5/6 Manual
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5/6 Manual
QUICKSTART INSTRUCTIONS Language Trek 5, 6- On Location with Language Installation - Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language You will need approximately 400 MB of hard drive space to load the entire program on your hard drive. Windows: Insert the CD into your CD drive. Select Run from the Start menu. D:\Setup (or other letter identifying your CD-ROM drive) appears. Select OK and follow instructions. Macintosh: Insert the CD into your CD drive. For a full install, drag and drop the folder called Language Trek 5, 6 from the CD onto your hard drive. USING THE LANGUAGE TREK 5, 6: ON LOCATION WITH LANGUAGE PROGRAM Follow these steps to use the Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language software program after installation. Windows Version Go to Start, Programs and select Language Trek 5, 6, and then Language Trek Login. Macintosh Version On your hard drive, double click the application file Language Trek Login located in the folder where you have installed Language Trek 5, 6. Login Language Trek: On Location with Language may be used by a student – with student tracking, by a guest – without student tracking or by a teacher. 1. To Use the Program Without Tracking (as a Guest) Windows: After installing the program on your computer, go to Start, Programs and select Language Trek 5, 6 and then select Language Trek Login. Macintosh: After installing the program on your computer, double click the program called Language Trek Login. a) Select Guest. The Language Trek title screen appears. b) Select a level – level 1 is grade 5 and level 2 is grade 6 c) Select a location, e.g. Publishing Company, Production Studio, The Library, Communication Museum, by pointing at the building representing the strand and clicking. d) Select a site e.g. The Writing Room within the location. A menu appears containing a number of selections. Click on your choice. e) Move through the program using the navigation buttons at the bottom of the screen. f) To exit the program, click Menu and Quit. 2. To Use the Program as a STUDENT With Tracking Windows: After installing the program on your computer, go to Start, Programs and select Language Trek 5, 6 and then select Language Trek Login. Macintosh: After installing the program on your computer, double click the program called Language Trek Login. • Select the class from the list of classes. • Select the student name and enter your password. • The title screen appears. • Follow steps 1 d), e), f), g) above. Note: The program comes with a Sample class. In the Sample class there is a student, John Demo. To use the program, select Sample class and then select John Demo. You will automatically enter the program (no password needed). To create your own classes and students, see the Teacher section below. 3. The Tracking System and Using the Program as a TEACHER The teacher may use the software, create classes, register students and view student activity and achievement. The Student Tracking System tracks student activity and achievement. It indicates what the student did (activity). It is used to add and change students, classes and passwords and to print results. To use the Student Tracking System: WINDOWS: After installing the program on your Windows computer, go to Start, Programs, select Language Trek 5, 6 MACINTOSH: After installing the program on your Macintosh computer, double click the program called Language Trek Login. a) Click teacher, enter the password drowssap and you can choose to enter a Language Trek: On Location with Language or access student records. b) Select a Class, click Open and you will have access to student records. c) The class called Sample, contains a student, John Demo. You may use this sample student and class or you may add your own students and classes. To Add, Delete or Change a Class and Class Passwords Figure 3 illustrates how classes are created and changed and how class records are viewed by the teacher. Select a class and then: NEW: to create a new class DELETE: to delete a class RENAME: to rename a class OPEN: to see the records for a class CLOSE: to exit PASSWORD: to create or change a password To Add, Delete or Change Students and Student Passwords Figure 4 illustrates how changes to student information are made and how student records are viewed by the teacher. Select the class and click open, and select a student. NEW: to create a new student DELETE: to delete a student RENAME: to change a student’s name PASSWORD: to create or change a student’s password IMPORT: import a class list from a text file EXPORT: to export a student’s information REPORTS: to view the records for a student CLOSE: to close this menu Changing the Teacher Password On installation, the default password is drowssap. Whenever you log in as a teacher, you may change the password so that it is unique to you. Follow these steps. Click the button to log in as a teacher. Click the “Change” button. Enter the new password in the space provided. Verify the new password. Click on OK, then retype the password. Record the password somewhere in writing in case it is forgotten. LANGUAGE TREK 5, 6 DEVELOPMENT TEAM Project Leaders: Michel Pitre Sandie Bender Dale Henderson Curriculum Design: Sandie Bender Anne Smallian Dale Henderson Austin DeCoste Karen Walkowiak Dana Skukauskas Software Design: Michel Pitre Rodney Steele Mark Smith Bradley Steele Kevin Doyle Jesse Pitre Graphics: Ross Gervais Geoff Wheeler Eduard Andresan Dana Frauzel Robie Hartling Matthew Stover Larry Stewart Jianming Chen Audio: Dana Frauzel Marlena Blasioli Matthew van Gaal Larry Stewart Amy Caruso Peter Wesolowski Jennifer Perkin Tony Paciocco Video: Dana Frauzel Resource Manual: Sandie Bender Karen Walkowiak Dale Henderson Web Site: Karen Walkowiak Sandie Bender Rhéal Dumont Software Support: Rhéal Dumont Bradley Steele Testing: Sandie Bender Michel Pitre Rhéal Dumont Vic D’Amico Dale Henderson Mark Smith Desktop Publishing: Christine Chapman Advisory Committee: Vic D’Amico Dale Henderson Jim Dale Michel Pitre Rhéal Dumont ©2000 NECTAR Foundation All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted, in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without the prior written permission of the publisher. The purchase of the educational version of this software entitles the purchaser to reproduce the manual student activity pages for classroom use only. Any other use requires written permission from NECTAR Foundation. NECTAR Foundation Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 1 ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS DEVELOPMENT TEAM The following kindly provided original material for use in the program. Permission to use materials is gratefully acknowledged. Every effort has been made to secure permission from copyright holders. If there are errors or omissions, we will be pleased to make the necessary corrections in future versions of this program. “Jean Frost” by Robert Priest, is reprinted from The Ruby Hat (Aya Press) by permission of the author. Robert Priest is available for school readings. For information: [email protected] “Making History” by Monica Kulling. From Discovery, Volume 6, Nelson Canada, 1993. Used by permission of the author. “River at Twilight” by George Swede. From Tick Bird: Poems for Children. Toronto: Three Trees Press, 1983. Used by permission of the author. “Poetry Can” by Fran Newman, © Fran Newman. Fran Newman is a former librarian and classroom teacher, author of “Children in Crisis” (Scholastic). Milton Acorn’s “Sandstone” is used in this software by permission of The Estate of Milton J. R. Acorn. “Exploring the Titanic” by Laura Edlund. From Supplementary Readings 6 Supplementary Readings © 1999. Reprinted with permission of Nelson Thomson Learning, a division of Thomson Learning. Fax 800 730-2215. “The Super Bowl” and “Gone Commercial” Copyright © 1996 by Gordon Korman and Bernice Korman. Used by permission of Curtis Brown, Ltd. All rights reserved. “A Seeing Poem” by Robert Froman. Used by permission of Katherine Froman. “A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle” by Gwenda Smith. Used by permission of Penguin Australia, Ringwood, Victoria, Australia. “Maybe a Fight” by Jean Little. From Hey World Here I Am! Used by permission of Kids Can Press Ltd., Toronto. Copyright © 1986 Jean Little. “The Grade Five Lie” from “Little by Little” by Jean Little © 1987 by Jean Little. By permission of Penguin Books Canada. "I Love the Look of Words" by Maya Angelou, copyright © 1993 by Maya Angelou, From SOUL LOOKS BACK IN WONDER by Tom Feelings. Used by permission of Dial Books for Young Readers, a division of Penguin Putnam Inc. “Hunting with Raven” copyright © 1996 by Diana Conway. First appeared in Cricket Magazine, January, 1996. “Persephone”, copyright Norah Montgomery, from TO READ AND TELL, Norah Montgomerie (ed.), Bodley Head Children’s Books of The Random House Group Ltd. publisher. “The Vigil” The Vigil appears with the permission of Jan Andrews “O Siem” by Susan Aglukark, EMI “The Diving Board” by Shel Silverstein, © Shel Silverstein “The Bird’s Peace” by Jean Craighead George, © Jean Craighead George “Ballad of the Yarmouth Castle” text by Gordon Lightfoot, © Moose Music. Used by permission “Returning to the Ancestral Home” by Pricilla Wu, © Pricilla Wu Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 2 “Not Ever Again, by Karleen Bradford © Karleen Bradford “Anti-Snore Machine” by Robin Klein, © Robin Klein “The Gift” by Michael Barnes, © Michael Barnes “Grandpa is Missing on the Mars Tranship” by Julia West “The Shield and the Hammer” by Louis Untermeyer is used with the permission of M. Evans and Company “Ice Swords” by James Houston, “We and They” by Lucille Clifton, copyright © 1987 by Free To Be Foundation, Inc. Used by permission Macromedia and QuickTime were used in developing this program. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 3 TABLE OF CONTENTS Quick Start Installation Instructions Development Team ............................................................................................................1 Acknowledgements ............................................................................................................2 Table of Contents ................................................................................................................4 I. Introduction to Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 Overview.................................................................................................................8 The Locations .........................................................................................................8 Program Components ............................................................................................8 On Location with Language Software ....................................................................8 Resource Manual ...................................................................................................9 Language Trek Web Site........................................................................................9 Curriculum Content.................................................................................................9 Features..................................................................................................................9 Platforms...............................................................................................................10 Licenses................................................................................................................10 II. Using Language Trek: On Location With Language Installation.............................................................................................................11 Using Language Trek as a Guest, Student, Teacher...........................................11 Copyright ..............................................................................................................15 System Requirements .........................................................................................15 Technical Support and Product Registration........................................................15 Network Installation ..............................................................................................16 III. Curriculum Connection Introduction ...........................................................................................................17 Scope and Sequence ...........................................................................................18 IV. Implementation in the Classroom Introduction ...........................................................................................................26 Teaching and Learning Strategies .......................................................................26 Sample Implementation Scenarios.......................................................................27 Assessment and Evaluation ................................................................................30 • • • Approach Student Tracking System Techniques and Instruments Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 4 V. The Locations A. PUBLISHING COMPANY 1. The Newspaper – Level 1 a) Grade 5..........................................................................................31 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Activity Templates Additional Tasks Culminating Performance Task Assessment b) Level 2 – Grade 6 .........................................................................67 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Activity Templates Additional Tasks Culminating Performance Task Assessment c) d) Technology Applications ............................................................94 Glossary........................................................................................94 2. The Writing Room a) Level 1 – Grade 5 .........................................................................97 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Culminating Performance Task Assessment b) Level 2 – Grade 6 .......................................................................121 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Culminating Performance Task Assessment c) d) Technology Applications ..........................................................149 Glossary......................................................................................149 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 5 B. THE LIBRARY a) Level 1 – Grade 5 .......................................................................152 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Activity Templates Additional Tasks Culminating Performance Task Assessment • Overview • Reading Quizzes • Instruments b) Level 2 – Grade 6 .......................................................................223 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Activity Templates Additional Tasks Culminating Performance Task Assessment • Overview • Reading Quizzes • Instruments c) d) Technology Applications ..........................................................298 Glossary......................................................................................298 C. COMMUNICATION MUSEUM a) Level 1 – Grade 5 .......................................................................299 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Assessment Spelling List b) Level 2 – Grade 6 .......................................................................311 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Assessment Spelling List Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 6 D. PRODUCTION STUDIO a) Level 1 – Grade 5 .......................................................................322 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Culminating Performance Task Assessment b) Level 2 – Grade 6 .......................................................................334 Overview Structure Standards Learning Outcomes Components Culminating Performance Task Assessment c) d) Technology Applications ..........................................................344 Glossary......................................................................................344 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 7 I. Introduction to Language Trek: On Location with Language Grades 5 and 6 OVERVIEW LANGUAGE TREK: ON LOCATION WITH LANGUAGE - GRADES 5 AND 6 is an integrated, curriculum-based, English language arts program for grades 5 and 6. It is an engaging multimedia program with sound, animation, and graphics, which provides direct links to the curriculum. The program is organized by four real-life locations, which focus on particular language strands and integrate others. Tutorials, activities, performance tasks, and on-line assessment provide multiple contexts and opportunities for students to demonstrate their knowledge and skills. The program may be used on standalone computers or on a network, on either Macintosh or Windows computers. The program consists of four locations which focus on specific language topics and skills. Included is a student tracking system, a comprehensive teacher resource, an on-line production of a collection of student writing, a read-to-write portfolio, a media portfolio, and a newspaper. THE LOCATIONS Publishing Company: This location contains two sites - the Newspaper and the Writing Room. Focus is placed on writing with integration of reading, media and oral communication. Students use the writing process to write in various forms for a diversity of purposes and audiences. The Library: This location focuses on the development of reading and research strategies and skills through the exploration of fiction and non-fiction. Students maintain a read-to-write portfolio. Production Studio: This location focuses on media literacy. Students develop their analytic skills as they explore media techniques. Reading and writing are integrated. Communication Museum: In this location focus is placed on spelling, grammar, sentence structure, language usage, and vocabulary development through an examination of modes of communication. PROGRAM COMPONENTS The program components include: the software program teacher resource manual a web site: www.languagetrek.net ON LOCATION WITH LANGUAGE SOFTWARE The software program is based on four authentic locations where students explore various aspects of communication: reading, writing, and media. Strategies outlined in the resource extend the software to include oral communication skills. The four locations are: Publishing Company Production Studio The Library Communication Museum The locations are divided into Level 1 and Level 2, corresponding to grades 5 and 6. This facilitates individualizing the program for specific students, regardless of grade, and adapting delivery to local and district curriculum. Tutorials focus on particular language skills and Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 8 knowledge. Students complete interactive applications and performance tasks. Assessment of student achievement is a combination of instruments on the software, where appropriate, and techniques suggested in the manual. RESOURCE MANUAL A comprehensive teacher resource manual accompanies the program. It is available on the software as well as in print format. The resource consists of: software overview, scope and sequence by strand, grade, location, and activity additional resources for classroom teachers including teaching strategies and blackline master templates, assessment instruments, performance tasks and accompanying rubrics strategies for extending the software through technology applications glossaries LANGUAGE TREK WEB SITE - www.languagetrek.net The Language Trek – On Location Web site is a dynamic addition to the Language Trek program and is accessible through the software. It consists of materials specifically created to assist teachers in using the Internet as a tool to support the curriculum that has been introduced in the software and to engage students in on-line research. The website features: Learning Outcomes Activity Templates Performance Tasks and Rubrics Assessment Instruments Internet Links Internet Links – Meet the Author CURRICULUM CONTENT Language Trek: On Location with Language covers the standard English language arts curriculum generally taught in grades 5 and 6 in North America. It includes the philosophy and standards of NCTE (National Council of Teachers of English). Incorporated are the learning outcomes from Western Canada and the expectations of the Ontario Ministry of Education Language curriculum. FEATURES Among the program features are: multimedia with audio instructions interactive activities student tracking system comprehensive language content flexibility to address varying reading levels links to authentic careers related to the software locations adherence to the stages of the writing process with a spell-checker available for revising and editing quizzes and interactive activities with immediate feedback sound, graphics, animation and music literature by a diversity of authors from various countries publishing templates for a newspaper, a read-to-write portfolio off-screen performance tasks for individual and small group work Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 9 curriculum planning materials integrated assessment instruments such as checklists, scoring rubrics and quizzes DEVELOPMENT TEAM The development team consisted of teachers, curriculum coordinators, language consultants, computer consultants and professional software engineers, graphic artists and multimedia programmers. PLATFORMS Language Trek: On Location with Language is available for Macintosh and Windows in standalone and network versions. LICENSES License options include one computer, 5 pack, 10 pack, and Site License (unlimited computers), District/Board Licenses are available. Contact: NECTAR Foundation 570 West Hunt Club Road Nepean, ON K2G 3R4 613-224-3031 613-224-1946 (fax) Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 10 II. Using Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language Installation - Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language You will need approximately 400 MB of hard drive space to load the entire program on your hard drive. Windows: Insert the CD into your CD drive. Select Run from the Start menu. Type D:\Setup (or other letter identifying your CD-ROM drive). Select OK and follow instructions. Macintosh: Insert the CD into your CD drive. For a full install, drag and drop the folder called Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language from the CD onto your hard drive. USING THE LANGUAGE TREK 5, 6: ON LOCATION WITH LANGUAGE PROGRAM Follow these steps to use the Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language software program after installation. Windows Version Go to Start, Programs and select Language Trek 5, 6, and then Language Trek Login. Macintosh Version On your hard drive, double click the application file Language Trek Login located in the folder where you have installed Language Trek 5, 6. Figure 1 The Language Trek: On Location with Language Title Screen Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 11 Login Language Trek 5, 6: On Location with Language may be used by a student – with student tracking; by a guest – without student tracking; or by a teacher. (Figure 2) a) Guest login – No tracking: Click the Guest button. Results for users logged in as guests are not tracked. b) Student login: Select a class and click the name of a student in that class, from the lists on screen. (Figure 2) Initially there will be one predefined (and pre-selected) class called Sample and one demo student called John Demo. Results for users logged in as students are tracked. c) Teacher login: Click the Teacher button. Enter the password drowssap. A user logged in as a teacher has access to the Student Tracking System. Figure 2 Select a Class and Student Name After Login: a) Select a level – level 1 is grade 5 and level 2 is grade 6. b) Select a location, e.g. Publishing Company, Production Studio, The Library, Communication Museum, by pointing at the building representing the location, and clicking. c) Select a site, e.g. Writing Room within the Publishing Company location. appears containing a number of selections. Click on your choice. A menu d) Move through the program using the navigation buttons at the bottom of the screen. e) To exit the program, click the Quit button. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 12 The Tracking System and Using the Program as a TEACHER The teacher may use the tracking system to create classes and students; and to view student activity and achievement. The Student Tracking System tracks student activity and achievement. It indicates what the student did (activity). It is used to add and change students, classes and passwords and to print results. To access the Student Tracking System: a) Login as a Teacher. Enter the password drowssap. The Class menu, Figure 3, appears. b) Select a Class, click Open and you will have access to student records. (Figure 3) c) The class called Sample, contains a student, John Demo. You may use this sample student and class or you may add your own students and classes. Figure 3 The Class Menu To Add, Delete, or Change a Class and Class Passwords Figure 3 illustrates how classes are created and changed and how class records are viewed by the teacher. Select a class and then: NEW: to create a new class DELETE: to delete a class RENAME: to rename a class OPEN: to see the records for a class CLOSE: to exit PASSWORD: to change the password Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 13 Figure 4 The Student Menu To Add, Delete or Change Students and Student Passwords Figure 4 illustrates how changes to student information are made and how student records are viewed by the teacher. Select the class and click open, and select a student. NEW: to create a new student DELETE: to delete a student RENAME: to change a student’s name PASSWORD: to create or change a student’s password IMPORT: to import a student’s information TRANSFER: to transfer a student and records to another class REPORTS: to view the records for a student CLOSE: to close this menu Changing the Teacher Password On installation, the default password is drowssap. Whenever you log in as a teacher, you may change the password so that it is unique to you. Follow these steps. Click the button to log in as a teacher. Click the “Change” button. Enter the new password in the space provided. Verify the new password. Click on OK, then retype the password. Record the password somewhere in writing in case it is forgotten Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 14 COPYRIGHT Federal copyright law and international treaty protect this software package. By law, you, the end user, may do the following: (a) (c) transfer the software to a single hard disk, provided you keep the original solely for backup or archive purposes; or make copies of the Teacher and Student activities of the manual. Copyright law prohibits you from making any other copy of the software or documentation for any other reason without our written permission. The license that accompanies the software outlines how the program may be used, either on 1 computer, 5 computers, 10 computers, as a site license, or board/district license. Licenses may be upgraded at any time. Contact NECTAR for details. SYSTEM REQUIREMENTS Windows: Windows 95 or better; 16 MB of RAM, CD drive 350 MB of hard disk space (or run from the CD) Recommended: Pentium; 32 MB of RAM; 24 bit color Macintosh: System 7 or better, color monitor, 16 MB of RAM Recommended: Power PC; 32 MB of RAM 350 MB of hard disk space (or run from the CD) TECHNICAL SUPPORT The NECTAR Foundation is committed to its customers. Technical support is provided at no charge to our registered customers. Complete and return the registration card which accompanies the software. Answers to commonly asked questions can be found in the Technical Support section of the NECTAR web site at : www.nectar.ca. All registered purchasers of Nectar products receive technical support by: Support Hours 8:00 AM - 4:00 PM, Eastern Standard Time Technical Support Phone Number within Canada and the United States 1-800-387-1964 or 1-613-224-3031 Technical Support FAX Numbers 1-613-224-1946 e-mail: [email protected] Web: www.nectar.ca Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 15 NETWORK INSTALLATION NETWORK INSTALLATION FOR WINDOWS Install Language Trek 5, 6 (lt56) in the directory of your choice on the network server. e.g. C:\apps\lt56 TEMP DIRECTORY All users on the network must have a unique ‘temp’ directory. The location of the ‘temp’ directory is usually c:\windows\temp if you have local drives installed on your computers. \Windows\a4w_data directory This directory will be created in the WINDOWS directory the first time Language Trek 5, 6 is used. (i.e. local hard drives, shared network directories). Temporary files are created here. NT Directory Access Rights Directory \lt56 \lt56\xtras \lt56\xtras\data \Windows\a4w_data Read, Execute Read, Execute Change Change Novell Directory Access Rights Directory \lt56 \lt56\xtras \lt56\xtras\data \Windows\a4w_data Access Rights Read, Sharable Read, Sharable Read, Write, Delete, Create, Filescan Read, Write, Delete, Create, Filescan Access Rights All .exe, .dll, .ucd, .txt, .a4r must be set to RX (read only shareable) . Unfortunately all this network information cannot be automated due to the many different types of networks the software will be installed on. These procedures are quite common to network enable applications that store information on the network fileserver. NETWORK INSTALLATION FOR MACINTOSH Network installation requires that users have write access to the folder called Data, located in the Language Trek 5,6 Xtras folder. For all other Language Trek 5, 6 components, read-only access is sufficient. Please refer to your network software documentation. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 16 III. Curriculum Connection INTRODUCTION This section provides the learning outcomes - the expectations related to knowledge and skills. These have been grouped into four categories: 1. Integrated Throughout - outcomes which cross all strands and are integrated throughout the software; 2. Writing - a strand which incorporates language structures, style, conventions, and usage; 3. Reading and Research - a strand which combines reading and research skills, strategies, and reflection on text; 4. Oral and Visual Communication - a strand which includes oral and listening skills, as well as media awareness and literacy. The software program has been structured in two parts: Level 1 corresponding to grade 5, and Level 2 corresponding to grade 6. This permits flexibility in tailoring the use of the program to specific curriculum requirements, and to individualizing the program for students’ needs and abilities. The outcomes are listed in two charts, one for grade 5 and one for grade 6, crossreferenced to the four locations in the software program. In the case of oral and visual communication, outcomes designated “PT” (performance task) are included in the performance task(s) in the manual rather than the software. This has been done to obtain a holistic approach to a language program in which the software is integrated with other teaching and learning strategies. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 17 Language Trek: On Location with Language Scope and Sequence - Grade 5 (Level 1) Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Integrated Throughout (T) T1 T2 T3 T4 use word processing when composing and revising use writing for various purposes and in a range of contexts, including school work use conventions of written materials to help understand and use the materials compare the challenges and situations encountered in daily life with those experienced by people in other times, places and cultures as portrayed in literary texts Expectations: Writing (W) W1 W2 W3 W4 W5 W6 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences produce media texts using writing and materials from other media revise and edit work, seeking feedback from others and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of vocabulary for audience and purpose use and spell correctly the appropriate vocabulary use correctly the conventions specified √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ W10 produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media use simple, compound, and complex sentences organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs that focus on a main idea and give some relevant supporting details proofread and correct final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation and spelling use phrases appropriately to clarify meaning W11 use noun-pronoun agreement correctly √ W12 use correct punctuation in final drafts √ W13 use quotation marks for passages of dialogue √ W14 use phonics, the meaning and function of words, and some generalizations about spelling to spell with accuracy use a variety of resources to confirm spelling W7 W8 W9 W15 W16 W17 use the hyphen to divide words at the end of lines and to spell compound words and fractions use levels of language appropriate to their purpose Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 18 Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio √ √ Library Writing (W) W18 select and use words to create special effects √ W19 accurately use graphs and captions √ W20 focus on a topic for written texts, integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources √ Reading and Research (R, RE) R1 R2 R3 R4 R5 R6 R7 R8 R9 R10 R11 R12 R13 R14 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes read independently, selecting appropriate reading strategies explain personal interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from own knowledge and experience decide on a specific purpose for reading and select the material needed from a variety of appropriate sources understand the appropriate vocabulary and language structures describe a series of events in a written work using evidence from the work make judgements and draw conclusion about the content in written materials, using evidence from the materials describe how various elements in a story function use research skills begin to identify a writer’s or character’s point of view identify various forms of writing and describe their characteristics use knowledge of the characteristics of different forms of writing to help in the selection of appropriate materials for a specific purpose use a dictionary to expand vocabulary R15 identify root words, prefixes, and suffixes, and use them to determine the pronunciation and meaning of unfamiliar words use specialized terms in different subject areas R16 identify synonyms and antonyms R17 use punctuation to help understand what is read locate and interpret information, using various conventions of formal texts review a personal collection of favourite literary texts and share responses to forms R18 R19 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 19 Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library Reading and Research (R, RE) R20 R21 R22 R23 R24 RE1 RE2 RE3 RE4 use a variety of comprehension strategies; confirm understanding and self-correct use textual cues to construct and confirm meaning Identify descriptive and figurative language in literary texts experiment with words and sentence patterns to create word pictures identify figures of speech and ways in which they convey meaning organize information and ideas into categories using a variety of strategies record information in own words; cite authors and titles alphabetically and provide publications, dates of sources recognize gaps in the information gathered and locate additional information needed for a particular form, audience and purpose assess information gained through the inquiry or research process; form personal conclusions and generate new questions for further inquiry or research √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Oral and Visual Communication (OV) PT: Performance Task located in the manual OV1 communicate information, explain a variety of ideas and procedures, and follow the teacher’s instructions OV2 communicate a main idea about a topic and describe a sequence of events OV3 ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups OV5 OV6 PT PT PT PT PT identify various types of media works and some of the techniques used in them analyze media works PT PT PT √ √ OV7 OV8 OV9 OV10 OV11 OV12 OV13 use the appropriate conventions of oral language, and of the various media express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic use appropriate words and structures in discussions or classroom presentations use tone of voice, gestures, and other nonverbal cues to help clarify meaning when describing events, telling stories, reading aloud, making presentations and stating opinions contribute ideas to help solve problems, and listen and respond constructively to the ideas of others when working in a group speak clearly when making presentations Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT 20 Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library Oral and Visual Communication (OV) 0V14 OV15 OV16 OV17 OV18 OV19 OV20 show respect for the presenter through active listening and viewing behaviours create a variety of media works identify the main characteristics of some familiar media explain the importance of linking personal perceptions and ideas to new concepts identify descriptive and figurative language in oral and media texts understand and use a variety of forms of oral and media texts summarize personal knowledge of a topic in categories to determine information needs Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 PT PT √ √ PT √ √ √ PT 21 Language Trek: On Location with Language Scope and Sequence - Grade 6 (Level 2) Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Integrated Throughout (T) T1 use word processing when composing and revising T2 use writing for various purposes and in a range of contexts, including school work T3 use conventions of written materials to help understand and use the materials T4 compare the challenges and situations encountered in daily life with those experienced by people in other times, places and cultures as portrayed in literary texts T5 integrate media materials into writing to enhance the message Writing (W) W1 W2 W3 W4 W5 W6 W7 W8 W9 W10 W11 W12 W13 W14 W15 W16 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences produce media texts using writing and materials from other media revise and edit work, seeking feedback from others and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of vocabulary for audience and purpose use and spell correctly the appropriate vocabulary produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media use a variety of sentence types and sentence structures appropriate for their purposes organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs proofread and correct final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and conventions of style use the positive, comparative and superlative forms of adjectives correctly use adjective and adverb phrases correctly and effectively use verb tenses consistently throughout a piece of writing use a colon before a list and after a greeting use phonics, the meaning and function of words, and some generalizations about spelling to spell with accuracy use a variety of resources to confirm spelling frequently introduce vocabulary for other subject areas into their writing use homonyms correctly Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 22 Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library Writing (W) W17 select and use words to create special effects W18 accurately use appropriate organizers focus on a topic for written texts, integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources W20 use subordinate clauses correctly Reading and Research (R, RE) √ √ √ W19 R1 R2 R3 R4 R5 R6 R7 R8 R9 R10 R11 R12 R13 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes read independently, selecting appropriate reading strategies explain personal interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from own knowledge and experience decide on a specific purpose for reading and select the material needed from a variety of appropriate sources understand the appropriate vocabulary and language structures summarize and explain the main ideas in information materials and cite details that support the main ideas make judgements and draw conclusion about the content in written materials, using evidence from the materials identify the elements of a story and explain how they relate to each other plan a research project and carry out the research identify a writer’s perspective or character’s motivation identify different forms of writing and describe their characteristics use a thesaurus to expand vocabulary R15 consult a dictionary to confirm pronunciation and/or find the meaning of unfamiliar words identify root words, prefixes, and suffixes, and use them to determine the pronunciation and meaning of unfamiliar words understand specialized words and terms R16 identify synonyms and antonyms R17 use punctuation to help understand what is read use a variety of conventions of formal texts to find and verify information use comprehension strategies appropriate to the type of text and purpose use textual cues to construct and confirm meaning R14 R18 R19 R20 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 23 Expectations Publishing Company Communication Museum Production Studio Library Reading and Research (R, RE) R21 R22 R23 R24 RE1 RE2 RE3 RE4 identify descriptive and figurative language in literary texts and discuss how it enhances understanding of people, places and customs alter words, forms and sentence patterns to create new versions of texts for a variety of purposes explain ways in which figures of speech clarify and enhance meaning use their knowledge of word origins and derivations to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words organize information and ideas using a variety of strategies and techniques make notes on a topic, combining information from more than one source using reference sources appropriately evaluate the appropriateness of information for a particular form, audience and purpose; identify gaps in information collected and gather additional information relate gathered information to prior knowledge to reach conclusions or develop points of view; establish goals for developing further inquiry or research skills Oral and Visual Communication (OV) PT: Performance task located in the manual OV1 make reports, describe and explain a course of action and follow detailed instructions OV2 communicate a main idea about a topic and describe a sequence of events OV3 ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ PT PT PT PT OV5 OV6 identify various types of media works and some of the techniques used in them analyze media works √ √ OV7 OV8 OV9 OV10 OV11 OV12 use the conventions of oral language, and of the various media express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic speak correctly, observing common grammatical rules such as subject-verb agreement, noun-pronoun agreement and consistency of verb tense use tone of voice and gestures to enhance the message and help convince or persuade listeners in conversations, discussions or presentations assess own contributions to group process, set personal goals for enhancing work with others and monitor group process using checklists Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT PT 24 Expectations Publishing Company OV13 speak clearly when making presentations PT OV14 demonstrate critical listening and viewing behaviours and show respect for the presenter PT OV15 create a variety of media works OV16 identify the main characteristics of some familiar media identify the various types of professionals involved in producing a media work and describe the jobs they do analyze and assess a media work and express a considered viewpoint about it explain the importance of linking personal perceptions and ideas to new concepts identify descriptive and figurative language in oral and media texts observe and discuss aspects of human nature revealed in personal experiences and in oral and media texts use constructive strategies in small-group discussions OV17 OV18 OV19 OV20 OV21 OV22 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Communication Museum Production Studio Library PT PT PT √ √ √ √ √ PT √ √ √ √ PT 25 IV. Implementation in the Classroom INTRODUCTION On Location with Language is based on several fundamental principles of language teaching and learning: that skills are acquired within a context; that the context must be personally meaningful and relevant; that reading is an interaction between the reader and the text and that the reader’s personal experience shapes the meaning; that reader response is balanced with skill development; that writing is a process through which the writer refines and clarifies ideas; that language usage skills have an integral value when applied; that media literacy is a combination of knowledge of techniques and critical analysis. A variety of teaching and learning strategies is essential to any language program. The software program is one vehicle that should be combined with other practices. For example, students can have limited oral interaction with the computer. Therefore, since “talk” is important for learning, class and small group discussion is a program component to address outside the software. The number of reading selections available in the software cannot address every student’s skill level and personal interest. Longer reading selections are more effectively read off screen. Therefore, additional opportunities for students to interact with texts must be provided. The computer cannot ‘think’, nor can it assess communication of ideas. As a result, the total program should include opportunities for students to discuss their writing with the teacher and with one another. Although some writing skills are competently assessed within the program, writing as a totality is best assessed by the teacher. For this reason, an extensive section on assessment has been incorporated into the resource manual. TEACHING/LEARNING STRATEGIES On Location with Language software can be used in several ways: to introduce a particular topic or concept to address skill remediation by providing students with practice to extend and enrich the language program. Whole Class Instruction a. As the teacher plans the language program, certain topics, skills, and concepts are identified as being effectively delivered through use of the software. Students proceed to complete tutorials and activities that the teacher identifies as part of an integrated classroom language program. b. The teacher uses the software in combination with a projection device as a tool to teach skills or, for example, to model the writing process. Students proceed individually to complete activities and performance tasks. Small Group Learning a. Students work in pairs to complete the tutorials. Activities may be completed in partners or individually. b. Students in a group work on the same section and then proceed to complete the offscreen performance task. This is particularly appropriate for sections of the Publishing Company and the Production Studio. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 26 Individual Learning a. Students complete the tutorials, activities, and performance tasks on an individual basis. There may be considerable diversity in where the students are working within the software. Student-teacher conferences are held to guide and monitor progress. b. Certain students are directed to specific sections of the software for purposes of remediation and/or practice. The Library and Communication Museum are particularly appropriate locations. c. Certain students are directed to specific sections of the software for enrichment. Activities within the Publishing Company and the Production Studio may be suitable for this purpose. SAMPLE IMPLEMENTATION SCENARIOS The scenarios describe possible ways to implement some of the sections in the software. Each provides one of many possible implementation strategies. Availability of equipment, time and personal teaching preferences will impact on which strategies a teacher uses. THE LIBRARY Approximate Time: 2-8 hours Equipment Required: A computer lab setting or individual computers in the classroom Process: The Library has a variety of literary genre including: legends, folktales, fables, fiction, and nonfiction selections. This manual provides the teacher with an overview of the skills and knowledge in each area. If this is the first location that your students are visiting you may wish to consider the following points. • To truly benefit from all that the software has to offer, students need both direct instruction as well as the freedom to explore. • When introducing a new computer program to 9- to 12-year-old students be sure to include both teacher instruction and student practice. Only after both direct instruction and a period of free exploration should students be expected to use software to accomplish a particular task. • A lab setting is the ideal way to introduce new software to users at all levels. When students work with a partner in the lab, as opposed to working alone after whole group instruction, they are more inclined to experiment, to discover and to learn. • If your school doesn’t have a lab, students can gather around a single monitor as the teacher demonstrates the software. If you have one computer in your classroom, you can show several students how to use the new software. These students can then instruct other students, either individually or in small groups. After the initial introduction of “On Location With Language”, the teacher can select the specific skills that need to be presented and then direct the students to the appropriate location within The Library. The teacher may also wish to establish some learning outcomes related specifically to the technology that students are using; for example, overall skills such as demonstrating computer etiquette or specific skills such as capturing and manipulating graphics could be incorporated. Following the whole group lesson(s), the students may work in pairs or individually on print materials provided by the teacher or complete a software learning experience. Many of the readings are accompanied by sets of comprehension questions and the teacher may wish to Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 27 assign these questions to all students or to students who specifically require assistance with skills such as sequencing events, drawing conclusions, making judgments etc. Ideally, the students know in advance the material that they are expected to complete, the completion timeline and the criteria that will be used to assess the final product. The teacher will want to use the software tracking system to see the tasks that the students have completed over the given timeline. Upon completion of a particular section of the software, the student may choose from a number of possible tasks. These tasks are saved to The Read-To-Write Portfolio. The rubric enclosed in the manual provides guidance for the teacher in the assessment of the student work found in The Read-to-Write Portfolio. The non-fiction section of The Library introduces the students to a variety of research skills. The teacher may wish to introduce these skills one at a time and guide the research process. Another approach would be to allow the students to work through the research skills presented in the software and then present guidelines for the completion of the assignment. The software provides many possible ideas. The teacher may allow the students to choose one of the ideas or assign the same task to all students. The Communication Museum The Approximate Time Required: 3-4 hours Process: The Communication Museum location is designed not only to introduce spelling and grammar skills but also to provide an opportunity for review. Therefore, a teacher may choose to use the software after whole group instruction of specific skills or he/she may decide to respond to individual needs as students complete each of the separate communication sections. Whole Group Instruction: If the teacher decides to guide the students in their use of the software, he/she will want to introduce the particular spelling skill and words that will be practiced. Also, it will be important to introduce the specific grammar skill(s) that are found in that section. Practice of these skills can occur through use of the software or the software in combination with other materials such as text or workbook materials. Independent Study Approach This approach allows the student to individually progress through The Communication Museum site. The teacher can obtain regular feedback on the sections completed as well as specific results. Regardless of the approach used the students will benefit from the historical perspective presented on various forms of communication. In addition, to ongoing feedback, the student also has the opportunity to test the skills learned through a quiz based on the skills from the different communication areas. Publishing Company Approximate Time Required: 12-14 hours Equipment Required: 1 computer in the classroom, projection device, computer lab with 1 computer per student Process: 1. The outcomes for the Writing Room tutorial, You’re a Poet and You Know It, are shared with the students. From the onset, students are aware of the skills and knowledge they are to demonstrate. (Time: 15 minutes) Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 28 2. 3. Using the tutorial on a classroom computer with a projection device, the teacher guides the whole class through the content and on-screen practice. This is supplemented with additional examples and whole class discussion. (Time: 1 hour) The class is taken to a computer lab to complete the six activities. The teacher conferences with individual students on activities involving the writing process, To ensure teacher availability to conference with each student, it is recommended that students proceed through the activities in different orders. The activities are: 1. Writing a Haiku 2. Limerick Fun 3. Picture This! 4. Punctuation Challenge 5. A Couple of Rhymes 6. It’s All in the Order Activities 1, 2 and 3 are ones involving the writing process. A class of 30 students could be divided into 6 groups and given the following order for completion of the activities: a. Group A: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 b. Group B: 3, 4, 5, 6, 1, 2 c. Group C: 5, 6, 1, 2, 3, 4 d. Group D: 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 1 e. Group E: 4, 5, 6, 1, 2, 3 f. Group F: 6, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Using this process means half the students are involved in activities 1, 2, and 3 at a given time, thus making the teacher more available for conferencing. The assessment instruments that the teacher selects from the manual should be shared with the students prior to beginning the activities. The teacher could decide if any instruments are to be used for peer and/or self assessment. The products for these should be printed as the activities are completed and the peer/self assessment conducted. The products that the teacher selects to assess himself/herself should be printed as completed and submitted for assessment. (Time: 3-4 hours) 4. The performance task, “Celebrating Community in Poetry” is explained and the rubrics shared with the students. Instruction and discussion on collaborative learning may be required prior to beginning the task. It is optional for students to use computers to complete this task, but access to word processing and clip art programs would be advantageous. (Time: 5-6 hours) 5. In the computer lab, students individually complete the software Quiz. (Time: 30 minutes) 6. Celebrate the conclusion of the poetry unit by inviting community officials to a poetry reading and display the students’ collections. (Time: 1 hour) Production Studio Approximate Time Required: 2-3 hours Equipment Required: 3-5 computers in the classroom Process: During the time allocated for independent reading in class, students are assigned on a rotational basis to complete the Production Studio section on a classroom computer. Since the majority of students are involved in silent reading, the teacher is available to assist those using the software. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 29 If one hour per week is devoted to independent reading, most students could complete the Production Studio in two weeks. Thus, a class of 30 students using 5 computers could finish the Production Studio in one term. At the end of the term, the teacher reviews the content in a class discussion and note-taking session. Following this, the performance task from the manual is completed. ASSESSMENT AND EVALUATION Approach - Assessment should include a variety of techniques and instruments. The overall goal is to improve student learning. Within the software there are multiple opportunities for educators to use assessment to this end. The computer-assessed activities and quizzes provide one dimension to assessment in that the student receives immediate feedback and is fully aware of areas requiring improvement. The assessment techniques in the manual offer opportunities for teachers to conference with students. The criteria-based instruments assist to clarify expectations for students. Student Tracking System - Software tracking is an integral feature of On Location with Language. The teacher can obtain a listing of the sections of the software completed by a student. Quiz and activity results are scored on the tracking system. The teacher can access records of individual students and entire classes. Techniques and Instruments a. Culminating Performance Tasks: These authentic challenges result in a production or performance within a real-world context. They require students to address a specific audience and purpose. The On Location with Language software manual includes several performance tasks at each location. These incorporate opportunities for assessment of oral language and group work. Rubrics accompany the performance tasks. b. Scoring Rubrics: These tools identify and describe criteria; student work is assessed according to the descriptors in levels of achievement. Should a ‘mark’ need to be assigned, the particular level corresponds with a numeric value. The scoring rubrics can be used to assess software activities more appropriately done outside the software (e.g. writing activities). c. Checklists: These have been included to assist students in self-assessment. d. Portfolio Assessment: Portfolios are collections of both student products and teacher observations that reflect the student’s growth and progress in literacy development. They are an effective way of aligning instructional goals and assessment. Traditionally, the works are collected over time. The On Location with Language software offers several portfolios. All portfolios can be printed for assessment purposes. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 30 V. The Locations A. PUBLISHING COMPANY 1. THE NEWSPAPER Level 1 – Grade 5 - The Kids Connect News Overview The setting of this Publishing Location is a newspaper office and the focus is upon the strand of Writing. Students visit the Kids Connect News newsroom where they complete activities that are typically associated with newspaper publishing. Students publish their newspaper articles to an electronic Kids Connect Newspaper template or print for classroom use. A newspaper template, additional tasks, and a culminating performance task are provided in the manual. Kids Connect News selections engage students in the process of publishing a newspaper by producing newspaper articles such as advice columns, classified ads, comic strips, editorials, hard news stories and weather reports. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 31 Structure The Kids Connect News site consists of six segments. 1 2 3 4 5 6 Advice Column: Amazing Advice Classified Ads: Catchy Classifieds Comic Strip: The Comic Corner Editorial: Food for Thought Hard News Story: What’s the Scoop? Weather Report: Weather Watchers Amazing Advice Catchy Classifieds Kids Connect News Grade 5 The Comic Corner Food For Thought What’s the Scoop? Weather Watchers Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 32 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The segments within the Kids Connect News newspaper align with the following English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and non-fiction, classic and contemporary works. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 33 Learning Outcomes Each segment within the Kids’ Connect News is cross-referenced with reading, research, writing and oral and visual expectations that are addressed and assessed by activities and instruments located in the software and the manual. Grade 5 Expectations Amazing Advice Catchy Classifieds √ √ The Comic Corner What’s the Scoop? Food for Thought Weather Watchers Writing (W) W1 W2 W3 W4 W6 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences; produce media texts using writing and materials from other media; revise and edit their work, seeking feedback from others and the viewpoints of others and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of a vocabulary for audience; use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media; W7 write simple and compound sentences; W8 organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs that focus on a main idea and give some relevant supporting details; W9 proofread and correct their final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, and spelling; √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ 34 Expectations Amazing Advice Catchy Classifieds The Comic Corner What’s the Scoop? Food for Thought Weather Watchers Writing (W) W10 use phrases appropriately to clarify meaning; W18 select and use words to create specific effects; W19 accurately use graphs and captions; W20 focus on a topic for written texts by integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources; √ √ √ √ √ Reading and Research ( R ), (RE) R7 R15 make judgements and draw conclusions about the content in written materials, using evidence from the materials; √ use specialized terms in different subject areas, as appropriate; Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ 35 The Culminating Performance Task The culminating performance task provides a summative vehicle for students to demonstrate their knowledge and skills related to the following expectations considered in the software. Strand Expectations WRITING W1 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences; W2 produce media texts using writing and materials from other media; W3 revise and edit their work, seeking feedback from others and the viewpoints of others and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of a vocabulary for audience; W4 use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; W6 produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media; W7 write simple and compound sentences; W8 organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs that focus on a main idea and give some relevant supporting details; W9 proofread and correct their final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, and spelling; W10 use phrases appropriately to clarify meaning; W18 select and use words to create specific effects; W19 accurately use graphs and captions; W20 focus a topic for written texts by integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources; Teachers can use the culminating performance task to address and assess the following expectations not considered in the software. Strand Expectations ORAL AND VISUAL COMMUNICATION OV1 communicate information, explain a variety of ideas and procedures, and follow the teacher’s instructions. OV3 ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups OV7 use the appropriate conventions of oral language, and of the various media OV12 contribute ideas to help solve problems, and listen and respond constructively to the ideas of others when working in a group 0V15 create a variety of media works Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 36 Components The Kids Connect News features a newsroom setting that consists of six segments. They include: Amazing Advice Catchy Classifieds The Comic Corner Food For Thought What’s The Scoop? Weather Watchers Each segment is structured in this sequence: Background information introduces the concepts that will be addressed in the segment. A tutorial guides the student through a series of activities that are designed to provide an understanding of concepts. An activity is presented within the software for the student to apply his/her skills and knowledge. A performance task in the manual extends the software for purposes of real-life application of the skills and knowledge acquired. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 37 A. Amazing Advice In this segment of the Kids Connect News newspaper, students enter the magical world of the student guide, Advice Wizard. The Advice Wizard guides students through the steps of writing an advice column. Students engage in a Did You Know? section that explains the different parts of an advice column and are guided in reading samples. Students provide solutions to hypothetical problems as they write an advice column. After completing the segment, students can publish their own advice column in a newspaper format using a template and/or print for classroom use. B. Catchy Classifieds Students visit the Advertising Department of the Kids Connect News where they classify ads by product and/or service for the purpose of advertising in the newspaper. Students learn how services are grouped by category (playing a Bingo game). Students create a classified ad by selecting from a category. They are prompted for information based upon their selection. The activity involves the creation of a classified ad with an option to publish to a Kids Connect News newspaper template and/or print for classroom use. C. The Comic Corner Students are welcomed to the Comic Corner by a student guide, posing as a cartoonist, and are guided through the process of producing comic strips. They seriate sets of pictures in order to learn how to tell a story using comics and how to use onomatopoeia to create sound effects. Students are prompted to create their own comic strips based on comical characters that are introduced in the software. Dialogue bubbles are provided to accompany the illustrations. Students have an option to publish to a Kids Connect News newspaper template and/or print for classroom use. D. Food For Thought Students are welcomed to the Kids Connect by a student guide posing as an editorial columnist. They are instructed in writing an editorial by focusing upon the main parts of an editorial (e.g. headline, lead, body, conclusion) with emphasis on stating opinions. Students select a headline from a list that is provided and are guided through the process of writing an editorial. The writing process is based upon the analogy of making a hamburger. Students are introduced to the three main sections of an editorial: lead (top bun), body (middle) and conclusion (bottom bun). They are also instructed in taking jot notes. Students write an editorial and have the option to publish in the Kids Connect News newspaper template and/or print for classroom use. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 38 E. What’s The Scoop? Students learn the process that is involved in writing hard news stories. They identify and write bylines, headlines, leads and the body. They are introduced to the 5W-H Club (who, what, when, where, why, how) as questioning techniques that are involved in the writing of hard news. Students also study the inverted pyramid style of writing hard news stories through a building block simulation. Students examine headlines, the Inverted Pyramid format of writing a hard news story and learn how to apply the 5W-H Club when reading for information. They are provided with headlines as a basis for the hard news story they write. They have an opportunity to publish the story in the Kids Connect News and/or print for classroom use. F. Weather Watchers Students are greeted to the Kids Connect News by a student guide who assumes the identity of an on-the-spot weather reporter. They learn to read and write a weather column through studying basic weather symbols, playing a memory game and charting a weather forecast. Students publish a weather report for the Kids Connect News based on matching weather symbols to the appropriate weather-related phrases. They also have the option to print the report for classroom use. Activity Templates The following activity templates can be used to reinforce skills off-screen: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Amazing Advice Catchy Classifieds Food for Thought What’s the Scoop? Weather Watchers Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 39 Grade 5 Amazing Advice Dear Advice Wizard, Dear Bullied, I have many friends in my class, but there is one student who always teases and embarrasses me. It doesn’t matter what I say; he never misses an opportunity to make fun of me. What can I do to make him stop? _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ Bullied Dear Advice Wizard, I am in Grade Five. There are two Grade Five classes in our school. We have a great class! We all get along and we have a lot of fun together. The problem is that every time we go out for recess, kids from the other Grade Five class call us names and make fun of us. They say we aren’t cool. It is getting really hard to ignore them. Can you help? Uncool Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 _____________ Dear Uncool, _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _____________ 40 Dear Advice Wizard, My friends and I have been building a fort for over a year now. All of a sudden, an older tougher boy came and took over it. It isn’t on our property, so we can’t do anything to get him out of the fort. What can we do? Dear Fort Builder, _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ Fort Builder Dear Advice Wizard, My sister and I argue a lot. Now that we are older, we know how to get to each other and we can hurt each other’s feelings. We argue about things such as television programs, using the phone and using the computer. I do not like to argue with my sister. How can we arrive at solutions peacefully? To Argue or Not Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 _____________ Dear To Argue or Not, _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _____________ 41 Grade 5 Amazing Advice Directions: Write a problem to correspond with each piece of advice. Dear Advice Wizard, 1. Talk to the group and explain that you are not comfortable with the role that they have assigned you . Suggest another responsibilityl ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________ Dear Advice Wizard, 2. Discuss the problem with your teacher. Let her know that you are being harassed in the change room and that you are afraid. ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________ Dear Advice Wizard, 3. If you are receiving crank phone calls while you are home alone, you need to confide in an adult. Let your parents know that this is ha ppening each time they go out. ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________ Tip: Be sure to write from the first person point of view. You can begin your letter with the pronoun, “I”. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 42 Grade 5 Catchy Classifieds OPPO BUSINESS OPPORTUNITIES CHILD CARE IT Your Assignment: Your Assignment: You have a bakery for sale. How will you let people know that you need to sell immediately? You are a parent looking for a nanny and house-keeper for two children. How will you let people know? Your classified ad goes here. Your classified ad goes here. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 43 EDUCATION EMPLOYMENT Your Assignment: Your Assignment: You are a teacher hoping to tutor after school. How will you let parents know that you are available? You are the owner of a new restaurant. How will you advertise for qualified cooks? Your classified ad goes here. Your classified ad goes here. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 44 PETS / ANIMALS TRANSPORTATION Your Assignment: Your Assignment: You cannot keep your pet any longer and want to give it away. How will you advertise for a good home? You have a well-used car for sale. How will you sell it? Your classified ad goes here. Your classified ad goes here. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 45 Grade 5 Food for Thought Lead Details My Jot Notes Who? What? Where? When? ~ Tip: The lead is the first paragraph that introduces the article. ~ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 46 Food for Thought Remember to . . . state your opinion clearly; support your opinion with details; persuade your audience to agree with you; i- edit for spelling and punctuation; include the lead, body and conclusion. Topic Ideas: o Out of this World o Give Respect, Get Respect o Doing Homework Makes the Grade Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 47 Grade 5 What’s the Scoop? Headline Ideas: Homework Tips School Talent Show a Success Fashion Statements at School Teamwork Builds Community School Spirit is Alive Best Friend Rules my Life Computers Take Over the World Who? . . . What? . . . Why? . . . When? . . . Where? . . . How? Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 48 Grade 5 WEATHER WATCHERS _______________ _______________ Descriptors: Highs / Lows: Sunny and clear High: -6C(21F) Low: -18C(0F) Rain High: 32C(90F) Low: 24C(75F) Thundershowers Today’s Weather High: 17C(63F) Low: 11C(53F) Scattered showers High: 30C(86F) Low: 18C(64F) Snow High: 20C(68F) Low: 14C(57F) Fog High: 23C(73F) Low: 13C(55F) Partly Cloudy High: 15C(59F) Low: 7C(45F) Chance of Snow High: 19C(66F) Low: 3C(37F) High Winds To create a Kids Connect Weather Forecast, choose a graphic, descriptor and high/low temperature to provide an accurate forecast. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 49 Additional Tasks These tasks supplement those presented on screen. Advice Column: Kid Talk Classified Ads: Shopping Spree Comic Strip: Humorous Strips Editorial Column: What’s Your Opinion? Hard News: Surveying the News Weather Report: Examining the Weather Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 50 Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Kid Talk Advice Column Your parents have a problem and they have come to you for advice! Your little brother is a very picky eater and will only eat peanut butter and jelly sandwiches for lunch. Your parents are concerned that he is not getting proper nutrition. What advice would you give to your parents to help solve the problem. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 51 Kids Connect News Grade 5: Kid Talk Name: ___________________________ Category Date: _____________________ Criteria Content Is the advice given clear, appropriate and detailed? Form Does the response include a salutation, body and closing? Accuracy Was attention given to spelling and punctuation? Yes Somewhat Comment: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 52 No Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Shopping Spree Classified Ads You have an imaginary $125.00 to spend. Using the newspaper, review classified ads to see how many items you can purchase for $125.00. You are only permitted to purchase one of each item. The person who purchases the most items for $125.00 wins. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 53 Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Humorous Strips Comic Strip Look at the different comic strips in the newspaper. Which one is the funniest to you? Cut out the pictures and rewrite the dialogue! Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 54 Kids Connect News Grade 5: Humorous Strips Name: ___________________________ Category Date: _____________________ Criteria Content Is the comic strip light-hearted and humorous? Form Does the dialogue reflect a logical progression? Word Choice Do the words used reflect originality and creativity? Yes Somewhat Comment: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 55 No Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News What’s Your Opinion? Editorial Column Editorial columns consist of opinions that are shared. Find an editorial in the newspaper. Think about the message of the column. Do you agree with the opinions that are given? Write a letter to the editor of the column telling why you agree or disagree. Attach the editorial to your letter. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 56 Kids Connect News Grade 5: What’s Your Opinion? Name: ___________________________ Category Content Date: _____________________ Criteria Yes Somewhat Do the opinions referred to in this letter reflect those in the editorial? Are opinions supported with evidence? Form Is the appropriate format used in the letter? Accuracy Has attention been paid to spelling, grammar and punctuation? Comment: ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 57 No Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Surveying the News Hard News Read the front page of any newspaper. Select a hard news story. Remember: every hard news story answers the questions who, what, when, where, why, how. Check your article by completing the chart below. Headline: who what when where why how Attach the hard news story to your chart. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 58 Grade 5 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Examining the Weather Weather Report Find a weather map in the newspaper. Study the weather report for your area. Plan after-school activities for the next three days based on the weather report. List your activities in chart form including what (nature of the activity), when, where, other (materials, clothing required. Attach the weather report to your plan. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 59 Kids Connect News Grade 5: Examining the Weather Name: ___________________________ Category Date: _____________________ Criteria Content Do planned activities reflect the weather? Form Has all the required information been conveyed in chart format? Accuracy Has attention been given to spelling, grammar and punctuation? Yes Somewhat Comment: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 60 No Teacher Notes Grade 5 Performance Task Site: Kids Connect News Forecasting the News 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing and revising prior to publishing the paper. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. These may include: staying on task contributing ideas listening actively encouraging others fulfilling the assigned role. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation and as well the writing process. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least two sections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes may to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their newspaper using the Kids Connect News template or another software program such as MS Publisher. 7. Post the newspapers for display or make several copies of each and have a class reading session. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 61 Student Directions Grade 5 Performance Task Site: Kids Connect News Forecasting the News You are part of the production team of Galaxy Express, a newspaper published daily in the year 2241. Your team is responsible for publishing the Tuesday, March 30 edition of the paper. However, there are some requirements: 1. Each student must complete two of the following sections and all sections must be included in the newspaper: a. An advice column b. A classified ads section with a minimum of three ads c. Two comic strips d. A letter to the editor e. A hard news story f. A weather report. 2. The publication should appear in newspaper form. You can complete it by hand or on computer. When you meet with your group you should: • discuss what the world will be like in 2241; • decide on the content of the newspaper; • assign tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the sections have been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Publish your newspaper. Examine the rubric before you start. It provides detail on how your newspaper will be graded. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 62 Rubric for Group Process Kids Connect Kids Grade 5: Forecasting the News Name: ____________________________ Criteria Level 1 Date: _________________ Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few ideas Some worthwhile ideas Several worthwhile ideas Several insightful ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 63 Rubric for Product Kids Connect News Grade 5: Forecasting the News Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Meets few of the requirements Meets some of the requirements Meets most of the requirements Meets all of the requirements Consists of a few simple ideas Consists of a variety of simple ideas Consists of a ideas of some complexity Consists of complex ideas Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity Purpose is somewhat clear Purpose is clear Purpose is clear and confident Details Few details are provided Some details are provided Considerable detail is provided Thorough detail is provided Sentence Structure Little variety; mostly simple sentences Some variety Considerable variety Effective variety Word choice – use of phrases to clarify meaning Limited use Some use Considerable use Effective use Organization – placement of sections in newspaper format Sections placed with limited appropriateness Sections placed with some appropriateness Sections placed appropriately Sections placed appropriately and effectively Structure of paragraphs Writing process Limited structure Some structure Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable structure Considerable evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Requirements of newspaper Content/ Ideas Communication Organization of Ideas Application Date: _________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Few major or minor errors Level 4 Highly and effectively structured Thorough evidence Almost error-free 64 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment and evaluation instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Newspaper”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Segment Tutorial Assessment Activity Assessment Amazing Advice Dear Advice Wizard (Writing an Advice Column) Software feedback Writing an advice column Scoring rubric Catchy Classifieds Classifying ads Software feedback Writing a classified ad Scoring rubric Bingo! (Indexing Titles) The Comic Corner Just For Laughs (Seriating Frames) Software feedback Creating a comic strip Scoring rubric Food For Thought Headline Quiz Software feedback Writing an editorial Scoring rubric What’s The Scoop? Mixed Up Headlines (Making Sense of Headlines) Software feedback Writing a hard news story Scoring rubric Weather Watchers Weather Tracking (Plot Graph) Software feedback Completing a weather report Scoring rubric Criteria checklist Weather Match (Matching Graphics with Descriptors) Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 65 Rubric for Assessment of “My Newspaper” – Grade 5 Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge of forms, techniques and structures related to newspaper articles Demonstrates limited knowledge Demonstrates some knowledge Demonstrates considerable knowledge Demonstrates thorough knowledge Content/ Ideas Uses a few simple ideas Uses some complex ideas Consistently uses complex ideas Insightfully uses complex ideas Purpose and audience Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates considerable precision Demonstrates extensive precision Vocabulary and word choice Uses simple words Uses clear language with some detail Uses effective language with considerable detail Uses language which is complex, insightful, and effective Sentence structure Limited variety Some variety Organization of Ideas Structure: accuracy and effectiveness of sentence and paragraph structure Limited evidence Some evidence Uses variety with considerable control Considerable evidence Uses variety with confident command High degree of evidence Application Writing process Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Communication Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 66 2. THE NEWSPAPER b) Level 2 – Grade 6 - The Kids Connect News Overview The setting of this Publishing Location is a newspaper that focuses upon the strand of writing. Students visit Kids Connect News where they choose activities that are typically associated with newspaper publishing. Students select to publish their newspaper articles to an electronic Kids Connect Newspaper template or print for classroom use. A newspaper template, additional tasks, and a culminating performance task are provided in the manual. Kids Connect News selections engage students in the process of publishing a newspaper by producing newspaper articles such as photographic essays, display ads, editorial cartoons, editorials, hard news stories and horoscope columns. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 67 Structure The Kids Connect News site consists of six segments. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Photographic Essay: Snapshot Display Advertising: Ad Grab Bag Editorial Cartoon: Comical Quips Editorial: What’s Your Take? Hard News Story: On The Beat Horoscope: Star Forecast Snapshot Ad Grab Bag Kids Connect News Grade 6 Comical Quips What’s Your Take? On the Beat Star Forecast Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 68 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The segments within the Kids Connect News newspaper align with the following English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and non-fiction, classic and contemporary works. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 69 Learning Outcomes Each segment within the Kids’ Connect News is cross-referenced with reading, research, writing and oral and visual expectations that are addressed and assessed by instruments located in the software and the manual. Expectations Snapshot Ad Grab Bag Comical Quips √ √ √ On the Beat What’s Your Take? Star Forecast Writing (W) W1 W3 W4 W5 W7 W8 W10 W19 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences; revise and edit their work in collaboration with others, seeking and evaluating feedback, and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of vocabulary for audience; use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, techniques and resources appropriate to the form and purpose, and materials from other media; organize information to convey a central idea, using well-linked paragraphs; proofread and correct their final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and conventions of style; use adjective and adverb phrases correctly and effectively; focus a topic for written texts integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources; √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 70 Snapshot Expectations Ad Grab Bag Comical Quips On the Beat What’s Your Take? Star Forecast Reading and Research (R, RE) R1 R10 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes; identify a writer’s perspective or character’s motivation; √ √ The Culminating Performance Task The culminating performance task provides a summative vehicle for students to demonstrate their knowledge and skills related to the following expectations considered in the software. Strand Expectations WRITING W1 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences; W3 revise and edit their work in collaboration with others, seeking and evaluating feedback, and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of vocabulary for audience; W4 use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; W5 produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, techniques and resources appropriate to the form and purpose, and materials from other media; W7 organize information to convey a central idea, using well-linked paragraphs; W8 proofread and correct their final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and conventions of style; W10 use adjective and adverb phrases correctly and effectively; W19 focus a topic for written texts integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources; Teachers can use the culminating performance task to address and assess the following expectations not considered in the software. Strand Expectations ORAL AND VISUAL COMMUNICATION OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups; OV8 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately; OV9 demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic; 0V12 assess own contributions to group process, set personal goals for enhancing work with others and monitor group process using checklists; OV22 use constructive strategies in small-group discussions; Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 71 Components The Kids Connect News features a newsroom setting that consists of six segments. They include: Snapshot Ad Grab Bag Comical Quips What’s Your Take? On The Beat Star Forecast Each segment is structured in this sequence: Background information introduces the concepts that will be addressed in the segment. A tutorial guides the student through a series of activities that are designed to provide an understanding of concepts. An activity is presented within the software for the student to apply his/her skills and knowledge. A culminating performance task in the manual extends the software for purposes of reallife application of the skills and knowledge acquired. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 72 A. Snapshot In this segment of the Kids Connect News, students create a photographic essay. Students visit a photo journalist in a rainforest, where they classify photographs by theme and study the structure of phrases and sentences while exploring the organization of photographic essays, learning photography tips and writing captions. They explore the types of shots (distant shot, wide angle and close-up). They learn how to classify photos by theme and seriate them. As well, they examine captions while comparing phrases to sentences. Students create a photo essay and publish to the Kids Connect News and/or print for classroom use. B. Ad Grab Bag Students learn about the advertising of products and services and their appeal to certain consumer audiences or target groups. Students are invited to visit the Advertising Department of Kids Connect News where they visit the Ad Grab Bag. They view an ad slideshow, rate sample ads according to a rubric that is provided, choose ad topics from the Grab Bag, design an ad and have the option to publish their ad in the Kids Connect News newspaper and/or print for classroom use. C. Comical Quips Students are welcomed to Kids Connect News by an editorial cartoonist and are invited to express opinions through writing an editorial cartoon for the Kids Connect newspaper. They explore the use and significance of symbols and learn how to classify parts of editorial comics. Students are prompted to solve a mystery involving cartoon symbols and learn to distinguish between events, symbols and opinions, using a table format of presentation. They create editorial cartoons by writing dialogue for comic balloons, based upon choosing events that are provided within the software. Students have an option to publish their editorial cartoons to the Kids Connect News template and/or print for classroom use. D. What’s Your Take? Students are greeted at a baseball stadium by a student guide posing as an editorial columnist. The guide teaches students how to write an editorial for the Kids Connect News, by focusing upon the main parts of an editorial. Students participate in a game of baseball while being introduced to the three main sections of an editorial article: the lead, body and concluding paragraph. They also learn how to take jot notes. Students select a headline from a list and are guided to write an editorial based on that selection. They have the option to publish in Kids Connect News template and/or print for classroom use. E. On The Beat Students study the process that is involved in writing hard news stories. They learn how to identify and write bylines, headlines, leads and the body. They are introduced to the 5W-H Club (who, what, when, where, why, how) as questioning Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 73 techniques that are involved in the writing of hard news. Students also study the inverted pyramid style through a brick building simulation. Students are provided with headlines as a basis for writing a hard news story. They have an opportunity to publish the story in the Kids Connect News and/or print for classroom use. F. Star Forecast In this segment of the Kids Connect News, students write a horoscope column through a guided process. The focus is upon classification of information for a specific purpose by combining descriptors to create their own horoscope for entertainment purposes. Students are introduced to sample horoscopes and examine the use of clauses, as they learn how to classify information using tables. Students publish a horoscope column for Kids Connect News based upon selected criteria which involves adjectives and characteristics of chosen astrological signs. They also have the option to print the report for classroom use. Activity Templates The following activity templates can be used to reinforce skills off-screen: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Snapshot Ad Grab Bag Comical Quips What’s Your Take? On the Beat Star Forecast Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 74 Grade 6 Snapshot Title Graphic Graphic Caption Graphic Caption Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Caption 75 Grade 6 Ad Grab Bag Title Ad ~ TIPS ~ Advertisers use their products to appeal to certain target groups or audiences. Here are some examples: o Gourmet Cooks o Children o Adults o Athletes o Healthy Habits o Pet Owners Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Another technique that advertisers use to grab the consumer’s attention is persuasion. Display ads try to persuade the consumer to feel positively about a product! 76 Grade 6 Comical Quips Editorial Cartoon Tips: Your dialogue should communicate an opinion about the event. Cartoon Image Remember to be brief and witty! Topics: - Computers - Homework - Report Cards - School Bully - School Uniforms - Test Taking - Vacations Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 77 Grade 6 What’s Your Take? Did you remember to ……. Editorial • state your opinion clearly? • support your opinion with details? • persuade your audience to agree with you? • edit for spelling and punctuation? Need Topic Ideas? • A Real Life Hero • Green is Keen … Recycle for Life • Our Future in Space Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 78 Grade 6 ON THE BEAT Hard News Story Headline Ideas: Study Tips First Day Jitters Fashion Statement at School Helping Hands Fieldtrips Enrich Learning Environmental Awareness It’s a Computer World Who? . . . What? . . . Why? . . . When? . . . Where? . . . ? Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 79 Grade 6 Star Forecast Adjectives Personal Characteristics Curious Kind and considerate Horoscope Column Athletic Show sportsmanship Enthusiastic Eager to participate Friendly Get along with others Happy Like to explore Adventurous Take risks Kind Good listener Bubbly Good sense of humour Checklist: • Begin your introductory sentence with “You are” and choose an adjective from the list of positive qualities. • Decide on how you will achieve your dream. Choose a personal characteristic and include it in your explanation. • Conclude with a sentence beginning “Today would be a great day to…..” Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 80 Additional Tasks These tasks supplement those presented on screen: Photographic Essay: Tell the Story Display: Bake Sale Editorial Column: Find the Opinion Hard News: Disaster Strikes Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 81 Grade 6 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Tell the Story Photographic Essay Cut one photo out of the newspaper. Draw two more pictures to complete the story. Arrange them in order. Write captions to accompany each picture! Remember that your photo essay should have a beginning, middle and end. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 82 Kids Connect News Grade 6: Tell the Story Name: ______________________________ Category Content Criteria Date: ____________________ Yes Somewhat No Do the pictures convey a logical sequence? Are the captions appropriate for each picture? Form Word Choice Does the photo essay have a beginning, middle and end? Are the words for the captions selected to create a special effect? Comment: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 83 Grade 6 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Bake Sale Display Ad Write a display ad offering goodies for your school bake sale. Be sure to appeal to buyers of all ages within your school. Include large, colorful graphics. Draw your audience’s attention to these mouth-savoring treats! Grab consumers’ attention by trying to persuade them to purchase your product! Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 84 Kids Connect News Grade 6: Bake Sale Name: ______________________________ Category Content Criteria Date: ____________________ Yes Somewhat No Do the words and graphics appeal to all ages? Does the display act contain all required information? Form Is the display ad visually appealing? Word Choice Have words that appeal to the senses been used? Comment: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 85 Grade 6 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Find the Opinion Editorial Column Editorial columns contain information and opinion. Look at the newspaper and choose an editorial. Highlight or underline the groups of words or sentences that state an opinion. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 86 Grade 6 Task Location: Publishing Company Site: Kids Connect News Disaster Strikes HARD NEWS You are a hard news reporter assigned to cover an earthquake tragedy. There is mass destruction with heavy flooding and power failure. Write your hard news story. Be sure to include a headline and lead. Paragraphs should answer the following questions . . . Who? . . . What? . . . Where? . . . When? . . . Why? . . . How? Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 87 Teacher Notes Grade 6 Performance Task Site: Kids Connect News Sharing the News 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing and revising prior to publishing the paper. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. These may include: staying on task contributing ideas listening actively encouraging others fulfilling the assigned role. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation and as well the writing process. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least two sections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes may to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their newspaper using the Kids Connect News template or another software program such as MS Publisher. 7. Post the newspapers for display or make several copies of each and have a class reading session. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 88 Student Directions Grade 6 Performance Task Site: Kids Connect News Sharing the News You are part of the production team responsible for publishing the weekly edition of your class newspaper. However, there are some requirements. Each student must complete one of the following sections and all sections must be included in the newspaper: • a photographic essay (Hint: consider taking your photos with a Polaroid Instant camera or a digital camera.) • two display ads • an editorial and an editorial cartoon • two hard news stories. The publication should appear in newspaper form. You can complete it by hand or on computer. When you meet with your group you should: • decide on the content and style of the newspaper; • assign tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the sections have been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Publish your newspaper. Examine the rubric before you start. It provides detail on how your newspaper will be graded. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 89 Rubric for Group Process Kids Connect News Grade 6: Sharing the News Name: ____________________________ Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Date: _________________ Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few ideas Some worthwhile ideas Several worthwhile ideas Several insightful ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 90 Rubric for Product Kids Connect News Grade 6: Sharing the News Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Meets few of the requirements Meets some of the requirements Meets most of the requirements Meets all of the requirements Consists of a few simple ideas Consists of a variety of simple ideas Consists of a ideas of some complexity Consists of complex ideas Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity Purpose is somewhat clear Purpose is clear Purpose is clear and confident Details Few details are provided Some details are provided Considerable detail is provided Thorough detail is provided Word choice – use of adjective and adverb phrases Limited use Some use with few errors Considerable, accurate use Accurate and effective use Organization – placement of sections in newspaper format Sections placed with limited appropriateness Sections placed with some appropriateness Sections placed appropriately Sections placed appropriately and effectively Structure: paragraph structure and linking of paragraphs Writing process Limited structure Some structure Considerable structure Highly and effectively structured Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Requirements of newspaper Content/ Ideas Communication Organization of Ideas Application Date: _________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Level 4 91 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment and evaluation instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Newspaper”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Segment Snapshot The Ad Grab Bag Tutorial Activity Photo Slider (Classifying Photos by Theme) Caption Quiz (Identifying Phrases and Sentences) On Target (Matching Target Groups with Products) Assessment Activity Assessment Software feedback Creating a Photographic Essay Scoring rubric Software feedback Creating a Display Ad Scoring rubric Software feedback Creating an Editorial Cartoon Scoring rubric Software feedback Writing an Editorial Column Scoring rubric Ad Survey (Persuasion) Comical Quips What’s Your Take? What’s The Score? (Rating Ad Effectiveness) Mystery Cartoon Symbols (Identifying Cartoon Symbols) Getting Organized (Classifying Events, Symbols and Opinions) Batter Up! Quiz (Headlines and Main Ideas) On The Beat Sensational Headlines (Matching Headlines to Photos) Software feedback Writing a Hard News Story Scoring rubric Star Forecast Plan Your Day (Adjectives, Actions, Closing Sentences) Software feedback Compiling a Horoscope Column Scoring rubric Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 92 Rubric for Assessment of “My Newspaper” – Grade 6 Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Communication Organization of Ideas Application Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge of forms, techniques and structures related to newspaper articles Demonstrates limited knowledge Demonstrates some knowledge Demonstrates considerable knowledge Demonstrates thorough knowledge Content/ Ideas Uses a few simple ideas Uses some complex ideas Consistently uses complex ideas Insightfully uses complex ideas Purpose and Audience Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates considerable precision Demonstrates extensive precision Vocabulary and word choice Uses simple words Uses clear language with some detail Uses effective language with considerable detail Uses language which is complex, insightful, and effective Sentence structure Limited variety Some variety Structure: accuracy and effectiveness of paragraph structure and linking of paragraphs Writing process Limited evidence Some evidence Uses variety with considerable control Considerable evidence Uses variety with confident command Highly degree of evidence Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 93 C. TECHNOLOGY APPLICATIONS A visit to the Kids Connect News lends itself to several technology activities. Software Integration: Desktop Publishing: articles, columns, ads, and comics are published to an electronic newspaper template. Extensions: Multimedia presentations involve: o creating a newspaper (e.g. school, class, small group collaboration opportunities) or writing individual articles and columns and designing ads and comics throughout the year; o publishing work to the Internet, which could include video clips of reporters. Research using the Internet regarding current events. Use email to telecollaborate with real reporters, columnists and other students. D. Glossary Advice column - a regular (daily) feature in newspapers that is written by the same writer. It has two parts: a letter from someone asking for advice to solve a problem and the answer from the advice columnist. Advice columnist - a writer who regularly writes a personal column called an advice column, appearing in a newspaper. Body- appears in paragraph form and is the main part of an article. It contains reasons to support the opinion and facts that are based on research of the topic or provides additional information. Byline- tells the reader who wrote the story. Caption- is a short phrase or sentence. It describes in words, what the message that a photograph is attempting to convey. Cartoonist- creates comics for the newspaper. Classified Ads- advertisements that are grouped according to the type of product or service being offered. They are organized by specific headings so that it is easier to find products being advertised. The cost of a classified ad depends on the space that is used. Since advertisers who advertise in the Classified section are usually billed by the line or the word, these ads are usually very brief. They are written in small print so that the newspaper makes the best use of its space, and as many ads as possible can be fit on the page. Column- a feature that appears in the newspaper on a regular basis and is written by the same author. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 94 Comic strip- a joke or a story that is told using pictures and dialogue. Each picture is called a frame and each picture story has a beginning, middle and end. Comic strip stories are based on themes. These themes can be based on personal observations or experiences, real-life situations or they can be completely fictional. Due to limited space, comic strips are short and to the point. Comics appear in black-and-white throughout the week, and in color in many weekend editions of newspapers. Conclusion- a summary that can offer advice or encourage the reader to take action. Dialogue- a character's words. Display ads- larger advertisements that consist of art work and other information that tells the customer about a business, a product or a service. Editorial- an article this is written to express an opinion. It attempts to persuade the reader to agree with a particular point of view and uses facts to support an opinion. It consists of a headline, lead, body, and conclusion. Editorial cartoon- a cartoon that expresses opinions and appears on the editorial page of the newspaper. Editorial cartoonists get their ideas from current events and express their opinions through their cartoons. Editorial columnist- writer of short articles that are written to express an opinion. The columnist tries to persuade the reader to agree with a particular point of view and uses facts to support the opinion. The opinions of an editorial columnist are reflected in editorial analysis, and address topics such as: politics, economy, environment and social issues in our lives. Most editorials are unsigned and appear on the editorial page of the newspaper. Editorials that are signed are usually found in a section of the newspaper entitled: Letters to the Editor, in which the public is invited to share their opinions. Hard news stories- also known as breaking news stories. They are current event stories that are based on facts and answer the questions: who, what, where, when, why and how. Hard news stories appear on the front page of the newspaper because they are the most newsworthy events. Headline- provides the reader with an idea of what the story is about and is usually written in bold type. Inverted pyramid - refers to the formation of a hard news story. The main details of the story are represented by the 5W-H (who, why, what, when, where, how) questions and should appear in the first paragraph or two of the story. The reader should be able to understand the story based on the first paragraph or so. Additional details should be presented in order of importance in the body of the story. Lead- the opening sentence or paragraph that clearly states an opinion and grabs the reader’s attention. In a news story the lead summarizes the main points of the article and answers the questions who, what, where, when, why and how. Meteorologists- people who specialize in weather watching and forecasting. They send the weather information to the newsroom and I make sure that it appears in the Weather section of the newspaper. Phrase- a group of related words that does not have a subject or a verb, and is not a sentence. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 95 Photographic essay- a series of pictures based on a particular theme, that tells a story. The story has a beginning, middle and end. Photographic journalist- journalists who visit locations around the world and tell stories through their photographs. Phrase - a group of related words that does not have a subject, or verb, or both. Sentence- a complete thought. It has a subject and a verb and can end with a period, question mark, or an exclamation mark. Weather reporters- journalists who report local, national and international weather events. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 96 2. THE WRITING ROOM a) Part 1 - Grade 5 Overview Segments focus on the writing of poetry, mystery, personal narrative, fairy tales, and on real-life writing which includes instructions and business letters of inquiry. Students save their writing to “My Collection” which can be printed for integration within the classroom language program. Structure The Writing Room You’re a poet and you know it! Tutorial 6 Activities Quiz Mysteries Writing About Me Writing for Real Life Tutorial with practices Performance Task Tutorial with practices Major Activity Tutorial 2 Activities Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Fairy Tales Tutorial with practices Major Activity 97 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The segments within the Writing Room align with the English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students adjust their use of spoken, written and visual language (e.g. conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative and critical members of a variety of literary communities. 6. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 98 Learning Outcomes Each segment of the Writing Room is cross-referenced to the expectations for writing, reading, ad oral and visual communication. Student achievement of the expectations is assessed both in the software and through the use of instruments included in the manual. Expectations Poet’s Corner Mysteries Writing About Me Fairy Tales RealLife Writing Writing (W) W1 W3 W5 W6 W7 W8 W9 W18 W20 communicate ideas for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences revise and edit work focusing on appropriateness of vocabulary for audience and purpose use correctly the specified conventions produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, techniques, resources use simple, compound and complex sentences organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs that focus on a main idea and give some relevant supporting details proofread and correct final drafts focusing on grammar, punctuation and spelling select words and phrases to create special effects focus a topic for written texts, integrating ideas from experiences and a variety of other sources √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Reading and Research (R, RE) R1 R8 R10 R11 R13 R17 R22 R23 R24 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes describe how various elements in a story function begin to identify a writer’s or character’s point of view identify various forms of writing and describe their characteristics use a dictionary/thesaurus to expand vocabulary use punctuation to help understand what is read identify descriptive and figurative language in literary texts experiment with words and sentence patterns to create word pictures identify figures of speech and ways in which they convey meaning √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 99 Expectations Poet’s Corner Mysteries PT PT PT PT PT PT Writing About Me Fairy Tales RealLife Writing Oral and Visual Communication (OV) PT Performance Task located in the manual communicate information, explain a OV1 variety of ideas and procedures, and follow the teacher’s instructions OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups OV8 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately OV10 use appropriate words and structures in discussions or classroom presentations OV11 use tone of voice, gestures, and other non-verbal cues to help clarify meaning when describing events, telling stories, reading aloud, making presentations and stating opinions OV12 contribute ideas to help solve problems, and listen and respond constructively to the ideas of others when working in a group OV13 speak clearly when making presentations OV14 PT PT PT show respect for the presenter through active listening and viewing behaviours PT PT PT Components There are five segments in the Writing Room: A. B. C. D. E. You’re a poet and you know it! Mysteries Writing about Me Writing for Real Life Fairy Tales Each segment provides a tutorial with activities, applications and/or performance tasks, and assessment of student achievement of the expectations. In some cases the assessment is tracked by the software; in other cases, assessment instruments are provided in the manual. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 100 A. You’re a poet and you know it! Tutorial: Students are led through a modeling process as the student guide drafts, revises and edits a free verse and a traditional poem. The aural aspect of poetry is stressed. Development of skills and knowledge focuses on rhyme, rhythm, simile and alliteration. Students practise identifying and developing phrases which exemplify simile and alliteration. Application: Six activities are available. Where models are provided, students have the option of listening to the poetry. a. Writing a Haiku: Students examine models of haiku, learn the structure of the poetic form and are guided through the writing process in the creation of a haiku. The students publish to “My Collection”. b. Limerick Fun: Students examine models of the limerick, learn the structure of the poetic form and are guided through the writing process in the creation of a limerick. Rhythm and rhyme are a focus of this activity. The students publish to “My Collection”. c. Picture This: Students examine words that create pictures. They use photos as a prompt for proceeding through the writing process to create a poem. The students publish to “My Collection”. d. Punctuation Challenge: Students hear how punctuation affects the reading of poetry and practise adding punctuation to a poem. They compare their version to the original. e. A Couple of Rhymes: Students attempt to beat the clock by dragging the words that rhyme to fill in the blanks. Feedback is provided on-screen. f. It’s All in the Order: Students arrange the lines from a poem to put them in an order the reader can understand. Punctuation and rhyme constitute the clues. Quiz Poetry Pop-up Quiz: Students uncover rectangles on a game screen to view a picture. Multiple-choice questions appear randomly. Question content focuses on haiku, limerick, free verse, traditional poetry, the use of punctuation, and rhyme. Student results are displayed upon completion of the quiz. B. Mysteries The students are introduced to the genre of mystery fiction. The characteristics are examined and students proceed to complete activities. As an application, a performance task to be completed off-screen is included in the manual. Tutorial Students learn some characteristics of the mystery and read a model of a mystery. The writing process is followed to develop a character portrait which incorporates words to create special effects. Focus is placed on paragraph organization and the use of a thesaurus. The portrait is published to “My Collection.” Application Students apply their knowledge and skills to complete a performance task off-screen. In the role of detectives they are presented with a problem. Students solve the mystery and compose a narrative that exemplifies the characteristics of mystery fiction. An oral presentation concludes the task. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 101 C. Writing about Me The students are introduced to the personal narrative. The characteristics are examined and students proceed to complete activities. The culmination is a performance task which leads to the creation of a personal narrative. Tutorial and Majority Activity Students read a model of a personal narrative and examine its characteristics. They are guided through the writing process to create their own personal narrative. Focus is placed point of view and selection of words which appeal to the senses. Students publish the completed personal narrative to “My Collection.” D. Writing for Real Life Students proceed through a tutorial which focuses on writing business letters requesting information and on writing instructions to completion of on-screen activities. Tutorial The student guide is preparing to attend summer camp. Within this context a business letter requesting information is written. Focus is placed on correct form and style. After receiving a reply, the student guide writes instructions on how to pack for camp as an assist to other campers. Activities Students apply their knowledge and skills in the completion of two tasks: a. Can You Help? - the task of writing a business letter requesting information for a school project; b. How to Pack Groceries - a simulation activity leading students to write a set of instructions. Students publish their writing to “My Collection”. E. Fairy Tales The students are introduced to the genre of fairy tales. The characteristics are examined and students proceed to complete activities. The culmination is the creation of a fairy tale. Tutorial and Major Activity Students learn the characteristics of fairy tales and read a model. Focus is placed on sentence structure, including simple and compound sentence types. Character, setting, and plot are considered. Organization of a longer narrative is the focus of the writing process in which students apply their knowledge to create a fairy tale, which is published to “My Collection.” Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 102 Performance Tasks You’re a poet and you know It!: Celebrating the Community in Poetry The task is described in the manual. A blackline master for student use is included. The rubrics for the group process and the product are provided. Mysteries: The Detective’s Log The task is described in the manual. A blackline master for student use is included. The rubrics for oral presentation and the product are provided. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 103 Teacher Notes Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: You’re a poet and you know it! Celebrating the Community in Poetry 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 4 or 5 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing purposes and to assemble the final product. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. These may include: staying on task contributing ideas listening actively encouraging others fulfilling the assigned role. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation and as well the writing process. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least two selections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes may to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their poetry and illustrations using accessible word processing and draw programs. 7. Consider sharing completed products with community officials. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 104 Student Directions Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: You’re a poet and you know it! Celebrating the Community in Poetry Your community is celebrating its 100th anniversary. To remember the occasion the mayor has asked your group to produce a collection of poetry, complete with illustrations. However, there are some requirements: 1. The cover of the collection must include the name of your city or town. 2. Different types of poetry must be included. Each author should include a minimum of two poems. 3. The poetry should celebrate the people, the places, and the events in the community. 4. The illustrations can be produced by hand or on the computer. When you meet with your group you should: plan the poetry you will include in the collection, decide on what needs to be done, and assign the various tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the poetry has been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Examine the rubric before you start. It provides detail on how your collection will be graded. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 105 Rubric for Product The Writing Room: You’re a poet and you know it! Grade 5: Celebrating the Community through Poetry Name: ____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Requirements Organization of Ideas Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Meets few of the requirements Meets some of the requirements Meets most of the requirements Meets all of the requirements Consists of a few simple ideas Consists of a variety of simple ideas Consists of a ideas of some complexity Consists of complex ideas Variety of topics (people, places, events) Includes limited variety Includes some variety Includes considerable variety Includes extensive variety Form for the specific types of poems Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates limited precision Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity Purpose is somewhat clear Purpose is clear Purpose is clear and confident Word Choice: rhythm and rhyme; poetic devices, descriptive words Language is simple Language is clear and somewhat complex Language is Complex and carefully chosen Language is complex, insightful and effective Evidence of different types of poems: traditional, free verse, haiku, limerick Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence High degree of evidence Organization Limited organization Some organization Considerable organization Thorough organization Content/ Ideas Communication Date: _________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 106 Rubric for Group Process The Writing Room: You’re a poet and you know it! Grade 5: Celebrating the Community in Poetry Name: ____________________________ Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Date: _________________ Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few ideas Some worthwhile ideas Several worthwhile ideas Several insightful ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 107 Teacher Notes Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Mysteries The Detective’s Story 1. This task is completed in partners. Students work in pairs to examine the details of the mystery and arrive at a solution. Together they plan the story and create a draft. Finally they revise, edit, and proofread. Together they plan, rehearse, and make their oral presentation. 2. Students may require instruction on effective oral presentation skills. These may include: a. b. c. d. e. meeting the requirements of the presentation using appropriate words and structures using tone of voice and gestures to help clarify meaning speaking clearly showing respect for a presenter through active listening 3. The oral presentation can be assessed individually for each student. A rubric is included. 4. Effective teamwork skills can be assessed during the process. The instrument used in the performance task “Celebrating Community in Poetry” can be adapted for this purpose. 5. The product can be assessed as a whole using the scoring rubric included. 6. It is recommended that the rubrics be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubrics may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task. 7. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their mystery using accessible word processing programs. 8. Students make their oral presentations following completion of the mystery story. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 108 Student Directions Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Mysteries The Detective’s Story You and your partner are presented with this problem. Last night you completed a homework assignment and placed it in your backpack to take to school. Now it is missing. Discuss the problem and arrive at a solution. Add whatever details you wish. Review the characteristics of mystery fiction and follow the writing process to write a narrative account together. Make an oral presentation to your class. First read your story. Then explain why you think your story is an example of mystery fiction. Both partners must be involved in the reading and the explanation. You should plan and rehearse before making your presentation. Examine the rubrics before you start. It provides detail on how your story and presentation will be graded. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 109 Rubric for Oral Presentation The Writing Room: Mysteries Grade 5: The Detective’s Story Name: ___________________________ Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Meets the requirements of the presentation Several components missing Few components missing Components present Components dealt with thoroughly Uses appropriate words and structures Seldom uses appropriate words and structures Occasionally uses appropriate words and structures Often uses appropriate words and structures Uses appropriate words and structures with precision and insight Uses tone of voice and gestures to help clarify meaning Demonstrates limited clarity and precision Demonstrates some clarity and precision Demonstrates considerable clarity and precision Demonstrates a high degree of clarity and precision Speaks clearly Seldom speaks clearly Occasionally speaks clearly Frequently speaks clearly Always speaks clearly Shows respect for a presenter through active listening Demonstrates limited respect Demonstrates some respect Demonstrates consistent respect Demonstrates consistent respect and encourages presenter Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 110 Rubric for Product The Writing Room: Mysteries Grade 5: The Detective’s Story Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Meets few of the requirements Meets some of the requirements Meets most of the requirements Meets all of the requirements Consists of a few simple ideas Consists of a variety of simple ideas Consists of a ideas of some complexity Consists of complex ideas Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity Purpose is somewhat clear Purpose is clear Purpose is clear and confident Details Few details are provided Some details are provided Considerable detail is provided Thorough detail is provided Point of view Inconsistent point of view Somewhat consistent point of view Consistent point of view Consistent and effective point of view Word choice Language is simple Language is clear and somewhat complex Language is Complex and carefully chosen Organization – sequence of events Limited evidence of sequence Events somewhat in sequence Events consistently in sequence Language is complex, insightful and effective Events sequenced in an effective manner Logic Limited logic Somewhat logical Consistently logical Logical and effective Structure (beginning, middle, end) Writing process Limited structure Some structure Considerable structure Highly structured Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Requirements of detective fiction Content/ Ideas Communication Organization of Ideas Application Date: _________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Level 4 111 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications, which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Collection”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Segment You’re a poet and you know it! Mysteries Writing About Me Writing for Real Life Fairy Tales Software Activity Assessment Practice on Simile Skills Software tracking Practice on Alliteration Software tracking Writing a Haiku Checklist Limerick Fun Checklist Picture This Checklist Punctuation Challenge Software tracking It’s All in the Order Software tracking A Couple of Rhymes Finding Clues Software tracking Software tracking Rules Chart Software tracking Character Portrait Checklist Personal Narrative Scoring rubric Can You Help? Scoring rubric How to Pack Groceries Fairy Tale Scoring rubric Scoring rubric Manual Performance Assessment Task Celebrating the Community through Poetry Rubric for Product Rubric for Group work The Detective’s Story Software Quiz Software tracking Focus on skills and knowledge related to: Haiku Limerick Use of punctuation Simile Alliteration Rubric for Product Rubric for Oral Presentation Personal Narrative Can You Help? Scoring rubric How to Pack Groceries Fairy Tale Scoring rubric Scoring rubric Scoring rubric The rubric for the summative assessment on the collection of writing can be found in the manual. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 112 Checklist The Writing Room: You’re a poet and you know it! Grade 5: Limerick Fun Name: ____________________ Category Content Form Word choice Criteria Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Is the poem light-hearted or humorous? Is there a twist to the ending? Are there 5 lines? Do lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme? Do lines 3 and 4 rhyme? Do lines 1, 2, and 5 have the same rhythm? Do lines 3 and 4 have the same rhythm? Are the words lighthearted? Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 113 Checklist The Writing Room: You’re a poet and you know it! Grade 5: Picture This Name: _____________________________ Category Criteria Content Could a person identify the picture on which the poem is based? Form Does the form follow either a traditional poem or free verse? Word choice Does the poem paint a picture? Have words which appeal to the senses been used? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 114 Checklist The Writing Room: Mysteries Grade 5: Character Portrait Name: ________________________ Category Criteria Content Can the reader identify the person being described? Is there detail about the personality and appearance of the person? Is information included to support the details? Form Is there an introduction, body, and conclusion? Word choice Are words chosen to create special effects? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 115 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Writing About Me Grade 5: Personal Narrative Name: _____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points 3 Points 2 Points 1 Point Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Complex ideas, supported by extensive detail Purpose is clear, precise and detailed. Central idea is complex and organized logically. Few/no errors Ideas are somewhat complex supported by considerable detail Purpose is clear and precise. Central idea is organized logically. A few minor errors Ideas are simple and supported by limited detail Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Several minor Central idea is errors and/or simple and communicated omissions in a mechanical way. Ideas are simple with little or no detail Purpose is unclear. Central idea is not developed. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Several major errors and/or omissions 116 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Fairy Tales Grade 5: A Fairy Tale Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 Consists of complex ideas. Ideas are complex. Thorough knowledge of the form. Purpose is clear, precise and detailed. Somewhat complex ideas. Ideas are precise. Considerable knowledge of the form. Purpose is clear. 4 Points 3 Points Ideas are limited in complexity. Ideas are simple. Some knowledge of the form. Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Simple ideas Ideas are limited. 2 Points 1 Point Little or no knowledge of the form. Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Plot is complex and organized logically. Few/no errors Plot is organized logically. A few minor errors Plot is simple Several minor and errors and/or communicated omissions in a mechanical way. Plot is not developed. Several major errors and/or omissions Purpose is unclear. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 117 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Writing for Real Life Grade 5: How to Pack Groceries Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points 3 Points 2 Points Complex The purpose is directions, clear, precise supported by and detailed. extensive detail. Effective graphics support writing. Directions organized logically and effectively Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Few/no errors Comprehensive directions supported by considerable detail. Purpose is clear Directions and precise. organized logically Accurate graphics support writing. A few minor errors Straight forward directions with some detail. Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Directions display some organization. Several minor errors and/or omissions Directions are inaccurate or incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions Limited graphics 1 Point Directions lack detail. Inaccurate or no graphics. Format of letter has major errors. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 118 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Writing for Real Life Grade 5: Can You Help? Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points Letter consists of complex ideas, supported by facts and/or opinion. The purpose is clear, precise and detailed. Letter consists of somewhat complex ideas with supporting detail. Purpose is clear and precise. Letter consists of simple ideas supported by some detail. Purpose demonstrates some clarity. 3 Points 2 Points Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Central idea is complex and organized logically. Few/no errors Central idea is organized logically. A few minor errors Central idea is simple and communicated in a mechanical way. Several minor errors and/or omissions Central idea is not developed. Several major errors and/or omissions Format of letter is accurate, precise and effective. Format of letter is accurate. Format of letter has minor errors. 1 Point Letter consists of a few simple ideas with little or no detail. Purpose is unclear Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 119 Rubric for Assessment of “My Collection” – Grade 5 Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Communication Organization Conventions Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge of: Forms, Techniques, Structures Demonstrates limited knowledge Demonstrates some knowledge Demonstrates considerable knowledge Demonstrates thorough knowledge Complexity of ideas Uses a few simple ideas Uses some related, somewhat complex ideas Uses complex ideas with some consistency Consistently and insightfully uses complex ideas Specific purposes and audiences Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates considerable precision Demonstrates extensive precision Vocabulary and work choice Language is simple Language is clear and somewhat complex Language is complex and carefully chosen Language is complex, insightful and effective Variety of sentence structures Uses a limited variety Uses some variety Uses a variety with considerable control Uses a variety with confident command Appropriate and accurate structure of paragraphs, poems, ads and longer narratives Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence High degree of evidence Organization Limited organization Some organization Considerable organization Thorough and controlled organization Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Contains several major errors and/or omissions Contains several minor errors Contains few minor and no major errors Almost errorfree Use of appropriate formats Major format errors Minor format errors Generally accuracy in format Complete accuracy in format Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 120 3. THE WRITING ROOM b) Level 2 - Grade 6 Overview Segments focus on the writing of poetry, narrative fiction, science fiction, and on real-life writing which includes instructions and business letters of invitation. Students save their writing to “My Collection” which can be printed for integration within the classroom language program. Structure The Writing Room Poetry Can! Story Telling Tutorial 6 Activities Quiz Tutorial 3 Activities Quiz Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Writing for Real Life Tutorial 2 Activities Science Fiction Tutorial with Activities Performance Task 121 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The segments within the Writing Room align with the English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students adjust their use of spoken, written and visual language (e.g. conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative and critical members of a variety of literary communities. 6. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 122 Learning Outcomes Each segment of the Writing Room is cross-referenced to the expectations for writing, reading, and oral and visual communication. Student achievement of the expectations is assessed both in the software and through the use of instruments included in the manual. Expectations Poetry Can Story Telling Science Fiction Writing for Real Life √ √ √ √ √ √ Writing (W) W1 W11 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences revise and edit work, seeking feedback from others and focusing on content, organization, and appropriateness of vocabulary for audience use and spell correctly the appropriate vocabulary produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media use a variety of sentence types and sentence structures appropriate for their purposes organize information to convey a central idea, using welldeveloped paragraphs proofread and correct final drafts, focusing on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and conventions of style use verb tenses consistently throughout a piece of writing W12 use a colon before a list and after a greeting W17 select and use words to create special effects W20 use subordinate clauses correctly W3 W4 W5 W6 W7 W8 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Reading (R, RE ) R1 R8 R10 R11 R17 R21 R22 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes identify the elements of a story and explain how they relate to each other identify a writer’s perspective or character’s motivation identify different forms of writing and describe their characteristics use punctuation to help understand what is read identify descriptive and figurative language in literary texts and discuss how it enhances understanding of people, places and customs alter words, forms and sentence patterns to create new versions of texts for a variety of purposes Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 123 Expectations Poetry Can Story Telling Science Fiction Writing for Real Life Oral and Visual Communication (OV) PT Performance Task located in the manual OV3 ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information OV4 contribute and work constructively in groups PT PT OV8 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately speak correctly, observing common grammatical rules such as subject-verb agreement, noun-pronoun agreement and consistency of verb tense use tone of voice and gestures to enhance the message and help convince or persuade listeners in conversations, discussions or presentations assess own contributions to group process, set personal goals for enhancing work with others and monitor group process using checklists speak clearly when making presentations PT PT demonstrate critical listening and viewing behaviours and show respect for the presenter identify descriptive and figurative language in oral and media texts use constructive strategies in small-group discussions PT 0V10 OV11 OV12 OV13 OV14 0V20 0V22 PT PT PT PT PT PT PT Components There are four segments in the Writing Room: A. B. C. D. Poetry Can Story Telling Writing for Real Life Science Fiction Each segment provides a tutorial with a series of activities, application activities or performance tasks, and assessment of student achievement of the expectations. In some cases the assessment is tracked by the software; in other cases a detailed assessment instrument is provided in the manual for teacher use. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 124 A. Poetry Can! Tutorial Students are led through a modeling process as the student guide drafts, revises and edits a free verse and a traditional poem. They listen to the models as a means to exemplify the aural aspect of poetry. Development of skills and knowledge focuses on word choice, onomatopoeia, punctuation and repetition. Students practise identifying and developing phrases which exemplify onomatopoeia and selecting appropriate words. Application Six activities are available. Where models are provided, students have the option of listening to the poetry. a. Story Poetry: Students examine narrative poetry, learn the elements of the poetic type and are guided through the writing process in the creation of a narrative poem. The students publish to “My Collection”. b. Song Lyrics: Students examine song lyrics, learn the particular elements, and are guided through the writing process in the creation of song lyrics. They select the most appropriate music for the lyrics. Rhythm and the use of a chorus are a focus of this activity. The students publish to “My Collection”. c. Write a Cinquain: Students examine a model of a cinquain, learn the features and structure of this type of poetry, and are led through the writing process in the creation of a cinquain. The students publish to “My Collection”. d. Visual Poetry: Students view a visual poem. They manipulate colour, font, and print size to observe the effects. They are provided with directions to create a visual poem either using other software or by drawing it freehand. e. Listen Up: Students act as critics to analyze how effectively poetry is read aloud. Feedback is provided on screen. f. Word Fare: Students select the most appropriate words to fill in the blanks. Focus is placed on words which create pictures. Quiz Poetry Pop-up Quiz: Multiple-choice questions appear randomly. Students uncover rectangles on a game screen to view a picture. Question content focuses on cinquain, limerick, narrative poetry, chorus, stanza, visual poetry, onomatopoeia, the use of punctuation, and the stages of the writing process. Student results are displayed upon completion of the quiz. B. Story Telling Tutorial An animated sequence leads into an examination on first and third person point of view. Focus is placed on sentence variety through the use of simple, compound and complex sentences. Instruction is included on sentence fragments and run-on errors with student practice incorporated. The tutorial concludes with proofreading for spelling, punctuation and grammar. Activities Three activities on composing narratives are included. Focus is placed on point of view and proofreading. Students publish their writing to “My Collection”. a. The Whole Story - writing a narrative based on a photo prompt Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 125 b. Another Point of View - retelling the animated sequence in the tutorial from another point of view c. From Third to First - rewriting a story originally written in third person using first person point of view Quiz Multiple-choice questions appear randomly. As students answer questions correctly, a dog moves along a path and arrives at the dog house where food is waiting. Question content focuses on point of view, sentence structure and sentence errors. Student results are displayed upon completion of the quiz. C. Writing for Real Life Students proceed through a tutorial which focuses on writing business letters of invitation and on writing instructions. Tutorial The student guide is assisting to plan a Career Day. Within this context a business letter inviting a speaker is written. Focus is placed on correct form and style, and the use of correct verb tense sequence. After receiving a reply, the student guide reviews the format and style for writing instructions. Activities Students apply their knowledge and skills in the completion of two activities: a. Classroom Visitor - the task of writing a business letter inviting a speaker from an environmental agency to make a presentation to the class; b. How to Wash a Car- instructions for fellow students who are holding a car wash as a fund-raiser to purchase gifts for speakers on Career Day. D. Science Fiction The students are introduced to the genre of science fiction. The characteristics are examined and students proceed to complete activities. A performance task to be completed off-screen is included in the manual. Tutorial and Activities Through an introduction of a science fiction story, students examine the features of the genre. The activities are integrated with the tutorial. Students describe a space craft and a person, create an alien menu, and write a postcard. Performance Task Collaboratively students decide on the parameters and details for a science fiction story and individually compose entries in the spacecraft captain’s log. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 126 Performance Tasks Poetry Can!: The Poet’s Cafè The task is described in the manual. A blackline master for student use is provided. The rubrics for oral presentation and the product are included. Science Fiction: The Captain’s Log The task is described in the manual. A blackline master for student use is included. The rubrics for the group process and the product are provided. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 127 Teacher Notes Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Poetry Can! Poetry Café 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3 or 4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing purposes and to plan and rehearse the presentation. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. They may include: a. staying on task b. contributing ideas c. listening actively d. encouraging others e. fulfilling the assigned role The rubric for the grade 6 task, The Captain’s Log, could be adapted for assessing the group work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation as well as the writing process. A rubric is included to assess oral presentation skills. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least two selections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubrics be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubrics may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their poetry on posters with illustrations using accessible word processing and draw programs. 7. Consider having students give their oral presentations to an audience other than the class. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 128 Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Poetry Can! Poetry Café Your group has been requested to conduct a Poetry Café. At the café original poetry is displayed and read. Your presentation should include a variety of types of poems. Each person in your group must: compose and perform at least two poems create a illustrated poster of at least one of the poems. Your poetry presentation will focus on each individual reading his/her poems. You may wish to add music or sound effects. When you meet with your group you should: plan the poetry you will include in the presentation, plan the display of posters decide on what needs to be done, and assign the various tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the poetry has been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Once all poetry and the posters have been completed you should meet as a group to rehearse before your presentation. Examine the rubrics before you start. It provides detail on how your poetry and oral presentation will be graded. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 129 Rubric for Product The Writing Room: Poetry Can! Grade 6: Poetry Café Name: __________________________ Category Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Meets few of the requirements. Meets some of the requirements. Meets most of the requirements. Meets all of the requirements. Consists of a few simple ideas. Consists of a variety of simple ideas. Consists of a ideas of some complexity. Consists of complex ideas. Form for the specific types of poems. Demonstrates limited precision. Demonstrates some precision. Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates limited precision Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity. Purpose is somewhat clear. Purpose is clear. Purpose is clear and confident. Word Choice: rhythm and rhyme; poetic devices, descriptive words Language is simple. Language is clear and somewhat complex . Language is Complex and carefully chosen. Language is complex, insightful and effective. Organization of Ideas Evidence of different types of poems: traditional, free verse, narrative poetry, song lyrics, cinquain, visual poetry. Limited evidence and accuracy. Some evidence and accuracy. Considerable evidence and accuracy. High degree of evidence and accuracy. Application Writing process Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost errorfree Knowledge/ Reasoning Criteria Date: _________________ Requirements Content/ Ideas Communication Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 130 Rubric for Oral Presentation The Writing Room: Poetry Can! Grade 6: Poetry Café Name: ___________________________ Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Several components missing Few components missing Components present Components dealt with thoroughly Several digressions Some digressions Mainly on topic Directly focussed on topic Uses appropriate words and structures Seldom uses appropriate words and structures Occasionally uses appropriate words and structures Often uses appropriate words and structures Uses appropriate words and structures with precision and insight Uses tone of voice and gestures to help clarify meaning Demonstrates limited clarity and precision Demonstrates some clarity and precision Demonstrates considerable clarity and precision Demonstrates a high degree of clarity and precision Speaks clearly Seldom speaks clearly Occasionally speaks clearly Frequently speaks clearly Always speaks clearly Shows respect for a presenter through active listening Demonstrates limited respect Demonstrates some respect Demonstrates consistent respect Demonstrates consistent respect and encourages presenter Meets the requirements of the presentation Level 3 Level 4 Content . Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 131 Teacher Notes Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Science Fiction The Captain’s Log 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3 or 4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing purposes and to plan publication of the final product. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. They may include: a. staying on task b. contributing ideas c. listening actively d. encouraging others e. fulfilling the assigned role f. asking and answering questions The rubric for assessing the group work has been included. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation as well as the writing process. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that the individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute an entry in the log, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubrics be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubrics may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their log with illustrations using accessible word processing and draw programs. 7. Consider options for students to publish their writing to a broader audience. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 132 Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Writing Room Segment: Science Fiction The Captain’s Log You are a member of a group of space travelers. Unfortunately your captain has gone missing and your group must maintain the captain’s log. Each person is responsible for one entry. To plan the log your group must discuss the following and make some decisions: review the characteristics of science fiction structure the log by deciding on characters, technology, sequence of events, and setting Individually draft you log entry and then meet as a group to revise and edit. Decide on how your log will look. You may wish to add illustrations drawn by hand or by using a software program. Review the rubrics so that you will know how you will be graded on your group work and your writing. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 133 Rubric for Product The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 5: The Captain’s Log Name: _____________________________ Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Communication Organization of Ideas Application Criteria Level 1 Date: _________________ Level 2 Level 3 Meets most of the requirements. Level 4 Requirements of science fiction. Meets few of the requirements. Meets some of the requirements Content/ Ideas Consists of a few simple ideas. Consists of a variety of simple ideas. Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity. Purpose is somewhat clear. Purpose is clear. Purpose is clear and confident. Details Few details are provided. Some details are provided. Considerable detail is provided. Thorough detail is provided. Point of view Inconsistent point of view. Somewhat consistent point of view. Consistent point of view. Consistent and effective point of view. Word choice Language is simple. Language is clear and somewhat complex . Language is Complex and carefully chosen. Language is complex, insightful and effective. Organization – sequence of events Limited evidence of sequence Events somewhat in sequence Events consistently in sequence. Events sequenced in an effective manner. Logic Limited logic Somewhat logical Consistently logical Logical and effective Structure (beginning, middle, end) Limited structure Some structure Considerable structure Highly structured Writing process Limited evidence Some evidence Considerable evidence Thorough evidence Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Many major and minor errors Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Consists of a ideas of some complexity. Meets all of the requirements. Consists of complex ideas. 134 Rubric for Group Process The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 6: The Captain’s Log Name: ____________________ Criteria Level 1 Date: _________________ Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few worthwhile Some worthwhile ideas Several worthwhile ideas Several insightful ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 135 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment and evaluation instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Collection”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Software Segment Poetry Can! Activity Assessment Story Poetry Checklist Song Lyrics Checklist Manual Performance Task Poet’s Café Assessment Rubric for Product Rubric for Oral Presentation Story Telling Write a Cinquain Checklist Visual Poetry Checklist Listen Up Software tracking The Whole Story Scoring rubric Another Point of View From third to First Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Software Quiz Quiz Content Focus on skills and knowledge related to: Cinquain Onomatopoeia Stanza Writing Process Narrative poetry Quiz Content Focus on skills and knowledge related to: First and third person point of view Simple, compound and complex sentences Phrases and clauses (dependent and independent) Run-on and sentence fragment errors 136 Software Segment Writing for Real Life Science Fiction Tutorial Assessment Classroom Visitor Scoring rubric How to Wash a Car Scoring rubric Description of the Spacecraft Checklist Description of a Person Checklist Manual Performance Task The Captain’s Log Assessment Software Quiz Rubric for Product Rubric for Group work Checklist Wish You Were Here Checklist Let’s Do Lunch Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 137 Checklist The Writing Room: Poetry Can! Grade 6: Story Poetry Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Content Does the poem tell a story? Form Is the poem divided into stanzas? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Is there rhyme and rhythm? Word choice Are there poetic devices such as alliteration, simile, or onomatopoeia? Comments: _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 138 Checklist The Writing Room: Poetry Can! Grade 6: Song Lyrics Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Content Does the poem have a message? Form Is there repetition? Is there a chorus? Can the poem be put to music? Word choice Are there poetic devices such as alliteration, simile, or onomatopoeia? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 139 Checklist The Writing Room: Poetry Can! Grade 6: Write a Cinquain Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Content Does the poem have a definite topic ? Are there supporting details? Form Does line 1 state the topic in one word? Does line 2 contain a description in 2 words? Does line 3 contain an action about the topic in 3 words? Does line 4 state a feeling about the topic in 4 words? Does line 5 have a one word synonym for the topic? Word choice Do the words appeal to the sense of sight and hearing? Are the words lively and precise? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 140 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Story Telling Grade 6: From Third to First, Another Point of View, The Whole Story Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points Complex ideas with extensive detail The purpose is clear, precise and detailed. 2 Points 1 Point /4 Few/no errors Point of view is clear, consistent and precise. Thorough knowledge of narrative form 3 Points Plot is effectively and logically structured. Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) Somewhat complex ideas with considerable detail Purpose is clear and precise. Somewhat complex ideas with minimal detail Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Simple ideas with minimal or no detail Purpose is unclear. Plot is logically structured. A few minor errors Point of view is clear and consistent. Plot is structured with some logic. Several minor errors and/or omissions Point of view is somewhat clear but may be inconsistent. Plot is not developed. Several major errors and/or omissions Point of view is unclear and inconsistent. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 141 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Real-Life Writing Grade 6: How to Wash a Car Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points Complex directions, supported by extensive detail The purpose is clear, precise and detailed. Conventions (spelling, grammar & punctuation) /4 Directions organized logically and effectively Few/no errors Directions organized logically A few minor errors Directions display some organization Several minor errors and/or omissions Directions are inaccurate or incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions Effective graphics support writing. 3 Points 2 Points Comprehensive directions supported by considerable detail. Purpose is clear and precise. Straight -forward directions with some detail Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Accurate graphics support writing Limited graphics 1 Point Directions lack detail. Inaccurate or no graphics Format of letter has major errors. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 142 Scoring Rubric The Writing Room: Writing for Real Life Grade 6: Classroom Visitor Name: ____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 points 3 Points 2 Points Letter consists of complex ideas, supported by facts and/or opinion. The purpose is clear, precise and detailed. Letter consists of somewhat complex ideas with supporting detail. Purpose is clear and precise. Letter consists of simple ideas supported by some detail. Purpose demonstrates some clarity. Letter consists of a few simple ideas with little or no detail. /4 Central idea is complex and organized logically. Few/no errors Central idea is organized logically. A few minor errors Central idea is simple and communicated in a mechanical way. Several minor errors and/or omissions Central idea is not developed. Several major errors and/or omissions Format of letter is accurate and precise. Format of letter is accurate. Format of letter has minor errors. 1 Point Conventions (spelling, grammar & punctuation) Purpose is unclear. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 143 Checklist The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 6: Description of a Spacecraft Name: ____________________________ Category Content Form Word choice Criteria Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Does the paragraph describe a spacecraft? Is there evidence of technology? Is there sufficient detail for the reader to picture the spacecraft? Does the paragraph include an introduction, body and conclusion? Are there descriptive words which appeal to the senses? Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 144 Checklist The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 6: Description of a Person Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Does the paragraph describe a person? Content Is there sufficient detail for the reader to picture the person? Are there details about personality? Form Word choice Does the paragraph include an introduction, body and conclusion? Are there descriptive words which appeal to the senses? Comments: _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 145 Checklist The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 6: Wish You Were Here Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Content Does the message reflect the characteristics of science fiction? Form Is the postcard form used? Word choice Is there detail about the event and how the character felt? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 146 Checklist The Writing Room: Science Fiction Grade 6: Let’s Do Lunch Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Content Does the content reflect the characteristics of science fiction? Form Is the menu form used? Word choice Is there descriptive detail about the foods on the menu? Date: _________________ Yes Somewhat No Comments: _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 147 Rubric for Assessment of “My Collection” – Grade 6 Category Knowledge/ Reasoning Communication Organization Conventions Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge of: Forms, Techniques, Structures Demonstrates limited knowledge Demonstrates some knowledge Demonstrates considerable knowledge Demonstrates thorough knowledge Complexity of ideas Uses a few simple ideas Uses some related, somewhat complex ideas Uses complex ideas of with some consistency Consistently and insightfully uses complex ideas Specific purposes and audiences Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates considerable precision Demonstrates extensive precision Vocabulary and word choice Language is simple Language is clear and somewhat complex Language is Complex and carefully chosen Language is complex, insightful and effective Variety of sentence structures Appropriate and accurate structure of paragraphs, poems, ads and longer narratives Uses a limited variety Uses some variety Limited evidence Some evidence Uses a variety with considerable control Considerable evidence Uses a variety with confident command High degree of evidence Organization Limited organization Some organization Considerable organization Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Contains several major errors and/or omissions Contains several minor errors Contains few minor and no major errors Thorough and controlled organization Almost errorfree Use of appropriate formats Major format errors Minor format errors Generally accuracy in format Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Complete accuracy in format 148 C. Technology Applications Student activities and tasks provide many opportunities for students to use word processing software. As part of the writing process on the computer students have access to a spellchecker. Students manipulate print and colour in the Poetry Can!. Specific instances where other programs, such as MS Publisher and Paint, and the use of clipart are located: 1. You’re a poet and you know it! Grade 5 Performance Task: production of an illustrated collection of poetry 2. Writing for Real Life, Grade 5, How to Pack Groceries: production of a set of instructions, which include graphics 3. Poetry Can, Grade 6 Performance Task: production of an illustrated poetry poster 4. Poetry Can, Grade 6 Activity, Visual Poetry: production of a visual poem 5. Real-Life Writing, Grade 6, How to Wash a Car: production of a set of instructions, which includes graphics 6. Science Fiction, Grade 6, Wish You Were Here and Let’s Do Lunch: production of a postcard and menu D. Glossary Alliteration - repetition of initial consonant sounds in words in a sequence Body - the main part of a business letter or other piece of writing where the information, details, and/or message are provided Chorus - words in a poem which are repeated at regular intervals Cinquain a five-line poem with a set structure: line 1 - one-word title; line 2 - two-word description of the title; line 3 - three words describing the action of the title; line 4 - four words describing a feeling about the title; line 5 - a one-word synonym for the title Clause – a group of related words which contains a subject and a predicate Dependent clause – a clause that presents an incomplete thought and cannot stand alone as a sentence Independent clause - a clause that presents a complete thought and can stand as a sentence Complimentary closing – the word ‘’sincerely’ which appears in a business letter between the body and the signature Conflict - a problem to be overcome; types include character against character, character against nature, character against society, character against himself/herself Coordinate conjunction – a connecting word such as ánd’, ‘but’ or ór’ which is used to join two words, phrases or clauses which are equal or are the same type Fairy tale – a narrative which deals with a problem, often begins ”Once upon a time”, often ends “”happily ever after”, has realistic dialogue, and usually teaches a lesson. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 149 Fragment sentence error – not a complete thought; lacking a subject and/or predicate; a dependent clause Free verse - a poem with no regular rhythm or rhyme scheme Haiku - a three-line poem about nature with a specific structure; line 1 has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables, and line 3 has 5 syllables Heading- the letter writer’s address and the date on which the letter was written Inside address – the name of the business to which the letter is sent and its address Limerick - a five-line humorous poem with a defined rhythm and rhyme (lines 1, 2 and 5 are longer and rhyme; lines 3 and 4 are shorter and rhyme) Lyrics - the words to a song Mystery fiction - a narrative which presents a problem to solved by a detective with clues provided and which ends with the solution Onomatopoeia - the use of a word whose sound suggests its meaning Personal narrative - a story about yourself, written using the first person “I” in which you share your thoughts, feelings, and experiences Phrase – a group of related words which lacks a subject, or predicate, or both Point of view – the vantage point from which a story is told; i.e. first person or third person Predicate – the part of the sentence which tells what the subject is doing or says something about the subject Run-on sentence error – an error resulting when two sentences are joined without a coordinate conjunction Salutation – the name of the person to whom the letter is written Science fiction - a narrative set in the future which includes made-up technology and frequently includes elements from another planet Sentence types: Simple – a sentence which expresses one idea; contains one subject and one predicate either or both of which may be compound; has one independent clause Compound – a sentence which expresses more than one main idea; main ideas are joined by coordinate conjunctions; has two or more independent clauses Complex – a sentence which expresses one main idea (independent clause) and one or more lesser important ideas (dependent clause) Simile - a comparison of two items using ‘like’ or ‘as’ Stanza - a division of a poem Subject – the element of the sentence, usually a noun or pronoun, about which something is said or which performs an action Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 150 Tense – the ‘time’ of a verb; i.e. present, past, or future Thesaurus - a collection of words and their synonyms Traditional poetry - poetry with a defined rhythm and rhyme Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 151 B. THE LIBRARY a) Level 1 – Grade 5 Overview The Library focuses on the strand of reading. Students are greeted by a student guide posing as a librarian and are invited to visit a school library where they choose activities that are based on fiction and non-fiction selections. Fiction selections consist of folktales, legends and narratives while the non-fiction selections provide samples of biographies and research articles. In addition, students are able to publish written reports based on reading selections, to a Read-To-Write portfolio that can be utilized for classroom purposes. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 152 Structure The Library is comprised of four segments. Folktale Features is a segment that guides students through the process of analyzing the characteristics of folktales. Legendary Journeys encourages students to explore the world of legends. Far-Out Fiction is a segment that focuses on the fiction genre and introduces concept mapping to students. Reality Check assists students in acquiring techniques for reading information and conducting research. In conjunction with the classroom report that has been assigned, students are provided with templates to assist them in both graphically organizing jot notes and research information, and organizing the final report. The Library Grade 5 Folktale Features Legendary Journeys Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Far-Out Fiction Reality Check 153 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English Each segment within the Library Location addresses the Standards for the English Language Arts, which is a project of the National Council of Teachers of English and International Reading Association. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works. 2. Students read a wide range of literature from many periods in many genres to build an understanding of the many dimensions (e.g. philosophical, ethical, aesthetic) of human experience. 3. Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions; and by posing problems. They gather evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g. print and non-print texts, artefacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 154 Learning Outcomes EXPECTATIONS Legendary Journeys Folktales Far-Out Fiction Reality Check organize information to convey a central idea, using well-developed paragraphs that focus on a main idea and give some relevant supporting details; W17 use levels of language appropriate to their purpose; Reading and Research (R, RE) √ √ √ √ R1 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Writing (W) W8 R2 R3 R4 R6 R7 R9 R10 R15 R18 R19 R21 RE1 RE2 RE3 RE4 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes; read independently, selecting appropriate reading strategies; explain their interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from their own knowledge and experience; decide on a specific purpose for reading, and select the material that they need from a variety of appropriate sources; describe a series of events in a written work using evidence from the work; make judgements and draw conclusions about the content in written materials, using evidence from the materials; use research skills; begin to identify a writer’s or character’s point of view; use specialized terms in different subject areas, as appropriate; locate and interpret information, using various conventions of formal texts; review personal collection of favourite literary texts and share responses to preferred forms; use textual cues (key ideas, sequence, table of contents, glossary) to construct and confirm meaning; organize information and ideas into categories using a variety of strategies; record information in own words; cite authors and titles alphabetically and provide publications, dates of sources; recognize gaps in the information gathered and locate additional information needed for a particular form, audience and purpose; assess information gained through the inquiry or research process; form personal conclusions and generate new questions for further inquiry or research; Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 155 The Culminating Performance Task The culminating performance task provides a summative vehicle for students to demonstrate their knowledge and skills related to the following expectations considered in the software. Strand Expectations READING AND RESEARCH R1 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes; R3 explain their interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from their own knowledge and experience; R4 decide on a specific purpose for reading, and select the material that they need from a variety of appropriate sources; R6 describe a series of events in a written work using evidence from the work; R7 make judgements and draw conclusions about the content in written materials, using evidence from the materials; R9 use research skills; R18 locate and interpret information, using various conventions of formal texts; R19 review personal collection of favourite literary texts and share responses to preferred forms; RE2 record information in own words; cite authors and titles alphabetically and provide publications, dates of sources; ORAL AND VISUAL COMMUNICATION communicate information, explain a variety of ideas and procedures, and follow the teacher’s OV1 OV2 OV3 OV9 OV12 OV20 instructions communicate a main idea about a topic and describe a sequence of events ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic contribute ideas to help solve problems, and listen and respond constructively to the ideas of others when working in a group summarize personal knowledge of a topic in categories to determine information needs Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 156 Components The Library consists of four main segments. They are: Legendary Journeys Folktale Features Far-Out Fiction Reality Check Each segment is structured in the following sequence: an introduction to the concepts that will be addressed in the segment; a tutorial and a series of activities that are designed to provide an understanding of concepts and skills; and activities for students to apply their skills and knowledge to additional readings. All segments include tools that students can use for assistance as they read. These tools are represented as symbols in the software and include: A book: students can click on this symbol to read or reread a story; A thumb: students can use this symbol to follow along with the audio; the thumb is placed over the words as the student reads; A coloured rectangle: students can use the rectangle to read the story in chunks. Each paragraph appears with a rectangle around it to assist students in focusing on smaller chunks of information. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 157 A. Legendary Journeys Students journey to the land of legends while learning about historical perspectives of people, events and lands of the past. They are introduced to the characteristics and organization of legends as they are read a legend selection. Students are guided through the process of organizing the information in the form of concept mapping and summarizing main story events. They also explore the sharing of personal points of view by comparing character’s personalities. Students are provided with a choice of legends to read which are based upon animal, people or nature legends. They create a written Story Report in the form of a story wheel which focuses on reporting the main characters, setting and plot. Students can publish the Read-To-Write portfolio as well as print for classroom use. B. Folktale Features Students are invited to explore the world of folktales while learning about people and lands of the past. As they read a sample folktale, students learn about the organization of a folktale (i.e. introduction, conflict/crisis, solution, conclusion, moral. Students are guided through the process of reading for information as they learn about the features of folktales. They are encouraged to study authors’ points of view and the use of character dialogue by completing activities and short quizzes. The main activity is the creation of a Story Report. Students select a folktale to read (e.g. Japanese, African, Scottish, Native American), follow the report template, and publish the report to the Read-To-Write portfolio or print for classroom use. C. Far-Out Fiction Students travel to the imaginary world of fiction where they are introduced to different genres relating to fiction such as historical, mystery and science fiction. While reading a sample fiction story, they explore the features of a fiction story (e.g. characters, setting and plot). Students study character traits and summarize story events by completing short quizzes. They learn how to use a dictionary to locate meanings of unfamiliar words. Features include: A study of the elements of a fiction story, including setting, main characters, plot and conclusion; Character Connections quiz: recall of main characters; Story Events Plotting activity: demonstrates the plotting of main events following the fiction format which includes introduction, main events, problem, solution and conclusion; Card game: students seriate the main events of a story; Word Wise: a short tutorial that instructs students how to use a dictionary; Then students select a fiction story to read. Stories are classified by reading difficulty: easy reading and challenging. Students write a story report based upon one of three formats: Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 158 Fiction Story Postcard guides students through the process of organizing information in postcard format while writing a postcard to a character in the story; Fiction Story Recipe Card focuses upon reporting on the main details of a fiction story, based on the format of a recipe card; Fiction Story Report generates a flowchart which students use to report the main details of the fiction story; Students have the option to publish their work to an electronic Read-To-Write portfolio as well as print for classroom use. D. Reality Check Students learn how to conduct research using non-fiction resources in this segment. They are guided through the research process: narrowing a topic, using various research resources (e.g. Dewey Decimal System, Card, Catalogue, Electronic Encyclopedia, Internet and Tables of Contents), pre-reading questions (5W-H Club), using keywords, topic maps, recording and sequencing information, summarizing and referencing resources using a bibliography. Students are introduced to using graphic organizers to plan for research and concept maps to organize jot notes. Short quizzes are included to assess student understanding of using the tools that are available for research in a library. In conjunction with the classroom report that has been assigned, students are provided with templates to assist them in compiling information for specific types of research. Research report templates include: Famous People Biographical Research Report Amazing Animals Research Report Invention Dimension Inventions Research Report Around The World Places Research Report Sports Report Activity Templates The following activity templates can be used to reinforce skills off screen. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Story Wheel Report Folktale Features Postcard Story Review Fiction Recipe Card Just the Facts Amazing Animals Report Famous Person Report Sports Report Invention Dimension Report Around the World Report Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 159 Grade 5 Story Wheel Report The Setting Main Character Title of Legend The Plot Directions: Complete each section of this story report with details from the story, in point form. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 160 Grade 5 Folktale Features Title of Folktale: ___________________ Nam e: ___________________ 1. Introduction: How does the story begin? ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 2. Crisis/Conflict: W hat is the conflict or problem? ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 3. Solution: How do the characters deal with the problem? ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 4. Conclusion: How does the story end? ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 161 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 Postal Code/Zip Code: ______________ Address: _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ Name: _________________________________ Grade 5 - Postcard Story Review 162 Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ From the Kitchen of ______________________________________________: ________________________________________________________________________________________ Bake with Solution: ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Combine with Problem: ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ Directions: (Plot . . . list the main events) _______________ _______________ Ingredients: (Characters) _______________ _______________ _______________ What’s Cooking? (Title) ____________________________________________ Grade 5 - Fiction Recipe Card Report 163 Grade 5 Just the Facts Title: _____________________ Author: ____________________ Setting: Characters _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ Main Events: ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Solution: Conclusion: ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 164 Grade 5 Amazing Animals Report Name: _____________ Date: _______________ Physical Appearance Habitat ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ __________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ _____________________ _____ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ Adaptations ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ Life Cycle (diagrams of each stage with labels) Additional Information (example: endangerment) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 165 Grade 5 , Grade 5 Famous Person Report Describe this person’s childhood and family life. __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Interests and Hobbies Accomplishments _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 166 Grade 5 Sports Report Name: _____________________ What is the sport that is covered by this book? ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ Name at least one athlete who has been especially successful at this sport and Date: __________________ Identify five facts that you have learned. ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ describe his or her accomplishments. ____________________________ Do you think that being involved in sports is ____________________________ a beneficial activity? Why or why not? ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ___________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ _______________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 167 Grade 5 Location: The Library Invention Dimension Report Name: ______________________________ Date: ________________ What is the name of the invention? What is the purpose of the invention? When and where was the invention created and by whom? How is the invention significant today? Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 168 Grade 5 Location: The Library Around the World Report Name: ______________________________ Name of Place and Location: Date: ________________ Sights to See: Things to Do: Entertainment: Weather: Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 169 Additional Tasks The tasks included in the manual encourage students to apply their skills and knowledge in extended, authentic contexts. Additional tasks include: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Legends: Storytelling Legends: Write Your Own Legend Folktale: Take a Trip Folktales: Write Your Own Folktale Far-Out Fiction: Interview an Author Far-Out Fiction: The Crime Research Report: Biomes of the World Research Report: Design a Poster Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 170 Grade 5 - Task Location: The Library Storytelling Legendary Journeys You are a professional storyteller and are retelling your favourite legend! Write a paragraph that explains the legend to children. Be sure to paint a picture that takes your audience on a magical journey including details about characters, setting and plot. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 171 Grade 5 Task Location: The Library Write Your Own Legend Legendary Journeys You are a pirate sailing the Atlantic Ocean in the year 1765. You and your crew are looking for buried treasures and sunken ships. Instead you encounter a sea serpent! Write a legend about a pirate who befriended a sea serpent. Create a story map to help you plan your story. It should include details about main characters, setting and plot. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 172 Grade 5 Task Location: The Library Take a Trip Folktale Features You are a tour guide! Create a travel brochure based on a faraway place you have visited in a folktale. Read a folktale. Decide on the location that you would like to research. Study travel brochures before you begin. Research the location of your choice. You can use a CD, the Internet, or library resources. Make jot notes based on the information you want to present. Collect maps and photos of the location. Location . . . Sites To See . . . Things To Do . . . Entertainment . . . Weather . . . Special Attractions Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 173 Grade 5 Location: The Library Write Your Own Folktale Folktale Features Begin by reading a few folktales. Make a chart comparing details such as: how the tales begin, where the tales take place, characters, and the problem in each tale. Write your own tale! Your story should have a beginning, middle and end. You can use your jot notes as a guide. Be sure to include the moral or lesson that needed to be learned. Don’t forget to choose a title for your story! Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 174 Grade 5 Location: The Library Interview an Author Far-Out Fiction Write a letter to your favourite author! What questions would you ask? Here are a few things you might want to mention: Your favourite book Number of books the author has published Inspiration for writing Family life Hobbies Web sites Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 175 Grade 5 Location: The Library The Crime Far-Out Fiction You are an author who loves to write mystery stories! Your mystery involves solving the case of the missing coin. A classmate brought a rare and valuable coin to school and it is missing from his knapsack. What a disaster! Plan your mystery using a story web. Be sure to be creative and original and use suspense. ~ Setting ~ ~ Characters ~ ~ Plot ~ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 176 Grade 5 Location: The Library Biomes of the World Research Report You have just been assigned to a group research project. The topic is “Biomes of the World”. Create a project and present it to the class! You can use electronic CD’s, library resources and the internet to research. Tips: How many biomes are there? Assign a person to each biome. Gather your information. Organize your information. How will you present your information? Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 177 Grade 5 Location: The Library Design A Poster Research Report You are a world-famous scientist who has been assigned to a project regarding environmental awareness. Your job is to inform the public about ways that we can care for Earth. Design a poster that promotes environmental awareness. Include information about renewable and non-renewable resources and ways we can reduce, reuse and recycle. Be sure that: the title is bold and attracts attention; graphics are large and colorful; you have researched your topic thoroughly before beginning the poster; you sketch a concept map to organize the information you wish to include; Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 178 Teacher Notes Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Library It’s Fun to Read! 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3-4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing and revising prior to producing the display. Art supplies should be available for students to use in constructing the displays. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. These may include: staying on task contributing ideas listening actively encouraging others fulfilling the assigned role. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. Rubrics should be discussed with the students before they begin their work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least three sections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their displays using programs such as MS Word and MS Publisher. 7. Post the displays in the school hallways. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 179 Student Directions Grade 5 Performance Task Site: The Library It’s Fun to Read! Your principal has requested that displays be made for the school hallways which promote reading. You are a member of a team that is designing and producing one display. The space you have to fill is a square, approximately 1 yard by 1 yard (or 1 metre by 1 metre). However, there are some requirements: a. Each student must contribute at least one item for each section. You can include more if you wish. b. The sections are: I. summary of a fiction book and accompanying illustration; II. research on an author; III. list of three books available in the school which students would find interesting, and the reasons why each is recommended. c. The display must be visually appealing. You can complete parts by hand and parts on computer, or all by hand. When you meet with your group you should: • • • discuss what the display will look like; decide on the content of the sections; assign tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the sections have been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Produce your display. Examine the rubrics before you start. They provide detail on how your work will be assessed. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 180 Rubric for Product Grade 5: The Library It’s Fun to Read! Name: _____________________________ Category Reading Skills Research Skills Communication Criteria Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Comprehension of materials read Demonstrates limited understanding Demonstrates some understanding Demonstrates considerable understanding Demonstrates thorough understanding Evaluation of materials read Makes and supports judgments with limited competence Makes and supports judgments with some competence Makes and supports judgments with considerable competence Makes and supports judgments with competence and insight Selection of materials –both fiction and nonfiction Demonstrates limited competence Demonstrates some competence Demonstrates considerable competence Demonstrates competence and thoroughness Accessing Information Demonstrates limited competence Demonstrates some competence Demonstrates considerable competence Demonstrates competence and thoroughness Acknowledgement of titles and sources Ideas/ Information Demonstrates limited accuracy Demonstrates some accuracy Summarizes materials read with limited accuracy Summarizes materials read with some accuracy Demonstrates considerable accuracy Accurately summarizes materials read Demonstrates complete accuracy Accurately and thoroughly summarizes materials read Judgments demonstrate limited validity. Judgments demonstrate some validity. Makes valid judgments Makes valid and insightful judgments Sections demonstrate limited organization. Many major and minor errors Sections demonstrate some organization. Sections are clearly organized. Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Sections are clearly and effectively organized. Almost error-free Visual appeal of the display Limited appeal Some appeal Considerable appeal Exceptional appeal Clarity of display Demonstrates limited neatness and precision Demonstrates some neatness and precision Demonstrates considerable neatness and precision Demonstrates thorough neatness and precision Organization Application Date: _________________ Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 181 Rubric for Group Process Grade 5: The Library It’s Fun to Read! Name: ____________________________ Criteria Level 1 Date: _________________ Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few ideas Some worthwhile ideas Several worthwhile ideas Several insightful ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 182 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment and evaluation instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Portfolio”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Segment Folktale Features Tutorial A Word to the Wise (The Moral) Quiz Assessment Software Tracking Activity Folktale Features Story Report Assessment Quiz Software Tracking Legendary Journey Story Wheel Report Quiz Software Tracking Fiction Story Postcard Rating Scales Fiction Story Recipe Card Quiz What’s Your View Character Map Mystery Voice (Dialogue) Legendary Journeys Nice or Nasty? (Character Traits) Legendary Characters (Character Map) Plotting Main Events (Seriating) Far-Out Fiction Character Connections (Comprehension) Summarizing Events (Seriating) Fiction Story Report Reality Check Card Catalogue Search Amazing Animals Research Report Table of Contents Quiz Famous People Research Report Encyclopaedia Search Quiz Sports Research Report Zooming in on Keywords Taking Jot Notes Invention Dimension Research Report Article Comprehension Quiz Around the World Research Report Research Report Report Checklist Seriating a Summary Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 183 Reading Quizzes Included in the software is a number of quizzes based on specific reading selections. A button appears on the last screen of a selection for which there is a quiz. Quizzes exist for the following selections: Why the Bear Has a Short Tail The Crow Brings Daylight Legend of Fire The Origin of Death Tiny Finger The Tongue-Cut Sparrow The Bright Pearl A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle – Quiz #1 A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle – Quiz #2 Maybe a Fight – Quiz #1 Maybe a Fight – Quiz #2 The Auction Grade Five Lie – Quiz #1 Grade Five Lie – Quiz #2 Returning to the Ancestral Home – Quiz #1 Returning to the Ancestral Home – Quiz #2 The software tracks student achievement. Quizzes and answers are included in the manual. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 184 Why the Bear Has a Short Tail QUIZ Select the best answer. 1. The rabbit didn’t believe that the bear could a. create a breeze with his tail b. swat flies with his tail c. attract friends using his tail d. groom his fur with his tail. 2. The bear impressed the rabbit when he used his tail to a. dry his paws b. groom his fur c. make a bed d. wave at his friends 3. The rabbit grew restless waiting for the bear to a. wake up b. swat flies c. catch a fish d. groom himself 4. The bear ran into problems when a. the ice froze around his tail b. his tail was caught in a trap c. the rabbit bit his tail d. he discovered he couldn’t swim. 5. The bear bragged about a. how clever he was b. how beautiful his tail was c. how well he could catch fish d. how well he could hunt 6. A synonym for ‘stubby’ is a. furry and fluffy b. short and thick c. long and slender d. long and feathery Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 185 Why the Bear Has a Short Tail ANSWERS Select the best answer. 1. The rabbit didn’t believe that the bear could a. create a breeze with his tail b. swat flies with his tail c. attract friends using his tail d. groom his fur with his tail. 2. The bear impressed the rabbit when he used his tail to a. dry his paws b. groom his fur c. make a bed d. wave at his friends 3. The rabbit grew restless waiting for the bear to a. wake up b. swat flies c. catch a fish d. groom himself 4. The bear ran into problems when a. the ice froze around his tail b. his tail was caught in a trap c. the rabbit bit his tail d. he discovered he couldn’t swim. 5. The bear bragged about a. how clever he was b. how beautiful his tail was c. how well he could catch fish d. how well he could hunt 6. A synonym for ‘stubby’ is a. furry and fluffy b. short and thick c. long and slender d. long and feathery Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 186 The Crow Brings Daylight QUIZ Place the events in the correct sequence. ____ The speck of dust turned back into Crow again. ____ The speck flew into the ear of the chief’s grandson. ____ Crow explained the people would have daylight for only half the year. ____ The people took care never to hurt Crow. ____ Crow’s wings were growing tired after a long flight. ____ Crow told the people about daylight. ____ Light went into every home and the darkness left the sky. ____ The child said that he wanted to play with a ball of daylight. ____ The people thanked Crow. ____ The people asked Crow to bring them daylight. ____ Crow grasped the string on the ball of daylight. ____ Crow turned himself into a speck of dust. ____ The child said that he wanted to play outside. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 187 The Crow Brings Daylight ANSWERS Place the events in the correct sequence. __8__ The speck of dust turned back into Crow again. __5__ The speck flew into the ear of the chief’s grandson. _12__ Crow explained the people would have daylight for only half the year. _13__ The people took care never to hurt Crow. __3__ Crow’s wings were growing tired after a long flight. __1__ Crow told the people about daylight. _10__ Light went into every home and the darkness left the sky. __6__ The child said that he wanted to play with a ball of daylight. _11__ The people thanked Crow. __2__ The people asked Crow to bring them daylight. __9__ Crow grasped the string on the ball of daylight. __4__ Crow turned himself into a speck of dust. __7__ The child said that he wanted to play outside. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 188 Legend of Fire QUIZ ____ Animal People a. feathers scorched by fire ____ Thunders b. acquired a coal of fire ____ Lightning c. eyes turned red ____ Big Snake d. originally possessed fire ____ Raven e. put fire into a sycamore tree ____ Screech Owl f. fell into the fire ____ Little Snake g. body was scorched black ____ Water Spider h. wanted to possess fire Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 189 Legend of Fire ANSWERS __h__ Animal People a. feathers scorched by fire __d__ Thunders b. acquired a coal of fire __e__ Lightning c. eyes turned red __f__ Big Snake d. originally possessed fire __a__ Raven e. put fire into a sycamore tree __c__ Screech Owl f. fell into the fire __g__ Little Snake g. body was scorched black __b__ Water Spider h. wanted to possess fire Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 190 The Origin of Death QUIZ Place each statement in the correct column. Decision by Old Man Decision by Old Woman Statements: - If the stone floats, people will die for four days and then come back to life and live forever. The men will be hunters. People will have five fingers on each hand. People will be stronger and smarter than animals. People will have eyes on one side of their face and their mouth on the other. Anytime people want to shoot an animal they will call it and it will come to them. If the stone sinks, people will not come back to life after they die. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 191 The Origin of Death ANSWERS Place each statement in the correct column. Decision by Old Man If the stone floats, people will die for four days and then come back to life and live forever. Decision by Old Woman People will have five fingers on each hand. People will be stronger and smarter than animals. The men will be hunters. Anytime people want to shoot an animal they will call it and it will come to them. If the stone sinks, people will not come back to life after they die. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 192 Tiny Finger QUIZ Match the two columns. ____ Kenta a. injured by a needle ____ Mori b. tiny as a finger warrior c. picked up the magic mallet which granted Tiny Finger’s wish ____ Issunboshi d. appointed Tiny Finger a guard ____ Kyoto e. Tiny Finger’s route to the city ____ Yodo f. went to the shrine to give thanks for the expected baby ____ Lord of the Palace g. Tiny Finger’s ambition ____ princess h. home of the emperor ____ bandit i. Provided Tiny Finger with a weapon ____ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 193 Tiny Finger ANSWERS Match the two columns. __f__ Kenta a. injured by a needle __i__ Mori b. tiny as a finger __g__ warrior c. picked up the magic mallet which granted Tiny Finger’s wish __b__ Issunboshi d. appointed Tiny Finger a guard __h__ Kyoto e. Tiny Finger’s route to the city __e__ Yodo f. went to the shrine to give thanks for the expected baby __d__ Lord of the Palace g. Tiny Finger’s ambition __c__ princess h. home of the emperor __a__ bandit i. Provided Tiny Finger with a weapon Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 194 The Tongue-Cut Sparrow QUIZ Select the best answer. 1. The sparrow thanked the old woman for helping him by a. scaring the cross old woman. b. helping get rid of bugs. c. bringing his friends to meet her. d. singing to her. 2. The cross old woman injured the sparrow’s a. wings. b. tongue. c. feet. d. beak. 3. Who told the old man and old woman where to find the sparrow? a. the bat b. the cat c. another sparrow d. some children 4. How did the sparrow please the old man and woman when they found him? a. He invited them to a party. b. He danced for them. c. He sang for them. d. He showed them the way home. 5. Why did the old man and woman choose the small basket? a. It was much lighter and the trip home was long. b. They thought it might be the most valuable. c. They did not want to take all the sparrow’s treasure. d. They liked its appearance. 6. Why was the cross old woman jealous? a. The sparrow invited the other couple for dinner. b. The couple easily found their way to the sparrow’s home. c. The sparrow loved the couple. d. The couple received gold and silk. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 195 7. What did the cross old woman’s choice of baskets show about her character? a. She was greedy. b. She was dishonest. c. She was cruel. d. She was mean-tempered. 8. How do you think the cross old woman felt after she opened her basket? a. Worried and afraid b. Happy c. Disappointed d. Thankful Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 196 The Tongue-Cut Sparrow ANSWERS Select the best answer. 1. The sparrow thanked the old woman for helping him by a. scaring the cross old woman. b. helping get rid of bugs. c. bringing his friends to meet her. d. singing to her. 2. The cross old woman injured the sparrow’s a. wings. b. tongue. c. feet. d. beak. 3. Who told the old man and old woman where to find the sparrow? a. the bat b. the cat c. another sparrow d. some children 4. How did the sparrow please the old man and woman when they found him? a. He invited them to a party. b. He danced for them. c. He sang for them. d. He showed them the way home. 5. Why did the old man and woman choose the small basket? a. It was much lighter and the trip home was long. b. They thought it might be the most valuable. c. They did not want to take all the sparrow’s treasure. d. They liked its appearance. 6. Why was the cross old woman jealous? a. The sparrow invited the other couple for dinner. b. The couple easily found their way to the sparrow’s home. c. The sparrow loved the couple. d. The couple received gold and silk. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 197 7. What did the cross old woman’s choice of baskets show about her character? a. She was greedy. b. She was dishonest. c. She was cruel. d. She was mean-tempered. 8. How do you think the cross old woman felt after she opened her basket? a. Worried and afraid b. Happy c. Disappointed d. Thankful Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 198 The Bright Pearl QUIZ Place the events in sequence. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix arrive at the Queen Mother’s palace to retrieve the pearl. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix turn themselves into mountains. ____ The Queen Mother opens the nine doors. ____ Wherever the pearl shines things grow better. ____ The palace guards eject Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix. ____ The Queen Mother holds a grand feast. ____ During the search, Golden Phoenix sees the pearl’s bright light. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix find a shining pebble. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix tell the Queen Mother they fashioned the pearl. ____ The ball gradually turns into a dazzling pearl. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix try to save the falling pearl. ____ Queen Mother first sees the brilliant rays shed by the pearl. ____ Queen Mother hides the pearl in the innermost room of her palace. ____ The pearl turns into a clear, green lake. ____ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix begin their search for the missing pearl. ____ The Queen Mother struggles with Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix to obtain the golden tray holding the pearl. ____ One of the Queen Mother’s guards steals the pearl. ____ The pearl falls, rolls down the stairs, and drops in the air. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 199 The Bright Pearl ANSWERS Place the events in sequence. _11__ 18__ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix arrive at the Queen Mother’s palace to retrieve the pearl. Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix turn themselves into mountains. __9__ The Queen Mother opens the nine doors. __3__ Wherever the pearl shines things grow better. 13__ The palace guards eject Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix. __8__ The Queen Mother holds a grand feast. _10__ During the search, Golden Phoenix sees the pearl’s bright light. __1__ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix find a shining pebble. _12__ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix tell the Queen Mother they fashioned the pearl. __2__ The ball gradually turns into a dazzling pearl. 16__ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix try to save the falling pearl. __4__ Queen Mother first sees the brilliant rays shed by the pearl. __6__ Queen Mother hides the pearl in the innermost room of her palace. _17__ The pearl turns into a clear, green lake. __7__ Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix begin their search for the missing pearl. _14__ The Queen Mother struggles with Jade Dragon and Golden Phoenix to obtain the golden tray holding the pearl. __5__ One of the Queen Mother’s guards steals the pearl. _15__ The pearl falls, rolls down the stairs, and drops in the air. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 200 A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. Mrs. Arbuckle wanted a new pet so she advertised a. on television. b. on radio. c. in the newspaper. 2. Mrs. Arbuckle received a. one application. b. three applications. c. five applications. 3. Applicants included: a. a gingernut cat, a giraffe, an armadillo, a butterfly, and a grizzly bear. b. a giraffe, a butterfly, a grizzly bear, a giraffe and an armadillo. c. a giraffe, a grizzly bear, an armadillo, a butterfly, a dog and a butterfly. 4. The armadillo thought that it would make a wonderful pet because a. its armour would protect it from other animals. b. it could curl into a ball and roll along. c. it would be usual. 5. The giraffe thought that it would be a wonderful pet because a. it could trim all the trees in the neighbourhood. b. it had such lovely spots. c. it could tell Mrs. Arbuckle what was happening next door. 6. The whale thought that it would make a wonderful pet because a. it would be the only pet whale in the neighbourhood. b. it was such a good swimmer. c. it was very quiet. 7. The gingernut cat didn’t think that the butterfly would make a good pet because a. it would fly around all the time. b. it was too quiet. c. it couldn’t be stroked and didn’t have regular meals. 8. The gingercat became Mrs. Arbuckle’s pet because a. it was homeless. b. it liked the saucers of milk. c. it wanted to stay with Mr. Arbuckle. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 201 Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 9. “… he went on nibbling the leaves at the top of a thorn tree.” a. pulling b. biting off small pieces c. rubbing 10. “Mrs. Arbuckle put on her swimming costume and her bathing cap, her flippers and her snorkel …” a. air tank b. long tube held in the mouth c. mask Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 202 A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle ANSWERS - QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. Mrs. Arbuckle wanted a new pet so she advertised d. on television. e. on radio. f. in the newspaper. 2. Mrs. Arbuckle received a. one application. b. three applications. c. five applications. 3. Applicants included: a. a gingernut cat, a giraffe, an armadillo, a butterfly, and a grizzly bear. b. a giraffe, a butterfly, a grizzly bear, a whale and an armadillo. c. a giraffe, a grizzly bear, an armadillo, a butterfly, a dog and a butterfly. 4. The armadillo thought that it would make a wonderful pet because a. its armour would protect it from other animals. b. it could curl into a ball and roll along. c. it would be usual. 5. The giraffe thought that it would be a wonderful pet because a. it could trim all the trees in the neighbourhood. b. it had such lovely spots. c. it could tell Mrs. Arbuckle what was happening next door. 6. The whale thought that it would make a wonderful pet because a. it would be the only pet whale in the neighbourhood. b. it was such a good swimmer. c. it was very quiet. 7. The gingernut cat didn’t think that the butterfly would make a good pet because a. it would fly around all the time. b. it was too quiet. c. it couldn’t be stroked and didn’t have regular meals. 8. The gingercat became Mrs. Arbuckle’s pet because a. it was homeless. b. it liked the saucers of milk. c. it wanted to stay with Mr. Arbuckle. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 203 Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 9. 10. “… he went on nibbling the leaves at the top of a thorn tree.” a. pulling b. biting off small pieces c. rubbing “Mrs. Arbuckle put on her swimming costume and her bathing cap, her flippers and her snorkel …” a. air tank b. long tube held in the mouth c. mask Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 204 A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle QUIZ #2 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. ___ Mrs. Arbuckle interviewed the whale. ___ The butterfly stated that it would be the loveliest pet around. ___ Mrs. Arbuckle received five applications. ___ Mrs. Arbuckle told the gingercat that she needed a pet. ___ The gingernut cat agreed to be Mrs. Arbuckle’s pet. ___ Mr. Arbuckle asked if they had found a pet. ___ She advertised for a pet in the newspaper. ___ Mrs. Arbuckle liked the beady eyes of the grizzly bear. ___ Mrs. Arbuckle realized that she would have to destroy her house to put in a pool for the whale. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 205 A Pet for Mrs. Arbuckle ANSWERS - QUIZ #2 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. 4. Mrs. Arbuckle interviewed the whale. 7. The butterfly stated that it would be the loveliest pet around. 3. Mrs. Arbuckle received five applications. 1. Mrs. Arbuckle told the gingercat that she needed a pet. 9. The gingernut cat agreed to be Mrs. Arbuckle’s pet. 8. Mr. Arbuckle asked if they had found a pet. 2. She advertised for a pet in the newspaper. 6. Mrs. Arbuckle liked the beady eyes of the grizzly bear. 5. Mrs. Arbuckle realized that she would have to destroy her house to put in a pool for the whale. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 206 Maybe a Fight QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. At the beginning of the story, Kate and Emily were about to a. go shopping. b. have a fight. c. make supper. 2. Mother suggested that they a. go to different areas of the house. b. talk to her about the problem. c. start calling each other names. 3. We know that this is not a serious fight because a. they are making tea. b. they are trying not to laugh. c. Kate’s mother is present. 4. The author shows the foul mood by using words such as a. glowered, giggling, terrible. b. mad, struggling, silly. c. conflicting, terrible, glowered. 5. The mother is wise because a. she encouraged them to tell about their feelings. b. she knew that tea would be good for the girls. c. she made Kate go first. 6. From this story one of the key lessons we learn is a. that words are very powerful. b. that friends should share a cup of tea. c. that you know when a fight is about to happen. Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 7. I was in a foul mood and she was feeling much the same. a. terrible b. joyous c. friendly 8. Then holding her own aloft, she said. “To us, champion lightweight battlers of Riverside.” a. upside down b. high up c. tightly Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 207 Maybe a Fight ANSWERS - QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. At the beginning of the story, Kate and Emily were about to a. go shopping. b. have a fight. c. make supper. 2. Mother suggested that they a. go to different areas of the house. b. talk to her about the problem. c. start calling each other names. 3. We know that this is not a serious fight because a. they are making tea. b. they are trying not to laugh. c. Kate’s mother is present. 4. The author shows the foul mood by using words such as a. glowered, giggling, terrible. b. mad, struggling, silly. c. conflicting, terrible, glowered. 5. The mother is wise because a. she encouraged them to tell about their feelings. b. she knew that tea would be good for the girls. c. she made Kate go first. 6. From this story one of the key lessons we learn is a. that words are very powerful. b. that friends should share a cup of tea. c. that you know when a fight is about to happen. Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 7. I was in a foul mood and she was feeling much the same a. Terrible b. joyous c. friendly 8. Then holding her own aloft, she said. “To us, champion lightweight battlers of Riverside.” a. upside down b. high up c. tightly Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 208 Maybe a Fight QUIZ #2 Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. When Kate and Emily had fights before, they would hardly speak to each other for at least two days. True False 2. The girls knew that they had gone too far when they called each other names. True False 3. Mother wanted them to get it out of their system before supper time. True False 4. Mother told Emily to go first. True False 5. The girls knew that it wasn’t going to be serious fight when they both started to grin and chuckle. True False 6. Mother burned her tongue with the hot tea. True Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 False 209 Maybe a Fight ANSWERS – QUIZ #2 Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. When Kate and Emily had fights before, they would hardly speak to each other for at least two days. True False 2. The girls knew that they had gone too far when they called each other names. True False 3. Mother wanted them to get it out of their system before supper time. True False 4. Mother told Emily to go first. True False 5. The girls knew that it wasn’t going to be serious fight when they both started to grin and chuckle. True False 6. Mother burned her tongue with the hot tea. True Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 False 210 The Auction QUIZ Select the best answer. 1. An auction is a. a country picnic. b. a sale. c. a reunion. 2. We know that gramps was upset because he a. was yelling. b. was crying. c. was pacing. 3. Gramps was selling the farm because a. he wasn’t able to run it. b. he couldn’t afford it. c. he didn’t like it. 4. We know that Todd and his grandfather were good friends because a. they shared stories. b. the grandfather taught Todd how to drive the tractor. c. they swam together. 5. Todd and his grandfather made scarecrows because they knew a. that they would scare away the crows. b. that the grandmother would have made something crazy for the auction. c. that the people who attended the auction would like them. 6. Grandfather is moving a. to another farm. b. to a retirement home. c. into town. Select the meaning of each of the underlined words: 7. The combine loomed over them. a. towered b. hung c. crawled 8. “There was always a scarecrow in Gran’s garden,” he blurted suddenly. a. whispered b. uttered c. sang Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 211 The Auction ANSWERS Select the best answer. 1. An auction is d. country picnic. e. a sale. f. a reunion. 2. We know that gramps was upset because he a. was yelling. b. was crying. c. was pacing. 3. Gramps was selling the farm because a. he wasn’t able to run it. b. he couldn’t afford it. c. he didn’t like it. 4. We know that Todd and his grandfather were good friends because a. they shared stories. b. grandfather taught Todd how to drive the tractor. c. they swam together. 5. Todd and his grandfather made scarecrows because they knew a. that they would scare away the crows. b. that the grandmother would have made something crazy for the auction. c. that the people who attended the auction would like them. 6. Grandfather is moving a. to another farm. b. to a retirement home. c. into town. Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 7. The combine loomed over them. a. towered b. hung c. crawled 8. “There was always a scarecrow in Gran’s garden,” he blurted suddenly. a. whispered b. uttered c. sang Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 212 The Grade Five Lie QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. Why did Jean have to change her clothing? a. Her sister threw milk on her outfit. b. She spilled her bowl of cereal. c. Her mother wouldn’t let her wear those clothes to school. 2. How do we know that this story took place a long time ago? a. They wore uniforms to school. b. They sang “God Save the King”. c. The classroom was heated with a wood stove. 3. Jean was teased at school because a. she wore unusual clothing. b. she was cross-eyed. c. she cried all the time. 4. How did Jean avoid putting her name on the blackboard? a. She brought a note from home. b. She made up a story. c. She went to see the principal. 5. When Jean finished telling her story to the teacher and classmates, she realized that there was one problem. a. No one believed her. b. Her clothes were wet. c. She had no cut or bandage on her knee. 6. What word best describes Jean’s personality? a. happy b. kind c. imaginative 7. Select the meaning of the underlined word. “I could hear the jeering voices already.” a. mocking b. laughing c. singing 8. Select the meaning of the underlined word. “When I reached the street, it was ominously quiet.” a. merely b. suddenly c. foretelling disaster Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 213 The Grade Five Lie ANSWERS QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1.Why did Jean have to change her clothing? c. Her sister threw milk on her outfit. d. She spilled her bowl of cereal. e. Her mother wouldn’t let her wear those clothes to school. 2. How do we know that this story took place a long time ago? a. They wore uniforms to school. b. They sang “God Save the King”. c. The classroom was heated with a wood stove. 3. Jean was teased at school because a. she wore unusual clothing. b. she was cross-eyed. c. she cried all the time. 4. How did Jean avoid putting her name on the blackboard? a. She brought a note from home. b. She made up a story. c. She went to see the principal. 5. When Jean finished telling her story to the teacher and classmates, she realized that there was one problem. a. No one believed her. b. Her clothes were wet. c. She had no cut or bandage on her knee. 6. What word best describes Jean’s personality? a. happy b. kind c. imaginative 7. Select the meaning of the underlined word. “I could hear the jeering voices already.” a. mocking b. laughing c. singing 8. Select the meaning of the underlined word. “When I reached the street, it was ominously quiet.” a. merely b. suddenly c. foretelling disaster Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 214 The Grade Five Lie QUIZ #2 Place the following events in the correct time sequence. ___ Jean realized that she had no cut or bandage on her knee. ___ The grade seven boy had his first snowball ready. ___ Hugh fell down the back steps. ___ Jean’s mother told her to wear the knitted suit. ___ Jean told her story to Miss Marr and the class. ___ Jean had learned the power of words. ___ She decided to invent the most convincing lie of her life. ___ Pat threw the contents of her mug at Jean. ___ Jean dashed up the stairs of her school and opened the classroom door. ___ Jean asked her mother for the long words that described what was wrong with her eyes. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 215 The Grade Five Lie ANSWERS - QUIZ #2 Place the following events in the correct time sequence. 7. Jean realized that she had no cut or bandage on her knee. 9. The grade seven boy’s snowball flew by her and another hit the tree. 1. Hugh fell down the back steps. 3. Jean’s mother told her to wear the knitted suit. 6. Jean told her story to Miss Marr and the class. 10. Jean had learned the power of words. 4. She decided to invent the most convincing lie of her life. 2. Pat threw the contents of her mug at Jean. 5. Jean dashed up the stairs of her school and opened the classroom door. 8. Jean asked her mother for the long words that described what was wrong with her eyes. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 216 Returning to the Ancestral Home QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. Why did Mao Sheng and his father have to return to the ancestral home? a. for a reunion b. for planting season c. to stay with his grandfather 2. Where did Mao Sheng want to be? a. learning his lessons b. playing soccer c. playing with his friends 3. On the way to their ancestral home Mao Sheng saw three types of crops. They were: a. rice, tobacco, and plantain. b. bananas, rice, and sugarcane. c. sugarcane, rice, and tobacco. 4. How did they get to grandfather’s farmhouse? a. water buffalo b. bicycle ricksha c. taxi 5. How did grandfather injure himself? a. He hurt his back. b. He broke his arm. c. He broke his leg. 6. What lesson did Mao Sheng learn on this trip? a. That soccer was more important than the visit. b. That school is more important than going on a visit. c. That he loved his family more than his soccer team. . Select the meaning of each of the underlined words. 7. “Mao Sheng cringed when his father’s arm went around him.” a. cried b. winced c. shivered 9. “He ran frantically up the muddy driveway while praying for a car to come into view. a. wild with fear b. suffering from the cold c. joyfully Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 217 Returning to the Ancestral Home ANSWERS – QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. Why did Mao Sheng and his father have to return to the ancestral home? a. for a reunion b. for planting season c. to stay with his grandfather 2. Where did Mao Sheng want to be? a. learning his lessons b. playing soccer c. playing with his friends 3. On the way to their ancestral home Mao Sheng saw three types of crops. They were: a. rice, tobacco, and plantain. b. bananas, rice, and sugarcane. c. sugarcane, rice, and tobacco. 4. How did they get to grandfather’s farmhouse? a. water buffalo b. bicycle ricksha c. taxi 5. How did grandfather injure himself? a. He hurt his back. b. He broke his arm. c. He broke his leg. 6. What lesson did Mao Sheng learn on this trip? a. That soccer was more important than the visit. b. That school is more important than going on a visit. c. That he loved his family more than his soccer team. Select the meaning of each of the underlined words. 7. “Mao Sheng cringed when his father’s arm went around him.” a. cried b. winced c. shivered 8 “He ran frantically up the muddy driveway while praying for a car to come into view. a. wild with fear b. suffering from the cold c. joyfully Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 218 Returning to the Ancestral Home QUIZ #2 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. ___ Mao Sheng prayed for a car to come into view. ___ He realized that he was in the right place this weekend. ___ Mao Sheng’s father proudly told grandfather that he was number two in his class. ___ They slept in the loft. ___ Grandfather broke his leg. ___ Mao Sheng’s father bargained with the taxi driver. ___ Mao Sheng’s father told him of the changes to the village including the main street being widened for traffic. ___ He wanted to be at home warming up with his soccer team. ___ Grandfather told them about how he had been ill. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 219 Returning to the Ancestral Home ANSWERS QUIZ #2 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. 8. Mao Sheng prayed for a car to come into view. 9. He realized that he was in the right place this weekend. 5. Mao Sheng’s father proudly told grandfather that he was number two in his class. 6. They slept in the loft. 7. Grandfather broke his leg. 3. Mao Sheng’s father bargained with the taxi driver. 2. Mao Sheng’s father told him of the changes to the village including the main street being widened for traffic. 1. He wanted to be at home warming up with his soccer team. 4. Grandfather told them about how he had been ill. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 220 Checklist The Library Grade 5: Postcard Fiction Story Review Name: ____________________________ Category Criteria Reading Comprehension Skills • • understanding of the plot understanding of the character selected Content • • sufficient, accurate details included from the story organization of information • use of the postcard form Form Date: ______________ Considerable Some Limited Comments: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 221 Scoring Rubric Grade 5: The Library Reports Name: _____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points Process is thoroughly followed. Detail is thorough and accurate. Report is complex and organized logically. Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Few/no errors Format is completely accurate. 3 Points Process is followed to a considerable degree. Detail is considerable and accurate. Report is organized logically. A few minor errors Format is mostly accurate. 2 Points Process is followed to some degree. Detail is sufficient but may contain inaccuracies. Report is simple and communicated in a mechanical way. Several minor errors and/or omissions Format contains some inaccuracies. 1 Point Process is followed to a limited degree. Detail is limited and/or inaccurate. Report lacks sufficient development. Several major errors and/or omissions Many inaccuracies in format Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 222 b) Level 2 – Grade 6 Overview The Library focuses on the strand of reading. Students are greeted by a student guide posing as a librarian and are invited to visit a school library where they choose activities that are based on fiction and non-fiction selections. Fiction selections consist of fables and narratives while the non-fiction selections provide biographies and research articles. In addition, students are able to publish written reports based on reading selections, to a Read-To-Write portfolio that can be utilized for classroom purposes. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 223 Structure The Library is comprised of three segments. Fable Favourites is a study of the characteristics of fables such as the setting, problem and moral, focusing on character traits, planning storyboards and using quotation marks to indicate the speaker. Far-Out Fiction is a segment that focuses upon the fiction genre and introduces concept mapping to students Reality Check assists students in acquiring techniques for reading information and conducting research. In conjunction with the classroom report that has been assigned, students are provided with templates to assist them in both graphically organizing jot notes and researching information, and organizing the final report. The Library Grade 6 Fable Favourites Reality Check Far-Out Fiction Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 224 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English Each segment within the Library Location addresses the Standards for the English Language Arts, which is a project of the National Council of Teachers of English and International Reading Association. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace; and for personal fulfillment. Among these texts are fiction and nonfiction, classic and contemporary works. 2. Students read a wide range of literature from many periods in many genres to build an understanding of the many dimensions (e.g. philosophical, ethical, aesthetic) of human experience. 3. Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions; and by posing problems. They gather evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g. print and non-print texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience. 4. Students use a variety of technological and informational resources (e.g. libraries, databases, computer networks, video) to gather and synthesize information and to create and communicate knowledge. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 225 Learning Outcomes Expectations Fable Favourites Far-Out Fiction Reality Check √ √ √ Writing (W) W7 organize information to convey a central idea, using well-linked paragraphs; W15 frequently introduce vocabulary from other subject areas into their writing; √ W18 accurately use appropriate organizers; √ Reading and Research (R, RE) R1 R2 R3 R4 R6 R7 R8 R9 R10 R17 R20 R21 RE1 RE2 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes; read independently, selecting appropriate reading strategies; explain their interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from their own knowledge and experience; decide on a specific purpose for reading, and select the material that they need from a variety of appropriate sources; summarize and explain the main ideas in information materials and cite details that support the main ideas; make judgements and draw conclusions about ideas in written materials on the basis of evidence; identify the elements of a story and explain how they relate to each other; plan a research project and carry out the research; identify a writer’s perspective or character’s motivation; use punctuation to help them understand what they read; use textual cues to construct and confirm meaning; identify descriptive and figurative language in literary texts and discuss how it enhances understanding of people, places and actions; organize information and ideas using a variety of strategies and techniques; make notes on a topic, combining information from more than one source; reference sources appropriately; Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 226 Expectations Fable Favourites Far-Out Fiction Reality Check Reading and Research (R, RE) RE3 RE4 evaluate the appropriateness of information for a particular form, audience and purpose; identify gaps in information collected and gather additional information; relate gathered information to prior knowledge to reach conclusions or develop points of view; establish goals for developing further inquiry or research skills √ √ The Culminating Performance Task The culminating performance task provides a summative vehicle for students to demonstrate their knowledge and skills related to the following expectations considered in the software. Strand Expectations READING AND RESEARCH R1 read a variety of fiction and non-fiction materials for different purposes; R2 read independently, selecting appropriate reading strategies; R3 explain their interpretation of a written work, supporting it with evidence from the work and from their own knowledge and experience; R6 summarize and explain the main ideas in information materials and cite details that support the main ideas; R7 make judgements and draw conclusions about ideas in written materials on the basis of evidence; R8 identify the elements of a story and explain how they relate to each other; R9 plan a research project and carry out the research; RE2 make notes on a topic, combining information from more than one source; reference sources appropriately; RE3 evaluate the appropriateness of information for a particular form, audience and purpose; identify gaps in information collected and gather additional information; ORAL AND VISUAL COMMUNICATION communicate a main idea about a topic and describe a sequence of events OV2 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately OV8 demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic OV9 speak correctly, observing common grammatical rules such as subject-verb agreement, nounOV10 OV11 OV13 OV14 OV19 pronoun agreement and consistency of verb tense use tone of voice and gestures to enhance the message and help convince or persuade listeners in conversations, discussions or presentations speak clearly when making presentations demonstrate critical listening and viewing behaviours and show respect for the presenter explain the importance of linking personal perceptions and ideas to new concepts Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 227 Components The Library consists of three main segments. They are: Fable Favourites Far-Out Fiction Reality Check Each segment is structured in the followings sequence: an introduction to the concepts that will be addressed in the segment activities that are designed to provide an understanding of concepts that are necessary to grasp with the purpose of mastering the expectations an application for students to apply their skills and knowledge within the software and can be used for classroom purposes All segments include tools that students can use for assistance as they read. These tools are represented as symbols in the software and include: a book: students can click on this symbol to read or reread a story; a thumb: students can use this symbol to follow along with the audio; the thumb is placed over the words as the student reads; a coloured rectangle: students can use the rectangle to read the story in chunks. Each paragraph appears with a rectangle around it to assist students in focusing on smaller chunks of information. A. Fable Favourites Students explore the fascinating world of fables. They are introduced to the characteristics of fables as they select from a variety of fables to read. Students study the characteristics of fables such as the setting, problem and moral, while focusing on character traits, planning storyboards and using quotation marks to indicate the speaker. Features include: A study of the elements of a fable, including characters, setting, problem, ending and conclusion/moral; Character Connections Quiz: classifying characters given descriptors; Fable Facts Crossword: completing a crossword using evidence from the story Students summarize The Ant and The Grasshopper by completing a storyboard; Talking Tips: instructs students in the use of quotation marks in conversations. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 228 Students are provided with a choice of fables to read. Theme selections include wolf, fox, people, hare and lion fables. Students can select from a variety of activities. They can publish to a Read-To-Write portfolio or print for classroom use. Activities include: Fable Flip Book prompts students to insert evidence from the story, including title, setting, and character descriptions; to identify the problem, solution, and moral; and to advise the main character regarding actions taken. Pages can be compiled as a flip book. Fable Friendly Letter guides students through the process of identifying the main components of a letter (i.e. heading, salutation, body, closing) and writing a friendly letter to advise the main character. Fable Fortune Poem invites students to create a poem based on prompts. B. Far-Out Fiction Students are introduced to different genres such as historical fiction, mystery and science fiction. They explore the features of a fiction story (e.g. characters, setting and plot). Students use appropriate organizers to report on the main features and supporting details of a fiction story. Features include: a study of the elements of a fiction story, including setting, main characters, plot and conclusion; Character Connections quiz: classifying primary and secondary characters Story Ladder: plotting main events following the fiction format which includes introduction, main events, problem, solution and conclusion In the Stars: a comprehension activity focusing upon seriating main events; Word Wise: a short tutorial that instructs students how to use a dictionary and/or thesaurus; Students select a fiction story to read. Stories are classified by reading difficulty: easy reading and challenging. Activities include: Fiction Story Pyramid guides students through the process of organizing and reporting information in the shape of a pyramid; clues are provided as prompts. Fiction Story Time Capsule invites students to choose a character from the story they have read and pack a time capsule, supporting choices with evidence from the story. Fiction Best Seller Story Review guides students in writing an article for a best-seller story. Students have the option to publish their work to a Read-To-Write portfolio, as well as to print for classroom use. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 229 C. Reality Check Students conduct research using non-fiction resources in this segment. They are guided through the research process: narrowing a topic, using various research resources (e.g. Dewy Decimal System, Card Catalogue, Electronic Encyclopedia, Internet and Tables of Contents), pre-reading questions (5W-H Club), using keywords, topic maps, recording and sequencing information, summarizing and referencing resources using a bibliography. Students are introduced to using graphic organizers to plan for research and concept maps to organize jot notes. Short quizzes are included to assess student understanding of using the tools that are available for research in a library. Features include: Card Catalogue Search: students search for books in their library according to call number; Table of Contents Quiz: given a sample table of contents, students locate information; Encyclopedia Search: given a number of topics, students decide in which volume they would find the information; Fact-finding: scanning for keywords; Graphic Organizers: learning how to organize information using concept maps; Jot Notes Quiz: a guide to organizing information using jot notes and topic maps and recognizing appropriate jot notes; Comprehension Quiz: reading an article, Giant Water Bugs, and demonstrating comprehension by completing an project outline; Seriating A Summary: organizing paragraphs of a summary in the correct order; Bibliographic References: a guide to referencing WWW resources, books, encyclopedia articles, and magazine articles. Students are provided with templates to assist them in compiling information for specific types of research. Research report templates include: Famous People Amazing Animals Extra! Extra! Read All About It!: applicable to research of special events Awesome Discoveries: applicable for research involving inventions Around The World: applicable for research regarding locations or places Just The Facts: applicable for general research themes Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 230 Activity Templates The following activity templates can be used to reinforce skills off-screen: 1. Fable Flip Book 2. Fable Friendly Letter 3. Fable Fortune Poem 4. Fiction Story Pyramid 5. Fiction Story Time Capsule 6. Fiction Best Seller Story Review 7. Research Report Templates Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 231 Grade 6 - Fable Flip Book F A B L E Cover Page: Title of fable and illustration goes here. F L I P Describe the setting here. Page 2 B O O K Describe the characters. How are they different? Page 3 Identify the problem. Page 4 Directions: Create a Fable Flip Book based on information from the story. Complete each of the pages, cut them out and staple together when you are finished. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 232 Grade 6 - Fable Flip Book (page 2) F A B L E How was the problem solved? Page 5 F L I P What is the moral of the story and how can it be meaningful to people today? Page 6 B O O K Explain why the main character did what he/she did. Page 7 What advice would you give the character in the story? Page 8 Directions: Create a Fable Flip Book based on information from the story. Complete each of the pages, cut them out and staple together when you are finished. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 233 Grade 6 - Fable Friendly Letter Directions: If you could give characters in a Fable advice about how they could have Solved their problems, which character would you write to and what would your advice Be? The Heading: Your address goes here. _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ _________________________ The Salutation Dear _____________, The Body Sincerely, _____________________ The Closing: Sign your Name. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 234 Grade 6 - Fable Fortunes Poem Directions: Create a Fable Fortunes Poem based on information from the story. ________________________________ _____________________________________ _________________________________________ ____________________________________________ F A B L E _______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ P O E T R Y Line1: The name of a character Line 2: Who lives …. Line 3: Three adjectives to describe the character Line 4: Who met ……. Line 5: Who decided to ……. Line 6: Because ……….. Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 235 Grade 6 Fiction Pyramid Story 1. __________ 2. ______ ________ 3._________ ________ ________ 4.________ ________ ________ ________ 5. ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ 6._______ ________ ________ ________ ________ _______ 7. _______ _______ _______ _______ _______ _______ _______ 8. ______ ______ ______ ______ _______ ______ _______ ________ Create a Story Report by completing the pyramid above. Clues: 1. Choose one character 2. Two words telling when the story takes place 3. Three words describing the setting 4. Four words describing the story problem 5. Five words describing one event in the story 6. Six words describing the solution 7. Seven words describing the conclusion 8. Eight words describing a character Language Trek – On Location with Language – Grade 5 & 6 236 Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 5. ____________________ 4. ____________________ 3. ____________________ 2. ____________________ 1. ____________________ Object _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ Reason For Packing If you could pack a time capsule for the character of your choice, what would you put in it and why? Grade 6 - Fiction Story Time Capsule 237 Author: Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 ____________________________________________________________________________________ Your Opinion: ____________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Summary: (Briefly describe the characters, main idea and plot.) Title: The story you have read has just become a best seller! Explain the main features of the story in an article for the Kids Connect News. Grade 6 – Fiction Best Seller Story Review 238 Grade 6 Location: The Library Amazing Animals Report Name: ______________________________ Physical Appearance Date: ________________ Habitat Adaptations Life Cycle (diagrams of each stage with labels) Additional Information (example: endangerment) Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 239 Grade 6 Location: The Library Famous People Report Name: ______________________________ Date: ________________ Describe this person’s childhood and family life. Interests and Hobbies Accomplishments Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 240 Grade 6 Location: The Library Around the World Report Name: ______________________________ Name of place and location Date: ________________ Sights to See Things to Do Entertainment Weather Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 241 Grade 6 Location: The Library Sports Report Name: ______________________________ Date: ________________ What is the sport that is covered by this book? Identify five facts that you have learned. Name at least one athlete who had been especially successful at this sport and describe his or her accomplishments. Do you think that being involved in sports is a beneficial activity? Why or why not? Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 242 Grade 6 Location: The Library Invention Dimension Report Name: ______________________________ Date: ________________ What is the name of the invention? What is the purpose of the invention? When and where was the invention created? By whom? What is the purpose of the invention? How is the invention significant today? Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 243 Grade 6 Location: The Library Just the Facts Report Name: ______________________________ Topic or Subject Date: ________________ How, why, when, and/or where did it take place? Significance Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 244 Additional Tasks These tasks in the manual encourage students to apply their skills and knowledge in extended, authentic contexts. The tasks include: 1. Fable Favourites: Retell a Fable 2. Fable Favourites: Crossword Puzzle 3. Far-Out Fiction: Fiction Advertising 4. Research Report: What Does It Take to Be an Astronaut? 5. Research Report: Up, Up and Away! Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 245 Grade 6 Location: The Library Retell A Fable Fable Favourites Read your favourite fable. Take two pieces of paper. Fold each into four sections. Retell your fable using illustrations with brief captions using as many sections as necessary. This is your story map. Create stick puppets to retell the fable that you have illustrated. Construct necessary props. Present a puppet show to your class. Fables are stories that teach lessons or morals. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 246 Grade 6 Location: The Library Crossword Puzzle Fable Favourites Choose a fable to read. Create a crossword puzzle based on details in the fable. Sample: The Ant and The Grasshopper Across: 3. another word for lesson 4. the grasshopper was dying of ______ 6. the ants had plenty of food for this season Down: 1. another word for work 2. learned a lesson from the ant 5. was collected by the ant Give your crossword puzzle to a friend to solve. Don’t forget to provide answers! Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 247 Grade 6 Location: The Library Fiction Advertising Far-Out Fiction You are a famous author and you think you have written a story that could be a best-seller! How will you market your book? Create a poster to advertise your story. Be sure to include the story title, the main characters, and images (with captions when necessary) of the setting and plot. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 248 Grade 6 Location: The Library What Does It Take To Be An Astronaut? Research Report You are a NASA scientist who has been assigned the job of advertising for astronaut positions for the space program. Your job is to create a poster that will attract perspective astronauts to the space program. You will need to research requirements for becoming an astronaut and the various crew positions that are available. Choose one crew position and advertise for it on the poster. Be sure to include: Basic Qualifications (Education and Physical Requirements) What the job entails Candidate Training Information Prominent title and related graphics Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 249 Rubric for a Performance Task Grade 6 Location: The Library Up, Up And Away! Research Report You and your partner are design engineers. You have been asked to design and construct an airplane model that students can use in the classroom to demonstrate the principles of flight. Research different kinds of flyers so that you are familiar with the parts of an airplane and how and why airplanes fly. Construct your own model, providing diagrams with labels of the different parts of an airplane. You may also include graphs or tables of test flights as proof that your flyer is the best! Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 250 Teacher Notes Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Library Keeping the Peace 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3-4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing and revising prior to producing the display. Art supplies should be available for students to use in constructing the displays. 2. The teacher should collect the fiction books on the theme of peace prior to introducing the task. 3. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. An oral presentation rubric has also been included. This task offers an opportunity to teach/review oral presentation and public speaking skills. Rubrics should be discussed with students prior to beginning work. 3. The process can be assessed individually for each student. This may include group participation. 4. The product can be assessed as a whole. If this is done, the difficulty arises that individual efforts and abilities may not be accurately assessed. Since each student must contribute at least three sections, it is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. 5. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task and the needs of specific students. 6. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their displays using programs such as MS Word and MS Publisher. 7. Post the displays in the shopping centre, if appropriate. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 251 Student Directions Grade 6 Performance Task Site: The Library Keeping the Peace To celebrate Peace Day your local veterans’ organization has requested that displays be made for the community shopping centre. The purpose of the display is to inform the public about people who have made a significant contribution to peace efforts in the world, to encourage young people to read fiction books that have a theme of peace, and to encourage peace in the school environment. You are a member of a team that is designing and producing one display. The space you have to fill is a square, approximately 1 yard by 1 yard (or 1 metre by 1 metre). You will also explain your display to the class with each student presenting the section he/she has done. The presentation should be approximately 10 minutes long. Included in it should be a summary of the plot and a description of the characters from the fiction book you read. However, there are some requirements: a. Each student must contribute at least one item for each section. You can include more if you wish. b. The sections are: i. summary of a fiction book and accompanying illustration; ii. research on a person who has made a significant contribution to peacekeeping, and the reasons why you selected this person; iii. list of one other peacekeepers with a bibliography of materials (at least five entries) where people could obtain further information iv. an explanation of two ways to keep peace within the school community. c. The display must be visually appealing. You can complete parts by hand and parts on computer, or all by hand. When you meet with your group you should: • discuss what the display will look like; • decide on the content of the sections; • assign tasks. Your teacher will assist you by directing to you fiction books available in the school. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the sections have been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and proofreading. Produce your display. Organize and rehearse your presentation – it should be no more than 10 minutes long. Examine the rubrics before you start. They provide detail on how your work will be assessed. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 252 Rubric for Product Grade 6: The Library Keeping the Peace Name: _____________________________ Category Reading Skills Criteria Comprehension of materials read Date: _________________ Level 1 Demonstrates limited understanding Level 2 Demonstrates some understanding Level 3 Level 4 Demonstrates considerable understanding Demonstrates thorough understanding Makes and supports judgments with considerable competence Makes and supports judgments with competence and insight Demonstrates considerable competence Demonstrates competence and thoroughness Demonstrates considerable competence Demonstrates competence and thoroughness Demonstrates considerable accuracy Accurately summarizes materials read Demonstrates complete accuracy Understanding of plot and character Evaluation of materials read Makes and supports judgments with limited competence Research Skills Selection of appropriate materials –both fiction and nonfiction Demonstrates limited competence Planning and conducting research Demonstrates limited competence Makes and supports judgments with some competence Demonstrates some competence Demonstrates some competence Demonstrates some accuracy Communication Bibliography Demonstrates limited accuracy Ideas/ Information Summarizes materials read with limited accuracy Summarizes materials read with some accuracy Judgments demonstrate limited validity. Judgments demonstrate some validity. Makes valid judgments Makes valid and insightful judgments Sections demonstrate limited organization. Many major and minor errors Sections demonstrate some organization. Sections are clearly organized. Sections are clearly and effectively organized. Some minor and few major errors Few major or minor errors Almost error-free Visual appeal of the display Limited appeal Some appeal Considerable appeal Exceptional appeal Clarity of display Demonstrates limited neatness and precision Demonstrates some neatness and precision Demonstrates considerable neatness and precision Organization Application Accuracy in spelling, grammar and punctuation Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 Accurately and thoroughly summarizes materials read Demonstrates thorough neatness and precision 253 Rubric for Oral Presentation Grade 6: The Library Keeping the Peace Name: ___________________________ Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Meets the requirements of the presentation Several components missing Few components missing Components present Components dealt with thoroughly Uses appropriate words and structures Seldom uses appropriate words and structures Occasionally uses appropriate words and structures Often uses appropriate words and structures Uses appropriate words and structures with precision and insight Uses tone of voice and gestures to help clarify meaning Demonstrates limited clarity and precision Demonstrates some clarity and precision Demonstrates considerable clarity and precision Demonstrates a high degree of clarity and precision Speaks clearly Seldom speaks clearly Occasionally speaks clearly Frequently speaks clearly Always speaks clearly Shows respect for a presenter through active listening Demonstrates limited respect Demonstrates some respect Demonstrates consistent respect Demonstrates consistent respect and encourages presenter Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 254 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment and evaluation instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications which have been completed by students. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations not readily assessed through the software activities (e.g. oral communication expectations), assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Instruments are also included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper and the assessment of the collection of student work published to “My Portfolio”. Checklists and scoring rubrics, although developed for teacher use, can be adapted for self and peer assessment. Segment Fable Favourites Tutorial Character Comparisons Classification Activity Assessment Software Tracking Fable Features: o Flip Book o Friendly Letter o Fortunes Poem Software Tracking Fiction Story Pyramid Fable Facts Crossword Puzzle (Comprehension) Far-Out Fiction Storyboard Summary Character Connections (Classifying Primary and Secondary Characters) Reality Check Assessment Fiction Story Time Capsule Best Seller Story Report Story Ladder (Plotting Fiction Format) In The Stars (Seriating Main Events) Card Catalogue Search Activities Software Tracking Amazing Animals Research Report Table of Contents Quiz Famous People Research Report Encyclopedia Search Quiz Extra! Extra! Read All About It Special Events Research Report Fact-finding (Zooming In On Keywords) Taking Jot Notes Awesome Discoveries Inventions Research Report Article Comprehension Quiz Around The World Research Report Seriating A Summary Just The Facts General Research Report] Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 Research Report Rubric 255 Reading Quizzes Included in the software is a number of quizzes based on specific reading selections. A button appears on the last screen of a selection for which there is a quiz. Quizzes exist for the following selections: Androcles and the Lion The Hare with Many Friends The Shepherd’s Boy The Wolf and the Crane The Wolf and the Lamb The Hare and the Tortoise The Shield and the Hammer The Vigil Not Ever Again Persephone Anti-Snore Machine – Quiz #1 Anti-Snore Machine – Quiz #2 Anti-Snore Machine – Quiz #3 Hunting with Raven – Quiz #1 Hunting with Raven – Quiz #2 Hunting with Raven – Quiz #3 The software tracks student achievement. Quizzes and answer sheets can be found in the manual on pages. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 256 Androcles and the Lion QUIZ Place the following events in the correct time sequence: ____ Androcles removed a thorn from the lion and bound the wound. ____ The lion rushed toward Androcles because he intended to attack. ____ The emperor and his court came to the arena. ____ Androcles brought food to the lion. ____ The slave, Androcles, escaped from his master. ____ The lion recognized Androcles and licked his hands. ___ The emperor pardoned Androcles and let the lion loose. ____ The lion was kept without food for several days. ____ Androcles met the injured lion. ____ Androcles and the lion were captured. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 257 Androcles and the Lion ANSWERS Place the following events in the correct time sequence: __3__ Androcles removed a thorn from the lion and bound the wound. __8__ The lion rushed toward Androcles because he intended to attack. __7__ The emperor and his court came to the arena. __4__ Androcles brought food to the lion. __1__ The slave, Androcles, escaped from his master. __9__ The lion recognized Androcles and licked his hands. _10__ The emperor pardoned Androcles and let the lion loose. __6__ The lion was kept without food for several days. __2__ Androcles met the injured lion. __5__ Androcles and the lion were captured. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 258 The Hare with Many Friends QUIZ Match the two columns: Column A Column B ____ hare 1. had a date ____ horse 2. claimed to have many friends ____ bull 3. suffered from problems with his back ____ goat 4. had to work for his master ____ ram 5. busy hunting ____ calf 6. feared for his life ____ hounds 7. claimed to be too young Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 259 The Hare with Many Friends ANSWERS Match the two columns: Column A Column B __2__ hare 1. __4__ horse 2. claimed to have many friends __1__ bull 3. suffered from problems with his back a date __3__ goat 4. had to work for his master __6__ ram 5. busy hunting __7__ calf 6. feared for his life __5__ hounds 7. claimed to be too young Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 260 The Shepherd’s Boy QUIZ Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The moral of this story is: “A liar will not be believed, even when he speaks the truth.” True False 2. The boy lived on the top of a hill. True False 3. The shepherd found his job boring. True False 4. The villagers came to help the boy three times. True False 5. The villagers did not help the last time because they were afraid of the wolf. True False 6. The wolf eventually did eat some of the boy’s sheep. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 261 The Shepherd’s Boy ANSWERS Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The moral of this story is: “A liar will not be believed, even when he speaks the truth.” True False 2. The boy lived on the top of a hill. True False 3. The shepherd found his job boring. True False 4. The villagers came to help the boy three times. True False 5. The villagers did not help the last time because they were afraid of the wolf. True False 6. The wolf eventually did eat some of the boy’s sheep. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 262 The Wolf and the Crane QUIZ Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The crane received food as his reward. True False 2. The wolf found help the first time he asked. True False 3. The wolf choked on a small bone. True False 4. The wolf ate the crane as well. True False 5. The crane helped the wolf by putting his beak in the wolf’s throat and pulling out the thing that was causing the wolf to choke. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 263 The Wolf and the Crane ANSWER SHEET Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The crane received food as his reward. True False 2. The wolf found help the first time he asked. True False 3. The wolf choked on a small bone. True False 4. The wolf ate the crane as well. True False 5. The crane helped the wolf by putting his beak in the wolf’s throat and pulling out the thing that was causing the wolf to choke. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 264 The Wolf and the Lamb QUIZ Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The lamb called the wolf bad names. True False 2. The wolf ate the lamb. True False 3. The wolf accused the lamb of drinking his water. True False 4. The wolf used excuses to get closer to the lamb. True False 5. The wolf met the lamb when they were drinking at a lake. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 265 The Wolf and the Lamb ANSWERS Is each of the following statements TRUE or FALSE? 1. The lamb called the wolf bad names. True False 2. The wolf ate the lamb. True False 3. The wolf accused the lamb of drinking his water. True False 4. The wolf used excuses to get closer to the lamb. True False 5. The wolf met the lamb when they were drinking at a lake. True False Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 266 The Hare and the Tortoise QUIZ Select the best answer. 1. The final result of the race is that: A. B. C. D. there was a tie. the tortoise won. the race was stopped before the finish line. the hare won. 2. The words, “The tortoise said quietly,” show that: A. he was confident of winning. B. he didn’t want to race. C. he was humble. D. he couldn’t speak very loudly. 3. What is the meaning of the sentence, “I could dance round you all the way”? A. The hare liked to dance. B. The hare didn’t think the tortoise wanted to race. C. The hare wanted to dance with the tortoise. D. The hare was confident of winning. 4. Which word is a synonym for “plodded”? A. sprinted B. trudged C. galloped D. limped 5. The moral of the story is: A. Hard work results in success. B. Racing should be avoided. C. Keep your mind on the task. D. Boasting is a problem. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 267 The Hare and the Tortoise ANSWERS Select the best answer. 1.The final result of the race is that: A. B. C. D. there was a tie. the tortoise won. the race was stopped before the finish line. the hare won. 2. The words, “The tortoise said quietly,” show that: A. he was confident of winning. B. he didn’t want to race. C. he was humble. D. he couldn’t speak very loudly. 3. What is the meaning of the sentence, “I could dance round you all the way”? A. The hare liked to dance. B. The hare didn’t think the tortoise wanted to race. C. The hare wanted to dance with the tortoise. D. The hare was confident of winning. 4. Which word is a synonym for “plodded”? A. sprinted B. trudged C. galloped D. limped 5. The moral of the story is: A. Hard work results in success. B. Racing should be avoided. C. Keep your mind on the task. D. Boasting is a problem. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 268 The Shield and the Hammer QUIZ Match the two columns: Column A ____ Merlin Column B 1. brought the wounded knight to the king ____ Sir Miles 2. injured the true knight ____ Griflet 3. struck the shield and was mortally hurt ____ Britain 4. offered to punish the bad knight ____ King Arthur 5. the setting of the story ____ young squire 6. wonder-worker and tutor ____ black knight 7. owner of Excalibur Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 269 The Shield and the Hammer ANSWER SHEET Match the two columns: Column A __6__ Merlin Column B 1. brought the wounded knight to the king __3__ Sir Miles 2. injured the true knight __4__ Griflet 3. struck the shield and was mortally hurt __5__ Britain 4. offered to punish the bad knight __7__ King Arthur 5. the setting of the story __1__ young squire 8. wonder-worker and tutor __2__ black knight 9. owner of Excalibur Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 270 The Vigil QUIZ Match the two columns: Column A Column B ____ capelin 1. taught the children science ____ Twillingate 2. decided to keep the vigil ____ Kevin 3. place where a whale had beached last year ____ Mr. Foley 4. thought others might come to help ____ Caitlin 5. was alive but in trouble ____ huge black shape 6. setting of the story ____ Newfoundland 7. target of the whale Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 271 The Vigil ANSWERS Match the two columns: Column A Column B __7__ capelin 1. taught the children science __3__ Twillingate 2. decided to keep the vigil __4__ Kevin 3. place where a whale had beached last year __1__ Mr. Foley 4. thought others might come to help __2__ Caitlin 5. was alive but in trouble __5__ huge black shape 6. setting of the story __6__ Newfoundland 7. target of the whale Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 272 Not Ever Again QUIZ Place the following events in the correct time sequence: ____ Chip was drowning in front of Sonia’s eyes. ____ The ice gave way beneath Sonia. ____ Sonia held out a branch for Chip to grab. ____ Sonia heard a noise and saw a light indicating that a snowmobile was approaching. ____ Sonia and Chip headed into the woods. ____ Sonia started to shake uncontrollably from the cold. ____ Sonia grabbed a branch and stepped out onto the ice. ____ Sonia said she would never again risk her life for Chip. ____ Chip’s weight dragged Sonia under the water. ____ Sonia grew angry when she thought she was going to drown. ____ Chip charged after the ducks. ____ Sonia lay flat on her stomach on the ice in an effort to reach Chip. ____ Chip fell through the ice. ____ The effort of fending off the dog kept dragging Sonia under the water. ____ The two rescuers saved Sonia and Chip. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 273 Not Ever Again ANSWERS Place the following events in the correct time sequence: __4__ Chip was drowning in front of Sonia’s eyes. __8__ The ice gave way beneath Sonia. __6__ Sonia held out a branch for Chip to grab. _12__ Sonia heard a noise and saw a light indicating that a snowmobile was approaching. __1__ Sonia and Chip headed into the woods. _14__ Sonia started to shake uncontrollably from the cold. __5__ Sonia grabbed a branch and stepped out onto the ice. _15__ Sonia said she would never again risk her life for Chip. __9__ Chip’s weight dragged Sonia under the water. _11__ Sonia grew angry when she thought she was going to drown. __2__ Chip charged after the ducks. __7__ Sonia lay flat on her stomach on the ice in an effort to reach Chip. __3__ Chip fell through the ice. _10__ The effort of fending off the dog kept dragging Sonia under the water. _13__ The two rescuers saved Sonia and Chip. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 274 Persephone QUIZ Place the following events in the correct time sequence: ____ Hades appeared and took Persephone to the Underworld. ____ Hermes was sent to get Persephone. ____ Demeter and Hades agreed to a plan. ____ Demeter was so upset the plants died and a famine resulted. ____ Demeter was worried because she could not find her daughter. ____ Persephone pulled up a plant by its roots and the earth opened up. ____ Demeter heard that Persephone had eaten three pomegranate seeds. ____ Persephone was to spend Spring, Summer and Autumn with her mother on Earth. ____ A herdsman told Demeter what had happened to Persephone. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 275 Persephone ANSWERS Place the following events in the correct time sequence: __2__ Hades appeared and took Persephone to the Underworld. __6__ Hermes was sent to get Persephone. __8__ Demeter and Hades agreed to a plan. __4__ Demeter was so upset the plants died and a famine resulted. __3__ Demeter was worried because she could not find her daughter. __1__ Persephone pulled up a plant by its roots and the earth opened up. __7__ Demeter heard that Persephone had eaten three pomegranate seeds. __9__ Persephone was to spend Spring, Summer and Autumn with her mother on Earth. __5__ A herdsman told Demeter what had happened to Persephone. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 276 Anti-Snore Machine QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. What is the setting of the story? a. Miss Lewis’ house b. school camp c. a hotel d. Paula’s house 2. Which word best describes Martine’s personality? a. patient b. kind c. comical d. generous 3. The cause of the girls’ chattering after ‘lights out’ was a. the chocolate sweets they had eaten. b. the pillow fight they had. c. the argument over the top bunk. d. they had forgotten the time. 4. Most people could not sleep because a. Bronwyn was homesick. b. Paula started an argument. c. Martine snored. d. Tracey wanted to tell stories. 5. How did Miss Lewis react to the girls staying awake? a. She got angry. b. She laughed. c. She ignored their chatter. d. She was frustrated. 6. Who got a good night’s sleep? a. Paula b. Tracey c. Bronwyn d. Martine 7. What is the meaning of the word, ‘billowed’? a. rose b. floated c. burst d. bounced Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 277 8. The part of Paula’s machine that would solve the problem was a. an inflated paper bag. b. a heavy object. c. a wet rag. d. a boxing glove. 9. Why did Paula “burst into tears of disappointment”? a. The machine broke. b. The machine didn’t solve the problem. c. Miss Lewis took the machine away. d. She couldn’t find the parts to build the machine. 10. Bronwyn solved the problem by suggesting a. they all go home. b. they stay awake for the week. c. they don’t eat any chocolate. d. they move the person onto her side. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 278 Anti-Snore Machine ANSWERS QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. What is the setting of the story? a. Miss Lewis’ house b. school camp c. a hotel d. Paula’s house 2. Which word best describes Martine’s personality? a. patient b. kind c. comical d. generous 3. The cause of the girls’ chattering after ‘lights out’ was a. the chocolate sweets they had eaten. b. the pillow fight they had. c. the argument over the top bunk. d. they had forgotten the time. 4. Most people could not sleep because a. Bronwyn was homesick. b. Paula started an argument. c. Martine snored. d. Tracey wanted to tell stories. 5. How did Miss Lewis react to the girls staying awake? a. She got angry. b. She laughed. c. She ignored their chatter. d. She was frustrated. 6. Who got a good night’s sleep? a. Paula b. Tracey c. Bronwyn d. Martine 7. What is the meaning of the word, ‘billowed’? a. rose b. floated c. burst d. bounced Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 279 8. The part of Paula’s machine that would solve the problem was a. an inflated paper bag. b. a heavy object. c. a wet rag. d. a boxing glove. 9. Why did Paula “burst into tears of disappointment”? a. The machine broke. b. The machine didn’t solve the problem. c. Miss Lewis took the machine away. d. She couldn’t find the parts to build the machine. 10. Bronwyn solved the problem by suggesting a. they all go home. b. they stay awake for the week. c. they don’t eat any chocolate. d. they move the person onto her side. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 280 Anti-Snore Machine QUIZ #2 Select the best answer: 1. Everyone wanted to be in Martine’s room because a. she was happy and a good athlete. b. she was very rich and her father owned a toy company. c. she told good jokes and made you laugh. d. she was good-natured, generous and her father owned a chocolate factory. e. she was artistic, athletic, and friendly. 2. Martine was allowed to have the top bunk because a. Paula and Tracey felt ashamed of being greedy. b. Paula and Tracey felt ill from eating all the candy. c. Paula and Tracey were scared of heights. d. Paula and Tracey didn’t want to be split up. e. Paula and Tracey didn’t like her. 3. The girls tried to block out Martine’s snoring by a. yelling and throwing candies at her. b. yelling, putting cotton wool in their ears, and putting on the hoods of their sleeping bags. c. yelling, complaining to Miss Lewis, and using ear plugs. d. bouncing on her bed, yelling at her and covering their ears. e. singing, yelling and jumping on her bed. 4. Miss Lewis’ response to Martine’s snoring was a. that the girls would just have to get used to it. b. they should move to another cabin. c. they should go home. d. they should wear ear plugs. e. that the girls should ask her to stop. 5. The anti-snore machine was made from a. a ruler, a running shoe, dish of milk and an alarm clock. b. a metre stick, a bag, a bowl of water and a string. c. a paper bag, cardboard, ruler, saucer of water, and a boot. d. a ruler, a book, water, string and a running shoe. e. a jar of water, a book, a string, a running shoe and a ruler. 6. Bronwyn’s solution to the problem was a. to invent an anti-sore machine. b. to speak to Miss Lewis. c. to turn Martine on her side. d. to move Martine to another bunk. e. to use a nose plug. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 281 Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 7. “… Miss Lewis stopped calling out indulgently …” a. happily b. sadly c. leniently d. eagerly 8. “You might as well have tried to get to sleep in a cathedral belfry …” a. altar b. pew c. steeple d. choir loft Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 282 Anti-Snore Machine ANSWERS QUIZ #2 Select the best answer: 1. Everyone wanted to be in Martine’s room because a. she was happy and a good athlete. b. she was very rich and her father owned a toy company. c. she told good jokes and made you laugh. d. she was good-natured, generous and her father owned a chocolate factory. e. she was artistic, athletic, and friendly. 2. Martine was allowed to have the top bunk because a. Paula and Tracey felt ashamed of being greedy. b. Paula and Tracey felt ill from eating all the candy. c. Paula and Tracey were scared of heights. d. Paula and Tracey didn’t want to be split up. e. Paula and Tracey didn’t like her. 3. The girls tried to block out Martine’s snoring by a. yelling and throwing candies at her. b. yelling, putting cotton wool in their ears, and putting on the hoods of their sleeping bags. c. yelling, complaining to Miss Lewis, and using ear plugs. d. bouncing on her bed, yelling at her and covering their ears. e. singing, yelling and jumping on her bed. 4. Miss Lewis’ response to the snoring problem was a. that the girls would just have to get used to it. b. that the girls should move to another cabin. c. that the girls should go home. d. that the girls should wear ear plugs. e. that the girls should ask her to stop. 5. The anti-snore machine was made from a. a ruler, a running shoe, dish of milk and an alarm clock. b. a metre stick, a bag, a bowl of water and a string. c. a paper bag, cardboard, ruler, saucer of water, and a boot. d. a ruler, a book, water, string and a running shoe. e. a jar of water, a book, a string, a running shoe and a ruler. 6. Bronwyn’s solution to the problem was a. to invent an anti-sore machine. b. to speak to Miss Lewis. c. to turn Martine on her side. d. to move Martine to another bunk. e. to use a nose plug. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 283 Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 7. “… Miss Lewis stopped calling out indulgently …” a. happily b. sadly c. leniently d. eagerly 8.“You might as well have tried to get to sleep in a cathedral belfry …” a. altar b. pew c. steeple d. choir loft Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 284 Anti-Snore Machine QUIZ #3 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. ___ Everyone had great fun the first night of camp. ___ Miss Lewis became annoyed with all the noise. ___ Bronwyn turned Martine on her side. ___ Martine bounced out of bed in the morning well rested. ___ Paula and Tracey were planning to go home. ___ Bronwyn was told not to join in grown-up conversation. ___ Martine shared all the sweets that her dad had given her at the midnight feast. ___ Paula planned to build an anti-snore machine. ___ Initially, everyone politely asked Martine to stop snoring. ___ Martine promises to try not to snore. ___ Bronwyn looked like she didn’t think that the machine would work. ___ Miss Lewis suggested that they put cotton wool in their ears. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 285 Anti-Snore Machine ANSWERS QUIZ #3 Place the events in the correct sequence. 1. Everyone had great fun the first night of camp. 4. Miss Lewis became annoyed with all the noise. 12. Bronwyn turned Martine on her side. 6. Martine bounced out of bed in the morning well rested. 10. Paula and Tracey were planning to go home. 11. Bronwyn was told not to join in grown-up conversation. 2. Martine shared all the sweets that her dad had given her at the midnight feast. 8. Paula planned to build an anti-snore machine. 3. Initially, everyone politely asked Martine to stop snoring. 7. Martine promises to try not to snore. 9. Bronwyn looked like she didn’t think that the machine would work. 5. Miss Lewis suggested that they put cotton wool in their ears. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 286 Hunting with Raven QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. The conflict in the story was A. between Craig and nature B. between Craig and the raven. C. between Craig and his father. D. between Craig and his grandfather. 2. Which is the most exciting part of the story? A. when the husky is lost B. when the husky is caught in the trap C. when the grandfather catches the boy leaving D. when the mother warns the boy about going too far 3. How did the black husky escape? A. Grandfather could not see him jump the fence. B. Duane forgot to close the gate. C. Father did not have time to repair the fence. D. Craig did not fill a gap in the fence immediately. 4. Duane cannot help Craig because A. he has to help his father. B. he has to repair the fence. C. he has to prepare the fish for smoking. D. he has to gut the fish. 5. Why did Craig want to sneak past Grandpa? A. He was afraid that Grandpa would want to join him. B. He was embarrassed because he caused the dog to escape. C. He knew he was out later than he should be. D. He knew he would have to stay and talk. 6. How did Craig find Stripey? A. Craig followed the tracks. B. Grandpa told him where to look. C. The raven showed him. D. He came across the dog accidentally. 7. Where is the story set? A. Canada B. United States C. South America D. Australia Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 287 8. Why is the raven important to the Athabascans? A. The raven kills bugs. B. The raven is sacred. C. The raven is a good hunter. D. The raven helps them find fish. 9. Raven’s name means A. hunter B. animal C. sacred spirit D. one who fishes 10. Stripey did not come to Craig when he was called because A. he could not hear Craig. B. he did not know where Craig was. C. his paw was trapped. D. a bear had attacked him. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 288 Hunting with Raven ANSWERS QUIZ #1 Select the best answer. 1. The conflict in the story was A. between Craig and nature B. between Craig and the raven. C. between Craig and his father. D. between Craig and his grandfather. 2. Which is the most exciting part of the story? A. when the husky is lost B. when the husky is caught in the trap C. when the grandfather catches the boy leaving D. when the mother warns the boy about going too far 3. How did the black husky escape? A. Grandfather could not see him jump the fence. B. Duane forgot to close the gate. C. Father did not have time to repair the fence. D. Craig did not fill a gap in the fence immediately. 4. Duane cannot help Craig because A. he has to help his father. B. he has to repair the fence. C. he has to prepare the fish for smoking. D. he has to gut the fish. 5. Why did Craig want to sneak past Grandpa? A. He was afraid that Grandpa would want to join him. B. He was embarrassed because he caused the dog to escape. C. He knew he was out later than he should be. D. He knew he would have to stay and talk. 6. How did Craig find Stripey? A. Craig followed the tracks. B. Grandpa told him where to look. C. The raven showed him. D. He came across the dog accidentally. 7. Where is the story set? A. Canada B. United States C. South America D. Australia Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 289 8. Why is the raven important to the Athabascans? A. The raven kills bugs. B. The raven is sacred. C. The raven is a good hunter. D. The raven helps them find fish. 9. Raven’s name means A. hunter B. animal C. sacred spirit D. one who fishes 10. Stripey did not come to Craig when he was called because A. he could not hear Craig. B. he did not know where Craig was. C. his paw was trapped. D. a bear had attacked him. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 290 Hunting With Raven QUIZ #2 Select the best answer. 1. One of the puppies was missing because a. a fox carried it away. b. it pushed the beach stones away. c. it escaped in spite of the piece of plywood. d. Papa left the gate open. e. Grandpa took it. 2. Papa had asked Craig to a. look after his mother. b. look after his grandfather. c. look after the dogs. d. look out for raven. e. help his brother. 3. Duane didn’t think that the puppy would survive on its own because a. raven would find it. b. bears would kill it. c. it would starve. d. it would drown. e. a wolf would kill it. 4. Grandfather suggests that Craig a. watch out for bears. b. find the porcupine. c. follow the river. d. watch for raven. e. wait for his brother. 5. The raven is known as a. a bad luck symbol. b. a trickster. c. a thief. d. a good luck symbol. e. an enemy. 6. Craig tied this red flannel shirt to a tree branch because a. he wanted to scare the raven. b. he wanted to frighten the bears. c. he didn’t want the hunters to shoot him. d. it would mark his path home. e. it would signal the airplane. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 291 7. When Craig heard the crunch in the leaves he thought it was a. a porcupine. b. a bear. c. the raven. d. the puppy. e. his brother. Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 8. “Craig runs to the beached wooden skiff.” a. buoy b. raft c. small boat d. medium-sized marker 9. “Mama’s worried frown pulls her blue bandana down a little over her forehead.” a. handkerchief b. hat c. goggles d. cap Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 292 Hunting With Raven ANSWER QUIZ #2 Select the best answer. 10. One of the puppies was missing because a. a fox carried it away. b. it pushed the beach stones away. c. it escaped in spite of the piece of plywood. d. Papa left the gate open. e. Grandpa took it. 11. Papa had asked Craig to a. look after his mother. b. look after his grandfather. c. look after the dogs. d. look out for raven. e. help his brother. 12. Duane didn’t think that the puppy would survive on its own because a. raven would find it. b. bears would kill it. c. it would starve. d. it would drown. e. a wolf would kill it. 13. Grandfather suggests that Craig a. watch out for bears. b. find the porcupine. c. follow the river. d. watch for raven. e. wait for his brother. 14. The raven is known as a. a bad luck symbol. b. a trickster. c. a thief. d. a good luck symbol. e. an enemy. 15. Craig tied this red flannel shirt to a tree branch because a. he wanted to scare the raven. b. he wanted to frighten the bears. c. he didn’t want the hunters to shoot him. d. it would mark his path home. e. it would signal the airplane. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 293 16. When Craig heard the crunch in the leaves he thought it was a. a porcupine. b. a bear. c. the raven. d. the puppy. e. his brother. Select the meaning for each of the underlined words: 17. “Craig runs to the beached wooden skiff.” a. buoy b. raft c. small boat d. medium-sized marker 18. “Mama’s worried frown pulls her blue bandana down a little over her forehead.” a. handkerchief b. hat c. goggles d. cap Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 294 Hunting With Raven QUIZ #3 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. ___ Craig ties his red flannel shirt to a tree branch. ___ Stripey licked the tears from Craig’s face. ___ Craig finds Stripey trapped in a wire noose. ___ Craig discovers that one puppy is missing. ___ Grandpa tells Craig to watch raven. ___ Craig hopes that his father will let him train the pup to pull the dogsled. ___ Duane didn’t think that Stripey would survive alone in the woods. ___ Duane reminds Craig to make noise to warn off the bears. ___ A porcupine waddles out from under a bush. ___ Craig’s mother tells him to go only as far as the stream. ___ Craig bangs on a metal pail and calls the puppy. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 295 Hunting With Raven ANSWERS QUIZ #3 Number the following events in the order that they occurred in the story. 7. Craig ties his red flannel shirt to a tree branch. 10. Stripey licked the tears from Craig’s face. 9. Craig finds Stripey trapped in a wire noose. 1. Craig discovers that one puppy is missing. 6. Grandpa tells Craig to watch raven. 11. Craig hopes that his father will let him train the pup to pull the dogsled. 3. Duane didn’t think that Stripey would survive alone in the woods. 5. Duane reminds Craig to make noise to warn off the bears. 8. A porcupine waddles out from under a bush. 4. Craig’s mother tells him to go only as far as the stream. 2. Craig bangs on a metal pail and calls the puppy. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 296 Scoring Rubric Grade 6: The Library Research Reports Name: _____________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization /16 /4 /4 /4 4 Points Process is thoroughly followed. Detail is thorough and accurate. Report is complex and organized logically. Conventions (Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation) /4 Few/no errors Format is completely accurate. Process is followed to a considerable degree. 3 Points Detail is considerable and accurate. Report is organized logically. A few minor errors Format is mostly accurate. Process is followed to some degree. 2 Points Detail is sufficient but may contain inaccuracies. Report is simple and communicated in a mechanical way. Several minor errors and/or omissions Format contains some inaccuracies. 1 Point Process is followed to a limited degree. Detail is limited and/or inaccurate. Report lacks sufficient development. Several major errors and/or omissions Many inaccuracies in format Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 297 c) Technology Applications The Library location lends itself to several technology applications: Desktop Publishing of reports Multimedia Presentations using: o software such as Hyperstudio, MS Publisher, PowerPoint or Corel Presentation. Research using the Internet and electronic search engines Use Email to communicate with Authors d) Glossary Fables: Fables are stories that teach lessons. Fables can be wise or foolish stories and the characters are usually animals with human characteristics. The characters in fables find themselves in problematic situations that they attempt to solve. Fables end with a moral, or a lesson to be learned. Many fables were told by Aesop, a man who lived in Greece and was thought to have been a freed slave. He told fables as a way to explain the actions of people of his time, but used animals to make his points so as not to be offensive to people. Fiction: Fiction stories are imaginary or not real. Examples include: adventures, mysteries, folktales and legends. Folktales: Folktales are stories that were told long ago by regular folk and were passed down from one generation to the next, before there were books. Folktales were a way to help people of long ago learn and understand the customs of their day. They are usually associated with a certain country or people. The tales were told over and over again and changed because each storyteller tried to add their own interpretation to the story.” Folktales are stories that have features that recur regularly. The tales often use: mythological or magical characters human characters or extraordinary animals with human traits often endure magical adventures events that teach lessons Legends: Legends are stories that are told to explain how events in the world came to be and were written as if the stories were true. They are stories of the past about people, places or events, and were believed to be historical. A legend is always associated with a particular place and time in history. Non-fiction: Non-fiction stories or selections are based upon real events. Examples would be: biographies, autobiographies and research projects. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 298 C. Communication Museum a) Part 1 – Grade 5 Overview The Communication Museum focuses on providing students with an opportunity to practise essential grammar and spelling skills while learning about a number of different forms of communication. At the grade five level, students learn about the history of the telephone, computer, Internet, arts, language, and newspaper. Initially, students are greeted by a student guide at each exhibit where they are introduced to the featured form of communication and are invited to discover interesting facts about the history of a specific form of communication. Spelling words used in this section are words that have been identified as appropriate to the grade 5 level. Secondly, students work through a tutorial that focuses upon on a specific grammar skill or skills, within the context of how the communication medium is currently used. Spelling words used are words that have been identified as appropriate to the grade 5 level. Thirdly, skills that were presented in the tutorial are applied in a look at tomorrow’s use of each form of communication. Students are invited to edit sentences or passages and feedback is provided immediately. Students each have a Personal Spelling List that is created based on success with the given spelling words in the software. In addition, other words can be added to the list from their in-class work. They also have an opportunity to engage in games using their own spelling lists. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 299 Structure The Communication Museum consists of six exhibits and one quiz segment. Each exhibit focuses on a particular mode of communication. The exhibits include: The Arts Exhibit: Showcasing the Arts The Computer Exhibit: The Computer Connection The Internet Exhibit: Connecting the World The Language Exhibit: Connect With Language The Newspaper Exhibit: A Journey into Time The Telephone Exhibit: A Far-Off Voice The quiz segment consists of activities that review skills and vocabulary that are introduced in each of the exhibits. Communication Museum Grade 5 Exhibits Arts Computer Internet Language Newspaper Telephone Quiz Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 300 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The Communication Museum aligns with the following English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace and for personal fulfillment. 2. Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interaction with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies and their understanding of textual features (e.g. sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics). 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 301 Learning Outcomes Expectations Writing (W) W4 W7 W10 W11 W12 W13 W14 W15 W16 use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; use simple, compound, and complex sentences; use phrases appropriately to clarify meaning; use noun-pronoun agreement correctly; use correct punctuation in final drafts; use quotation marks for passages of dialogue; use phonics, the meaning and function of words, and some generalizations about spelling to spell with accuracy; use a variety of resources to confirm spelling; The Newspaper Exhibit The Arts Exhibit √ Segments The The Language Telephone Exhibit Exhibit √ √ The Internet Exhibit The Computer Exhibit √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ use the hyphen to divide words at the end of lines and to spell compound words and fractions Reading ( R ) R5 understand the appropriate vocabulary and language structures; R13 use a dictionary and a thesaurus to expand their vocabulary; √ √ √ √ √ √ Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 302 R14 R15 R16 identify root words, prefixes, and suffixes, and use them to determine the pronunciation and meaning of unfamiliar words; use specialized terms in different subject; identify synonyms and antonyms. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 √ √ √ 303 Components The Communication Museum: Components, Grade 5 The Communication Museum consists of the following exhibits. They are: The Arts Exhibit: Showcasing the World The Computer Exhibit: The Computer Connection The Internet Exhibit: Connecting the World The Language Exhibit: Connect With Language The Newspaper Exhibit: A Journey in Time The Telephone Exhibit: A Far-Off Voice Quiz Each exhibit is organized into three main sections: History: The first section introduces the student to the history of the communication medium. Spelling skills are presented and students are asked to identify misspelled words. Uses: A tutorial instructs students in the use of specific grammar skills. This section includes student tutorials as well as questions. Looking Toward Tomorrow: This section reflects on what tomorrow may bring in the area of communication. Students apply their skills to the editing of sentences and/or paragraphs. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 304 The Exhibits: A. The Arts Exhibit: Showcasing the World History: Students focus on the Arts as a form of communication. They are introduced to historical background information on the arts. Egyptian architecture is a focus. Students are guided through the process of examining grade-level appropriate spelling words and the selection of misspelled words. They also learn how to create the singular and plural forms of nouns. Uses: In this section, students review the use quotation marks in sentences and in titles. Then they apply their knowledge by identifying the placement of quotation marks in given sentences. Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students explore what tomorrow may bring in the area of the Arts. At the same time, they apply their knowledge by determining if quotation marks are required and where they might be inserted in the given sentences. Content information includes the following: • The tools that graphic artists use will grow with developments in the area of technology. • We no longer have to travel to the famous galleries of the world for virtual tours of famous works of arts are currently a reality. • Three-dimensional art is part of our experience and new software will continue to make in-roads into this area. • Traditional art forms, such as Palosee’s Man and Bear, will continue to grow in value. • While the tools used in the creation of works of art have expanded, there will always be room for both the traditional and technological forms. B. The Computer Exhibit: The Computer Connection History: Students are introduced to a brief history of the computer. They review rules associated with dividing words into syllables and are asked to find the misspelled words in the sentences in the computer exhibit. Uses: The many applications of computer technology are presented using a variety of sentences: simple, compound, and complex. Students also play a game titled, “Name That Sentence.” Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 305 Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students look at the role of the computer in tomorrow’s world as they are prompted to create simple, compound, and complex sentences. Key points found in the sentences in this section include the following. • • • • In our homes we will be able to monitor the function of appliances and utilities. Also, we will be able to monitor our household chores including such aspects as time on task and scheduling of chores. Computers will continue to assist in the control of traffic patterns in cities. Voice activation will increase in regulating equipment both at the office and in the home. The use of computer technology in health care will continue to grow. C. The Internet Exhibit: Connecting the World History: Students focus on the Internet as a form of communication. The use of prefixes is reviewed and students are asked to locate misspelled words as they read about the history of the Internet. Uses: In this section, students review the use of the period, question mark, exclamation mark and the comma. Then, as they are presented with the many uses of the Internet, they are asked to insert the missing punctuation marks. Looking Toward Tomorrow: This section provides ideas from the author on how the Internet may be used in the immediate future. Students are asked to insert the required punctuation marks. The sentences reflect on what the Internet may be like in the immediate future. Content information includes the following points: • • • • The number of Internet users grows daily. By the year 2001, there will be 350 million users. The accessibility of video conferencing by the average citizen will add a new dimension to our lives. Growth will continue in the areas of banking services, on-line purchasing, interactive games, and electronic mail or communication. We will wonder how we ever survived without the latest in technology. D. The Language Exhibit: Connect With Language History: Students learn about the origin of language as they explore language as a form of communication. The meaning and importance of root words is discussed and students are asked to locate misspelled words in given sentences. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 306 Uses: Students read a paragraph on the importance and use of language in our everyday life. Following a review of synonyms and antonyms students are asked to locate synonyms for key words in a given paragraph. Looking Toward Tomorrow: In this section, students locate antonyms for specific words in a paragraph which focuses on the use of language in years to come. Some of the points mentioned include the following: • • • • • The use of language is essential in our lives. We may use different tools to assist in communication but we will continue to relate with words. The nature of the words will continue to grow and change. New words will make their way into our vocabulary. Words such as Internet, web site, were not part of a person’s day-to-day vocabulary 50 years ago. As technology grows so will the accompanying vocabulary. The ability to read and write directions and manuals that tell us how to operate our new technology will be very important. Even though some of our words may change language will continue to be the foundation of communication. E. The Newspaper Exhibit: A Journey in Time History: Students focus on the newspaper as a form of communication. The history of the newspaper is traced from the invention of paper to the present. The use of suffixes is reviewed and students are asked to identify misspelled words. Uses: As students are presented with information about how newspapers are used today, they are introduced to phrases and prepositions. They are then asked to identify phrases found in the sentences. Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students explore the newspaper of tomorrow as they demonstrate an understanding of the use of phrases. Material presented contains the key information that follows. • • • • • The newspaper, as we know it, will probably change. The newspaper industry is quickly embracing the Internet and on-line news services are available to all for a fraction of the cost. On-line services have the advantage of quickly providing news updates. They also may be accompanied with current video clips. The Internet is environmentally friendly. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 307 F. The Telephone Exhibit: A Far-Off Voice History: Students focus on the telephone as a form of communication. They explore the discovery of this invention from its inception to the present while watching for misspelled words. Uses: There are many uses of the telephone. A number of these are presented to the students. In this section students also review pronouns and their antecedents. They are asked to identify the antecedents for given pronouns. Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students explore the use of the telephone in the future as they demonstrate an understanding of pronouns and antecedents. Key information provided includes the following points: • • • • • The first video phone was invented in 1969. Wireless technology will continue to grow. Personal phones will continue to grow in popularity and may one day replace the traditional household phone. There will be a continued move to making telephone technology smaller and yet capable of performing more tasks. Video phones will soon be readily available to all. G. The Quiz Exhibit Backgrounder: The quiz segment consists of activities that assess the students’ understanding of skills that were introduced in the Communication Museum Exhibits. Skills and knowledge addressed include: spelling, nouns and pronouns, phrases, types of sentences, synonyms and antonyms, and punctuation. Assessment The expectations or skills designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed by the software. The software provides the following: tracking of segments completed feedback during practice quizzes on mastery of skills. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 308 Assessment Segment The Arts Exhibit: Showcasing the Arts The Focus of the Tutorial/Activity Skills Forming plurals - Identifying misspelled words Assessment Instrument Software Tracking Using quotation marks Applying quotation marks in a paragraph The Computer Exhibit: The Computer Connection Learning about syllables – Identifying misspelled words Software Tracking Working with simple, compound, and complex sentences The Internet Exhibit: Connecting the World Creating simple, compound, and complex sentences Learning about prefixes – Identifying misspelled words Software Tracking Working with punctuation marks (Period, question, exclamation, and comma) The Language Exhibit: Connect With Language Applying punctuation marks Reviewing root words and word meanings – Identifying misspelled words Software Tracking Reviewing synonyms and antonyms The Newspaper Exhibit: A Journey in Time Reviewing suffixes – Identifying misspelled words Software Tracking Selecting phrases The Telephone Exhibit: A Far-Off Voice Identifying phrases Telephone History- Identifying misspelled words Software Tracking Identifying pronouns and their antecedents Applying understanding of pronouns and their antecedents Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 309 Spelling List The following spelling words are words that students are expected to be familiar with when engaging in Communications Museum activities. The Telephone Exhibit: A Far-Off Voice famous assistance dynamic instruments heard people mysterious believed decided millions The Newspapers Exhibit: A Journey in Time carefully safety claims appeared located natural vicinity guide funniest amazing The Computer Exhibit: The Computer Connection pioneer ceiling advance organized second began excitedly were their weighed The Internet Exhibit: Connecting the World hemisphere automatic existed information company retrieving result developed transactions increase Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 The Arts Exhibit: Showcasing the Arts buildings wonders pictures photographs enjoyment dollars known remembered collections appreciate The Language Exhibit: Connect With Language communicated because written recognized influenced education beginnings before ancestors language 310 b) Part 2 – Grade 6 Overview The Communication Museum focuses on providing students with an opportunity to practise essential grammar and spelling skills while learning about a number of different forms of communication. At the grade six level students learn about the history of the radio, television, photography, magazines, and books. Initially, students are greeted by a student guide at each exhibit where they are introduced to the featured form of communication and are invited to discover interesting facts about the history of the specific communication medium. Spelling words used are words that have been identified as appropriate to the grade 6 level. Secondly, students work through a tutorial that focuses on a specific grammar skill or skills within the context of how the communication medium is currently used. Thirdly, skills that were presented in the tutorial are applied in a look at tomorrow’s use of each form of communication. Students are invited to edit sentences or passages and feedback is provided immediately. Students each have a Personal Spelling List that is created based on success with the given spelling words in the software. In addition, other words can be added to the list from their in-class work. They also have an opportunity to engage in games using their own spelling lists. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 311 Structure The Communication Museum consists of five exhibits and one quiz segment. Each exhibit focuses on a particular form of communication. The exhibits include: The Books Exhibit: Looking into Books The Magazine Exhibit: Behind the Magazine Cover The Photography Exhibit: The Power of Photography The Radio Exhibit: Radio in Review The Television Exhibit: Television Trek The quiz segment consists of activities that review skills and vocabulary that were introduced in each of the exhibits. Communication Museum Grade 6 Exhibits Books Magazine Photography Radio Television Quiz Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 312 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The Communication Museum aligns with the following English Standards as specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students read a wide range of print and non-print texts to build an understanding of texts, of themselves, and of the cultures of the United States and the world; to acquire new information; to respond to the needs and demands of society and the workplace and for personal fulfillment. 2. Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies and their understanding of textual features (e.g. sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics). 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and non-print texts. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 313 Learning Outcomes Expectations Writing (W) W4 use and spell correctly the vocabulary appropriate for this grade level; W6 use a variety of sentence types and sentence structures appropriate for their purposes; W9 use the positive, comparative, and superlative forms of adjectives correctly; W10 use adjective and adverb phrases correctly and effectively; W11 use verb tenses consistently throughout a piece of writing; W12 Use a colon before a list, between numbers in time, and after a greeting; W13 use phonics, the meaning and function of words, and some generalizations about spelling to spell with accuracy; W14 use subordinate clauses correctly; W15 frequently introduce vocabulary from other subject areas into their writing; W16 use homonyms correctly; Reading (R) Research (RE) R15 R24 understand specialized words, or terms, as necessary; use their knowledge of word origins and derivations to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words; The Television Exhibit The Radio Exhibit √ √ Segments The Magazine Exhibit √ The Books Exhibit The Photography Exhibit √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 √ 314 Components The Communication Museum consists of the following exhibits. They are: The Books Exhibit: Looking into Books The Magazine Exhibit: Behind the Magazine Cover The Photography Exhibit: The Power of Photography The Radio Exhibit: Radio in Review The Television Exhibit: Television Trek Quiz Each exhibit is organized into three sections. History: The first section introduces the student to the history of the communication medium. Spelling skills are presented and students are asked to identify misspelled words. Uses: A tutorial instructs students in the use of specific grammar skills. This section includes student tutorials as well as questions. Looking Toward Tomorrow: This section reflects on what tomorrow may bring in the area of communication. Students apply their skills to the editing of sentences and/or paragraphs. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 315 The Exhibits A. The Books Exhibit: Looking into Books History: Students focus on books as a form of communication. They are introduced to the historical background of books as inventions, such as how and where they originated and materials that were used to write them. Information on the use of suffixes is presented and students are asked to locate misspelled words in the given sentences. Parts of the Book: Students are introduced to the various parts of a book. The meaning of homonyms and their appropriate use is examined. Students have the opportunity to apply knowledge and skills. Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students read a reflection on the use of books both now and in the future. Homonyms are reviewed and applied in the given paragraph. Content information includes the following: • • • • • 2/3 of the books that people read are paperbacks. During the 1990’s book publishing became computerized. New and improved colour printing techniques allow publishers to produce beautifully illustrated books. Talking story books for children have entered the market and have brought stories to life. People who are visually impaired can now listen to stories. B. The Magazine Exhibit: Behind the Magazine Cover History: Magazines are presented as a form of communication. Students are introduced to the history of the earliest forms of magazines as well as various types. Students review the sound of “shen” and discover the many ways of writing it. Uses: As they learn about magazine publishing, students are introduced to adverb and adjective phrases. They are then asked to identify the phrase by selecting it from three choices. Looking Toward Tomorrow: Students read a paragraph which reflects on the current and future use of magazines. While applying skills students are presented with specific information. This information includes the following points. • • Interest in general magazines has decreased. Many people are receiving their news via television, radio or newspaper. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 316 • • • • • • • Now magazines cater to the interests of special groups. The magazine industry sees the publishing of a number of new magazines each year. There are also hundreds of magazines that cease publication each year. There is a move to the electronic newsstand. Magazines can be available electronically at a fraction of the cost. Commercial sites offer information about thousands of magazines as well as links to on-line versions. These links provide access to a wealth of magazines. C. The Photography Exhibit: The Power of Photography History: Students focus on photography as a form of communication. They are introduced to the history of photography as they explore the role and development of picture-taking in communication. Prefixes are introduced and the meaning of common prefixes is provided. Students read given sentences and identify misspelled words. Uses: This section lists the many uses of photography. Students are also introduced to subordinate clauses and are asked to select one from three possible choices. Looking Toward Tomorrow: As the students work with clauses, they are introduced to information relating to current practices and future application of photography. The following points are included: • • • • • • • In the early 1990’s Eastman Kodak created a new line of cameras and film for the amateur photographer called Advanced Photo System. Pictures could be developed the traditional way or they could be scanned into the computer. Digital photography – Many photographers have embraced digital photography. In digital photography the scanner records the visual images and converts them into coding that a computer can read. The photo can be changed in size, moved or cropped using specific computer programs. Digital photography is used extensively in advertising and graphic design. Digital cameras are available for the professional and amateur alike. D. The Radio Exhibit: Radio in Review History: The students are introduced to a brief history of radio. Within this context they review root words and are asked to identify misspelled words in sentences. Uses: The various uses of radio over time are explored and students have an opportunity to work with different forms of adjectives – positive, comparative, and superlative. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 317 Looking Toward Tomorrow: The current and potential uses of radio are listed in a given paragraph and students are asked to apply appropriate forms of specific adjectives. The paragraph highlights the following points. • • • • • • Radio is still enjoyed. Digital broadcasting produces higher quality sound. Radio communication is still important; for example, it enables the astronauts to maintain contact with their control headquarters. Information obtained by sensors during space travel is converted to electrical signals and transmitted as radio waves. Radio also serves as a navigational aid enabling the calculation of speed and direction. Radio will continue to improve in quality and will be a vital part of new forms of communication and travel. E. The Television Exhibit: Television Trek History: The television is presented as another form of communication. Students are provided with historical background on the evolution of television. In this section, they work with specific spelling words that are appropriate to the grade 6 level. The “shen” sound and the variety of spellings that can convey this sound are reviewed. Uses: As students learn about the many applications of television they review the uses of the colon. These include the following: to introduce a list of items, after a formal salutation, and between the hour and minutes of time. Looking Toward Tomorrow: In this section, students reflect on the use of television in the immediate future. They are reminded of the importance of using verb tenses consistently throughout a piece of writing and are then asked to select the correct verbs to be used in a given paragraph. The following points list some of the information included in the paragraph. • • • • • • Cable companies will continue to expand the services that they bring into the home. Set-top boxes will enhance viewing and provide on-screen guides, pay-per-view movies, and digital-only channels. We will be able to view our favourite program and at the same time communicate with a friend on the Internet via our television set. Also, in the days ahead, we may have the option to obtain background information on the program and the actors as we are viewing. Many products have been made famous by programs. One could have the opportunity to purchase products as they are viewing their program. Whether shopping on-screen or voting on how a story will end, we know that there will be many wonderful changes ahead. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 318 F. The Quiz Backgrounder: The quiz segment consists of activities that assess students’ understanding of skills that were introduced in the Communication Museum Exhibits. Skills and knowledge addressed include: spelling; verb tenses; subordinate clauses; positive, comparative, and superlative adjectives; adjective and adverb phrases; and homonyms. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 319 Assessment The expectations or skills designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed by the software. The software provides the following: tracking of segments completed feedback during practice quizzes on mastery of skills. Assessment Segment The Books Exhibit: Looking into Books The Focus of the Tutorial/Activity Skills Reviewing suffixes Assessment Instrument Software Tracking Selecting misspelled words Selecting homonyms The Magazine Exhibit: Behind the Magazine Cover Working with the “shen” sound Software Tracking Selecting misspelled words Selecting adjective and adverb phrases The Photography Exhibit: The Power of Photography Working with prefixes Software Tracking Selecting misspelled words Introducing/reviewing subordinate clauses The Radio Exhibit: Radio in Review Reviewing root words Software Tracking Selecting misspelled words Presenting positive, comparative, and superlative adjectives The Television Exhibit: Television Trek Selecting misspelled words Software Tracking Reviewing the use of the colon Applying verb tenses Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 320 Spelling List The following spelling words are words that students are expected to be familiar with when engaging in Communication Museum activities. The Books Exhibit: Looking into Books ancient beautiful capitals century employed important people process wooden writing The Magazine Exhibit: Behind the Magazine Cover collections concentration contributions information introduction production professions publication selection versions The Radio Exhibit: Radio in Review Canadian imagine invention known listen manufacturer president progress thousands types The Photography Exhibit: The Power of Photography camera capable combination company curiosity discouraged discovered forgettable inexpensive unknown The Television Exhibit: Television Trek application audiences children demonstration direction first foundation opportunity receive television Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 321 D. PRODUCTION STUDIO The Production Studio location focuses on the strand of oral and visual communication. Integrated are skills in reading and writing. Advertisements are used as the means for students to develop techniques and analyze form. A directed tutorial leads into ad design and production. a. Level 1 – Grade 5 Overview Production Studio focuses on defining mass media, the purposes of media, and the connections among purpose, audience, form and message. Students apply their knowledge and skills to design ads for a billboard, store poster and flyer. Choices of products allow students to design a variety of ads within this location. Students save their products to “My Portfolio” which can be printed for integration within the classroom language program. Structure Production Studio – Grade 5 Tutorial Mass media: types and purposes Media techniques: colour, music, font, target audience The message Features of types of ads Store Poster Billboard Flyer All saved in My Portfolio Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 322 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The Production Studio aligns with the standards specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students adjust their use of spoken, written and visual language (e.g. conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative and critical members of a variety of literary communities. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 323 Learning Outcomes In the Production Studio expectations have been specified for writing, reading, and oral and visual communication. Student achievement of the expectations is assessed both in the software and through the use of instruments included in the manual. Expectations Writing (W) W1 communicate ideas for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences √ W2 produce media texts using writing and materials from other media √ W3 √ W5 revise and edit work focusing on appropriateness of vocabulary for audience and purpose use correctly the specified conventions W6 produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, techniques, resources √ W18 select words and phrases to create special effects √ √ Reading and Research (R, RE) R23 experiment with words and sentence patterns to create word pictures √ Oral and Visual Communication (OV) OV3 OV4 OV5 OV6 OV8 ask and answer questions on a variety of topics to acquire and clarify information contribute and work constructively in groups identify various types of media works and some of the techniques used in them analyze media works PT PT √ √ OV15 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately use appropriate words and structures in discussions or classroom presentations contribute ideas to help solve problems, and listen and respond constructively to the ideas of others when working in a group create a variety of media works OV16 identify the main characteristics of some familiar media √ OV18 identify descriptive and figurative language in oral and media text √ OV19 understand and use a variety of forms of oral and media texts OV10 OV12 Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 PT PT PT PT PT 324 Components This location uses an integrated approach which begins with an interactive tutorial including on-screen activities. Feedback is provided to students. Students apply their knowledge and skills to design ads for a billboard, store poster and flyer. A performance task with an accompanying rubric is provided for off-screen completion. Tutorial and Activities: The tutorial focuses on: defining and identifying examples of mass media; understanding and exploring purposes of media; making the connection among purpose, audience, form and message; analysing the characteristics of ads. Application: Students design and produce three forms of ads: billboard, store poster, flyer. The features are explained and students can choose from a variety of products. Thus repetition of the application using different forms and products is a possibility. Features available for on-screen design include a variety of graphics, print styles and colours. Performance Task Students work in groups to produce ads for a school event. All groups work on ads for the same event. To make the task authentic, a real event can be advertised and all student products posted. The task culminates with a survey of other students to determine the impact of the ads. Assessment instruments for process and product are included. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 325 Teacher Notes Grade 5 Performance Task Site: Production Studio Advertising a School Event 1. This task is completed individually and collaboratively. Initially students are in groups to conduct their planning and decision-making. Groups of 3 or 4 students are recommended. Students then proceed to work individually to complete the assigned tasks. They gather again as a group for editing purposes. 2. Students may require instruction on effective teamwork skills. They may include: staying on task contributing ideas listening actively encouraging others fulfilling the assigned role. A rubric has been included for teacher use in assessing the group work. The group process can be assessed individually for each student. 3. It is recommended that the rubric be used to assess each student individually. The rubric is generic so that it encompasses the various forms of ads designed. 4. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes may to the task. 5. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their ads with the “On Location with Language” software or by using accessible word processing and draw programs. 6. To make the task authentic a real school event could be selected. If this is done, then a follow-up survey could be administered to students in the school to determine which ads were most effective and the reasons for their appeal. In this case, all students should be designing ads for the same event. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 326 Student Directions Grade 5 Performance Task Site: Production Studio Advertising a School Event Your school is holding a special event. To advertise the event the principal has asked your group to produce various forms of ads. However, there are some requirements: 1. 2. 3. 4. The ads should appeal to other students in the school. The purpose is to have students attend the event. Different types of ads must be produced. The ads can be produced by hand or on the computer. When you meet with your group you should: plan the message for the ads you will produce; decide on forms; and assign the various tasks. Remember to meet as an editorial group once all the ads have been drafted so that you can assist one another with revision and editing. Examine the rubrics before you start. They provide detail on how your group work and final products will be graded. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 327 Rubric for Product The Production Studio Grade 5: Advertising a School Event Name: _________________________ Category Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge/ Reasoning Forms and techniques Demonstrates limited knowledge of forms and techniques Demonstrates some knowledge of forms and techniques Demonstrates considerable knowledge of forms and techniques Demonstrates extensive knowledge of forms and techniques Communication Form of the ad Demonstrates limited precision Demonstrates some precision Demonstrates considerable limited precision Demonstrates limited precision Purpose Purpose is limited in clarity. Purpose is somewhat clear. Purpose is clear. Purpose is clear and confident. Communication Word Choice Language and graphics are simple Language and graphics are clear and somewhat complex Language and graphics are complex and carefully chosen. Language and graphics are complex, insightful and effective. Conventions Spelling, grammar and punctuation Errors interfere with communication Errors detract from communication Few minor errors Almost errorfree Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 328 Rubric for Group Process The Production Studio Grade 5: Advertising a School Event Name: __________________________ Criteria Level 1 Date: _________________ Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Contributes ideas Few ideas Some ideas Several ideas Many ideas Listens actively by asking and answering questions Seldom asks and answers questions Occasionally asks and answers questions Often and at appropriate times asks and answers questions Asks and answers questions demonstrating initiative and insight Uses clear, concise and appropriate language Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a limited degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language to a some degree Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently Uses clear, concise, appropriate language consistently and effectively Works constructively by staying on task, encouraging others, and fulfilling role Demonstrates criteria to a limited degree Demonstrates criteria to some degree Demonstrates criteria to a considerable degree Demonstrates criteria to a high degree Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 329 Assessment The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications that have been completed by students. Although primarily intended for teacher use, the instruments can be adapted to peer and self assessment. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations, assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Some instruments are included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of student work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper as one product and of the collection of student work published in “My Portfolio.” Software Activity Billboard ad Assessment Scoring rubric Manual Performance Task A School Event Assessment Rubric for Product Rubric for Groupwork Store poster ad Scoring rubric Flyer Scoring rubric Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 330 Scoring Rubric The Production Studio Grade 5: Billboard Ad Name: ___________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization Conventions /16 /4 /4 /4 /4 Employs features of billboard ads effectively and creatively Purpose and target audience are clear, precise. Graphics and print combine for an effective message. Few/no errors Employs features of billboard ads with some degree of effectiveness Purpose and target audience are clear. Graphics and print combine for a clear message. A few minor errors 2 Points Employs some features of billboard ads Purpose and target audience are recognizable. Graphics and print combine with limited effectiveness. Several minor errors and/or omissions 1 Point Employs few features of billboard ads Purpose and target audience are unclear. Graphics and print appear unrelated or are incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions 4 Points 3 Points Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 331 Scoring Rubric The Production Studio Grade 5: Store Poster Ad Name: __________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization Conventions /16 /4 /4 /4 /4 Purpose and target audience are clear, precise. Graphics and print combine for an effective message. Few/no errors 4 Points Employs features of poster ads effectively and creatively Purpose and target audience are clear. Graphics and print combine for a clear message. A few minor errors 3 Points Employs features of poster ads with some degree of effectiveness 2 Points Employs some features of poster ads Purpose and target audience are recognizable. Graphics and print combine with limited effectiveness. Several minor errors and/or omissions 1 Point Employs few features of poster ads Purpose and target audience are unclear. Graphics and print combine appear unrelated or are incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 332 Scoring Rubric The Production Studio Grade 5: Flyer Ad Name: ___________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization Conventions /16 /4 /4 /4 /4 Employs features of flyer ads effectively and creatively. Purpose and target audience are clear, precise. Graphics and print combine for an effective message. Few/no errors Employs features of flyer ads with some degree of effectiveness. Purpose and target audience are clear. Graphics and print combine for a clear message. A few minor errors 2 Points Employs some features of flyer ads. Purpose and target audience are recognizable. Graphics and print combine with limited effectiveness. Several minor errors and/or omissions 1 Point Employs few features of flyer ads. Purpose and target audience are unclear. Graphics and print combine appear unrelated or are incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions 4 Points 3 Points Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 333 b. Level 2 - Grade 6 Overview Production Studio focuses on ad appeal, target group, media forms, slogans, and the roles of writer and artist. Analysis of sample ads is emphasized. Students apply their knowledge and skills to produce a variety of ads for two distinct campaigns: one for a commercial product and one for a public service. Choices of products and services allow students to design a variety of ads within this location. Students save their products to “My Portfolio” which can be printed for integration within the classroom language program. Structure Production Studio – Grade 6 Tutorial Forms of media Target audience Roles of writer and graphic artist Techniques and effectiveness Product Campaign 1. Store Poster Ad 2. Traveling Ad Public Service Campaign 1. Flyer 2. Button All Saved in My Portfolio Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 334 Standards: National Council of Teachers of English The Production Studio aligns with the standards specified by the National Council of Teachers of English. 1. Students adjust their use of spoken, written and visual language (e.g. conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes. 2. Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes. 3. Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g. spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language and genre to create, critique and discuss print and non-print texts. 4. Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative and critical members of a variety of literary communities. 5. Students use spoken, written and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g. for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information). Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 335 Learning Outcomes In the Production Studio expectations have been specified for writing, reading, and oral and visual communication. Student achievement of the expectations is assessed both in the software and through the use of instruments included in the manual. Expectations Writing (W) W1 W2 W5 W17 communicate ideas and information for a variety of purposes and to specific audiences produce media texts using writing and materials from other media √ produce pieces of writing using a variety of forms, narrative techniques, and materials from other media select and use words to create special effects √ √ √ Oral and Visual Communication (OV) OV1 OV5 make reports, describe and explain a course of action and follow detailed instructions identify various types of media works and some of the techniques used in them OV6 analyze media works OV7 use the conventions of oral language, and of the various media PT OV8 express and respond to ideas and opinions concisely, clearly and appropriately PT OV9 demonstrate the ability to concentrate by identifying main points and staying on topic speak correctly, observing common grammatical rules such as subject-verb agreement, noun-pronoun agreement and consistency of verb tense use tone of voice and gestures to enhance the message and help convince or persuade listeners in conversations, discussions or presentations speak clearly when making presentations PT PT OV15 demonstrate critical listening and viewing behaviours and show respect for the presenter create a variety of media works OV16 identify the main characteristics of some familiar media OV17 OV18 identify the various types of professionals involved in producing a media work and describe the jobs they do analyze and assess a media work and express a considered viewpoint about it OV20 identify descriptive and figurative language in oral and media texts OV10 OV11 OV13 OV14 Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 PT √ √ PT PT PT √ √ PT PT √ 336 Components This location uses an integrated approach which begins with an interactive tutorial including on-screen activities. Feedback is provided to students. Students apply their knowledge and skills to design two ad campaigns: one for a commercial product and one for a public service. The forms of ads are: poster ad, travelling ad, flyer, button. A performance task with an accompanying rubric is provided for off-screen completion. Tutorial and Activities: The tutorial focuses on: exploring how ads appeal to various target groups; identifying forms and techniques; understanding the roles of graphic artist and writer in ad design; producing slogan and describing products. Application Students design and produce ads for a commercial product and a public service. Student choice of products and services, as well as form, facilitates repetition of the application. Features available for on-screen design include a variety of graphics, print styles, shapes and colours. Products, along with reflections, are saved to “My Portfolio.” Performance Task Students are presented with the task of reviewing current ads and reporting to a management team as it prepares to launch a new product or service. Students present their findings orally with accompanying visuals. An assessment instrument for the presentation is included. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 337 Teacher Notes Grade 6 Performance Task Site: Production Studio Launching a New Product 1. This task is completed individually. It is recommended that the rubric be used for assessment of the oral presentation. Both media knowledge and oral presentation skills can be assessed with the rubric. 2. It is recommended that the rubric be shared with the students before beginning the task. The rubric may require alteration or adjustment depending on changes made to the task. 3. This is an opportunity to integrate technology. Students can produce their visual display by using accessible word processing and draw programs. The Internet can be used for research purposes. “Ön Location with Language” can be used to design the sample ad. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 338 Student Directions Grade 6 Performance Task Site: Production Studio Launching a New Product You work for a company that has designed a new product. As a member of the Advertising Department, you have been asked to conduct research and make a presentation to the marketing team as they prepare to launch the new product. The marketing team wants to: know what types of advertising forms and techniques are being used to advertise similar products currently on the market; know what forms and techniques you would recommend for the new product; see a sample ad for the new product. In your presentation you must use visuals. Examine the rubric before you start. It provides detail on how your presentation will be graded. Hint: First decide on the product. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 339 Rubric for Oral Presentation The Production Studio Grade 6: Launching a New Product Name: _________________________ Criteria Date: _________________ Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Meets the requirements of the presentation. Several components missing. Few components missing. Components present Components dealt with thoroughly. Uses appropriate words and structures Seldom uses appropriate words and structures. Occasionally uses appropriate words and structures. Often uses appropriate words and structures. Uses appropriate words and structures with precision and insight. Uses tone of voice and gestures to help clarify meaning. Demonstrates limited clarity and precision. Demonstrates some clarity and precision. Demonstrates considerable clarity and precision. Demonstrates a high degree of clarity and precision. Speaks clearly Seldom speaks clearly Occasionally speaks clearly Frequently speaks clearly Always speaks clearly Shows respect for a presenter through active listening. Demonstrates limited respect Demonstrates some respect Demonstrates consistent respect Demonstrates consistent respect and encourages presenter. Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 340 Assessment and Evaluation The expectations designated in the scope and sequence charts are addressed and assessed through a combination of software tracking and assessment by the teacher. Assessment instruments are included in the manual for teachers to use and/or adapt. These instruments are tailored to the software activities and applications, which have been completed by students. Although primarily intended for teacher use, the instruments can be adapted to peer and self-assessment. Where performance tasks have been developed to provide extension to the software and to facilitate a means for students to demonstrate their achievement of the expectations, assessment instruments are included specific to the task. Some instruments are included for summative purposes to assist in the assessment of a larger body of student work, i.e. the assessment of the newspaper as one product and of the collection of student work published in “My Portfolio.” Activity Assessment Product campaign ads Scoring rubric Public service campaign ads Scoring rubric Performance Task Launching a New Product Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 Assessment Rubric 341 Scoring Rubric The Production Studio Grade 6: Product Campaign Name: _________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization Conventions /16 /4 /4 /4 /4 Purpose and target audience are clear, precise. Graphics and print combine for an effective message. Few/no errors 4 Points Employs features of product campaign effectively and creatively Purpose and target audience are clear. Graphics and print combine for a clear message. A few minor errors 3 Points Employs features of product campaign with some degree of effectiveness 2 Points Employs some features of product campaign Purpose and target audience are recognizable. Graphics and print combine with limited effectiveness. Several minor errors and/or omissions 1 Point Employs few features of product campaign Purpose and target audience are unclear. Graphics and print combine appear unrelated or are incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 342 Scoring Rubric The Production Studio Grade 6: Public Service Campaign Name: ___________________________ Date: _________________ Score Reasoning/ Knowledge Communication Organization Conventions /16 /4 /4 /4 /4 Purpose and target audience are clear, precise. Graphics and print combine for an effective message. Few/no errors 4 Points Employs features of public service campaign effectively and creatively Employs features of public service campaign with some degree of effectiveness Purpose and target audience are clear. Graphics and print combine for a clear message. A few minor errors Employs some features of public service campaign Purpose and target audience are recognizable. Graphics and print combine with limited effectiveness. Several minor errors and/or omissions Employs few features of public service campaign Purpose and target audience are unclear. Graphics and print combine appear unrelated or are incomplete. Several major errors and/or omissions 3 Points 2 Points 1 Point Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 343 c) Technology Applications Student activities and tasks provide many opportunities for students to use software applications. Products are designed using the “On Location with Language” program. This can also be used for completion of the performance tasks. Other graphics programs could be used to compliment and extend the completion of the performance tasks. These include MS Publisher, Paint, and clipart programs. If appropriate, presentation software could be used to structure and present the grade 6 performance task. Possibilities include Power Point and Inspiration. d) Glossary mass media - methods of communication used to reach large numbers of people at the same time slogan - a catchy phrase or saying intended to attract attention and identify the product or service target group - the audience which the advertisement is intended to persuade Language Trek: On Location with Language – Grades 5 & 6 344