Year 3 Writer`s Newsletter

Year 3 Writer’s Newsletter
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Here is a snapshot of our fantastic writing linked to our pirate theme this
half term!
Captain Skeleton Face
My name is Captain Skeleton Face. I talk
grumpily, walk quickly, scream loudly and
eat normally. Most of the time I’m grumpy
and angry in my old, dusty room. I have
long brown hair because I never cut it. I
look extremely scary and terrifying! My ship
is really big so my pirate crew can all fit on.
The Seabones ship has a massive skull and
crossbones flag and together all the crew
pulls the rope to put it up.
By Cara
Pink Spots Elizabeth
Pink Spots Elizabeth is a really good pirate cleaner. She shouts really cheerfully. The kind, helpful pirate cleans the
horrible, slimy captain’s feet, what she
does not like cleaning. Pink Spots Elizabeth talks like a young girl in a village.
Pink Spots Elizabeth is a nice, jokey pirate who always plays jokes on people
but she always makes people laugh and
giggle. She is very lazy, sometimes she
never gets up in the morning. She has a
pet parrot called Percy.
By Maisie
Captain Ginger Beard
My name is Captain Ginger Beard and I am
the naughtiest captain of all. I steal treasure
from different pirates. The ugly fierce pirate
never washes his scruffy, old face. I tell the
pirates to walk the plank and dive in some
green goo. I sit down whilst the scruffy, old,
dirty pirates clean the dirt, rust and dust. Every
time I walk past everyone my earing shines
bright.
By Lucas
Captain Black Hat
My pirate is called Captain Black Hat. My pirate
has a big black French moustache. He has a
wooden leg and a shiny silver hook. Captain
Black Hat is very, very friendly, he even helps
his pirates. He gets a bit horrifying when he
finds treasure. He is really shy sometimes. Angrily, he screams horridly at his crew.
By Kacey
Captain Snooze
Captain Red Beard
Captain Snooze has a moustache and
two wooden legs. He is kind from the
inside but when people call him names
he gets angry. The captain sleeps a lot
and never wakes up. He talks kindly to
the other pirates. The captain hobbles
funny because he has two wooden legs.
Captain Red Beard is a mean pirate. He always goes hunting
for treasure and if anything gets
in his way he will make them
walk the plank. Angrily he
waves his book at other pirates.
By John-Dean
By Riley
Captain Amber Blue Bones
Blue Bones is bossy yet enchanting. She talks nervously because she
got unexpectedly voted to be captain. She sometimes boasts about
being captain. Amber strides along the boat like a bored cat. Her pet
dogs are called Glimmer, Shine and Sparkle. The boat is called the
Glittering Gem. Amber has brown curly hair and black heels. She has
The French man came today, to take the lion cub
Right now I am on a boat feeling lonely
aaway
pink
dressI heard
withthegreen
blue
skull.At least England is a lot
to France.
French crossbones
man talking to and
and
isolated.
dad it wasn’t very pleasant but then the lion cub
came
back I can tell he hasn’t learned to hunt yet beBy
Alannah
cause his rib cage was as thin as a rake. Eve
closer to France than Africa. But
Captain Red Spots
Captain Amber
My pirate is mean! When she
finds treasure she kills other pirates. Confused, the captain
never finds treasure. Crossly, she
shouts to the pirates. She has a
wooden leg and she hops everywhere. She hates the other pirates. She wears a captain suit,
the suit is red and has black
shoes. It has one leg on the suit
because she has one leg.
Captain Amber is pretty.
She is sometimes demanding, sometimes she
is beautiful and inspiring.
Proudly she walks
on her ship.
She has
long amber hair that’s
I hy she’s called capw
tain amber.
captain
amber is sometimes a
little cross because of
the other pirates.
She
likes to go on treasure
hunts.
By Ellie
By hamera
Amelie
Captain Red Bones
Captain Ella
My pirate is fierce. She always wants her own way but she never gets
her own way though. Captain Red Bones loves gold, she’s mad about
it. Mad, mean Captain Red Bones loves sailing her lovely brown boat
in the deep blue sea. She has a wooden leg and hobbles with one foot.
She is really hairy because she never shaves her moustache. Captain
Red Bones has a parrot on her shoulder. She wears a bandana on her
head. The parrot is multi coloured.
My Pirate is called Captain Ella and she is shy. Captain Ella was worried because she had just become
a pirate. Then she got a parrot, she called it Rainbow because it was all different colours, it was gorgeous. Ella shouts nicely and kind and she works
slowly. She is kind and helpful. Ella is grateful.
She helps people all the time.
By Ruby
By Daisy
Captain Joke
Captain Joke is a very tall pirate. He
is very muscly and nasty. Joke is
fearless. He is a nasty pirate and his
crew are scared of him.
By Jason
Captain Jack
Captain Jack is the best pirate in the Seven
Sea and he is mean. He has a cutlass and he
has a wooden leg. He is a smelly, ungrateful
pirate and he is horrid. He orders his crew to
scrub the decks and clean the cabins.
By Jack
Captain Jack Sparrow
Captain Jack Sparrow is a pirate. He is mean
to the people he needs to catch and nice to his
friends. My pirate is silly because he falls over
all the time. Captain Jack Sparrow has a small
beard and moustache. My pirate is very
smelly and dirty because never has a wash because they do not like showers. But they can
go in the sea because it is wet.
Captain Blue Spots
Captain Blue Spots is ugly,
mean and cruel. My pirate
is lazy, unkind and mean.
He is nasty to other pirates
and likes to find treasure.
My pirate is hairy, evil and
never has a wash.
By Amy
By Adam
Captain Red Beard
My pirate is not like any other. He loves being kind. His name is Captain Red Beard and
he likes other pirates to be nice, grateful and
kind. Confused, the captain thought he wasn’t helping. Captain Red Beard found a terrified parrot.
By Connor
Captain Bones
Captain Scar
Captain Bones looks gruesome, ugly
and fierce. He is fierce, vicious
and clever. Bones is a mean pirate and never shares his treasure, he steals it instead. He has
lost a hand and leg, so he now has
a hook and wooden leg. He orders his crew to scrub the ship until it shines.
Captain Scar is a horrible,
mean pirate. He has a
huge ugly scar across his
right eye. Captain Scar
has the sharpest sword.
He loves hats because he
hides loads and loads of
money in them. He
hates other pirates.
Sometimes Captain Scar
has a lie in bed whilst his
crew fight.
By Jamie M
By George
Captain Death
Today I will tell you about
the most fierce pirate on
Earth… Captain Death.
He roams the Caribbean
with his parrot, Bones and
his ship, The Grace.
He
always shouts angrily at his
crew.
Captain Death has
lost his hand and his leg
because he was abandoned in the sea.
By Emilio
One Eyed Willy
One Eyed Willy screams loudly and he
walks like he is hopping, as well as talking
grumpily. He eats like he’s being sick. Also, he has a blue pirate hat and he’s got a
pink feather on his hat. Cleverly, the pirate can find treasure really quickly. One
Eyed Willy is a mean, nasty captain who
screams at his crew all the time.
By Olivia
Captain Smelly Robby
My pirate is called Captain Smelly Robby.
My pirate is old because he is 64 years old.
He is ugly as well. Captain Smelly Robby is
brilliant at being a captain. He is the boss of
the ship. Captain Smelly Robby is cruel and
he shouts cruelly. He stinks because they
don’t have baths. He has not got a lot of
teeth because he doesn’t clean his teeth
properly.
By Matthew
Captain Smelly
My pirate is called
Captain Smelly. He’s
extremely smelly.
Captain Smelly is old.
He is the captain. He
won 60 battles.
Smelly has a razor
sharp sword and a
broken leg. Smelly
has a gold belt and
gold earrings. He
shouts loudly and
cruelly. He is a horrible pirate.
By Nathan
Captain Jem
Captain Jake
Captain Jake is a really mean pirate like
his crew. He has a long beard with yellow bits in it. He has a wooden leg and
a hook for a hand. Captain Jake’s favourite hobby is looking for treasure.
By Kai
Captain Jem is clever getting back
her gold and gems from the pirates who keep coming to get
Jem’s gems. Jem is a friendly pirate of all the lands. She always
gives the gold back to the humans who haven’t got the money.
Jem wears old, dirty pirate
clothes. Her ship is full of buried
treasure.
By Chanel
Captain Skull Bone
My pirate’s name is Captain Skull Bone. He
has a wooden leg. He always has a shiny,
sparkly sword in his broken right arm.
With his hypnotising red eye he can get anyone he wants. He works on a ship called
Black Pearl. His captain is called Black
Skull, but now my pirate is the captain of
the ship. He has a parrot on his right
shoulder.
Captain Hook
My pirate has a wooden leg and
a hook as a hand. He is called
Hook because he has a hook. He
is cruel, scary and horrid. He has
a loud scary voice. Also he has a
parrot called Polly. Hook has a
black and red ship. My pirate
has one eye and a sword.
By Presley
By Arie
Captain Blacky Chan
Blacky Chan looks like an angry pirate, but
he really is not. He is really stupid and he
looks grubbier than his dad. Blacky Chan
my pirate is the happiest pirate on the seas.
Blacky Chan is really stupid. He is really
happy when his mates do not steal. Blacky
Chan shouts really loudly at his crew.
By Jamie D
Captain Sword
He was a mean and hairy man. He was fierce and
horrible and fat and stupid. He wears a hat and has a
Parrot on his shoulder. He likes to fight other pirates.
Captain Blood Skull
My pirate’s fierce and cruel,
he takes other people’s
stuff. Pirates hop quick and
fast. Captain Blood Skull is
captain of the seas. If the
pirates get stuff wrong they
have to walk the plank. My
revolting, smelly pirate is a
really lazy, stinky, greedy
man. My pirate has one
eye, he also has a sword.
By Mason
His ship is called the Ghost Ship because it is haunted.
By Levi
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