Triple Gold Sentences - Caliente Union School District
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Triple Gold Sentences - Caliente Union School District
Chris Biffle WholeBrainTeaching.com Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Monday, May 21, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 WBT Certification Levels Level 1: WBT Novice: 100 Certification Points Level 2: WBT Advanced Novice: 200 Certification Points Level 3: WBT Intermediate: 300 Certification Points Level 4: WBT Advanced Intermediate: 500 Certification Points + score 90% on online certification test ------------------Level 5: WBT Board Certified Instructor: 700 Certification Points + ExemplaryVideo + Oral Exam Level 6: WBT Board Certified Trainer: 1000 Certification Points + Special Assignments Level 7: WBT Board Certified District Presenter: 1500 Certification Points + Special Assignments Level 8: WBT Board Certified Regional Presenter: 2000 Certification Points + Special Assignments Level 9: WBT Board Certified National Presenter: 3000 Certification Points + Special Assignments Level 10: WBT Board Certified International Presenter: 5000 Certification Points + Special Assignments Wow! 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Please use Class-Yes blog Satisfactory answers will receive 50 Certification Points addition, add any other WBT techniques you (250 words minimum). 75 or moreSample Certification Video can be Points posted on YouTube, are possible for outstanding answers. school's or district's video permission sli electronic link to Chris Rekstad at Chris 100 Certification Points: required be 50 Certification Points 25 Bonus Webcast Medallion: Write a though Certification Whole Brain Teaching's webcasts (archive the homepage at WholeBrainTeaching.co Points applied the webcast's subject to your clas Tuesday, October 16, 2012 The S To get started, let’s begin with a definition of a sentence. A sentence is a complete message that starts with a capital letter and ends with an end mark: a period, exclamation mark or a question mark. Bobo Robo-Dilly Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 How about the definition of a paragraph? A paragraph is three or more sentences about one subject, usually stated in the paragraph’s first sentence. Bobo Robo-Dilly Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 The definition of an essay? An essay is three or more paragraphs about one BIG subject, usually stated in the essay’s first sentence. Bobo Robo-Dilly Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 OK. But is there any way to make teaching writing easier? Nervous Nita Tuesday, October 16, 2012 1. Too many goals 2. Too many rules 3. Too many ways to Tuesday, October 16, 2012 What’s the solution??? Nervous Nita Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Focus a lot of your class time on teaching kids how to write one, perfect, information packed sentence: The Triple Golder! Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 I’m so eager to learn more! More! More! How about some examples? Gee! Wow! The Triple Golder sounds as much fun as a parakeet circus!!! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Smarty WonderBeak This summer we went to the lake, the mountains and the beach. Diary of a Wimpy Kid is funny, has good drawings and contains characters kids will love. Long division involves three steps: division, multiplication and subtraction. Great advances in astronomy during the Renaissance were developed by Galileo, Kepler and Brahe. In the Mona Lisa, Leonardo uses optical illusions in the foreground, background and in Mona Lisa’s smile. Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Great! Fantastic! I want to learn more and more! How about some lower grade examples? That would be so fantastic!!!! I love TRIPLE GOLDERS!!! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 For lower grades, use lots of simple, scaffolded sentence frames. Smarty WonderBeak I see ______. I see _____ and _____. I see _____, _____ and _____. I like ______. I like _____ and _____. I like _____, _____ and _____. I can ______. I can _____ and _____. I can _____, _____ and _____. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Here’s some more lower grade examples! Smarty WonderBeak The book is about ______. The book is about _____ and _____. The book is about _____, _____ and _____. We learn about ______. We learn about _____ and _____. We learn about _____, _____ and _____. Someday I want to be a ______. Someday I want to be a ______ and a ______. Someday I want to be a ______, a _____ and a ____. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Triple Golders are easy! Here’s one! I like to have fun, play and have a good time! UncleOctober Louie13, "Trickster" Dilly Saturday, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 I like to have fun, play and have a good time! That’s a Clinker! A Triple Golder has to be about three separate things! Having fun, playing and having a good time ... are too similar! Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Ooh! Tell me about Clinkers! Smarty Wonderbeak I love your examples! More! More! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Here’s some more clinkers! The similar terms are underlined. Smarty WonderBeak This summer we went to the lake, had a good time and played in the water. Diary of a Wimpy Kid is funny, silly and contains characters kids will love. Long division involves three steps: division, taking one number from another and subtraction. Great advances in astronomy during the Renaissance were developed by scientists, astronomers, and Galileo. In the Mona Lisa, Leonardo uses optical illusions in the foreground, Mona Lisa’s face and in Mona Lisa’s smile. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 There’s nothing wrong with clinkers! You’re just giving more details. Teachers love details! Uncle Dilly Saturday, Louis October "Trickster" 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Vacation Subject Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Lake Beach Mountains Vacation Subject Smarty WonderBeak Part 1 Part 2 Part 2 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Lake Water fun Water fun Why should kids learn to write Triple Golders? Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Dilly Dilly Triple Golders teach the fundamental writing skill ... which is almost never present when kids speak: dividing a topic into logical parts. Thus, Triple Golders represent writing’s most difficult challenge ... verbal organization. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 How could you move from a Triple Golder sentence to a Triple Golder paragraph? Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Dilly Dilly Once the Triple Golder is mastered, it is a short, fairly easy step to a tightly organized paragraph. Each part of the Triple Golder is expanded into its own sentence. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Example time! I love Example time! Love! Love! Love it! Golly, I’m just crazy about learning! But look out ... I’ve got a Dilly Question for you!!!! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Here’s some examples of Triple Golder paragraphs. Smarty WonderBeak This summer we went to the lake, the beach and the mountains. We stayed for a week at the lake and I learned to sail. Next, we went to Malibu beach for a family reunion. Finally, my brothers and I took several long hikes in the mountains. Vacation Subject Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Lake Beach Mountains Here’s another example of a Triple Golder paragraph. Smarty WonderBeak Diary of a Wimpy Kid is funny, has good drawings and contains characters kids will love. From the first page, the author shows he has a great sense of humor. I especially like the drawings because they helped me see the scenes. Mike and Jeff, the two main characters, are just the kinds of kids that everyone my age will love. Subject Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Diary funny drawings lovable Here’s one more example of a Triple Golder paragraph. Smarty WonderBeak Long division involves three steps: division, multiplication and subtraction. You begin by dividing the divisor into the dividend. Then you multiply the divisor by the quotient. Finally, you subtract the result from the first part of the quotient. Long Division Subject Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 division mult. subtraction Here’s a final example of a Triple Golder paragraph. Smarty WonderBeak Great advances in astronomy in the Renaissance were made Galileo, Kepler and Brahe. Galileo overturned Aristotle’s geocentric view of the universe. Kepler made accurate observations of the solar system to further reinforce Galileo’s position. Brahe provided mathematical support for the work of his two predecessors. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 They call me Big Dilly, because some of my questions are Real Dillys!!! How could your start with a Triple Golder Sentence and write a Triple Golder, college style, essay??? Isn’t that a Dilly???? Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 It would be really great if you could start with a lower grade example. Yes! Lower grade! That would be a Dilly!!! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Triple Golder: 1, 2, 3. Part 1 Sentence 2 Part 2 Sentence 3 Part 3 Sentence Part 1 Sentence Sentence about Part 1 Another sentence about Part ! 1 I love Big Dilly Questions! Here is a Triple Golder college style essay pattern for kindergarteners! Part 2 Sentence Sentence about Part 2 Another sentence about Part 2 Part 3 Sentence Sentence about Part 3 Another sentence about part 3 Triple Golder: 1, 2, 3. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 I like soccer, baseball and football. Soccer is lots of fun. I am a good hitter in baseball. My dad and I play football. Soccer is lots of fun. I like running and scoring goals. Someday I will be great at soccer. If a kindergartener can write the first paragraph, she has the skill necessary TO WRITE THE REST!!!!! I am a good hitter in baseball. Practice has helped me hit. I love to hit home runs. My dad and I play football. We play in the yard after dinner. Sometimes I let my dad win. I like soccer, baseball and football. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 I like soccer, baseball and football. Soccer is lots of fun. I am a good hitter in baseball. My dad and I play football. Soccer is lots of fun. I like running and scoring goals. Someday I will be great at soccer. MORE! If a kindergartener can write the first sentence, the Triple Golder, she has the skill to write the rest!!!! I am a good hitter in baseball. Practice has helped me hit. I love to hit home runs. My dad and I play football. We play in the yard after dinner. Sometimes I let my dad win. I like soccer, baseball and football. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Now, how about an upper grade example ... all the way to high school! Oh, that’s a Dilly of a Dilly question!!! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Copyright 2010, Chris Biffle Tuesday, October 16, 2012 85 Copyright Chris16, Biffle Tuesday,2010, October 2012 Copyright 2010, Chris Biffle 84 85 What would be the simplest way to teach kids to write Triple Golders? Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Dilly Dilly Use Scaffolded sentence frames alternating Clinkers and Triple Golders. I like ______. Double Clinker I like _______ and ______. Double Golder I like _______ and ______. Triple Clinker I like _______, ______ and ____. Triple Golder I like _______, ______ and _____. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Teach me, teach me, teach me more scaffolded sentence frames that will show kids how to write Triple Golders! Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Scaffolded sentence frames alternating Clinkers and Triple Golders. I see ______. Double Clinker I see _______ and ______. Double Golder I see _______ and ______. Triple Clinker I see _______, ______ and ____. Triple Golder I see _______, ______ and _____. Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Smarty WonderBeak More Scaffolded sentence frames alternating Clinkers and Triple Golders. Our room is ______. Double Clinker Our room is _______ and ______. Double Golder Our room is _______ and ______. Triple Clinker Our room is _______, ______ and ____. Triple Golder Our room is _______, ______ and _____. Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Smarty WonderBeak Reading can teach you ______. Double Clinker Reading can teach you _______ and ______. Double Golder Reading can teach you _______ and ______. Triple Clinker Reading can teach you _______, ______ and ____. Triple Golder Reading can teach you _______, ______ and _____. Smarty WonderBeak Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Batman is ______. Double Clinker Batman is _______ and ______. Double Golder Batman is _______ and ______. Triple Clinker Batman is_______, ______ and ____. Triple Golder Batman is_______, ______ and _____. Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Smarty WonderBeak Now, how about some upper grade examples of scaffolded sentence frames? Big Dilly Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Lincoln’s greatest acheivement was ______. Double Clinker Two of Lincoln’s greatest achievements were ___ and ___. Double Golder Two of Lincoln’s greatest achievements were ___ and ___. Triple Clinker Three of Lincoln’s greatest achievements were ___, ____, and ___. Triple Golder Three of Lincoln’s greatest achievements were ___, ____, and ___. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 A key feature of the scientific method is _____. Double Clinker Two key features of the scientific method are ___ and ___. Double Golder Two key features of the scientific method are ___ and ___. Triple Clinker Three key features of the scientific method are ___, ____, and ___. Triple Golder Three key features of the scientific method are ___, ____, and ___. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 The problem in upper grades is that the sentence frames have to be very specific ... so you need lots of them. However, here is a powerful, scaffolded sentence frame that can be used repeatedly. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Simply list topics that can be plugged in: crime, sports, TV, video games, World War 1, global warming, pollution, MTV, our president, politicians, the police, gangs, etc. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 I believe ____ because _____. Double Clinker I believe ____ because ____ and ___. Double Golder I believe ____ because ____ and ___. Triple Clinker I believe ____ because ____, ____, and ___. Triple Golder I believe ____ because ____, ____, and ___. Why is it important to teach kids to write Triple Golders? Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Saturday, October 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Dilly Dilly Just let kids write and express themselves ... that’s the best writing program of all!!! Uncle Dilly Saturday, Louis October "Trickster" 13, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Louie, there is a big difference between writing sentences and writing essays. When we let kids “just write” which is a fine, occasional exercise, we are not teaching them the structured thinking that is necessary to think clearly and convince others of their strength of their views. Smarty WonderBeak Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 The reason the Triple Golder is so important is that, one more time, there is a huge difference between writing sentences and writing an essay. When we are writing sentences, we think about what comes next. Thus, writing sentences isn’t much harder than speaking. Too many kids write sentences, one after the other, not essays! When we are writing an essay, we have to think about three things: what we are saying, how it fits into what we’ve said before and how it will fit into what comes next. This “triple thinking” is challenging. The Triple Golder focuses this difficult cognitive task into one, easy to understand, easy to practice, task. Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 Reward your kids for writing improvement, not writing ability! That’s revolutionary!!! Biffy BlueBird Tuesday, October 16, 2012 10 stars = move up! 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