read poems read of the poems poems, and has the and has read as adapting own ability to use attempted to models. style. it. use it. Total: Teacher’s comment: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 4. 4.1 Individual Work Selected song: Happy Birthday Nature: Rap/R & B Singer(s): Flipsyde Target group: S4/S5 No. of lessons: 5-6 Objectives: 1. Students will be able to interpret lyrics based on contextual clues. 2. Students will be able to analyse the theme of the song. 3. Students will be able to describe the feelings conveyed in the song. 4. Students will be able to identify the features of the song. 5. Students are able to find rhyming patterns, Conditional 3 sentences and poetic devices in the song. 6. Students are able to respond to the social issue addressed in the song. 7. Students are able to develop creativity and critical thinking. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Stages Pre-listening Stage 1. Teacher guides students to brainstorm their birthday wishes. (Appendix 1) 2. Teacher writes the name of the song on the chalkboard, broadcasts the music of the target song and students guess what the song is by filling in the worksheet. (Appendix 1): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rH6xpIy7BOc&feature=related 3. Teacher briedly introduces the singers, Flipsyde, to the students. (Appendix 2) While-listening Stage 1st listening: - Students get the lyrics (Appendix 3) and are assigned to finish the Music & Me Idea worksheet. (Appendix 4) - After teacher has introduced the features of a song, the song will be played once with sounds: http://www.flipsyde.com/player/default.aspx?meid=573 http://cn.last.fm/music/Flipsyde/+videos/5519795 2nd listening: - Teacher shows the music video of the song. - Students need to fill in the Double Entry Journal. (Appendix 5) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man - Students share their ideas in groups of four. (Appendix 6) - Teacher goes through the lyrics with the students to examine the confession of the singers in the lyrics. 3rd listening - Students interact with peers to identify the rhyming words, the Conditional 3 sentences and some poetic devices in the lyrics. (Appendix 7) . Post-listening 1. Students fill in a music chart to write a song review. (Appendix 8 ) (Appendix 9) 2. Students create a CD cover of the song, Happy Birthday , for Flipsyde. (Appendix 10) (Appendix 11) 3. After reading two articles and the lyrics of the song, Happy Birthday, students discuss the issue of abortion in pairs. (Appendix 12) (Appendix 3) (Appendix 13) 4. Each student writes a one-sided argumentative essay (Opposition Side) on the legalization of abortion in Hong Kong. (Appendix 14) 5. Extended Task: Students hold a discussion about the positive side of hip-hop music after reading an article. (Appendix 15) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 1 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 2 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flipsyde Flipsyde Origin Oakland, California Rap rock Genre(s) Hip-Hop R&B Years active Label(s) Website 2003 -present Interscope Cherrytree Flipsyde.com Members Steve Knight Dave Lopez Piper Chantelle Paige Flipsyde is a rap/R&B/rock band from Oakland, California. Flipsyde consists of band members Steve Knight, Dave Lopez, Jinho "the Piper" Ferreira, and recently Chantelle Paige. They have toured extensively with Fort Minor, The Black Eyed Peas, Snoop Dogg and on the Anger Management Tour. Flipsyde's single, "Someday", was chosen as NBC's theme song for the 2006 Winter Olympic Games held in Torino, Italy, as well as part of the soundtrack for the 2008 film Never Back DownTheir debut album, We the People, also featured three other singles ("Happy Birthday", "Trumpets (Never Be The Same Again)", and "Angel") and was highly lauded by critics, including a review from the Washington Post proclaiming it the best hip hop album of 2006. In 2008, following the addition of Paige to the group, Flipsyde once again had a song of theirs selected as a theme song for the Olympics. This time their song "Champion" was chosen as the theme for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, China[1], as well as the primary song for EA Sports NBA Live 09 video game. They enjoy touring in India, where their first tour took place in 2005 via VH1's Hip Hop Hustle, and have already performed there twice and may be planning a third trip. Recently it was announced through their The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man MySpace that they had started touring with Akon, promoting their second studio album, State of Survival, produced by Akon and Konvict Muzik.The album will be released via Kon Live Distribution and Cherrytree Records, and Akon will feature on 3 tracks. In March 2009, Ferreira ("Piper") was selected to present his original screenplay "Walter's Boys" in the Tribeca All Access Program (TAA) at the Tribeca Film Festival in Lower Manhattan, New York. "Walter's Boys" is about "a clandestine training operation led by an ex-CIA agent recruits urban teens, but faces treacherous consequences from the trainees’ intent to break free with the help of a former mentor." Ferreira describes "Walter's Boys" as "an action thriller inspired by my brother-in-law Sgt. Elijah Warren's service in the Army's 5th Special Forces Group. After he committed suicide I felt compelled to share the story I had created with others." On April 24th, it was announced that Ferreira's script won the best screenplay at the festival, netting him a $7000 prize as well as an original art pieces. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 3 Happy Birthday by Flipsyde (Feat. t.A.T.u.) Lyrics: Happy Birthday So make a wish Verse 1: Please accept my apologies, I wonder what would have been. Would you have been a little angel or an angel of sin? Tom-boy running around, hanging with all the guys. Or a little tough boy with beautiful brown eyes. I paid for the murder before they determined the sex, choosing our life over your life meant your death. And you never got a chance to even open your eyes, sometimes I wonder as a fetus if you fought for your life. Would you have been a little genius? In love with math? Would you have played in your school clothes and made me mad? Would you have been a little rapper like your poppa The Piper? Would you have made me quit smoking by finding one of my lighters? I wonder about your skin tone and shape of your nose, and the way you would've laughed and talked fast or slow. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy Birthday Hook Chorus: What I thought was a dream (Make a wish) Was as real as it seemed (Happy birthday) What I thought was a dream (Make a wish) Was as real as it seem I made a mistake The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Verse 2: I got a million excuses, as to why you died. And other people got their own reasons for homicide. Who's to say it would've worked and who's to say I wouldn't have I was young and struggling, but old enough to be a dad. The fear of being my father has never disappeared, I ponder it frequently while I'm sippin' on my beer. My vision of a family was artificial and fake so when it came time to create, I made a mistake. But now you got a little brother, maybe it's really you. Maybe you really forgave us knowing we was confused. Maybe, every time that he smiles it's you proudly knowing that your father's doing the right thing now. I'll never tell a woman what to do with her body, but if she don't love children, then we can't party. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy birthday Chorus (2X) Bridge:(2X) And from the Heavens to the womb to the Heavens again. From the ending to the ending, never got to begin. Maybe one day we can meet face to face, in a place without time and space. Happy birthday * Red words: features of a song Appendix 4 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man In the surrounding bubbles, write words or draw images that you think of while listening to the words and music. Happy Birthday (Adapted from http://readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson964/map.pdf ) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 5 Read the lyrics and listen to the song again. Underline the impressive lines and fill in the table below. Lines from the song My thoughts Happy Birthday So make a wish Please accept my apologies, I wonder what would have been. Would you have been a little angel or an angel of sin? Tom-boy running around, hanging with all the guys. Or a little tough boy with beautiful brown eyes. I paid for the murder before they determined the sex, choosing our life over your life meant your death. And you never got a chance to even open your eyes, sometimes I wonder as a fetus if you fought for your life. Would you have been a little genius? In love with math? Would you have played in your school clothes and made me mad? Would you have been a little rapper like your poppa The Piper? Would you have made me quit smoking by finding one of my lighters? I wonder about your skin tone and shape of your nose, and the way you would've laughed and talked fast or slow. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy Birthday What I thought was a dream Make a wish Was as real as it seemed The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Happy birthday What I thought was a dream Make a wish Was as real as it seem I made a mistake I got a million excuses, as to why you died. And other people got their own reasons for homicide. Who's to say it would've worked and who's to say I wouldn't have I was young and struggling, but old enough to be a dad. The fear of being my father has never disappeared, I ponder it frequently while I'm sippin' on my beer. My vision of a family was artificial and fake so when it came time to create, I made a mistake. But now you got a little brother, maybe it's really you. Maybe you really forgave us knowing we was confused. Maybe, every time that he smiles it's you proudly knowing that your father's doing the right thing now. I'll never tell a woman what to do with her body, but if she don't love children, then we can't party. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy birthday And from the Heavens to the womb to the Heavens again. From the ending to the ending, never got to begin. Maybe one day we can meet face to face, in a place without time and space. Happy birthday. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 6 Self-Reflection: Taking part in a Group Yes Unsure No 1. Did I understand what my role was in the group? 2. Did I complete my task to the best of my ability? 3. Did I have my turn speaking? 4. Did I let others have a turn at speaking? 5. Did I listen while others were speaking? 6. .Did I offer to help when it was needed? 7. Did I enjoy taking part in the group discussion? 8. Did I enjoy working with the others in my group? (Adapted from http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson884/Self-reflection-chart.pdf) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Suggested answers Appendix 7 Highlight the rhyming word, the 3rd Conditional words and some poetic devices in the lyrics. (Blue & red: rhyming pairs, green: alliteration, orange: parallelism & pink: 3rd Conditional) Happy Birthday by Flipsyde (Feat. t.A.T.u.) Lyrics: Happy Birthday So make a wish Verse 1: Please accept my apologies, I wonder what would have been. Would you have been a little angel or an angel of sin? Tom-boy running around, hanging with all the guys. Or a little tough boy with beautiful brown eyes. I paid for the murder before they determined the sex, choosing our life over your life meant your death. And you never got a chance to even open your eyes, sometimes I wonder as a fetus if you fought for your life. Would you have been a little genius? In love with math? Would you have played in your school clothes and made me mad? Would you have been a little rapper like your poppa The Piper? Would you have made me quit smoking by finding one of my lighters? I wonder about your skin tone and shape of your nose, and the way you would've laughed and talked fast or slow. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy Birthday Chorus: What I thought was a dream (Make a wish) Was as real as it seemed (Happy birthday) What I thought was a dream (Make a wish) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Was as real as it seem I made a mistake Verse 2: I got a million excuses, as to why you died. And other people got their own reasons for homicide. Who's to say it would've worked and who's to say I wouldn't have I was young and struggling, but old enough to be a dad. The fear of being my father has never disappeared, I ponder it frequently while I'm sippin' on my beer. My vision of a family was artificial and fake so when it came time to create, I made a mistake. But now you got a little brother, maybe it's really you. Maybe you really forgave us knowing we was confused. Maybe, every time that he smiles it's you proudly knowing that your father's doing the right thing now. I'll never tell a woman what to do with her body, but if she don't love children, then we can't party. I think about it every year, so I picked up a pen. Happy birthday, I love you for whoever you would've been. Happy birthday Chorus (2X) Bridge:(2X) And from the Heavens to the womb to the Heavens again. From the ending to the ending, never got to begin. Maybe one day we can meet face to face, in a place without time and space. Happy birthday The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 8 Fill in the plan below to write a song review in 400 words. 1. Name of the song 2. Type of music 3 Name of the singer(s) 4. Name of the song writer(s) 5. Name of the lyrics writer 6. Background of the song 7. Theme of the song 8. Message of the song 9. Mood of the song 10. Impressive lines 11. My feeling(s)of the song 12. The song reminds me of … 13. Target group(s) of the song 14. Anything you think is important 15. Would you recommend this song to someone? Why/Why not? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 9 Song Review Rubric Category Awesome 4 Admirable 3 Acceptable 2 Attempted 1 Amount of information All questions All questions Easy questions Only a few answered and answered and attempted. questions exceed standards. meet the standard. Answers to some attempted. difficult questions below standard. Quality of Information Information Information Information Information has clearly relates to relates to the relates to the little to nothing the topic. topic. Many topic. to do with the Excellent supporting some details are supporting details and provided. details and examples. Only question asked. examples. Spelling No spelling Almost no A few spelling Many spelling errors. spelling errors. errors. Uses errors. Difficult words Attempts at basic Writer uses a are attempted. difficult vocabulary. limited vocabulary with vocabulary. some mistakes. Grammar and sentence construction No grammar Some minor Many minor Major errors in errors and full errors in errors in grammar and no sentences. grammar and grammar and verbs. mostly full some sentences sentences. do not have verbs. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 10 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 11 Rubric for CD Cover Design Accomplished 4 Competent 3 Developing 2 Beginning 1 Creativity CD cover has a wonderful choice of CD cover has a words which create good choice of Tried to be the appropriate words. Good use imaginative. mood. Great use of of imagination. Lacks imagination. Drawings and photos The drawings and photos/ photos/ add to the purpose are appropriate for and interest of the the purpose and CD cover. Highly interest of the CD original and cover. Original creative. and creative. Ideas are clear and Ideas are clear but Ideas are clear but original. general and more development predictable. of ideas is needed. Grammar and spelling The drawings and Ideas and Content imagination. No grammar or Few grammar or spelling errors. spelling errors. Skills Student shows a good understanding of CD cover, adapting own style. Student clearly shows an understanding of CD covers, experimenting with styles. The drawings and photos/ The drawings and are related to the photos CD cover but not are not appropriate highly original or for the CD cover. creative. No clear ideas. A lot of grammar Too many and spelling grammar or errors. spelling errors. Student shows a basic understanding of CD covers and has made an attempt. Poor understanding of CD covers and had difficulty completing the assignment. Comments: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 12 Article 1: Reflections on Teenage Sex Title: Sexual Behavior Author: Education Division Published Date: 2005-02-04 Young people develop a sense of sexual urge during the course of puberty. Hence, it is normal and natural for teenagers to long for physical intimacy. However, for those who approach sex with an immature attitude and those who don’t consider the pros and cons carefully beforehand, physical intimacy may abruptly lead to sex. Let’s reflect on some common errors young people often make in regards to sex. Peer pressure & recognition: “Everybody’s doing it!” “I’ll be teased if I don’t!” Sex is not a tool to earn acceptance or something to boast about. Don’t be a blind follower. An act of maturity: “I’m matured enough to have sex! I’ll be a laughingstock if I’m still a virgin!” Maturity is not determined by your sexual experience. In fact, it’s childish and immature to use sex to prove to others you are an adult! To satisfy sexual needs: “”He/She makes me so high!” Although sexual impulse is a natural human instinct, we are capable of controlling such feelings. If we only act on our instincts without giving proper thought beforehand, the consequences may be unbearable and we may have to live with the guilt and remorse for the rest of our lives. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Trade sex for love: “Sex equals love.” “If you love me, you’ll have sex with me.” Sex does not equal love. Sex is one of the ways to show affection, but one should never use it to trade for love or to maintain a relationship. It is futile to try to fix a relationship with sex. A single sex contact will not result in pregnancy Every sexual intercourse may lead to pregnancy. There is no 100% effective-proof contraceptive method available right now. “Sex is fun and enjoyable!” It takes time for loving partners or married couples to adapt to their sex life, and learn how best to enjoy it. However, sex is not that fun and enjoyable if it goes under the cloud of doubts and uneasiness. In fact, the word “sex” carries a neutral meaning and bears no good or bad implications literally. If you have to choose whether or not to begin a sexual relationship with your partner, be sure to evaluate your motive, responsibilities and your ability to handle all possible consequences before making a decision. Source: http://www.famplan.org.hk/sexedu/En/classroom/Classroom_details.asp?clID=89 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Article 2: Unplanned Pregnancy Topic: Sexual Behavior Author: PAK Ling, Nora (Ref.No.:YH060215 ) YHCC counsellor Category: Articles Publish Date: 2006-02-15 Pregnancy should be a joyful experience that brings new life to the world. Unplanned pregnancy, however, is fraught with uncertainty, anxiety and difficult decision-making. This is a true story about a client I encountered during the course of my counselling career. Ivy [pseudonym], a 21-year-old second-year university student, had been dating her boyfriend of the same age for one year. When she first came to the Youth Health Care Centre (YHCC) of the Family Planning Association of Hong Kong, she was already pregnant. At the first counselling session, she described her feelings when she discovered that she was pregnant. “At that moment there was no reaction at all, because I didn‟t know how to react,” she said. “Then I asked myself what I should do next. I gathered my wits and searched for helpful information. It was not until I had figured things out that I finally sat down and cried, because I knew that I couldn‟t keep the baby. I was so unhappy.” When Ivy told her boyfriend the news, “he was stunned, ” she recalled. “We were both so confused and didn‟t know what to do.” Ivy and her boyfriend were stricken, both physically and psychologically, by the unplanned pregnancy. “We each had our own concerns and worries,” Ivy confessed. “After all, men and women are different. I was the one who was pregnant, he couldn‟t really understand my situation. On the other hand he would probably think, „the baby is in your body, what can I do for you? I can neither take your place to carry the baby nor undergo the operation to terminate the pregnancy. All I can do is to stand by your side…‟ This was my first pregnancy and my health wasn‟t very good, so I felt really uncomfortable. I had gastroenteritis and went to see the doctor; he said he couldn‟t prescribe medicine for me since it could affect the foetus that I might later change my mind and want to keep. I suffered through the sickness for days until recovery. My boyfriend couldn‟t help me, neither could I support him. We both felt helpless and so distressed.” Ivy continued, “I always heard that people went to the FPA [Family Planning Association] if they got accidentally pregnant.” Hence, she came to the YHCC for help. “At first I thought I The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man would just have an operation straightaway, because that was what a private doctor told me. But after seeing the Counselor, I realized that I felt abortion was a very cruel act. To „scrape off‟ the fetus from the womb sounded so painful.” Then Ivy started to consider the possibility of keeping the baby. “In the beginning I just felt regretful and sad, that I had done something wrong and wanted to get rid of it. But after counseling I realized that I must face the problem positively and not feel as if nothing has happened once the problem is solved.” The process of counseling helped Ivy think more deeply. “I felt that life is something real and tangible, not just the simple mechanical merging of two cells.” As Ivy pondered over the feasibility of keeping the baby, she faced a dilemma. “If I had already graduated and was working, I would keep the baby without hesitation. But now I don‟t want to give up my university education.” Ivy also considered the responsibility of being a parent. “Bringing up a child is not just a matter of money. How could I take care of my child when I couldn‟t even take good care of myself? This was my biggest worry, and might be related to my childhood background. My parents never paid much attention to me and my siblings, they let us grow up ourselves. They gave us money when it was available, but we had to earn our own as well. Yet I believe the responsibilities of being a parent should be more than just providing financial support. If I could, I really wanted to give more care and attention to my child. But I couldn‟t afford even the basic necessities, how could I keep the baby?” Recollecting her childhood experience enabled Ivy to relieve her emotional tension. She also contemplated other factors such as whether the relationship with her boyfriend was mature enough for marriage and whether her family and friends would accept her out-of-wedlock pregnancy. After carefully assessing the consequences of either keeping the pregnancy or having an abortion, Ivy decided to terminate the pregnancy in a follow-up counselling session. She was psychologically prepared for the operation that would take away her baby, and her boyfriend would accompany her throughout. She opted for general anesthesia in a private hospital to minimize the psychological after-effect. Soon after the operation, Ivy requested a counseling session to relieve her emotional stress. She recalled the scene after the operation. “After I returned to the ward, the nurse asked me to rest and call her if I wanted to get up. At that moment I started to cry, I felt so guilty. It‟s not as simple as a “goodbye”; I had ended a life. I should have no right to do so, yet I made that decision. I was selfish. It was because of my boyfriend and my selfishness that the baby had no choice or rights over its life. Shame on me!” The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Ivy continued to recall, “When I was discharged, I asked for the „specimen‟ back. I didn‟t want to call it a „specimen‟, and I didn‟t know how to face the fact that it was my baby, I felt so sorrowful. Eventually I buried it at Bride‟s Pool. I didn‟t want to just throw it away. I had already made a mistake in my life, I couldn‟t and didn‟t want to dump it into a trash bin.” Self-blame greatly affected her life thereafter. “When I heard people talking about abortion with complete indifference, I felt very emotional. It‟s their own fault, but they rationalize their subsequent act of abortion. This isn‟t right! I couldn‟t accept myself as a murderer nor handle my emotion. I needed help but I didn‟t dare let people around me know what I had done. It was torturous…I tried to hide, even though I felt there was so much I should do. My thinking was distorted…” Ivy tried to drown herself in work. “Frankly speaking, I didn‟t know what I was doing,” she confessed. She moved in with her elder sister to escape from reality. Eventually Ivy‟s friends noticed there was something wrong and offered her all sorts of advice, such as gulping down a tall glass of water when she felt depressed, but none of those advice brought relief. Ivy decided that further counseling in the FPA would be best for her. “I trust FPA, it helped me deal with the matter. I feel a sense of security discussing my past here. To talk about the whole incident here reminded me to accept the fact that things are over now, I shouldn‟t keep blaming myself. I have to forgive and accept myself, and move on to live my life.” Counseling not only helped Ivy to accept herself, during the process she also re-considered the relationship with her boyfriend. “What happened made us both very unhappy, how could I continue dating him when I couldn‟t even accept myself? Whenever I see him he reminded me of the baby. I wanted to separate from him but he didn‟t. Ultimately we broke up because the incident had severely and irrevocably undermined our romance. In follow-up counseling sessions, Ivy reflected more deeply and learned to accept herself again. “I gradually came to understand that everyone makes mistakes; we have to tell ourselves not to dwell on the past as it will just make things worse. We can correct our wrongs and atone a little for our mistakes.” When she thought of the baby she had lost, she said “I learned how to preserve the relationship with this baby. I won‟t try to forget this incident. I‟ll remember it happened and maybe one day tell my future children about it. I won‟t let go of this relationship,” she insisted, “it‟s just like the relationship between my mum and I, a normal The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man kinship.” Ivy also viewed the future more positively. “The baby taught me to have a positive attitude, to take care of myself and be independent, to grow up and to cherish myself.” As for pre-marital sex and unplanned pregnancy, Ivy advised fellow youngsters, “Learn from my mistake. Don‟t over-simplify a sexual relationship. It involves a lot of responsibility. Don‟t take it too lightly as undesirable things can easily happen.” On responsible sexual relations, Ivy said “I remind myself not to have casual sex, we must be responsible and not just do as we like. This is how we should behave in life too.” Ivy added that she finally understood why people used to disapprove of pre-marital sex. “I thought it was only a moral concern and people were just afraid of getting pregnant. But now I believe sex is most appropriate when it is between husband and wife, it will then be guilt-free. Sex is the perfect ingredient for intimate harmony between married couples. It is not such a good thing to have sex out of wedlock.” Text translated from Chinese by Helen Wong Source: http://www.famplan.org.hk/sexedu/En/classroom/Classroom_details.asp?clID=89 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 13 ABORTION DISCUSSION STUDENTA‘sQUESTIONS (Do not show these to student B) 1) What is abortion? 2) Do you think abortion should be legal or illegal? 3) Do you think there are any special cases in which abortion is acceptable? 4) How does the law regard abortion in your country? 5) How does your religion or others treat abortion? 6) Do you think the morning after pill is the same as abortion? 7) Some people think doctors who carry out abortions are murderers. What do you think? 8) If your 13-year-old daughter became pregnant, what advice would you give her? 9) Why allow an unwanted baby to be born? 10) Does the mother have the right to control her own body? ABORTION DISCUSSION STUDENTB‘sQUESTIONS (Do not show these to student A) 1) Is abortion a social problem in your country? 2) Is abortion dangerous? 3) Do you sympathize with the pro-life argument? 4) Doyousympathizewiththe―righttochoose‖argument? 5) If a woman wants an abortion, what rights does the father have? 6) Is having an abortion a selfish choice? 7) Do you think abortions should be encouraged for girls of 12, 13 or 14 years old? 8) Does the fertilized egg belong to its parents? 9) What do you think of back-street abortionists? 10) What would you want to tell the unborn child? ( Extracted from www.eslDiscussions.com ) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 14 Argumentative Essay Rubric CATEGORY Awesome Admirable Acceptable Attempted 4 3 2 1 Main /Topic idea Main /Topic idea Main /Topic idea sentence is either sentence is either Some attempt Main/Topic sentence is clear, unclear or unclear or made to introduce ideas correctly placed, incorrectly placed, incorrectly placed, the topic and to Sentence and is restated in and is restated in and is not restated close. the closing the closing in the closing sentence. sentence. sentence. Paragraphs have Paragraphs have Paragraphs have Paragraphs have Supporting three or more reasons to support one reason to no reasons to Detail reasons to support the main idea. support the main support the main Sentence(s) the main idea and idea. idea. examples. Elaborating Each supporting Each supporting Each supporting Each supporting Detail sentence has at sentence has at sentence has some sentence has no Sentence(s) least three or more least two elaborating elaborating detail excellent elaborating details. statements. or relevant details. Shows an Shows a good Talks generally Does not seem to outstanding understanding of about the topic. understand the understanding of the topic. supporting details elaborating detail sentences. Content topic very well. the topic. Spelling Few spelling Almost no spelling A few spelling Many spelling errors. errors. Attempts at errors. errors. words are difficult basic vocabulary. attempted. vocabulary with Difficult Uses Writer uses limited vocabulary. some mistakes. No grammar errors Some minor errors Many minor errors Major errors in Grammar and and full sentences. in grammar and in grammar and/or grammar and/ or sentence mostly full some sentences do many sentences do construction sentences. not have verbs. not have verbs. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 15 March 2, 2006 Smithsonian's Doors Open to a Hip-Hop Beat By BEN SISARIO Grandmaster Flash gave his prized Technics turntable. Ice-T offered vintage tour T-shirts and rare CD's. Afrika Bambaataa gave a trove of jackets, caps and jewelry in his trademark Afrocentric style. All will go to the Smithsonian Institution's National Museum of American History in Washington, where they will reside alongside the flag that inspired "The Star-Spangled Banner" and the Woolworth's lunch counter from Greensboro, N.C., where four black students sat for civil rights in 1960. At an emotional and at times rowdy news conference yesterday at the Hilton New York, a group of hip-hop pioneers gathered beside the dark-suited, white-gloved Smithsonian staff to announce a plan for a major new collection devoted to the music. Called "Hip-Hop Won't Stop: The Beat, the Rhymes, the Life," it is to be a broad sampling of memorabilia, from boomboxes and vinyl albums to handwritten lyrics and painted jeans jackets, as well as multimedia exhibits and oral histories. "Now whenever anybody asks me about my music," Ice-T said, he would direct him? with a torrent of blunt epithets ?"to the museum." Brent D. Glass, the director of the museum, said the project was begun in recent months with seed money from Universal Records and was still in its earliest stages of planning. But he said that he and his curators believed the time had come to recognize hip-hop, with its straight-from-the-gut raps and minimalist funk, as a significant cultural force that had spread all over the United States and, increasingly, the world. "American music is the soundtrack to American history," Mr. Glass said. "Hip-hop has The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man been a part of American music for more than 30 years." With help from the music industry, the museum has been soliciting donations, and most of the initial contributors were present: in addition to Ice-T, Afrika Bambaataa and Grandmaster Flash, Russell Simmons, DJ Kool Herc and the dancer Crazy Legs have opened their archives, and were clearly proud of the recognition. "Nobody expected this thing 35 years ago to be mentioned in the Smithsonian conversation," said Kool Herc, one of the prime technological innovators in the early days of hip-hop in the Bronx, who was still trying to decide what to donate. The National Museum of American History is not the first major institution to collect hip-hop materials. The Experience Music Project in Seattle has also built a sizable collection, and in 1999 the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in Cleveland organized an exhibition of hip-hop memorabilia that traveled to the Brooklyn Museum. Mr. Simmons, the impresario who was a founder of the Def Jam label, said that at first he had feared that hip-hop's inclusion in a major museum would mean it had lost its power and novelty. His initial thought when contacted by the Smithsonian, he said, was "It must be over." But in an opinion echoed by nearly every speaker, Mr. Simmons suggested that as hip-hop aged it was in danger of losing its connection to its roots and that younger fans and performers would profit from direct experience of the music's history. Hip-hop, he said, is "the only real description of the suffering of our people." Museum officials say that the collection may take three to five years to develop and that they are still approaching musicians about donations. When complete, they say, the collection will be used for a long-term exhibition. The museum also plans scholarly symposiums to discuss the content, as well as a traveling show. Afrika Bambaataa, who helped integrate hip-hop with electronic music in the early 1980's on recordings that remain influential, praised the museum in his familiar declamatory tone for its attention to "factology" in representing the music's history. "Brothers and sisters," he said, "this is beautiful that the Smithsonian Institution is recognizing hip-hop culture for what it is." Copyright 2006 The New York Times Company http://www.nytimes.com/learning/teachers/lessons/20050513friday.html?searchpv=learning_lessons The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 4.2 Group Work 4.2.1 Group members: Choy, Wan Yin, Wendy; Chung, Ka Kei; Ho, Lai-Ping; Leung, Woon-Ching; Man, Kam-Fan 4.2.2 Theme : Environment 4.2.3 Reasons for choosing this topic There are two areas in the NSS module, nature and environment. They are protecting the environment and resources and energy conservation in F.1-F.3. Therefore, we choose this topic as our theme. 4.2.4 Target: F.3 4.2.5 Aims : Let the students know how to protect the environment and work out some solutions. 4.2.6 Collections of songs: - Cute Animal Christmas Song - Green Song - My favourite things 4.2.7 Activities: Task 1: Listen to the following song. (A) Cute Animal Christmas song – wild-life environment Aim: To raise the problems http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yt-K5w1PFMo Lyrics Hi there Internet We don't want you to fret but we are not doing splendidly It is very cold out here in the snow without our friend David Bellamy Bill Oddie's doing stuff, but it's not enough so can you do one thing for me trumpets The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man We have had to fight for every single bite while you scarf your Christmas tea That is why we say Oh yes yet again can you do one thing for me Breathing places space to roam somewhere that I can call my home. Wish I could be safe and sound In a bucket beneath the ground. Daba Daba dum Wish I had a home for Christmas Merry Christmas And a Happy New Year Task 2: Writing a Christmas card. What feelings do you have after listening to the song? Do you feel happy or sad for the animals? Is there anything you would like to tell them? Which animal do you want to communicate with? As Christmas is about to come, write your message on a Christmas card to one of the animals in the MV in about 150 words. Dear __________, __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ ________, _________ The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Task 3: Listen to the following song. (A) MTV Switch - Green Song Green song – habitat and human destruction, Aim: To figure out who has the responsibility for this issue http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bg0QminAPMM LYRICS: The environment is dying, we need a solution fast. Ifwedon‘tfindabigoldplan,thissimplywill not last. Wedon‘twannafreakanybodyout, Wedon‘twannamakeascene. Wed rather sweep it under the mat, But instead, well paint it green. Green, green, green, well paint it green. Itdoesn‘treallymatterwhatitis, What it does or why it stinks Or what it means as long as it is green. Itdoesn‘treallymatterwhatitburns, Or what it makes or what it kills Or what its for, as long as it is green. Green, green, green, green, lets make it green. Politicians feed us crap, celebrities are the same. Its mostly about how green they are and who deserves the blame. How green you are is not how much you give, Or how loud you are, its how you live. So know your greens and think a bit. Becauseyoudon‘thavetobegreentobegreen The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Task 4: Double Entry Journal What feelings and thoughts do you have after listening to the song? Write down your thought after hearing certain lyrics in the right column. Complete the following double entry journal. Lyrics My thought 1) The environment is dying, we need a solution fast. Ifwedon‘tfindabigoldplan,thissimply will not last. 2) Politicians feed us crap, celebrities are the same. Its mostly about how green they are and who deserves the blame. 3) ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ _____________________________ Task 5: Listen to the following song. (B) My Favourite Things Aim: To give some suggestions and solutions for the issue http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6C48AMyV64Q or Task 6: Writing an article Write an article to our school newsletter. Suggest solutions to make a green world. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Assessment Rubric for Writing Marks Relevance & adequacy of content for purpose (C) 10 Content entirely fulfills or exceeds the requirements of the question Totally relevant All ideas are well-developed 8-9 Content fulfills the requirements of the question. Totally relevant Most ideas are well-developed Accuracy & appropriacy of language patterns, vocabulary, spelling and punctuation (A) Very wide range of accurate sentence structures with excellent grasp of more complex structures. Grammar extremely accurate, with only very minor slips Vocabulary well-chosen and used appropriately to express subtleties of meaning Spelling almost entirely correct with near perfect punctuation Wide range of sentence structures, good grasp of simple and compound sentences Grammar mainly accurate with occasional errors that do not affect overall clarity Vocabulary quite wide, with some attempts to use more sophisticated lexis Spelling is mostly correct, with mainly accurate punctuation Planning & organization (O) Appropriacy of tone, style & register to genre (G) Features of Mark Appropriate Level 5 with features used excellent overall throughout. cohesion, and Language coherent used for development of deliberate ideas effect. Sentence structure is varied to suit the purpose of the writing High awareness of audience Paragraphs are organized effectively, with logical development of ideas from topic sentences, and most points supported by relevant details. Strong cohesive ties between and within paragraphs A wide range of connectives and sequencers used accurately with generally accurate use of relative and adverbial clauses Appropriate features generally used An awareness of audience is shown throughout The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Most simple or Introductory and 6-7 Content addresses the compound concluding requirements of sentences are paragraphs are the question accurately appropriate, and adequately constructed and other paragraphs Mostly relevant used have clearly Some ideas are appropriately. defined topics. developed Some attempts to Some cohesive use more complex ties between and sentences within Grammatical paragraphs. errors sometimes Cohesion within occur but overall paragraph(s) clarity not generally good affected Common Vocabulary is sequencers and commonplace but connectives are used appropriately used Spelling and appropriately, for punctuation are example there is moderately some use of accurate relative clauses and when/where adverbial clauses Simple sentences Brief 4-5 Content only just satisfies the are generally introductory and requirements of accurately concluding the question constructed. paragraphs. Other Partly relevant Occasional paragraphs are Some ideas but attempts are made generally poorly to use more defined. Some developed complex simple cohesive sentences ties within and Grammatical between errors sometimes paragraphs affect meaning A limited range Vocabulary is of connectives commonplace and and sequencers sometimes used are used appropriately appropriately Most common words are spelt correctly, with basic punctuation being accurate Mostly appropriate features used Some awareness of the audience is shown Generally appropriate features used Occasional awareness of audience is shown The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 2-3 Content shows Short simple very limited sentences are attempts to generally fulfill the accurate. Only requirements of scattered attempts the question at longer, more Intermittently complex relevant sentences Some ideas but Grammatical not developed. errors often affect meaning Simple vocabulary which may be only partly appropriate Spelling is intermittently correct with basic punctuation being partially accurate Some short simple 1 Content inadequate and sentences heavily based accurately on the task structured, with prompts. limited use of Very common occasionally conjunctions relevant Grammatical A few ideas but errors frequently not developed obscure meaning Very simple vocabulary of limited range often based on the prompt A few words are spelt correctly with basic punctuation being occasionally accurate Paragraphs reflect some attempt to organize topics Some use of simple connectives and sequencers to link ideas Sometimes appropriate features used Very limited awareness of audience Some paragraph Appropriate divisions features used Very limited use in only one of simple or two connectives or instances sequencers to Almost total link ideas lack of awareness of audience The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 4.3 Class Group Work Date : 21st April,2009. (Week 1) Activity: Advertising Jingles Process: 1. Type of music given: Lively, cheerful, relaxing, light-hearted, romantic 2. Images provoked in mind Sunshine, a beach in Hawaii, couple/lovers, girls in bikini, holiday resort 3. Product to be sold with the piece of music Holiday-package at Hawaii from a travel agency named ALOHA. 4. Outline of the story in the commercial: a) The story is set on a sunny day at a beautiful beach in Hawaii. b) The commercial begins with some wide shots of the beach from different angles, followed by some close-up shots of the smiling faces and relaxed people lying on the beach, as well as girls in bikini. c) A couple on their honeymoon trip arrive the beach and upon seeing the bright sunshine, immediately get changed into swimsuits. d) The couple is greeted by representatives dancing to them, putting flower rings round their necks and offering them cool drinks. e) The screen then shows five tag lines made up with the five letters in the agency‘s name, each line to be accompanied with a relevant picture. 5. Tag lines to go with the jingles: ALOHA A Amazing moment in your life, an unforgettable honeymoon experience. L Live band at the beach, specially organized to mark your precious occasion. O ―O-la-la‖, the exclamation you would make when you indulge in the yummy seafood, fresh fruit and cool drinks. H Heavenly accommodation you can enjoy at seaside resort hotels. A Affordable price to make your honeymoon plan come true. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 6. Follow-up work/ extended learning after class *See our design of another classroom activity inspired by this lesson on the next page. An Activity Adapted from the Idea of Using Advertising Jingle in the Classroom Activity: Students in groups of 4 will be asked to make a one-minute video clip involving the use of advertising jingle based on the situation given below. (This can be done as a follow-up assignment after they have tried out the class activity of selling a product on page 1.) Situation In the first month of every new school year, the ECA Team will invite each school club to produce a one-minute promotional video clip with a jingle for the purpose of attracting and recruiting members. The video clips from all the clubs will then be collected and be played on a big television at the school playground during lunchtime everyday for 2 weeks in October. As the committee members of your club, you need to choose a jingle that can best reflect the characteristics and appeal of your club for the making of the video clip. * Groups will draw from choices below to decide which school club they need to advertise. Social Service Club Astronomy Club Red Cross Gymnastics Club Science Club Debating Club Reading Club Drama Club Environmental Club Magic Club Some helpful questions to ask when making the video-clip: - Which adjectives could best describe the type of music in the jingle your group has chosen? What emotions does the jingle provoke? - What images come to your mind when you listen to the jingle? - How are those images and emotions be related to the characteristics of your club? - What is the storyline or pictures to go with your jingle in the video clip? - Any taglines or catchy phrases to go with the jingle? - Any voice-over for the video clip? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Rubrics for one-minute video made to promote a school club 4 CATEGORY/ SCORE Objectives Preparedness Acting & Speaking 3 2 1 Acting and Objectives are Objectives are Objectives speaking were defined; objectives somewhat defined; undefined; excellent. are somewhat objectives are objectives not achieved. somewhat achieved. achieved. Objectives are made Student seems The student is Student does not clear; objectives are pretty prepared but somewhat prepared, seem at all prepared achieved. might have needed but it is clear that to present. a couple more rehearsal was rehearsals. lacking. Student is Acting and Acting and Acting and completely speaking were speaking needed speaking were not prepared and has good. improvement. about to bring up obviously the idea. rehearsed. Videography Videography is Videography is Videography lacks Video is not properly exposed good but lacks a creative properly exposed with creative variety of field of composition. Shots with major focusing composition, views, camera are either over and composition variety of field of movement, angles expose or under problems. Shots not views, camera and vectors. expose and lacks steady with major movement and creative focusing problems. proper use of angles composition. and vectors. Vocabulary Uses vocabulary Uses vocabulary Uses vocabulary Uses several (5 or appropriate for the appropriate for the appropriate for the more) words or audience. Extends audience. Includes audience. Does not phrases that are not audience 1-2 words that include any understood by the vocabulary by might be new to vocabulary that audience. defining words that most of the might be new to the might be new to audience, but does audience. most of the not define them. audience. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 5. 5.1 Individual Work Selected DVD: High School Musical : Senior Year Director: Kenny Ortega Screenwriter: Peter Barsocchini Tagline: High School Graduation Genre: Comedy, Drama, Family, Musical & Teenage Romance Theme: Getting along with Others - Friendship and Dating - Sharing, Co-operation, Rivalry Study, School Life and Work - Study and Related Pleasure/Problems - Experiments and Projects - Occupations, Careers and Prospects Target group: S5/S6 students No. of lessons: 5/6 Objectives: 1. Students will be able to identify the people, places and events in a film. 2. Students will be able to interpret song lyric s based on contextual clues. 3. Students will be able to nurture their creativity and critical thinking. 4. Students will be able to respond to imaginative experiences. 5. Students will be able to appreciate a film. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Stages Pre-viewing stage 1. Teacher motivates students to think of the forthcoming graduation, special school functions and their future. 2. Students fill in a worksheet (Appendix 1) while teacher shows a trailer of High School Musical : Senior Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LepPGcEnDw 3. Students share and compare their answers in pairs. While-viewing stage Teacher shows the scenes in the DVD and students participate in the activities: Scene(s) Duration Activities 1-3 0:00:53—0:18:30 KWL Chart (Appendix 2) 4-8 0:18:31--0:53:17 9-11 0:53:18—1:11:02 Giving Advice (Appendix 5) 12 13-17 Viewing Guide (Appendix 3) & Relationship Mind Map (Appendix 4) 1:11:03—1:20:00 Role play (Appendix 6) Personal letter(Appendix 7) (Appendix 8) 1:20:01—1:50:47 Song Appreciation and voting for our favourite song.(Appendix 9) Double Entry Journal (Appendix 10) Post-viewing stage 1. Teacher gives an envelope to students in groups of four to arrange the slips in order. (Appendix 11) 2. Students work in groups of four to analyse the themes. (Appendix 12) 3. Each student writes a film review. (Appendix 13) (Appendix 14) 4. Extended task: teacher holds a discussion with students about activities of celebrating their graduation. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 1 Trailer Analysis 1st viewing: 1 What is the studio logo? 2 What kind of sport is found in the film? 3 What is the name of the basketball team? 4 What is the name of the film? 5 When does the trailer give the name of the film? Why is this? 6 What is the date of theatrical release? 2nd viewing: 7 What venues are shot? 8 What information about the main characters does the trailer give? 9 What are the catchy phrases in the trailer? 10 What kind of music does the trailer use? What does the music suggest about the film? 11 What type of film is shown? 12 Any special shooting skill found in the trailer? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Trailer Analysis (Suggested Answers) 1st viewing: 1 What is the studio logo? Walt Disney Pictures 2 What kind of sport is Basketball found in the film? 3 What is the name of the WILDCATS basketball team? 4 What is the name of the HSM3: SENIOR YEAR film? 5 When does the trailer Near the end of the trailer. To arouse the audience‘s give the name of the interest and want. film? Why is this? 6 What is the date of October 24 theatrical release? 2nd viewing: 7 What venues are shot? Lockers, basketball court, gymnastic room, outdoor space for cars, stage, a garden, corridor… 8 What information about High school students, basketball teammates, actors and the main characters does actresses on stage, friends, lovers, rivals… the trailer give? 9 What are the catchy The musical experience of a generation becomes a phrases in the trailer? motion picture event. Featuring 10 new original songs 10 What kind of music Pop music, duet, musical. The film is about the does the trailer use? preparation and reactions of a group of high school What does the music students facing the graduation. suggest about the film? 11 What type of film is Teenage romance and musical shown? 12 Any special shooting Flashing, slow motion, high angle, skill found in the trailer? (Adapted from P. 33 of Resource Books for Teachers: Film) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 2 KWL Chart (Scenes 1-3) Name of Character What I know about the character My prediction for the character Why I think this Troy Chad Mr Bolton (the coach) Gabriella Sharpay Tiara Gold The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 3 Viewing Guide (Scenes 4-8) Question Notes What do you learn about the characters’ reactions to the prom? What do you learn about the characters’ reactions to the spring musical? What conflict(s) do you see developing? What is the mood of the film at this stage? What themes do you see emerging in the film? What do you expect to happen in the rest of the film? (Adapted from the notes of Mr. Nicholas Wong) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 4 Relationship Mind Map (Scenes 1-8) Work in a group of four. On the paper, create a mind map showing the characters‘ relationship (Troy, Chad, Gabriella, Sharpay, Ryan, Taylor, Tiara, Jimmie, Mr. Bolton, Ms Darbus). Write at least three adjectives to describe each of them. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 5 Giving Advice (Scenes 9-11) Write five ‘dos’ and five ‘don’ts’ that you think would help the following characters in the future. Troy Gabriella Do Do 1. 1. 2. 2. 3. 3. 4. 4. 5. 5. Don’t 1. Don’t 1. 2. 2. 3. 3. 4. 4. 5. 5. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 6 Role play (Scene 12: the argument between Troy and his father, Mr. Bolton) Read an excerpt from a chapter in the book of High School Musical 3: Senior Year and work in groups of 3 to read the dialogue (narrator, Troy and Mr. Bolton). ….. In fact, Troy was nowhere in the building. He was home, missing Gabriella. He went into the kitchen for a snack and heard a basketball bouncing in the backyard. He headed outside and found in the backyard. He headed outside and found his dad shooting hoops. His dad tossed him the ball. Troy caught it and then sunk a basket. ―How‘s the big show going?‖ his father asked, catching the ball as it bounced on the concrete. Troy sighed. ―You don‘t want to know.‖ His dad spun around and tried for a basket. He missed. Troy grabbed and the rebound and started maneuvering for his own shot. ―If I‘m honest, I‘m glad you‘re getting tired of it,‖ his dad admitted. ―I mean , when did you plan to tell me about this Juilliard thing?‖ ―Nothing to tell,‖ Troy said, trying to sound casual, just before he launched the ball in the air. This time he missed the shot. His dad caught the ball and stood still. ―Well, maybe there is,‖ he said slowly.‖ I‘m hearing you‘re thinking about other schools.‖ Troy glanced at his dad uncomfortably. ―U of A isn‘t the only school that‘s talked to me, Dad. You know that.‖ ―But it‘s the only school we‘ve talked about,‖ Mr. Bolton said. ―Hey, Chad would be pretty disappointed if you changed your mind, for one thing.‖ ―He‘d get over it,‘ Troy replied. ― Would you?‘ he asked. His dad sighed. ―We‘ve been going to U of A games ever since you were a little kid. All you ever talked about is being in a Redhawk uniform.‖ Troy nodded, but he had to finally be honest with his father. ―Only thing is, I‘m not a little kid anymore. You raised me to make my own choices. I‘m the one who needs to make them, not you or Chad or anyone else.‖ Troy turned and headed toward the house. ―Hey, Troy…‖ his dad called out. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. 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After thinking about Ms Darbus‘ advice, you decide to write a letter to your father to apologize for your rude behavior and decision of the future in about two hundred words. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 8 Personal Letter Rubric Skill Components Evidence of Mastery Composing Clear, purposeful, and addresses the 4 outstanding 3 2 1 0 strong adequate minimal not evident 3 2 1 0 strong adequate minimal not evident 3 2 1 0 strong adequate minimal not evident 3 2 1 0 strong adequate minimal not evident 3 2 1 0 strong adequate minimal not evident intended audience appropriately in an organised manner. Style Appropriate vocabulary, tone and style to take into account the nature of the relationship with, and the 4 outstanding knowledge and interests of, the recipients. Content 4 Highlights central ideas. outstanding Conventions Follows letter conventions, and uses formats, and spacing that contribute 4 outstanding to the letter's readability and impact. Mechanics Writes with accurate spelling, 4 outstanding grammar and punctuation. Comments: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 9 Song Appreciation Rank the songs in the Senior Year Spring Musical and write down your feelings and preference. Then the whole class vote for the most favourite song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v= http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUiO URP7PQBWSPo EfbZnwc Last Chance Now or Never Rank: __________ My feeling: Rank: _________ My feeling: http://www.youtube.com/watch ?v=gnzEZo08KbQ&feature=relat ed I Want it ALL http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y G55yNyoUoU Just Want to be With You Rank: My feeling: Rank:_________ My feeling: 1ebJmSmyRw&feature=related A Night to Remember Rank:_________ My feeling: The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 10 Double Entry Journal (Scenes ) Quotes in the film My thought Ms. Darbus: And now a senior who I believe has a decision to make, Mr. Troy Bolton. Troy. Troy Bolton: [Troy steps forward] I've chosen Basketball. [the crowd cheers] Troy Bolton: But I've also chosen theatre. [the crowd cheers more] Troy Bolton: The University of California Berkeley offers me both. That's where I'm going to be attending next fall... But most of all, I choose the person who inspires my heart. Which is why picked a school which is exactly thirty two [Troy turns and faces Gabriella] Troy Bolton: point seven miles from you. [Gabriella takes his his and moves forward and stands next to Troy] Troy Bolton: Miss Gabriella Montez, Stanford University. Pre-law. Troy Bolton: East High is a place where teachers encouraged us to break the status quo and define ourselves as we choose. Where a jock can cook up a mean crème brulee, and a brainiac can break it down on the dance floor. It's a place where one person, if it's the right person, changes us all. East High is having friends we'll keep for the rest of our lives, and that means we really are 'all in this together'. Once a Wildcat, always a Wildcat! The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 11 Jigsaw Puzzle ( Answers in order) It's the end of the Wildcats' championship basketball game against the West High Knights, where team captain Troy (Zac Efron) immediately rallies their spirits ("Now Or Never"). Withtheteam‘sspiritraised,theywin,thankstothewinningshotfromtheirnewest team member Jimmie "The Rocket" Zara (Matt Prokop). Later, at Troy's after-match party at his house, Troy and Gabriella (Vanessa Hudgens) are seen thinking about their future and wishing that their last few months at East High would not end ("Right Here, Right Now"). Sharpay (Ashley Tisdale) meets Tiara Gold (Jemma McKenzie-Brown), a British exchange student whom she hires to be her personal assistant. When drama teacher Ms. Darbus (Alyson Reed) notices that there were so few sign-ups for the spring musical, Sharpay suggests she could do a one-woman show. This alarms Kelsi (Olesya Rulin), who is writing the show, so she signs up everyone in the class for it instead. This results in Ms. Darbus announcing they will create a play about their final days at East High, called "Senior Year." In addition, she reveals that Sharpay, Ryan (Lucas Grabeel), Kelsi, and Troy have all been considered for a scholarship at Juilliard, but only one of them is to be chosen. Sharpay becomes desperate to win the scholarship, and knowing that Kelsi will give the best songs to Troy and Gabriella in the musical, she gets Ryan to try to persuade Kelsi to give them a song, by predicting her (and Ryan's) future ("I Want It All"). Ashley Tisdale as Sharpay with Lucas Grabeel as Ryan during the "I Want It All" musical number. The next day, Gabriella and Troy meet on the rooftop and she teaches him how to waltz ("Can I Have This Dance"). Chad (Corbin Bleu) then asks Taylor (Monique Coleman) to go to prom with him. She initially refuses due to his lack of enthusiasm, but later agrees when Chad proves he can put in some effort and asks again in front of everyone in the school. The group rehearses for the musical, a scene about their prom night ("A Night To Remember"). Ryan walks in on Kelsi composing ("Just Wanna Be With You") in the music room, and performs it with her, and then he asks her to prom halfway through. While Troy and Chad reminisce about their past ("The Boys Are Back"), Sharpay and Tiara discover that Gabriella has a chance to go to college early. Sharpay later The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man convinces Troy that he is the only thing keeping Gabriella from her dream, ("Right Here, Right Now (Reprise)"). Troy talks to Gabriella about this over pizza, and after sharing an awkward goodnight, Gabriella ("Walk Away") leaves for college the next day. Troy's dad, Jack (Bart Johnson), talks to him about his academic future. Troy becomes angry, confused, and runs away, storming around East High confused ("Scream") until he finally screams at the top of his lungs in the theatre. Ms. Darbus has been there all this time watching and reveals that she sent in his application for Juilliard, as she knew how comfortable he was on stage and how much he liked it. Troy takes no offense and thinks about the advice given to him. Troy later gets a call from Gabriella saying that although she loves him, she will not return to Albuquerque, as she is too used to being away. However, on the night of prom, Troy visits Gabriella at Stanford and convinces her to return, as everyone is not the same without her, ("Can I Have This Dance (Reprise)"). Troy's dad, Jack (Bart Johnson), talks to him about his academic future. Troy becomes angry, confused, and runs away, storming around East High confused ("Scream") until he finally screams at the top of his lungs in the theatre. Ms. Darbus has been there all this time watching and reveals that she sent in his application for Juilliard, as she knew how comfortable he was on stage and how much he liked it. Troy takes no offense and thinks about the advice given to him. Troy later gets a call from Gabriella saying that although she loves him, she will not return to Albuquerque, as she is too used to being away. However, on the night of prom, Troy visits Gabriella at Stanford and convinces her to return, as everyone is not the same without her, ("Can I Have This Dance (Reprise)"). Back at East High, Jimmie receives a text from Troy to tell him to cover for him onstage because he is going to be late. The Juilliard representatives are there, and watch as the show seems to go well, ("Senior Year Spring Musical"). During the opening number, Kelsi and Ryan debut. While during the second number, Chad, Jason (Ryne Sanborn), Zeke (Chris Warren Jr.) and Martha (Kaycee Stroh) debut, Ryan does his number with the many chorus girls; Jimmie then performs with Sharpay, and embarrassed her. Troy and Gabriella appear during the second half of the show and sing their duet together. Tiara then betrays Sharpay and tells her how she is going to take over next year in the drama department. Sharpay finally learns how it feels to be humiliated, but does not wish to go down. While Tiara performs, Sharpay immediately crashes her performance and shows her up. Ms. Darbus reveals that both Kelsi and Ryan have won the Juilliard scholarship The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man ("We're All in This Together (Graduation Mix)"). Taylor will go to Yale University; Sharpay will go to University of Albuquerque along with that, she will also assist Ms. Darbus in running the drama department in the fall (so that Tiara does not get to take over the Drama Department). Troy decides to go to the University of California, Berkeley, where he can play basketball, study drama, and be close to Gabriella. After learning about Troy's decision, Chad runs offstage and into the school gym. There he and Troy work things out and learn that their college's basketball teams will play each other the upcoming fall. Chad is attending the University of Albuquerque. At the graduation ceremony, Troy gives the class speech. Throwing their caps in the air, the graduates form a giant wildcat before breaking out into song and dance ("High School Musical"). The six stars walk down the field where a curtain closes off the graduation ceremony and turns into a stage. The six stars do their signature jump and then the camera does a close up of each actor. They take their final bow as the curtain closes. The end credits are in the style of a high school yearbook. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 12 Theme Analysis Work in groups of four to fill in as much of the table below as possible. Then share your work with your class. Theme Example(s) from the film which illustrate(s) the theme, idea or issue Identity Discovery Relationship with parents Peer relationship Teenage romance Childhood Encouragement Growth Support Frankness Prospect Jealousy Rivalry Communication breakdown Separation (Adapted from Media with Margaret Saltan: Juno in Issue 51 SCREEN EDUCATION) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Appendix 13 Film Review Mind map 1. Details: Title of the film: _____________________________________________ Director: ___________________________________________________ Screenwriter: _______________________________________________ Genre: _____________________________________________________ Production Company: ________________________________________ Release date: ________________________________________________ Tagline: ____________________________________________________ Cast:_______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 2. Plot: (refer to Appendices 2, 3 & 11) 3. Scene summary: (refer to Appendix 11) Any conflicts: human Vs nature, human Vs human, human Vs fate, human Vs society? In sequence/ flash back? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 4. Impressive quotes: . 5. Themes (refer to Appendix 12) 6. Effects: (props, lighting, shooting, computer graphics, music, sound, dance, etc) 7. Reference to other reviews: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/High_School_Musical_3 http://kidstvmovies.about.com/od/highschoolmusical3/fr/HSM3r.htm http://blogs.tampabay.com/popmusic/2008/10/review-high-sch.html http://www.grandparents.com/gp/content/activitiesandevents/movie-reviews/article/movie-review-high-school-musical-3.html) 8. Start your writing. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. 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Man Appendix 14 Film Review Rubric Exemplary Content Satisfactory Needs Improvement Fabulous opening Adequate opening Adequate opening sentence that establishes sentence that gives the sentence that gives the the tone of the review reader some indication of reader some indication of your opinion your opinion Mentions key performers Mentions key performers Fails to mention and the roles they play or their roles significant actors or characters by name Mentions the important Mentions the important Does not note important technical aspects of the technical aspects of the aspects of the film or key film and the individuals film but not the people people who were responsible for these responsible for them responsible for them Provides a succinct plot Provides a succinct plot Provides so much synopsis without synopsis without information about the plot divulging too much of the divulging too much of (synopsis) that the film is film the film rendered meaningless and accomplishments or failures is ruined for the viewer, or tells so little about the film that the reader can not determine whether or not to see the film Provides relevant Provides some examples Includes no examples of examples / illustrations of action / dialogue from action or dialogue from from the film to buttress the film that supports the film their opinions about its their ideas about the effectiveness (including film's effectiveness dialogue when relevant) Makes a provable case Voices an opinion about Has virtually no opinion for the film's merit and the films' merit and about the film other than analyzes what worked points out the film's that "it was good or bad" and did not work in the successes and failures but and fails to explain this film does not explain why opinion or has an opinion The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. 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Man Mechanism No spelling mistake these things worked or about the film that is not did not work backed up by examples One or two spelling Multiple spelling errors errors No grammatical errors One or two grammatical Multiple grammatical errors errors One or two punctuation Multiple punctuation errors errors Appropriate word Inappropriate word choices choices Solid sentence structure One or two poorly Multiple poorly (S.V.O.) constructed sentences constructed sentences Good transitions Adequate transitions (we Poor transitions (we can can tell why you went not tell why you went from one point to the from one point to the next) next) No punctuation errors Inspired word choices (Adapted from rubric for film review in http://www.twyman-whitney.com/film/review_ rubric.html) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man 5.2 Group Work Group members: Choy, Wan Yin, Wendy; Chung, Ka Kei; Ho, Lai-Ping; Leung, Woon-Ching; Man, Kam-Fan Selected movie: Funny Games Theme – Violence & Censorship Target group : F. 6 students Objectives: 1. Students will be able to know the theme in the movie. 2. Students can express their feelings after watching a movie through discussion. 3. Students can know how to voice their opinions by writing a letter to editor. Activities: Pre-viewing activities: - Ss are assigned to read and give feedback to a news article displaying a situation: A violent movie was broadcast on TVB Pearl channel during the prime time (9:30p.m.) with parental guidance sign and Television and Entertainment Licensing Authority has received over 300 complaints. - Ss are taught how to write letters to the editor. Ss revise the discussion skills. Ss are given guidelines of censorship. While-viewing activities: - Ss watch a film clip of the violent movie, Funny Game and jot down some notes on a piece of paper. (Viewing Guide) Post-viewing activities: - Ss draw role play cards anddiscussthequestion:‗Violentmoviesshouldnothave beenbroadcastonTVduringprimetime‘withclassmatesplayingthesamerole(5 students/ group). - Representatives from each group holdaforumonthetopic:‗Violent moviesshouldnothavebeenbroadcastonTVduringprimetime‘( Rubric) - Each student is assigned to write a letter to the editor on the situation. (Rubric) The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man News article TVB Pearl Broadcast Funny Games Over 300 Complaints Received Up to now, Television and Entertainment Licensing Authority has received over 300 complaints since the movie, Funny Games was broadcast last week on TVB Pearl channel during the prime time (9:30p.m.) with parental guide sign. In order to attract viewers, some terrifying scenes and violent actions were shown as the poster mentioned ‘the most terrifying movie’. Some viewers, especially parents doubt if it is suitable to broadcast such a ‘terrifying movie’ on TV during the prime time. On the other hand, many viewers think that it is acceptable. It seems that it is a controversial issue. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Viewing Guide Funny Game (2008) Question Notes Describe the main characters in the movie. What are the conflicts you can see between the characters? Does the sound effect affect your mood while watching the movie? Why does such incident happen in a city? What is the message conveyed in the movie? The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Role play cards Director of Funny Game: Parent of teenage children: You have to deal with public complaints You are shocked by some violent scenes and adverse publicity in newspapers and appearing on TV during the prime time. are responsible to the society. You are worried that the violent behaviour would produce bad effects on teenagers. An artist: Spokesman from the Television and You like such an exciting movie. It is just Entertainment Licensing Authority: a crime in a society. There is no big deal. You advise that parents should accompany their children and guide them while watching such violent movie. A F.6 student: An educationist: You feel very uneasy and unhappy when You think teenagers today are watching such a movie. You express your over-protected. They should learn how to feelings and voice your opinions. deal with unexpected incidents. A psychologist: A school social worker: You think young people are usually You are very concerned about the ways curious. It is not a good idea to censor in which violent actions are adopted to everything before they reach the convey the message in the mass media. teenagers. The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Rubric for Forum Discussion Level Criteria 5 4 Very Above good average 3 Good 2 Below 1 Poor average U Very poor Marks Pronunciation/ Delivery techniques 10 8 6 4 2 1 10 8 6 4 2 1 10 8 6 4 2 1 10 8 6 4 2 1 Expressing information & ideas/Use of organizing techniques to convey meaning Accuracy and appropriateness of vocabulary &language patterns Use of formulaic expressions and strategies to establish and maintain interaction Total The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. /40 Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man Rubric for A Letter To Editor Name: Class: Skill Components Evidence of Mastery Composing 4 Clear, purposeful, and addresses the intended audience appropriately in as outstanding 3 strong 2 1 0 adequate minimal not evident 2 1 0 organized manner. Style 4 Appropriate vocabulary, tone and style to 3 take into account the nature of the outstanding strong adequate minimal not evident relationship with, and the knowledge and interests of, the recipients. Content 4 Highlights central ideas. outstanding 3 strong 2 1 0 adequate minimal not evident 2 1 0 adequate minimal not evident 2 1 0 adequate minimal not evident Conventions 4 Follows letter conventions, and uses formats, and spacing that contribute to outstanding 3 strong the letter’s readability and impact. Mechanics 4 Writes with accurate spelling, grammar and punctuation. outstanding 3 strong Mark Allocation Descriptors/marks 25 20 15 10 5 0 Relevance & adequacy of content for purpose Accuracy & appropriateness of punctuation, vocabulary, language patterns Planning & organization Appropriateness of tone, style & register, appropriateness of features for genre Passing mark: 40 The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. We are grateful for them in granting us the right to share with other teachers. Please fully acknowledge the sources and the teacher. Professional Development Course 2008-2009 BWC038 PDC-ES (LA) ENG0231E Learning English through Poems, Songs and the Mass Media K. F. Man References The Curriculum Development Council and the Hong Kong Examinations and Assessment Authority. (2007). English language curriculum and assessment guide (Secondary 4-6). [Hong Kong]: Govt. Logistics Dept. Education Bureau (2007). Learning and Teaching Resources in support of Suggested Schemes of Work for the Elective Part of the Three-year Senior Secondary English Language Curriculum (Secondary 4-6)(Electronic version) from http://www.edb.gov.hk/index.aspx?langno=1&nodeID=2773 Grace, N.B. (2008). (Adapted) High School Musical 3: Senior Year. The Junior Novel. N.Y. Disney Press. Maley, A. (2001). (Ed.)Resource Books for Teachers: Film. OUP. Mok, A. (2001). Task-based Learning, Learning Arts and the Media: A Resource Book for Secondary English Teachers. HK: HKU INSTEP. Saricoban, A. and Metin, E. (2000). Songs, Verse and Games for Teaching Grammar in The Internet TESL Journal, Vol VI, No. 10,October 2000. http://iteslj.org Wong, N. (2009) Notes of the Language Arts Modules in the New Senior Secondary English Language Curriculum. Hong Kong: Hong Kong Institute of Education. http://engres.ied.edu.hk/lang_arts/lang_arts.html The copyright of this material belongs to the original author. 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