Solutions for All English Home Language Grade 10 Learner`s Book
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Solutions for All English Home Language Grade 10 Learner`s Book
Solutions for all English Home Language Grade 10 Learner’s Book S Kerr J Unterslak Solutions for all English Home Language Grade 10 Learner’s Book © S Kerr, J Unterslak, 2011 © Illustrations and design Macmillan South Africa (Pty) Ltd, 2011 All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without the prior written permission of the copyright holder or in accordance with the provisions of the Copyright Act, 1978 (as amended). Any person who commits any unauthorised act in relation to this publication may be liable for criminal prosecution and civil claims for damages. First published 2011 11 13 15 17 16 14 12 2 4 6 8 10 9 7 5 3 1 Published by Macmillan South Africa (Pty) Ltd Private Bag X19 Northlands 2116 Gauteng South Africa Design and typesetting by Resolution Cover design by Deevine Design Cover image by Digital Source Illustrations by Allan Kennedy The publishers have made every effort to trace the copyright holders. If they have inadvertently overlooked any, they will be pleased to make the necessary arrangements at the first opportunity. ISBN: 9781431006496 WIP: 3058M000 It is illegal to photocopy any page of this book without written permission from the publishers. Photographs Gallo (pp 189, 190) Great Stock (pp 1, 17, 45, 46, 47, 48, 55, 119, 133, 146, 210, 225, 237, 251, 267, 274) Inpra (pp 75, 91) Pnet (pp 115, 149, 165, 233) RHS (p 269) Africa Media Online (pp 35, 47, 73) Afripics (pp 44, 103, 180, 185, 199) Digital Source (pp 32, 181, 263) Rapid Phase (p 99) e-ISBN: 978-1-4310-1738-6 Contents Theme 1 Forbidden fruit ................................................. 1 Theme 2 Couch potato lifestyle 101 ............................. 19 Theme 3 Who would have thought? ............................. 35 Theme 4 n00b to pRo ................................................... 55 Theme 5 Teens are doing it for themselves ................... 73 Theme 6 The bucket list ................................................ 91 Theme 7 Clashing titans ............................................. 103 Theme 8 The bleeding edge ....................................... 119 Theme 9 Food for the soul .......................................... 133 Theme 10 Pimp my turntable ....................................... 149 Theme 11 Green is for GO! ........................................... 165 Theme 12 I robot: sci-fi in the classroom ...................... 185 Theme 13 Coins, cash and kids ..................................... 199 Theme 14 Eating from the edge ................................... 213 Theme 15 Thread trends .............................................. 225 Theme 16 Going viral: blogs, tweets and wikis ............. 237 Theme 17 What’s social about social networking? ........ 251 Theme 18 Zooming in on the hot spots ........................ 263 Index ..................................................................... 278 T 1 e he m Forbidden fruit Weeks 1–2 What you will learn about in this theme • • • • Listening and speaking: Listening skills Reading and viewing: Recognising the key features of a text and parts of a book Writing and presenting: o The writing process o Writing formal and friendly letters Language: o Register o Sentence structure o Statements and questions Let’s talk about this theme • • • • • Do you feel that older people seem to misunderstand you now that you are a teenager? Do you have very different ideas to those of your parents, your teachers and some members of your community? Are there things that you feel you are ready to experience or to buy that are forbidden at home and school? Are there people whom you want to get to know better, but you know this will not be allowed at home? How does this make you feel? Is there a solution to this situation? Forbidden fruit • 1 Weeks 1–2 Listening skills What you know already Listening skills There is a difference between listening and hearing. We hear noises and sounds all the time, whether we mean to or not. Listening implies making an effort to hear something – to give your attention to it. It can help if you take notes as you are listening, but sometimes this is not permitted. Then you need to concentrate very carefully. How comfortable are you with answering listening k Chec lf comprehensions? myse Tick the box that is most appropriate (Yes or No). Yes No I am able to maintain concentration for the entire time that a passage is read to me. I am able to record main and supporting ideas by making notes as the passage is read to me. I am able to paraphrase/retell/explain a listening text to show that I have understood the passage. Word bank ABC to place or arrange something in a particular way quick and not thorough something that happens unexpectedly because of an accident or good luck moniker: a name or nickname saunter: to walk in a slow and relaxed way that makes you look confident or pleased with yourself array: cursory: fluke: What you still need to know Listening skills You have established what you know in the Check myself section. Now here are some things you can do to improve your listening skills and help you answer a listening comprehension successfully. 2 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 • It is important to remain calm and listen carefully. This takes some practice. You may be allowed to take notes while the passage is being read. You can adopt your own shorthand when you do this. You need not write your notes in full sentences or use full proper words. You should keep the notes to use in future tasks. Be careful not to abbreviate too much. When you need to use the notes you do not want struggle to remember what you wrote down when your teacher read to you! • • Classroom activity 1 Many teenagers feel the need to express themselves by tattooing or piercing parts of their bodies. Many parents or caregivers consider this to be a no-no, so teenagers often get tattooed or pierced in secret and on parts of their bodies that are easy to hide – forbidden fruit indeed! Your teacher will read the class an article on Kat Von D, a famous tattoo artist to the stars. After the reading, you will be asked to write two paragraphs on Kat Von D. • • Listen to the reading carefully and write down the information that you need to complete the task. Write two paragraphs of between 8 and 12 lines each on Kat Von D examining how different her adult life is compared to her life as a child. Key features of texts and parts of a book What you know already Key features of texts and parts of a book You have been reading texts and books for many years and know their key features. Use the checklist to remind yourself of the terminology used when we discuss books and written texts. Forbidden fruit • 3 k Do you know the terminology used in relation to texts and c e h C lf parts of books? Write down the numbers in Column A that e s y match with letters in Column B. m Column A Column B 1. Titles/headings/subheadings/headlines A. Letters that are printed thicker and darker than usual. 2. Chapters/acts/scenes B. A list of difficult words used in a piece of writing with explanations of their meaning. 3. Prologue/epilogue C. Letters that slope to the right. 4. Glossary D. A picture, drawing or photograph used for decorating a book. 5. Bibliography E. A printed circle or square before each item on a list used to emphasise it. 6. Appendix F. A list of the books that an author has used for finding information for a piece of work he or she has written. 7. Illustrations G. A piece of writing at the start of a book that introduces the story/an extra comment or piece of information added at the end of a book. 8. Font H. A section giving extra details at the end of a book/one of the parts that a play is divided into/a part of a play in which events happen in the same place or period of time. 9. Bold print I. The name of a book/the title at the top of a page or piece of writing/the title of one section of a longer piece of writing/the title of a newspaper story that is printed in large letters. 10. Italics J. One of the sections into which a book is divided. 11. Bullets K. A complete set of letters and numbers in one size and style. What you still need to know Key features of texts and parts of a book In keeping with the theme of ‘Forbidden fruit’, we have included the holy palmers’ kiss scene from Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare. Notice that this is an extract from a play and is TEXT 1 in the following activity. For variety, we have also included a text written in a style you will see in magazines. It is called ‘Censorship and Book Banning in America’ and has paragraphs and headings. This is TEXT 2 in the following activity. 4 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 What makes a drama different to a novel or a short story? Plays or dramas appear differently on the page. They are divided into sections called acts and scenes, and most of the content is written in the form of a dialogue. The names of the characters appear on the left-hand side of the pages and are followed by colons. The actual words that the characters speak follow these colons. Much of the action in the play is described through the words of the characters. The playwright (author of the play) sometimes writes stage directions for the cast to follow. These are usually shown in italics in the script and suggest when characters leave or enter the scenes, what sounds can be heard, and so on. Novels have chapters as sections; short stories are not broken into any sections. Of course, short stories are much shorter than novels. Classroom activity 2 Read through Text 1 and complete the activities that follow. TEXT 1 In this scene, Romeo and Juliet have just spoken to each other for the first time and exchange sweet kisses. At this stage, they do not know who each other are, and that this fledgling love will be forbidden. Act 1, Scene 5 TYBALT: Patience perforce with wilful choler meeting Makes my flesh tremble in their different greeting. I will withdraw: but this intrusion shall Now seeming sweet convert to bitter gall. [Exit] ROMEO: [To JULIET] If I profane with my unworthiest hand This holy shrine, the gentler sin is this: My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss. JULIET: Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much, Which mannerly devotion shows in this; For saints have hands that pilgrims’ hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers’ kiss. ROMEO: Have not saints lips, and holy palmers too? Forbidden fruit • 5 JULIET: Ay, pilgrim, lips that they must use in prayer. ROMEO: O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do; They pray, grant thou, lest faith turn to despair. JULIET: Saints do not move, though grant for prayers’ sake. ROMEO: Then move not, while my prayer’s effect I take. Thus from my lips, by yours, my sin is purged. JULIET: Then have my lips the sin that they have took. ROMEO: Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged! Give me my sin again. JULIET: You kiss by the book. (Source: Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet [Macmillan Communicative Shakespeare]) Work in pairs, and draw up a list of features in this extract that make a drama different to a novel. Rewrite this scene using at least six of the key features of a text from your list. You may decide to paraphrase (write in your own words) the scene, or simply describe what happened. Now read through Text 2 and once again complete the activities that that follow. TEXT 2 Text 2 is about the issue of banning books. The scene is set in America, but book banning is a problem throughout the world and has occurred throughout history. 6 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 Censorship and book banning in America It’s a typical day in 11th Grade American Lit. You are teaching about Mark Twain and decide that the students would enjoy and get a lot out of Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. The school has purchased enough of the books for each student to receive one, so you hand the books out. You spend the rest of the class period discussing a very important issue: Twain’s use of the ‘n’ word throughout the book. You explain that not only do we have to look at the book through the context of the time period, but we also have to understand what Twain was trying to do with his story. He was trying to reveal the plight of the slave. And he was doing it with the vernacular of the time. The students snicker a little. Some even make wisecracks when they think you’re not listening, but you hear and correct them. You make sure they understand the reason behind the word. You ask for any questions or concerns. You tell the students they can come to speak with you later. None do. All seems well. A week passes. The students have already had their first quiz. Then, you receive a call from the principal. It seems that one of the parents is concerned at the prevalence of the ‘n’ word in the book. They consider it racist, and want you to quit teaching it. They make hints that they will take the issue further if their needs are not met. What do you do? This situation is not a pleasant one. But it is not necessarily a rare one either. According to Banned in the USA by Herbert N Foerstal, Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is the fourth most banned book in schools. In 1998, three new attacks arose to challenge its inclusion in education. Reasons for banned books Is censorship in schools good? Is it necessary to ban books? Each person answers these questions differently. This is the core of the problem for educators. Books can be found offensive for many reasons, and many ways exist to ban books. Schools can ban books by choosing not to order the books in the first place. One school will not stock two of the Harry Potter books by J K Rowling because of the witchcraft themes. As the principal explained it, the school knew they would get complaints about the books so they did not buy them. The question that faces us in the future is ‘when do we stop?’ Do we remove mythology and Arthurian legends because of their references to magic? Do we strip the shelves of medieval literature because it Forbidden fruit • 7 presupposes the existence of saints? Do we remove Macbeth because of the murders and witches? I think that most would say there is a point where we must stop. But who gets to pick the point? (Source: Adapted from: http://712educators.about.com/cs/bannedbooks/a/bookbanning.html) Work in pairs, and draw up a list of features in this extract that makes it different to TEXT 1. Refer to the terms in the Check myself section. Now work in groups and spend some time discussing whether there is merit in banning books. Are there other ways to keep ‘problematic’ writing away from those who should not read it? What should be kept away from whom? Give reasons for your decisions. Report back to the class, and see if the other groups agreed with your findings. The writing process What you know already The writing process You have been writing for many years, both in school under the guidance of your teachers, and at home. Now that you are entering the FET phase you will be required to raise the level of your writing. Your creative writing must now, more than ever, be accurate, captivating and mature, and your literature writing must include academic rigour and discipline. Your teacher will give you support in the different tasks as the year progresses. Whatever you are required to write, there is a writing process. Use the following checklist to see how familiar you are with the steps in the process. k How familiar are you with the steps in the writing process? Tick Chec lf the box that is most appropriate (Always, Sometimes or Never). myse Always I choose my topic carefully if I have options to choose from. I think about what I plan to write before I begin planning. I use mind maps/spray diagrams/lists/ tables, etc. to plan my writing. I plan introductions and conclusions before I begin writing. I carefully edit my first draft before I write my neat copy. 8 • Forbidden fruit Sometimes Never Week 1–2 What you still need to know The writing process You may have ticked Sometimes or Never as you worked through the checklist. This means that you have neglected one or more of the elements of the writing process. You must use the writing process for all writing you do this year, in English and your other subjects, and for the years to come. You will get an opportunity to practise the process later in this theme when you write formal and friendly letters. You should follow these guidelines if you want to improve your writing skills and communicate more effectively: 1 Choose the topic: Select a topic that you can write about. Don’t try to write on a topic that looks interesting, but that you know nothing about. Your writing will be much better if you write from your own experience. 2 Think about what you will write: Don’t just begin writing. Think about who will read the piece and what impression you want to create about yourself. There are many ways to approach writing tasks, so think about what you want to include in your chosen topic and what you will leave out. 3 Plan: There are many ways to plan. You can use mind maps, spray diagrams, lists or tables. You could also write a quick rough piece using your own shorthand. Don’t always plan in the same way. Think about the kind of planning that will assist you in writing the piece effectively and easily. Always plan your introduction and your conclusion – this helps you control the impact that you will have on your reader or marker. 4 Edit: You must take editing seriously. Once you have written your first draft, you (or someone else) should read the piece carefully, looking for errors. Remember to write each idea in its own paragraph. If the paragraph is very long, split it up into more than one. Your writing will flow logically if you think about how you use paragraphs. The piece must make sense, be interesting and focus on the topic. It must also have as few spelling, grammar and punctuation errors as possible. Correct these and rewrite your final copy. Now your writing is ready to be presented to your teacher for appraisal. Forbidden fruit • 9 If you follow these guidelines your marks for writing will improve. Remember that the marks for the Creative Writing paper are higher than the marks for the Language or Literature papers! It pays to learn to write well. Register When we talk to different people we adapt the way that we speak – for example, we speak one way to our little cousin, and another way to an adult; one way to a family member, and another to a stranger. This is called ‘register’. Register is the type of language that you use in a particular situation or when you communicate with a particular group of people. Word bank jargon: slang: ABC special words or phrases that are only understood by people who do the same kind of work, for example: medical/legal/computer jargon words or expressions that are very informal and are not considered suitable for formal situations. Some slang is used only by a particular group of people As we have mentioned, different situations require you to use different registers – if you get the register wrong, it can be difficult to communicate. Imagine if you use informal register in an interview or in a court when speaking to the magistrate. You could create the wrong impression about yourself. Imagine if you use very formal register when you speak to your friends. They might think that you have gone mad! There are levels of register that we move through in all of our communication with others: Formal: We use formal language in court and other such situations, often when people are working in their official capacities. But you may have a family member who expects you to speak formally to him or her. In this case, you would use full sentences and complete words. You would not use contractions or words from other languages. Colloquial: We usually use colloquial language when we speak to the people with whom we interact often – our parents, teachers, shopkeepers, and so on. We use mostly full sentences and complete words, but also some contractions. Informal: We use informal language with close friends and in informal situations. When we use informal language, we use parts of sentences and parts of words. Some words could be made up, and some words may assume 10 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 a different meaning to what they conventionally refer to. Informal language can include words from other languages, as well as slang. Classroom activity 3 In this activity, you will role play using different register. Form groups of six and create a role play in which the characters use each of the various levels of register: formal, informal and colloquial language (including slang and jargon). Sentence structure We know that a sentence is a group of words that expresses a complete thought, but we have to learn to be more specific when we construct sentences: a sentence must have a subject and a verb to be complete. The subject is the doer of the action; the verb expresses the thing being done. Word bank ABC a group of words that includes a subject and a verb and is a sentence or the main part of one object: a noun, pronoun or phrase that is directly affected by the action of the verb phrase: a group of words that do not contain a verb subject: the person, place or thing that does what the verb describes clause: Verbs can be ‘action’ words such as run, bite and kiss, or they can be ‘state of being’ words such as am, were, is, and so on. Every sentence needs a verb to be a sentence, so it is very important that all of your sentences contain verbs. Classroom activity 4 Rewrite the following passage. Underline the verbs in the sentences, and circle the subjects. It was there that her tattoo skills greatly improved as she started to understand the difference between a good tattoo and a great one. After her stint at Blue Bird, she bounced around, working at a handful of other shops until she landed at Clay Decker’s True Tattoo in the centre of Hollywood. This is where she fortuitously met tattoo artist Chris Garver. The week she started, Garver was getting ready to leave for what would become Miami Ink. After a few fun months at True Tattoo, she received a call from Garver asking her to be on the show. Forbidden fruit • 11 Statements and questions k Use the checklist to assess if you know the difference between c e h C lf statements and questions. Tick the word that best applies to you e s y m (Yes or No). Yes No I can explain the difference between statements and questions. I know what punctuation marks to use for each of these types of sentences. What you still need to know Statements and questions You have identified what you know about in the Check myself section. Now for more … Statements are the most commonly used forms of sentences. Questions are sentences with an interrogative structure and end with a question mark. There are many ways of asking questions, for example: • To establish truth – this question needs a ‘yes’ or ‘no’ response. • To supply missing information – this question will begin with a word that usually begins with wh-: when, where, why, who, what. • To select an option – this question offers the listener some options. There are also different types of questions, for example: • Tag questions – these questions turn statements into questions by adding a short tag onto the end: ‘He is coming, isn’t he?’ If the statement is positive, the tag is negative, and vice versa. It pushes the listener to respond in a particular way. • Rhetorical questions – with these questions the speaker does not expect an answer. The question form of this communication makes the effect of what is said stronger: ‘Are we going to put up with this for much longer?’ 12 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 Classroom activity 5 What type of question is each of the following? 1 Aren’t you sick of adults always telling you what to do? 2 What is your curfew time? 3 Are you allowed to go out on the weekend? 4 You won’t tell my mother that you saw me out with my friends, will you? 5 Will you ask your mom for permission to go to the school social or the class trip at the end of the term? Friendly and formal letters What you know already Letters Letters of all kinds fit into the Longer Transactional section of the Creative Writing paper. You have been writing letters for a long time. Work through the following checklist to see what you know about the format of letters. k Tick the most appropriate box (Yes or No). Chec lf myse Yes No I know that we write the address and the date on the righthand side of the page, and we do not use punctuation or abbreviations in the address. I know that we begin a friendly letter with the greeting on the very next line. I know that we end a friendly letter with ‘Yours sincerely’ or ‘Your friend/brother/cousin’, etc. after leaving a line at the end. The writer’s name is written underneath that. I know that in a formal letter we write the address of the recipient on the left-hand side of the page. I know that in a formal letter we write a formal greeting after leaving a line open under the recipient’s address. I know that in a formal letter we leave a line open before writing the topic sentence. We underline this sentence, which summarises the business of the letter. I know that we end a formal letter with ‘Yours faithfully’ after leaving a line at the end, and then we write our (the writer’s) initial and surname underneath that. I know that boys and men only end a formal letter with their initial and surname, and that girls and women write ‘(Ms)’, ‘(Miss)’ or ‘(Mrs)’ after their surnames. Forbidden fruit • 13 What you know already Friendly and formal letters While the format of a letter is important, the content of the letter and the tone in which it is written is far more important. You will be guided by the content according to the topic you have chosen, for example: • A letter of invitation is really inviting and filled with details that entice the reader. • A letter of condolence is sincere and makes the reader feel that the writer cares about whatever loss the reader is experiencing. • A letter of complaint addresses the problem in a firm but unaggressive way, and makes suggestions to the reader about what he or she could do about the matter. Here are examples of the formats of formal letters and informal or friendly letters. A formal letter (a letter of application) 27 High Street Yeoville 2196 17 April 2012 The Personnel Manager Jenstar Productions PO Box 3465 Kensington 2345 Dear Sir Application for position a camera operator In response to your advertisement published in The Star newspaper on April 11 2012, I wish to apply for the position of camera operator. I am 23 years old and have attained my BA Degree in Filming Arts from The Movie-maker College. I have had extensive experience in operating cameras during my years of study. I am familiar with the work that Jenstar Productions does, and want to be part of an organisation that produces work of this creative standard. I understand that you have an 14 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 extensive CSI programme, and this is close to my heart. I have completed pro bono projects for many organisations during my years of study. I have included letters from them with my CV. I enclose copies of my qualifications, certificates and testimonials with my CV. If my application is successful, I will be able to take up the position in May. The following people can be contacted as my referees: Ms Tamlyn Sadie, Senior Lecturer Film Studies – 084 123 4567 Prof. Lindiwe Mthombeni, Rector, The Movie-Maker College – 011 234 5678 My own contact details are: Home 011 987 6543 or Cell 073 765 4321 I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully M Meyers (Ms) A friendly letter 27 High Street Yeoville 2196 17 April 2012 Dear Sipho You won’t believe what sport I’ve just joined! Wakeboarding! I bet you’ve never heard of it, but wakeboarding is growing more popular every day in South Africa. It is a water sport that started with just a few interested people, but South Africa has produced world champion wakeboarders and there are now lots of wakeboarding enthusiasts. There are South African Championships and other events, so it’s no wonder that so many people are interested in wakeboarding in South Africa. If you think that wakeboarding is nothing more than standing on a board and clutching your old water-skiing rope, you would be wrong. Wakeboarding has its own range of specialised equipment to ensure the safety of the wakeboarder, and to make those breathtaking rolls and loops through the air possible. As in any other sport, wakeboarding can be dangerous. So, I’m off for my lesson. Why don’t you join the fun? Your favourite cousin Mbali Forbidden fruit • 15 Classroom activity 6 Let’s practise both the writing process and the writing of letters. Select one of the topics and write the letter using the correct format. Before you start: • remember what you have learnt about the selection of the topic, planning and editing of your written work • pay attention to the register you adopt for the letter – think about the impression you want to create with your reader • check that you have implemented your knowledge of sentence structure in your letter. Your teacher will include this in the assessment of the letter. These are the topics: Friendly letters 1 Write a letter to your school librarian asking her to reconsider her decision not to buy Stephenie Meyer’s Twilight series for the school library. 2 The mother of one of your friends has decided that you two are not to be friends any more. Write a letter to her attempting to change her mind. Make suggestions about how you will manage the matter so that she will be happy to change her mind. Formal letters 1 Write a letter to SABC asking them to buy some of the shows that are usually found on the DSTV bouquet and to screen them on SABC 3. These are some suggestions for shows (although you may think of others): Pitbulls and Parolees, LA INK, Women Behind Bars, Sixteen and Pregnant and Jersey Shore. 2 Write a letter to the Education Department requesting that it lift the ban on smoking at school. After all, many students do smoke at school during school hours. Ask for a designated smoking area. Your teacher will use the Longer Transactional rubric to assess your letter. 16 • Forbidden fruit Week 1–2 Homework activities Theme 1 Find a newspaper or magazine article that deals with issues faced by teenagers today. It may be something to do with social networking (MXit, Twitter, Facebook), bullying at school, sport, music enjoyed by young people, or tattoo experiences or body piercing … or it may be none of these, but something else that affects teenagers in your area. Read the article, and make a list of the features of a magazine or newspaper article. Extra practice Theme 1 • • Use the article that you selected and write a letter to the newspaper or magazine in which it was found, expressing your opinion on the article. o Remember that a stranger will read your letter, so ensure that you write it in the correct register and that it has no errors. o If you use questions, look at the various ways that you can ask a question, and be specific about the way you choose. o Think about your content and make sure that it is mature and sensible – whether you are being complimentary or challenging about the article. o Ask your teacher to help you address the envelope and post the letter. Have a fish-bowl discussion in class about how to cross the divide between the generations. Is it possible for the older and younger generations to understand each other? Fish-bowl discussion Four learners sit in a group facing each other. The rest of the class forms a circle around and behind them. Only the learners in the inside group may speak on the topic. If anyone else wants to say anything, he or she must tap one of the four on the shoulder. That person leaves the circle and is replaced by the one who taps. Each learner must remain in the inside circle for at least five minutes before being tapped out. The idea is to have a vigorous discussion in which everyone has a chance to offer an opinion. Forbidden fruit • 17 • • Keep a journal about how it feels to be a teenager trying to enter the world of adulthood. This is just for you – no-one else is to read it. Record your thoughts about conflict that you experience. In your groups decide on ten tips that you can give young people who are about to become teenagers about how best to manage these exciting, and sometimes confusing, years. Call them ‘The Teen’s Top Ten’. Summary Listening implies making an effort to hear something and concentrating very carefully. If you can write notes while you are listening, adopt your own shorthand, but do not be so brief that you are not able to use the notes later. The key features of books allow us to navigate our way through books and articles with ease. They provide shortcuts for us to use the texts efficiently. The elements of the writing process (choosing the topic, thinking about what you will write, planning and editing) need to be followed carefully in all writing tasks that you do, so that your writing is better. Choosing the correct register (formal, colloquial, informal) when communicating in speech and writing will enhance your communication experiences. Verbs can be action words or they can be state of being words. Every sentence needs a verb to be a sentence. Statements are the most commonly used forms of sentences. Questions are sentences with an interrogative structure, and that end with a question mark. There are many ways of asking questions, for example, to establish truth, to supply missing information and to select an option. There are different types of questions, such as tag questions and rhetorical questions. The format of friendly and formal letters is important, although the content of the letters and the tone in which they are written are far more important. 18 • Forbidden fruit T 2 e he m Couch potato lifestyle 101 Weeks 3–4 What you will learn about in this theme • • • • Listening and speaking: o The features and conventions of a debate o Planning, researching, organising and presenting a debate Reading and viewing: o Reading for comprehension o Reading and viewing strategies o Strategies using written texts o Short stories Writing and presenting: Writing an essay Language: Using conjunctions and pronouns to create cohesion Let’s talk about this theme • • • • • • • What is your favourite form of entertainment? How often do you use your phone? Do you like films? What are your favourite TV programmes? Do you watch soaps or reality TV? Do you have an Xbox or a Playstation? How often are you on Facebook? Do you consider yourself a couch potato? Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 19 Weeks 3–4 Debate What you know already Debate In Theme 1 you participated in a fish-bowl discussion, which prepares you for a formal debate. k Chec lf How comfortable are you with being part of a formal debate? Tick the box that is most appropriate (Always, Sometimes or Never). myse Always Sometimes Never I know what happens in a debate. I can formulate an argument, supported by facts and details. I can listen to someone else’s point of view and offer my opinion in response. I have a good general knowledge to support my arguments. I can be part of a team and I play my part in debates. Word bank ABC a statement in which one team argues why what the other team has said is not true resolution/proposition/motion: the statement about which two teams argue the opposition speakers: disagree with the resolution by presenting a logical negative case that disagrees with the proposition the proposition speakers: agree with the resolution. The proposition team always has the burden of proof and begins and ends the debate rebuttal: 20 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 What you still need to know Debate A debate is a formal discussion and is organised in a specific way. There is always a resolution that two teams must debate, for example, ‘This house believes that only children can enjoy animated films.’ One team (the proposition) supports the statement; the other team (the opposition) attacks the statement. Each team listens to the speakers of the opposing team and offer rebuttals. This means that the members of the team disagree with what their opponents have said and explain why their opponents are wrong. There is a chairman who introduces the speakers and who controls the debate (especially making sure that the speakers do not go over their time limit). There is also usually a floor, made up of all those who attend the debate and who support one or other team. A debate can be organised in different ways, but usually follows the following format: • The first speaker for the proposition states the topic and the first argument (approximately seven minutes). • The first speaker for the opposition states the first argument (approximately seven minutes). • The second proposition speaker states the argument of his or her team (approximately five minutes). • The second opposition speaker states the argument of his or her team (approximately five minutes). • The proposition and the opposition teams are given a five to ten minute break to prepare their rebuttal. The members of each team must present their argument to disprove their opponent’s arguments and to rebuild and defend their own case. • The members of the opposition team give two rebuttals against the proposition team’s two arguments and state their own two reasons. • The members of the proposition team give two rebuttals against the opposition team’s two arguments and state their own two reasons. Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 21 Planning and preparation for a debate: You need to research your topic and find evidence to support your argument. If you are to speak for five minutes you will need about three points. Organisation of your speech: You must state your main points clearly and support your points with evidence (facts, details, information). The first speaker usually outlines the team’s position and explains which points each speaker will deal with. Classroom activity 1 Divide into two teams, decide on the speakers and appoint a chairman. The rest of the class researches the topic to support one team and forms the floor. Debate this topic: ‘This house believes that animated movies targeted at children should be censored because they contain too much violence.’ Reading and viewing strategies What you know already Reading and viewing strategies When you read or view any kind of text – from the phone book to your literature setwork to your physics textbook – there are strategies that can help you to understand the text more quickly and effectively. Skimming is a skill you practise when you first approach a text, such as the next chapter in your history textbook. You skim a text to remind yourself what is in a text, such as when checking the ingredients for a recipe. Scanning is a skill you practise when, for example, you look for your name on the noticeboard to see if you are in the touch rugby team or when you check to see who signed the Valentine’s Day card you received at assembly. k Chec lf How do you practise skimming and scanning? Choose the most myse appropriate answer from the alternatives given (A or B): When I skim: A. I read something quickly and not very carefully. B. I read my work over the night before so that I can pass the test the next day. 22 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 When I scan: A. I read quickly through the text to see if there is anything I recognise from the lesson. B. I read quickly, looking for particular information. Word bank ABC an event, thing or person that makes something happen; the reason for behaving in a particular way or feeling a particular emotion; a strong reason for doing, thinking or feeling something compare: consider how things or people are different and how they are similar contrast: consider how things or people are different, often in a noticeable or interesting way effect: a change that is produced in one person or thing by another evaluating: thinking carefully about something before making a judgment inference: guessing without being told directly sequential order: putting something in a particular order cause: What you still need to know Reading and viewing strategies If you develop all the necessary reading skills, you can apply them to any piece of text, whether it is journalism, literature, functional writing, advertising or your electrical technology textbook. The reading skills are the same – it is only the text that changes. Evaluating There are many skills that you need to develop as you become better at evaluating a text. You can be asked to comment on the style of a poet, on the appropriate tone of a formal letter, on the use of punctuation or on a director’s choice of shots to film a sequence. You start to develop these skills from when you first start to think, and you develop these skills all the time. One important skill is being able to compare and contrast. You can be asked to compare and contrast people, things, events or situations. You must then explain how these are similar and how they are different. Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 23 Predicting, making inferences and drawing conclusions The following table illustrates predicting, making inferences and drawing conclusions: Situation Inference or prediction Conclusion Dark clouds are forming on the horizon. It will rain shortly. Take the washing inside. Hang the washing under cover. The skill of making inferences and drawing conclusions is related to the skill of recognising a problem and seeing or offering a solution. This is illustrated in the following table: Problem Solution(s) The rain falls and all the washing gets wet. If you see the dark clouds forming, take the washing inside. Hang the washing under cover on a cloudy day. Re-reading and making notes Many learners think they are studying, when actually their brains have gone to sleep. Studying involves using a pen or pencil and a piece of paper. As you read a text, go back and check your understanding, re-read, and, above all, make notes. Your ability to make notes tells you how well you have understood something. Practise examples as you go along. Synthesising Synthesis involves combining different things, for example, once you have practised many skills, you must be able to put them all together to achieve your purpose, which, in this instance, is to become a better reader. Another aspect of synthesising is a reading skill that allows you to read different texts and combine your understanding in different ways. For example, you could read some texts about global warming, look at graphs, read some cartoons, and then be asked to synthesise all your understanding in the form of a speech. 24 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 Classroom activity 2 Read the story ‘The Ugly Duckling’ then answer the questions that follow. One summer, a mother duck was sitting on her eggs to make them hatch. One by one the eggs cracked and the ducklings came out – all but one. The largest egg took much longer to hatch, and out came a large and ugly duckling. The other ducks all made fun of him, and pecked and bullied him because he was so large and ugly. Eventually, he decided to run away from the farmyard. In the wild, he was first rejected by the wild ducks and the wild geese because he was so ugly. So he went on further until he came to a shack with a little farmyard. There was a little old woman who lived there with her dog, her cat and some hens. She decided she would keep the duckling in the hopes that he would be able to lay eggs, but he couldn’t. So the cat, and the dog, and the hens were all nasty to him about how useless and ugly he was. Once again, he ran away into the wild. He found a pond, and there he lived by himself. Autumn came, and it grew colder. Winter arrived, and the pond froze. The duckling was caught in the ice, and was dying from cold. A farmer passing by freed him, and took him home. However, he was afraid of the farmer’s wife and his children, and escaped once again. This time, he found that he had strong wings and could fly. He flew high into the air, and there before him he saw three great white birds – swans. They were very beautiful, so he decided that he would fly close to them so that they could peck him to death, since he was so tired of being alone and rejected. Instead, the swans greeted him, and allowed him to join them. He flew with them to a lake. Swimming, he looked down and saw his own reflection in the water. He too was a swan! When the summer came, he was much admired by all the visitors to the lake as the most beautiful swan they had ever seen. 1 2 3 4 What causes the ugly duckling to leave: a) the farmyard where he was born b) the farmyard of the old woman? a) What effect does winter have on the ugly duckling? b) What effect do the farmer’s wife and children have on the ugly duckling? c) In your opinion, should the farmer have rescued the duckling? Support your argument. Compare and contrast the treatment given to the duckling by the various creatures he encounters. Explain why some treatment is different from others. What do you predict will happen to the swan after the story finishes? Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 25 Short stories What you know already Short stories Short stories can be as short as one line or as long as a few pages. The title is often significant. The ‘characters’ are both the people in the story and their personalities. If you are asked to discuss the character of one of the people in the story, focus on the person’s personality, rather than the physical appearance. Look at what the person says and does, what the person does not say or do, what other people say about the person, and at the person’s thoughts (if you are given them). Use the checklist to assess what you already know about short k Chec lf stories. Tick the most appropriate answers (Yes or No). myse Yes No I can identify the title in a short story. I can identify the characters in a short story. I can retell a short story in my own words. Word bank ABC clothes word choice a traditional story, usually about animals, that teaches a moral lesson mood or atmosphere: the feeling created by the descriptions in a story myth: an ancient, traditional story about gods, heroes and magic omniscient: all-knowing plot or structure: the way actions are developed in a play or story apparel: diction: fable: What you know already Short stories When you study short stories, you practise the skills that you have already developed in your reading. In Grade 10, you need to be able to discuss all the aspects of stories that you have learnt about in previous grades. The setting includes both time and place. Do not forget to consider the weather, the society, even the mood and atmosphere. 26 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 The plot develops in a particular sequence and there must be a beginning, a middle and an end. There are five essential parts of plot: 1 The introduction is the beginning of the story and establishes the character(s) and setting. 2 Rising action occurs where complications and conflict occur. 3 The climax (or ‘turning point’) of a narrative work is its point of highest tension or drama in which the solution is given, or in which some very important event takes place. 4 Falling action occurs where events start to find a solution. 5 Denouement is the final part where everything is explained and matters are resolved. Conflict is an essential element in every story. Conflict involves disagreement, tension and contradiction, and involves more than just fighting or arguments. There can be conflict within a character (internal conflict), between characters, between a character and the environment, and even between a character and God (external conflict). Style refers to how the story is told. This includes the diction, sentence and paragraph construction, punctuation, and the narrative voice of the story. Is it told through a first person narrator (I), or from the point of view of an omniscient, third person narrator? Finally, from the plot, the characters and the language of the story, you can decide on the theme or main idea. The theme must be universal: it must say something to all people from different times and countries. Classroom activity 3 Read this short story and discuss the questions that follow. The Zebra’s apparel The Baboon jumped up angrily. ‘Who are you? Go away!’ he screamed, ‘I am lord of this water. It is mine!’ 2 The Baboon stood guard over the water at a pan. ‘No one may drink here, for this water is mine alone!’ he declared, chasing away all who came to drink. He had even built a fire close to the pool so that he could protect his water during the bitterly cold desert nights. 1 Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 27 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 On this day, the Zebra had come to quench his thirst after a very long and tiring journey. In these early days the Zebra had no stripes. He wore a dazzling coat of pure white fur. The Zebra was in no mood to listen to this selfish Baboon. ‘This is not your water, you ugly monkey! It belongs to everyone!’ shouted the Zebra. The Baboon was furious and said that, if he wanted the water, he must fight for it. The two were soon engaged in a fierce struggle. Locked in combat, they rolled back and forth around the pan. Finally the Zebra gave one mighty kick and the Baboon was sent flying high up into the rocks behind the pool. The Zebra had kicked so hard that he lost his balance. Staggering back into the Baboon’s fire, he sent the burning sticks flying up in the air. These left black scorch marks all over his fine white coat. Hurt and frightened, he galloped onto the plains where he has remained ever since. Eventually he came to like his new apparel, which made him stand out, distinguished amongst the other animals However, the Baboon had landed on his buttocks, with a mighty thud, among the hard rocks. He has remained in the koppies ever since, nursing his bald red bottom and still as angry as ever. (Source: Adapted from A Bushman story from Northern Namibia, by M. Elliot http://www.wildlifeafrica.co.za/africatales.html) 1 Outline the setting of the story. 2 What is the climax of the story? Justify your opinion. 3 Describe the character of a) Baboon, and b) Zebra. Support your answer from the story. 4 a) How does the fable explain the modern appearance of the zebra and the baboon? b) What behaviour of the baboon and the zebra today does the fable explain? 28 5 Is the title effective? Suggest another title. 6 This story might be called a fable or a myth. From having read the story, outline the features or characteristics of a beast fable and of a myth. • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 Creating cohesion What you know already Creating cohesion: Using pronouns and conjunctions Cohesion is a relationship between sentences or parts of a piece of writing that is shown by particular words or phrases – parts of a piece of writing that work together to form a unit. We use conjunctions and pronouns to create cohesion. k Identify each of the underlined words: c e h C lf myse When it is cold, Nkuli wears two jerseys because she never feels warm enough. However, Phineas does not feel the cold at all. Word bank coherent: ABC in which all the different parts fit together in a sensible, understandable or pleasing way What you still need to know Using pronouns and conjunctions When you write, all your ideas need to be organised to work together to achieve your purpose. You create cohesion in your writing through your use of pronouns and conjunctions, which help the reader to see how everything fits together. Here is an example: ‘The music is annoying me this morning. It blasts out of the house across the road. Whenever this happens, I have to put in ear plugs!’ It refers back to the music. Whenever introduces the idea that the music is often loud and so links the music this morning with a new idea. Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 29 Classroom activity 4 Use pronouns and conjunctions to turn the following into a coherent piece of writing. The fourteen-year-old sprawled on the couch. The couch was old and comfortable. The girl often lay on the couch. Lying on the couch irritated the girl’s mother. The girl liked to irritate her mother. The TV set exploded the music into the room. The girl always kept the volume on the TV set high. The high volume irritated her mother. Writing an essay What you know already Writing an essay There are two main categories of essays: Argumentative, discursive and opinionative essays Argue a point of view, supported by evidence Expository essays More factual Descriptive, narrative and reflective essays Describe, tell a story or reflect thoughtfully on a person’s life experiences. k Chec lf Do you know how to write a sentence, a paragraph and an essay? myse Answer Yes or No. 30 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 Week 3–4 What you know already Writing an essay Every part of an essay is important. Here we focus on writing the introduction and the conclusion of a narrative essay. What makes the introduction of ‘The Zebra’s apparel’ dramatic? Begin ‘in the moment’! Do not lead up to an exciting point – begin at that point. Then you can use a flashback to fill in the background. In ‘The Zebra’s apparel’, what background does the author fill in after the dramatic opening? Carefully consider your conclusion. How effective is the final paragraph in ‘The Zebra’s apparel’? Could you have made it more effective? When you plan your essay, refer to the guidelines in Theme 1. Think carefully about which paragraph will be your introduction and which your conclusion. Every paragraph must have a topic sentence that sums up what the paragraph is about. The topic sentence can be the first sentence (as in para. 2 of ‘The Zebra’s Apparel’), at the end of the paragraph, or in the middle (‘The two were soon engaged in a fierce struggle,’ para. 6). All the sentences in one paragraph must be related to the topic sentence. Draft your essay; then ask a friend or a family member to read it and give you feedback. Write the essay again, making corrections and improvements. Classroom activity 5 1 Choose a message that you think is relevant for children today. 2 Think about an original fable that will teach this message to children. 3 Write your fable. • • • • • • You must plan a story of approximately 300 words. Your story must have an effective introduction, a body, and a good conclusion. Each paragraph must have a topic sentence. Think about how each sentence is linked to the next. Work on cohesion and sequencing. You must write a first draft, edit it, then ask a peer to assess it. Present your final version. Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 31 Homework activities Theme 2 Read the following article and then answer the questions that follow. The Ugly Duckling: A lesson in tolerance Russian film hits international silver screens he annual Russian Film Festival has for the fourth time opened in London to showcase the best of the latest national film industry productions, including feature, animation and documentary movies. The festival opened on Friday evening with a new animated movie – another interpretation of a fairy tale by Hans Christian Andersen, The Ugly Duckling, by Garri Bardin, animation director, screenwriter and producer. During Soviet times, Garri Bardin created a number of remarkable cartoons. He is now one of the best and most respected Russian animated-cartoon makers, although many of his stop motion puppet-animated films seem to be more successful outside of Russia than within it. Like Aleksandr Tatarskiy, he led an independent animation studio through the 1990s and created many films that won top awards at international film festivals. The Ugly Duckling is his first feature film. This talented film maker uses mixed technique in his new film, including plasticine, marionettes and sophisticated feather dolls. His creation is not a computeranimated cartoon. Only handwork is present here! The ugly duckling turns into a beautiful swan – as was in the philosophical fairy tale of Hans Christian Andersen. The music for the film has been arranged by Sergei Anashkin from Tchaikovsky’s ballets Swan Lake and The Nutcracker. It is performed by the National Philharmonic Orchestra of Russia under the baton of Vladimir Spivakov. Spivakov enthuses, ‘All T 32 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 children like animated cartoons. We can’t relive our childhood but, thanks to such situations, we can return to our childhood, at least, for a short time.’ The works of Garri Bardin are meant not only for children but also for adults. In his film, Bardin has created a world adults know perfectly well – a world with national intolerance. On his official website, Bardin has posted this message: ‘Often are we forced to exclaim: “Goodness, what nonsense is shown to our children!” This year I have begun creating the animated feature film The Ugly Duckling. What influenced me to choose this tale by Hans Christian Andersen? Worry. ‘In our multinational country there is a growing intolerance to people who are not like others, who speak other languages and have different beliefs. Heated debates are currently underway in the European parliaments – should yashmaks be permissible or not and how the representatives of another religion should be treated. There’s also one more question: how do representatives of another religion feel in a country they live in? This emerging xenophobia is beneficial to some people for their narrow political goals. The representatives of one nation regard the representatives of other nations as ugly ducklings. Children should not be exposed to this. ‘The film, The Ugly Duckling, covers all these problems. The film will be sad, and happy, and touching. If the viewers sympathise with the ugly duckling, then I can say that I have fulfilled my task. Children can still be taught to live with everyone across the world in peace and friendship!’ (Source: http://rt.com/art-and-culture/news/russian-films-hitbritish/) Week 3–4 1 Write a description of Garri Bardin that would be suitable for publication in a book about Russian film makers. Use the information given to you in the article above. Write a paragraph of about 80 words. 2 a) Look at Bardin’s exclamation: ‘Goodness, what nonsense is shown to our children!’ From this, what can you conclude that Bardin thinks should be shown to children? b) How does the story of The Ugly Duckling solve the problem of what to show children? 3 a) What does Bardin mean when he talks about Russia as ‘our multinational country’? b) Is the theme of The Ugly Duckling relevant to South Africans? Explain your answer. 4 How do you predict adults will react to the film? Support your answer by referring to the information provided in the text. Extra practice Theme 2 Read the passage and answer the questions that follow. With technologically advanced animated movies today turning 3D (this is equal to saying the best possible graphics on your screen, made to seem like they are coming out of the screen), there is only one possible path for the movie industry to take if they are to keep advancing in technology and that is holographic. Years ago, the holodeck on the Star Trek series was just science fiction, but as technology moves on, there is no telling what tomorrow may bring. It may be that one day televisions will be replaced with a type of projector that will be mounted in your ceiling like a light fixture. The projector may then project the movie all around you, in whatever room you have it mounted. Then consider how AI has advanced in games and computer programs, it is entirely possible that in the future, you will not just watch a movie, but actively play a role in it, possibly making the outcome of the movie different depending on your choices – similar to how some computer games work now. (Source: http://ezinearticles.com/?Animated-MoviesAnd-Technology) Couch potato lifestyle 101 • 33 1 Describe the advances in holographic technology that are predicted. 2 Compare the advances in holographic technology that we have now with what might be achieved in the future. Support your ideas with careful reasoning. Summary A debate involves a resolution, which is argued by the opposition and the proposition. The three debaters in each team develop and support an argument. Strategies for approaching written texts include making inferences (drawing conclusions without being told directly), evaluating (commenting on the text), comparing and contrasting), predicting (using clues to suggest what could happen next), re-reading (checking your understanding) and making notes. The key features of short stories include the significance of the title, the setting (both time and place), the five essential parts of plot (introduction, rising action, the climax, falling action, denouement), internal and external conflict (disagreement, tension, and contradiction), style (the diction, sentence and paragraph construction, punctuation and the narrative voice of the story) and theme (main idea). A creative essay may be descriptive, narrative, reflective, argumentative, opinionative, discursive or expository. You need to focus on planning, paragraphing, editing and rewriting. 34 • Couch potato lifestyle 101 T 3 e he m Who would have thought? Weeks 5–6 What you will learn about in this theme • • • Listening and speaking: Listening comprehension Language: o Punctuation o Spelling rules and borrowed words o Strategies using written texts o Short stories Writing and presenting: Newspaper and magazine articles o Film study o Poetry Let’s talk about this theme • • • • • What do the following people have in common: The inventor of the CAT scan, the surgeon who performed the world’s first heart transplant, and the makers of the ‘speed gun’ used in cricket ovals the world over? The answer is that they are all South Africans! Can you list other marvellous inventions or actions for which South Africans are responsible? Do you know any South African film makers and/or actors? Can you name awards that have been won by South Africans in our film industry? Who would have thought that we had so many inventive, talented South Africans living among us? Who would have thought? • 35 Weeks 5–6 Listening comprehension What you know already Listening comprehension You practised answering listening comprehensions in Theme 1. You listened to a passage read aloud to you, and made notes as it was being read. You also wrote paragraphs re-telling the content of the passage read to you. k How comfortable are you with answering listening Chec lf comprehensions? Tick the box that is most appropriate (Yes or No). myse Yes No I am able to maintain concentration for the entire time that a passage is read to me. I am able to remember the questions asked on the passage and answer them effectively. I am able to summarise the content of the passage after it has been read to me. I am able to describe the register in which the passage has been written. What you still need to know Listening comprehension You will not be permitted to take notes for the following listening comprehension exercise. Sometimes it is not possible to write down what you need to remember, and this listening comprehension will give you an opportunity to practise the skill of listening and remembering. During the first reading you must listen for content. When the text is read a second time (after the questions), listen for details required by the questions. Do not try too hard! Relax and stay focused. Classroom activity 1 Your teacher will read a passage to you. You will not be permitted to take notes while the passage is being read. You need to listen carefully. The questions that are set on the passage will be read to you. Then the process will be repeated and the passage will be read a second time. During this reading you need to listen for details that you might have missed in the first reading. Your teacher will read the questions one at a time, which will allow you time to answer them. 36 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 Punctuation Do you know the uses of the following punctuation marks? k Chec lf Write down numbers from Column A that match with letters in myse Column B. Column A Column B 1. Full stop A. This is used to show that something is said with force. 2. Question mark B. This is used to show that the speaker has been interrupted. 3. Exclamation mark C. These are letters that slope to the right. 4. Ellipsis D. This is used to indicate a question. 5. Comma E. This is used to indicate a list of things. 6. Capital letter F. This is used for proper nouns. 7. Colon G. This is used at the end of sentences. H. This is used to show that the speech or thought is incomplete. I. This is used to begin sentences. J. This is used to indicate that something will follow. K. This is used to indicate abbreviations. L. This is used in e-communication as part of the identity of a site name. These punctuation marks might need some revision: The comma We use a comma in the same way as we use brackets, namely, to enclose additional information. Dolosse, branching concrete blocks weighing up to 30 tons, are used across the globe to break up wave action. In this example, ‘Dolosse are used across the globe to break up wave action’, is the main sentence; and ‘branching concrete blocks weighing up to 30 tons’ is additional information. The commas enclose the additional information. The dash We use a dash to separate sections of sentences from each other. Sometimes a dash serves as brackets (or parenthesis) enclosing additional information in the same way that a comma does. Dashes are stronger punctuation marks Who would have thought? • 37 than commas and are used in sentences where the tension levels are high, or to stress the additional information firmly. The Hippo Water Roller is a classic example of design with South African conditions in mind. The roller is intended for use by communities without access to tap water. It enables people to pull a 90-litre drum of water – instead of carrying it for kilometres by hand – with a minimum of effort. We sometimes use a dash to indicate an aside or a change of thought or direction in the sentence. In 1969, Pratley’s putty was used to hold bits of the Apollo XI mission’s Eagle landing craft together – this is the only South African invention that has been to the moon. The hyphen We use a hyphen to join words together. The new word that is formed is called a compound word. If the compound word is used frequently, over a period of time, the hyphen often falls away and the word is spelt without it. low-pressure, low-slung and low-grade are examples of this use of the hyphen. We also use a hyphen to indicate a break in a word at the end of a line of writing. This is called a typographical split. When used as such, the hyphen is inserted at a natural break between syllables. It is often used in printed material. It is better not to use this punctuation mark in your own writing – rather simply write the word on the next line. We can also use a hyphen when the addition of a prefix might make pronunciation difficult. It also sometimes makes the meaning of the prefix clear: Re-cover and recover mean different things. Co-operate might be mispronounced if it were not for the hyphen. The semi-colon We use a semi-colon to list items where the items are described through the use of phrases or clauses. 38 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 Dolosse are used on the Humboldt, California jetties; the Manasquan Inlet, New Jersey jetties; on several Hawaiian breakwaters and on breakwaters, harbours, jetties and coastlines across the globe. We also use a semi-colon where sentences are grammatically independent, but where the meanings are closely connected. South Africa, throughout its bad and its good times, has always produced top inventors, inventions and entrepreneurial geniuses: it could be our unwillingness to give up; to face up in times of adversity; the top schools we have, and the quality of education they serve up. Classroom activity 2 Rewrite the following passage in your exercise book, adding punctuation marks where you think they are needed. Include as many examples of punctuation as you can. innovative south african inventions south african inventors have invented many ingenious creations these brilliant people have touched the lives of many people pratley putty was invented by george pratley from krugersdorp gauteng in 1948 he was trying to develop a glue to hold components in an electrical box this sticky substance kept parts of the eagle landing ship together when neil armstrong experienced the first moon landing in 1969 the cybertracker is a hand held computer that makes it possible for illiterate people to enter very detailed information which helps scientists carry out their research it provides a high technology method of tracking animals in the veld louis liebenberg and lindsay stevenson invented the unit connected to a satellite navigational system in 1996 (Source: Adapted from: http://zar.co.za/invent.htm) Words, words, words! Spelling patterns You have mastered many spelling rules over the years, and yet teachers still find that there are certain words that are often incorrectly spelt. Who would have thought? • 39 Here are some rules for commonly misspelt words: When you need to decide whether the word practice should be spelt with a c or an s remember: 1 We use the spelling with an ‘s’ when the word is a verb, and a ‘c’ when it is a noun: I am going to practise kicking at this afternoon’s soccer practice. The same is true for licence and license, prophecy and prophesy. When you can’t remember how to spell believe and deceive, the rule is ‘i before e except after c.’ (The word seize is an exception to this rule.) 2 Classroom activity 3 1 Use the following words in sentences so that their spelling is correct and their meaning is clear. practice/practise licence/license prophecy/prophesy 2 Correct the spelling of the following words (if necessary), and use them (correctly spelt) in sentences. ceiling, chief, field, receipt, grief, recieve Words, words, words! Borrowed words Many of the words that we use today did not start out as English words, but were borrowed from other languages. Here are some examples: gum mosquito pyjama taboo tattoo tea tobacco 40 • Who would have thought? Old French/Latin/Greek/Egyptian Spanish Persian Polynesian Polynesian Chinese Spanish Week 5–6 Classroom activity 4 Use a dictionary and look up the following words. Find out their language of origin and write it down in your exercise book. algebra, amen, balcony, confetti, coffee, fundi, gecko, indaba, khaki, kugel, skinder, skelm Newspaper and magazine articles What you know already Newspaper and magazine articles In Theme 1, you had to identify the features of newspaper and magazine articles. k Use the checklist to see if you remember what you were taught c e h C lf about newspaper and magazine articles. Tick the box that is most e s y appropriate (Yes or No). m I am able to explain the meaning of the following Yes terms in relation to newspaper and magazine articles: No Title Headline Sub-heading Font Illustration Caption What you still need to know Newspaper and magazine articles You will now have a chance to write your own newspaper or magazine article. A newspaper article has a headline and sometimes has sub-headings, while magazine articles have headings and also sometimes sub-headings. The difference between a headline and a heading is that a headline is sometimes not a full sentence or has a clever catchiness to it, while a heading is usually a complete sentence. Tell the class about some clever headlines that you have seen in newspapers. Who would have thought? • 41 Classroom activity 5 Examine the list of South African inventions below. You may need to do research on some before you make you decision about which to choose for this task. Write either a newspaper article or a magazine article in 180–200 words on one of these inventions. Remember to use the writing process that you learnt about in Theme 1, namely: • • • • choosing the topic carefully thinking about what you will write planning editing. These are the inventions: • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • Hippo drum water roller and the similar water-carrying Q-drum Jetmaster fireplace Smartlock safety syringe Kreepy Krawly, Barracuda and Poolcop pool-cleaning systems Vuvuzelas CAT scan, which uses x-rays, radiation detectors and computers to produce images of planes through the body Freeplay wind-up radios, torches and cell phone chargers Colindictor, the first device to record a telephone message Rooivalk helicopter and pilot’s helmet Computicket online booking system Plethysmograph for measuring rate of blood flow Policansky fishing reels Shuttle low wattage transformers Turboheat solar water heating spiral SUNSAT telecommunications satellite Cybertracker, a handheld computer originally developed to help Khoisan trackers store data Smocking pleater for the garment industry Speedgun for measuring the speed of a cricket ball Radio, Wadley Loop Receiver Van der Bijl’s pioneering vacuum tube for transcontinental radio broadcasts SharkPod shark-repellant device Tellurometer (infrared and microwave). Your teacher will use the Longer Transactional Writing rubric to assess your article. 42 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 Film study What you know already Film study We all watch films often – either at the cinema or on television. We know which kind of films we like, and those we don’t. We can follow complicated plot lines in films, and are captivated by special effects and evocative music. But do we really know the work that goes into the making of these films? Use the checklist to see how much you know about film study. k Tick the word that best applies to you (Yes or No). Chec lf I can explain the work the following people in the film myse Yes No industry do: Producer Director Cinematographer Editor Screenwriter Casting director Sound technician Set designer Continuity person Word bank ABC casting director: someone who decides who will act in the film cinematographer: someone who is responsible for the camera and lighting – the quality of the image; also known as the director of photography continuity person: someone who ensures that the arrangement of scenes and events in a film is such that it seems as if the action continues without interruption director: someone who is in charge of making a film, especially by telling the actors and technical staff what to do editor: someone who selects and rejects shots, scenes and sequences or a film producer: someone who organises the work and money involved in the making of a film Who would have thought? • 43 someone who writes stories for films someone who creates backgrounds and interiors where action is to take place sound technician: someone who makes sure that the quality of the recorded sound is good screenwriter: set designer: What you still need to know Film study You have identified what you know in the Check myself section. Now for more! To really study a film, you need to understand how it is put together. Just as a novel is made up of chapters, paragraphs and sentences, so a film is created through the joining together of shots, scenes and sequences. Shots, scenes, and sequences together make up the larger dramatic narrative of film. Scenes are composed of shots, sequences are composed of scenes, and films are composed of sequences. A shot is the basic unit of film narrative. It refers to a single, constant take made by a camera, uninterrupted by editing, interruptions or cuts. A scene is usually a shot (or series of shots) that together make up a single, complete action in the film, or a segment of the storytelling within a film. A sequence usually refers to a longer segment of film than a scene. A scene, or connected series of related scenes are edited together and make up a single, unified event, setting, or story within a film. Sequence also refers to scenes that fit together in the plot. 44 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 To begin studying films, you must understand how the director is able to get his audience to respond to the action on the screen. Different types of shots and different camera angles will bring about different emotions and responses in the viewer: Types of shots While each of these shots can and should be analysed in this way, close, medium and long are relative terms. All shots should be considered in conjunction with those around them. Establishing shot (ES): This shot establishes the setting, the time and place of the action and is usually an extreme long or long shot. This type of shot is offered at the beginning of a scene or sequence. Extreme long shot (ELS): This shot is generally used to establish the locale of the story. A human figure is very small by comparison with the landscape. Long shot (LS): In this shot, the subject occupies a relatively small part of the frame area. For example, a human figure that has plenty of space around it and appears relatively insignificant in relation to its surroundings. Who would have thought? • 45 Medium shot (MS): This shot is often used as a transition between close-ups and longer shots. The subject and the background occupy approximately equal areas in the frame and the audience’s interest is equally divided between the subject and its setting. There is more detail, more concentrated attention and greater involvement for the audience. We see a human figure from just above the head to just below the waist. Medium close-up (MCU): In this shot, a figure is seen from just above the head to about halfway between the waist and shoulders. Close-up (CU): In this shot, the subject occupies all or almost all of the frame area. This gives a detailed view of a person or object, usually without much context provided. The shot shows very little, if any, locale and concentrates on a relatively small object – the human face for example – and shows a great deal of emotion. The audience feels involvement or experience a subjective response. This is usually head-and-shoulders, but a tight close-up will show only the head. Extreme close-up (ECU): This kind of shot is generally used when the director wishes to heighten the importance of a particular object or give it symbolic significance. It will concentrate the attention of the audience on some important detail, object or part of the body. An extreme close-up of an actor generally includes only the actor’s hands, eyes or mouth. 46 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 Over-the-shoulder shot: This shot is commonly used in dialogue scenes where the speaker is seen from the perspective of a person standing just behind and to one side of the listener, so that parts of the listener’s head and shoulder are in the frame, as well as the head of the speaker. This shot is often used to establish a relationship or conflict between the two characters, or dominance of one over the other. Point-of-view shot: This shot is any shot taken from the vantage point of a character in the film. Camera angles These are main camera angles used in making films: High angle (HA): This is a camera angle in which the subject is photographed from above with the camera looking down on the subject. The subject is therefore made to appear weak, lonely, small, vulnerable or threatened. High angles reduce the importance of a subject. Who would have thought? • 47 Low angle (LA): This is a camera angle in which the subject is photographed from below with the camera looking up at the subject. The subject appears to be superior, intimidating and strong. Low angle shots suggest dominance, menace, oppression and authority, but are also used to suggest reverence, such as a shot of a cross in a church. Eye level: This camera angle represents a neutral point of view without any emotional undertones, as the viewer is used to seeing things this way. Aerial shot: This shot is taken from the air (usually from a helicopter). It is often used as an establishing shot. Bird’s-eye view: This is a shot in which the camera films a scene from directly overhead. This shot is taken from a very high angle directly above the subject and presents the viewer with a view of the subject or scene. The people photographed seem ant-like and insignificant. 48 • Who would have thought? Week 5–6 Classroom activity 6 The director carefully selects each of these shots or camera angles to create an effect on the audience. They allow the director to tell the story more effectively. Carefully study the definitions given for the types of shots and camera angles used in the making of films. Find pictures from magazines or newspapers that are examples of each of the definitions. Use pictures that do not have words on them, so some advertisements will not be acceptable. Once you have selected your pictures, draw a bold black line around the picture to create a frame, and label the type of shot or camera angle that you have chosen. Those with the best examples may be asked to show them to the class and explain what the effect of that shot or camera angle could create in a viewer. Poetry What you know already Poetry You have probably been reading poetry at school for many years. Some of you love this experience, and some do not understand or like poetry. Poetry is always easier to understand if you know how to recognise the various techniques that poets use, and feel confident to express an honest opinion on the effect of those techniques on you, the reader. k Can you explain, and give an example of the following figures of c e h speech? Tick the figure of speech once if you can explain it, and C lf twice if you can also give an example of the figure of speech. e s y m simile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, hyperbole, personification Word bank alliteration: hyperbole: metaphor: ABC the repetition of consonants on a number of succeeding words, to achieve a special effect of sound or sense gross exaggeration used for emphasis or ironic effect a comparison between two unlike things, with one thing in common – often looks like a statement Who would have thought? • 49